This page is for all the comments that people have made on Horn. The comments are in blue, and they're mostly from people who think I'm gay. That's because they're all a bunch of closet homos trying to trick everyone into thinking they're straight! I mean, why else are they always telling me to suck their dicks?
Suck my dick you fag!
What a piece of crap! A juvenile concept, and a poorly written attempt to outline a story, that never needed to be written! Perhaps if you HAD watched some porongraphic films you MIGHT have at least grasped the simple concept that people in PORN relate in a different way (regardless of their penis size)
God!!! It is depressing to even think that you would post this crap for adults to read.
If you are an asexual, why bring attention to yourself in a forum dedicated to sexual posts? It makes you seem like a child craving attention....probably negative aattention.
Warner
Can you lay down while I practice packing fudge in your bum bum? I am sure you will find it more fun then writing stories about crap.
I would love to give you a lesson in Ass love, but then you already love yourself LOL
Can I ream your ass please?
I just wrote your name in SHIT, so that I can remember not to read any more of your CRAP!!!
Just in passing, I assume you are gay???????
Jimbo
Are you a homosexual, or just gifted with a small cock?
I can lengthen my penis if you SUCK IT!!!
Have you learned how to flex your ass muscles so that it feels like you are cuming when a guy shoot his load in you! U better do it, cause it is a required skill in a prison bitch!!!
Bruiser
Get real dude, you ARE Gay!! No straight guy would write anything remotely as gay as this piece of garbage. I know you claim to be asexual, but you are just fooling yourself. Give me a contact email and I can hook up with you, to give you your first Gay sex lesson!!!
Jean Paul
The only redeeming factor of this story is that it is short, and I didn't waste too much time reading about one third of the drivel!
Thank you very much for the feedback.
Gosh, reading this crap makes me long for the days when it was
difficult for "budding" authors to get their works into the public form. The
story is obviously aimed at describing teenage angst, but it fails to deliver anything on any real level. I suppose it could be rewritten with a more developed plot line, but I think you were just trying to be too too "cute", and impress us with your qwerky outlook on sex. Sorry, it didn't work! Bad writing is just bad!
Dr. Leon Genesove
I don't understand why everyone thinks your gay? It is obvious from your writing that you haven't even had a sexual experience. Just stand up to those bullies!!!
Garma James
Was I the only one who found that story funny? :P
Apparently.
Can you give me the web address of the small cock society? I want to check if you are a member. The story was average, but belongs in a different type of forum then one specializing in "adult" themes!
Liked it...Funny story...Now you need a follow up..funny..but with a happy ending..maybe Ana had a sister..
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