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Reviews and Commentary on Erotica by The WhiteRose (all rights reserved by the authors)

"I wasn't going to include this story, except for the fact that the author had included the <*> symbol when she posted the story.  Since Celeste isn't around anymore, I decided to give it a read.  I'm glad I did.
White Rose gives us a truly magical setting right from the beginning.  I felt like I'd been transported inside a fairy tale.  Take a peek:
The world took a breath.  She felt his presence a moment before she heard the footsteps coming from the trees.  She forced herself to wait, to remain where she was, eyes closed, as he approached.  The need to see, to know, what he would be this night, what face and body he would wear, it was strong, so strong.  But she held herself in check, pausing a moment longer, and only then allowing her lids to slowly drift open to cast her gaze upon him as he knelt at the ledge of the pond in front of her, gazing upon her with the same curious knowing she knew was reflected in her own gaze.
Sure as heck makes me want to know what he looks like! <g>  The story just keeps getting better, and the sex is well-written and spark-filled -- very hot and erotic.
Oh factor - 5" -- Souvie, ("Souvie's O's") on "The Forest Lord"

"I suspect that most will be complimenting you on your oral sex descriptions, but I wanted to let you know that the subtle eroticism of the initial scenes weren't lost on everyone." -- Crimson Dragon on "The Forest Lord"

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