Date	Story	Allan's comment	Aquea's response	Rating
30/11/2004	My Darling Aquea	Well, I really liked the title, as for the rest of it,I think it was more personal than being a story. It started off nicely but then got confusing. To me it would only seem erotic to the receiver of the mail. I'm sorry for the low rating, but this is only my opinion.
10/11/2004	Morning	It was a short, delightfully graphic depiction of a young woman's fantacy lover. Sensual and well written. Wish I was the guy.
10/11/2004	Control	Hi Aquea, nicely done. Your stories, from a woman's view are explicitly sexual. This one has practically fulfilled a fantacy of mine but,(alas) it still remains a fantacy. I have done this to a couple of former girlfriends, and they went off like firecrackers. WOW...did they get HOT!! One went totally wild, had multiple orgasms and got so wet that I had to put a full size bath towel under her butt. What a weekend !!!! Your story brought it all back. THANKS Allan ps: I wonder what runs through your mind as you write...hehe	And when are you going to start writing? Sounds like a good story...