Jais Nereis Reviews
#11 - Good Night. Good F...Ing Night!
Good Night. Good F...Ing Night!
Anonymous
Description: The night the kid lost his cherry to his whore sister - and the encore.
Codes: mf boy het inc bro sis oral
Review:
I like incest as much as the next girl and so I grabbed this story off the new stories list and eagerly bundled it home. I wondered a bit at the title, trying to imagine what sense of puritan virtue required ellipsis in the word "Forking" but I was willing to set my curiosity aside momentarily while I assembled everything I'd need to read a red hot incest story:
Ms. Sax Wax strawberry flavored vaginal lube? Check! Eight inch laser guided smart vibe with fresh Energizer bunnies pre-installed? Check! Faded, frayed, and Downy fresh beach towel under my butt? Check! Ravel's Bolero on the surround sound? Check! Candles, incense, Cap'n Jack Sparrow fully posable action figure? Check, check, and check!
Now all I needed was a hot story!
This wasn't it. I like the premise of a teenage prostitute. That's always a good starting point and the one in this story is named Reyna. I also like 12 year old virgin boys because they're so darn cuddly and you can tell them anything and they'll believe it. The one in this story, Riley, does the narrating for us.
It's a familiar tale in which a married couple (the unnamed parents) have yet to understand that condoms are cheaper than children. Even if you have to buy a box a week, that's still only one child's mouth. Maybe two if you're frugal, but these people have to feed six! That, my friends, is a lot of condoms! But aside from mom and dad's economic anxiety, it also means poor Riley has to sleep on a cot in the unused dining room. The same cot, it turns out, that Reyna loves to entertain her drunken clients on.
To make a short story even shorter, when Riley gets out of bed to pee, he returns to find a strange John named Josh sleeping on his cot. His older, drunken sister is begging for the man to come back and eat her pussy, and being blessed with a lot of raging hormones in his jammies, Riley wastes no time in doing what all twelve year olds instinctively love. He sucks his sister's pussy like a pro and soon brings Reyna the orgasm she needs.
"What kind of pussy fog do they use, down there?" I silently asked myself.
I just love that line and I have no idea what it means. Pussy fog? Perhaps I'm getting old. Anyway...
The sex scenes are rather uninspired, I'm afraid. We get a couple of the usual metaphors and similes that are all too common in the genre: "…her personal dildo" and "…flesh glove" and "…my tip scraping her cervix." That last one is pretty impressive for a twelve year old who thought he was peeing inside his sister when he had his first orgasm. Cervix is a serious word for college men, let alone little brothers in grammar school, and the boy is either very well hung! Or his sister is very small inside, we don't know which, but this is porn, so…
What we do know is that Reyna (the experienced prostitute) can't tell her twelve year old brother from an older man, or at least a boy her own age (seventeen) and yeah, she is drunk, but...I have to tell you that the suspension of belief required for all of that was just too great for me. I may be nitpicking, but in my opinion a story needs either really great characters, or really hot sex. I mean if the sex is fun and entertaining and distracting enough to be called stroke material, then who cares about the rest of it? This is porn!
But! If the sex isn't good, then the story has to be and that means characters and plot. In a story in which all of those elements are noticeably lacking, there can only be a disappointing result.
Jais
Technical: 6 Plot: 7 Appeal: 4 Stroke: 3
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