Date: Fri, 29 Feb 2008 09:53:13 -0500
From: ronyx <ronyx@woh.rr.com>
Subject: Brittle as a Bird   Chapter 13

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Brittle as a Bird         Chapter 13



Ticker and Star were sitting in the living room waiting on me to get home.
Both gave me a cold stare when I walked in. I gave them a 'don't fuck with
me' look, and then I headed up to Ticker's room.

As soon as I lay down on the cot, Star came barging in. She stood in front
of me with her arms crossed. "What the hell is going on with you?"

I buried my head in the pillow. I wasn't ready for another confrontation. I
just wanted to be left alone.

"Sit up and listen to me." Star grabbed my sleeve and tried to lift me up.

"Leave me alone, Star." I muttered into the pillow.

"Allen tried to kill himself tonight!" She let out a loud sob, and then
walked over and sat down on Ticker's bed. I kept the pillow over my head,
stunned by what she had just said.

I heard Ticker enter the room and walk over to the bed. I peered under the
pillow and saw him holding her while she cried into his chest.

I sat up and looked across the room. "What happened?"

Star removed her head from Ticker's chest and screamed, "As if you care!"
Her head fell back into Ticker's chest as she continued to cry.

"When we went back to his room," Ticker said softly, never taking his eyes
off me, "he had pulled all the tubes from his body and there was blood
everywhere. He was unconscious."

Tears started streaming down my face. "Is he alright?" Ticker gave me a sad
look. I was afraid to hear his next words.

"They took him back into surgery." He still had his arm around Star and was
patting her softly on her back. "When we left, he was in critical
condition." She let out a loud sob when he said that.

She raised her head and looked over at me. "What did you say to him?"

What could I say? No one but the two of us knew about our exchange. Ticker
knew I was a hustler, but he didn't know that Allen had seen me in the car
with Roger. And Star would never understand. It would take weeks for me to
explain everything that led up to tonight's encounter.

"Well?" She screamed. "What did you say to him?"

"Fuck you, Star." I rose from the cot and stood before her. "You think
you're so God damned righteous. What the hell would you know? You live in a
fucking mansion and have everything you've ever wanted. You wouldn't know
what it is like to sleep on a cold, hard ground because you don't have
anywhere else to sleep."

Tears were pouring down my face. "No one's loved me my whole damned life!"
I put my hands over my head and screamed out. "I'm so fucking tired of this
shit!" I gave them one last look and then ran from the room.

I walked the streets for hours. I didn't know where to go or what to
do. Several guys tried to pick me up, but I just flipped them off and
walked away. It was late when I stood before the massive white building,
Community General Hospital.

"Can you tell me the condition of Allen Foster?" I was standing before the
information desk. An elderly man typed something on the computer and then
looked back up at me.

"He's in room 4112, but it's late and you'll have to wait until visiting
hours tomorrow."

"But is he alright?" I pleaded.

"It doesn't give me that information." He stated. "Only his room number."

"Thank you," I said dejectedly. "Can you tell me where the restroom is
located?"

"It's down that corridor." He pointed.

I headed to the restroom, but on the way, I passed the elevators. Without
hesitating, I entered and hit the button for the fourth floor.

I exited to a quiet hallway. No one was in sight. On the wall was a sign
indicating that room 4112 was to the left down a long corridor. Carefully,
I made my way down it.

Allen's room was dark. The curtain had been drawn, and the only light was
from the monitoring machines. I could make out his frail body lying under
the white sheets. I looked at the numbers on the machines, but they were
meaningless. I had no idea how his body was holding up.

His left hand was sticking out from under the sheets. I scooted a chair
near the bed and sat down. I took his hand and held it. He squeezed it
slightly. While still holding his hand, I put my head on the side of the
bed and closed my eyes. He gently squeezed my hand again before I feel
asleep.

"Young Man, wake up." I was awakened by someone shaking my shoulder. I sat
up and looked groggily around the room. A nurse was standing beside me
looking down. "Who are you? You're not supposed to be here right now."

I thought for a second before answering. "I'm his brother," I said. "He's
sick and he needs someone to be here with him."

"We have a staff that can do that," she responded. "You really do have to
leave. It's after two in the morning."

"Please let me stay," I begged. "I'm not hurting anyone, and he really
needs me to be here." As if he heard my words, he squeezed my hand." The
nurse looked down and noticed the gesture.

"See," I said. "Please let me stay."

She looked thoughtfully at me. "It's not uncommon for a family member to
stay the night when someone is as ill as Mr. Foster is."

I think I stopped breathing when she said that. As ill as he is. It sounded
so ominous. "How sick is he?"

"He lost a lot of blood last night," she said. "His vital signs have
stabilized, but it looked for a while like we were going to lose him."
Tears welled up in my eyes, as I gently squeezed his hand. He responded by
squeezing my hand, this time a little more firmly.

She gently pushed me out of the way. "Let me attend to him for a minute,
then I'll leave. But I'll be in and out all night. So if you decide to
stay, you won't get much sleep."

"That's alright," I said appreciatively. I was just glad she wasn't making
me leave. "Thank you."

She was right about one thing- I didn't get any more sleep. A hospital can
be a very noisy place at night. No wonder many people go home sicker than
when they came in. If the nurse wasn't coming in to check on him, then
there was the noise coming from nearby rooms. One woman yelled out in pain
all night. Hospital personnel kept going in and out of her room, but she
continued to scream.

And what is it with lights at night in a hospital? If you didn't look out
the window, you couldn't tell if it was day or night inside. The nurse
continuously left Allen's overhead light on when she left; but I'd get up
and turn if off. We repeated this several times.

I managed to doze off for a few minutes, but I was awakened by another
nurse. "Who are you?" I looked up into the scowling face of an elderly
nurse. "Who gave you permission to be here?"

"I'm his brother." I informed here, but she didn't seem to care.

"Well," she huffed. "You have to leave. Visiting hours begin at 8:00." I
looked over at the clock on the wall. It was 5:42.

"The other nurse said I could stay," I insisted.

"I'm not the other nurse," she said rather rudely. "Now leave before I call
security and have you removed." She crossed her arms and stood defiantly in
front of me.

I stood up and leaned in and gave Allen a gentle kiss on his forehead. She
seemed repulsed by my action. "Just a brotherly kiss," I said smugly.

I gave his hand a final squeeze. He lifted his hand and squeezed mine
tightly. I then leaned in and kissed him on his lips. When I looked at the
nurse, she appeared completely resentful. "Just another brotherly kiss." I
laughed as I walked out of the room.

I went directly to school after leaving Allen's room. I stopped off at the
coffee shop, since I had an hour to kill. When I walked in, I noticed Star
sitting in a booth at the end of the store. I purchased my coffee, and I
ordered two blueberry muffins. I handed the waitress my last ten dollar
bill.

Star looked up when she saw me approach, but then continued writing. Since
she had her literature book opened, I figured she was trying to make a last
minute effort to finish Mr. Vickers's assignment.

I pulled out a chair and sat down without saying a word. I pushed one of
the muffins over to her. "Thanks," she said as she picked it up and started
nibbling on it.

"I'm sorry," I mumbled. "I shouldn't have said those things to you last
night." I looked over to see her reaction, but she continued writing as if
she hadn't heard me.

"How do you spell inevitable?"

"What?" She looked at me and rolled her eyes. "I-n-e-v-i-t-a-b-l-e."

"Thanks." She continued to write, nibbling at her muffin.

"I'm a hustler," I blurted out. Star looked up and gave me a questioning
look. "I said I'm a hustler, or rather I was."

"What are you talking about?"

"I used to hustle for money," I continued. "That's how I was able to pay my
way. It's something I'm not proud of, but it's the only way I could eat."

She didn't say a word. She just continued to stare at me.

"Allen saw me with a guy the other night." Tears started to form in my
eyes. "That's why he's mad at me. Now you know." I put my head down on the
table and cried softly. Star got up and sat down beside me. She put her
hand on my neck and rubbed it gently.

"I had to eat," I mumbled.

"I had no idea." Her voice was filled with emotion. I sat with my head down
for several minutes. Star continued to rub my neck and back, trying to
comfort me. I was glad that she hadn't gotten up and walked out of my life
after I finally told her about my unseemly past.

After a few minutes, I was able to compose myself and sat back up. Star
took hold of my hand and squeezed it. "Tell me about it," she said
softly. I then told her my life story- a condensed version. I didn't leave
out any details. I told her about Uncle Mike and how my parents had
disowned me after discovering us together. I told her how I had to hustle
older men to make money, and then I told her about being arrested for
stealing.

She started to cry when I went into detail how I had tried to kill myself
that night on the bridge; and then how I had attempted to experience the
sensation again. I was afraid she'd get up when I related how Allen had
seen me having oral sex with Roger; and then how he had reacted
afterwards. When I was finished, she sat quietly for several minutes
drinking her coffee.

"How much of this does Allen know?"

"I told him most of it the night I stayed overnight at his place," I
said. "I just didn't tell him about the other men."

"I can understand why you didn't," she said. "I guess some things are a
little too personal."

"And embarrassing," I added quickly.

We sat for a few minutes in silence. She'd look over and stare at me, as if
she were seeing me for the first time. Feeling uncomfortable, I took the
paper she was working on and read it.

"This is pretty good," I said after finishing. She and Ticker had
completely rewritten what I had done earlier. It appeared more like it was
written by a high school student. I still wasn't sure if Mr. Vickers was
going to believe she had written it. After all, she hadn't used Wadsworth
once in the report.

"So what now?" She asked as she took a drink of coffee.

"You turn it in," I replied.

No, Joey," she frowned. "I'm talking about you and Allen."

"I don't know," I said sadly. "I honestly don't know."

"You can't keep hurting each other," she said. "He cares about you. I can
tell. The other night, before all this happened, I could see a difference
in him. It's like you two were meant for each other."

"It won't happen," I replied.

"Why?"

"There's too much working against us," I said remorsefully. "Our ages, his
illness, my past, his past."

Star reached down and took my hand. "Do you care about him?"

I remembered just hours earlier when I was holding his hand while he lay
unconscious in the hospital bed. The gentle squeezes of our hands. It was
if he knew I was with him. I wanted to believe he knew I was there.

"I think so," I finally responded. She frowned. "Okay, yes. I care about
him."

"Then you can't give up," she said reassuringly. She looked at the clock on
the wall. It was a little past seven. "I'm going to stop by the hospital
before going to school. Will you go with me?"

"I'd better go to school," I said. "I'm too far behind in my assignments. I
need to talk to my teachers before school starts. Besides, I spent the
night with him."

Her eyes shot open in surprise. "You were at the hospital last night?" I
nodded. "Why didn't you tell me? How is he?"

"He didn't wake up." I informed her. "But he kept squeezing my hand."

"Squeezing your hand?"

I then told her how I had spent the night holding Allen's hand, and then
how the morning nurse had asked me to leave. She giggled when I told her
about kissing Allen just to anger the nurse.

"Then go with me after school?" She asked hopefully. I could see the Mother
Star beginning to emerge once again. Reluctantly, I nodded.

"Good," she exclaimed. She stood and gathered her books and papers and put
them hurriedly into her book bag. "I've got to get over there and back to
school in time for Mr. Vickers class."

Suddenly, and idea popped into my head. "Why don't you call Ticker? He'll
come and pick you up."

"You think he will?"


"I'm sure he will."

It surprised me when Star had his number on her speed dial. Ticker arrived
fifteen minutes later. He dropped me off at school before taking Star to
see Allen.

***************

"I'm sorry, Mr. Walters," I said. "I promise to try harder."

I was sitting in Mr. Walter's office. He was leaning back in his chair and
studying me. He had just informed me that my grades had dropped
substantially, and that there was a chance that I would lose my
valedictorian spot to Gladys Babcock. If I continued at the rate I was
going, my grades wouldn't even be good enough to be salutatorian.

"I really want to see you standing up there giving the valedictorian speech
next year," he exclaimed. "No one in your class has had to go through such
insurmountable odds to succeed. Don't let me down."

"I'm really trying to get my life together," I told him. "I'm staying with
Ticker's family now. I'm not out on the streets. I'm not drinking and I
hardly even smoke weed any more." He raised his eyebrows and gave me an
angry look.

"Said too much?" I laughed. He nodded. "Scratch that last part." He let a
small smile curl in his lips, but he pretended to still be upset with me.

"Alright," he said. "I'll talk to your teachers and see if they will let
you make up some of the work you've missed lately. I can't promise you
anything, but we'll see."

"Thanks, Mr. Walters." I reached across his desk and shook his hand. "I
won't let you down. I promise."

"Fine." He wrote me a pass to class and handed it to me. "And remember,
smoking marijuana makes you sterile." He looked at me and smiled.

"Then I have nothing to worry about." I walked out, laughing all the way
out of his office.

As I was walking down the hall to first period, I saw Gene heading my
way. Thinking he didn't see me, I ducked into a nearby restroom. As I stood
at a urinal, the door opened and Gene entered.

He walked up to the urinal and began to piss. Since there was a partition
between us, I didn't have to worry that he would think I was looking at
him. I finished, then walked over and started washing my hands. I heard the
urinal flush, and I looked in the mirror at him as he walked up and stood
beside me.

I quickly looked down, but when he started washing his hands, I looked back
up to see him staring at me in the mirror. I looked to see how far I was
from the exit in case he decided he wanted to start something while we were
alone. There would be no witnesses if he decided he wanted to beat the shit
out of me.

I was surprised when he cleared his throat and asked, "How's my brother?" I
looked back into the mirror at his face. He looked concerned as he waited
for me to answer. My first instinct was to say, "Fuck off, you bastard,"
but he his worried expression changed my attitude.

"I'm not sure," I said. "He was unconscious when I left him this morning."

A blank expression came over his face as he tried to understand why I had
been with his brother last night. I wasn't even sure if he knew of the
grave condition he was in. After meeting his mother, I had a feeling that
she and Gene didn't communicate often.

"Oh." I stared into his eyes trying to understand why he had decided to
have this conversation with me. In the past, the only time he had something
to say was when he was with Barry; and then it was confrontational. Being
alone with him, I felt like I was with someone else.

He finished wiping his hands and headed to the door. Before leaving he
turned to me and said, "I hope he gets to feeling better." His voice
cracked with emotion. He turned and hurried from the restroom, leaving me
wondering what had just happened.

>From what Star and Allen's mother had said, I thought of him as a
heartless bastard who hated his brother. But the boy I had just spoken to
seemed like a caring individual who was concerned about his brother's
health.

I spent the rest of the day sucking up to my teachers. My grades had
suffered dramatically, since I had missed a major test in almost every
class. The daily work wasn't a problem, but most teachers seemed reluctant
to let me make up a test. In every class the tests had been handed back to
the students. Do you have any idea how hard it is to convince a teacher to
give you a make up test that they will have to specially prepare when you
have no convincing reason for them to do so? I even offered to go home with
my French teacher for the weekend and clean her yard and garage. After she
finished laughing, she reluctantly agreed to give me a make-up exam.

By the end of the day, I had convinced all my teachers to let me make up
the work I had missed and make up any exams. I later found out that
Mr. Walters had sent them an individual email asking for leniency. Again, I
had been given another chance, and this time I was determined not to let
anyone down.

I went to the library after school to use a computer so I could finish the
research paper for my economics class. I had been working for about fifteen
minutes when Gene walked in and sat about two carrels from me. I watched
out of the corner of my eye as he pulled out a book and some papers and
began working. Occasionally, he'd look over at me, but would quickly look
away when he saw me notice.

I was too engrossed in my writing to notice Gene get up and walk over to
me. "Joey." I jumped when he walked up behind me and called my name. "Do
you have the notes that Mrs. Moss gave us in class today? I can't find
mine."

I turned around and looked up at him. He had a sheepish expression on his
face. He would look at me, and then his eyes would dart quickly around the
library. I could tell he was extremely nervous talking to me.

I remembered him having his head down and sleeping during class. In fact, I
think the entire class had fallen asleep except for me. I think it
surprised Mrs. Moss when I listened attentively to her and took
notes. After all, just minutes earlier I had begged her to let me make up
the assignments I had missed. I couldn't start out the first day by falling
asleep in class.

"Um, sure Gene." I dug around in my book bag and found the notebook I used
for trigonometry. I shuffled through some pages until I found the ones I
had taken earlier in the morning.

"Here." I handed him the notebook, pointing out the ones I had written.

"Thanks." He surprised me when he sat in the carrel next to mine and began
copying from my notebook. Since my writing looks like chicken scratch, he
had to ask me a couple of times what a word was. On one occasion he leaned
over, pointing to a word. Our legs lightly touched. He looked down and
quickly backed away. "Sorry," he said apologetically.

"No problem," I replied. I looked up and found him staring at me. His face
reddened as he scooted back and continued working.

He finished writing and closed his notebook, handing me back mine. "Thanks,
Joey. I'm glad someone stayed awake in class," he laughed. "I'm not going
to be eligible to play baseball if I fail this class."

I reached for my notebook, again noticing that he was staring intently at
me. He gave me a quick, short smile before getting up and returning to his
carrel. I watched as he packed up his books. Before leaving, he turned and
nodded. I nodded back and watched as he walked away.

After he left, I found it extremely difficult to concentrate any longer on
my assignment. I couldn't stop thinking about what had just happened with
Gene. For the past couple of weeks he had been hostile to me. He had even
gotten suspended for hitting me. But he seemed to be a different guy when
he wasn't around his friends. He had been almost- friendly. I finally
decided that I couldn't get anymore work done, so I packed up my books and
left.

I had promised Star that I would stop by the hospital after I finished at
school. My stomach was in knots by the time I got off the bus and stood
outside the hospital. I didn't know if Allen would still be unconscious- or
even worse. When I reached his room, my hands were shaking and I had
developed a throbbing headache.

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