Date: Wed, 22 Jun 2005 13:27:00 EDT
From: Jocula9496@aol.com
Subject: James and Scott Chapter 1

If you are offended with gay or sexual explicit content then
 I suggest you leave now.  This story is fiction and if any
names or similar situation that comes about in this story is
 pure coincident. Remember that this story is fiction where
 there are sexual transmitted diseases such as AIDS. Please
 when engaging in any sexual activity practice safe sex, and
  always use a condom and protect yourself and the future.
                              
                   Chapter 1 Introduction
                    Our First Encounters
                              
      My name is Scott. I am in my late 20's (29 to be
precise) gay, single, and hoping someday to find my true
soul mate in this so called dating jungle.  I have dated a
few guys here and there along with a few relationships, that
didn't materialize for one reason or another.  I have done
those so call hookups/flings in the past, but nothing really
worth talking about. The few flings that I have done did
nothing for me except made me feel empty and alone. Don't
get me wrong I love being with and having sex with a man,
but the one thing that is missing for me in a hookup is the
emotions and the love behind the sex. I want to be with a
guy that I care about and love and he feels the same in
return; the sex isn't just sex but hot passionate love
making. I am also one of those guys's who is a hopeless
romantic. My ideas of spending time with the person I care
about are to do romantic things together. For example,
walking along the beach holding hands as the surf comes up
and along our feet as we walk and talk. When coming home
from a long day at work you open the door to find your
significant other cooking a candlelit dinner with the table
set for two.  Even on a cold winter's night sitting and
snuggled up in front of the fireplace with that special
someone. But since I am not seeing or dating anyone special
I have to settle with dreaming about them.
       I also forgot to tell you that I am in pretty good
shape being at a height of 5' 7" 135lb, 30" waist, along
with brown hair and eyes.  I workout five times a week,
which includes running, biking, and weightlifting.  I have a
defined chest that is smooth along with a flat stomach
(still working on that six-pack).  My legs are muscular from
playing several years of soccer. My arms are defined but not
quite as big as I would like them to be, but I am slowly
working on getting them bigger along with getting defined
abs.
        The summer was now coming to an end, which meant
there wasn't much more time for swimming or lounging around
in the summer sun. Unfortunately, for some strange reason
the dating scene for me usually dies down during this time.
I guess when the fall season comes I sort of go into
hibernation mode until the spring. I think I tend not to
date as much during this time for a few reasons the days are
shorter, cooler weather, and the holiday seasons. I supposed
during this time frame it also helps me to rejuvenate myself
and to see where I am at in my life and where I want to go
in the future. I really can't complain too much since I did
manage to date a few guys over this past spring and summer,
even though nothing really materialized with any of them for
whatever reasons. The dating scene can be so complex and
very fickle at times. When dating you can have one person
feel physically and emotionally while the other person might
not feel any connection at all. You sometimes can even have
it where both parties don't feel the connection at all for
whatever reasons. Let's face it there are tons and variables
that play's a role when trying to find that right person.
The one thing I do know is that it can and does happen on
finding that one true soul mate. I just hope that one day it
will finally happen to me.
        Here it is the last weekend of August and there was
no dating prospect's in my future, but I didn't let it get
me down. I tend to keep busy with the daily grind of work,
working out, the odds and ends of keeping up my house, and
occasionally hanging out with friends.
       It was late Saturday morning and I already had
breakfast and straighten up the house, but I still had
errands to run which included the grocery store.  I took my
shower got a short sleeve shirt and shorts on and headed out
for my weekend errands.
     I finally arrived at my last errand of the day, which
was a specialty grocery store called Trader John's. I was a
bit tired and was ready to get home and relax.  Luckily I
only had a few things to pick up here, so I knew it wouldn't
take me too long.  As I was making my way up and down the
isle I came to the bread isle where I was going to pick up
some healthy wheat bread; there in the middle of the isle
was a young stocker squatting down putting the food items
onto the shelf.  He looked up at me and gave a little smile,
and I quickly return the smile back to him. When smiling at
him I had to take another glance at him, since he was a
total hottie, but I rapidly turned my head facing it back to
food items. I am a bit shy and I didn't want this guy to
think I was some sort of freak of a customer staring and
checking him out.
       I found the whole wheat bread I was looking for and
grabbed the two loaves, and made my way to the organic
vegetable section. As I was walking though the vegetables I
looked down to check my list to see exactly what vegetables
I needed for the week; when I heard a young man's voice
asking me if I needed any help.  I looked up to see the hot
young stocker from the bread isle looking at me. Now, that I
had a better look at him standing face to face with him, I
could tell he was around his early twenties, 6'2" 200lbs
blond hair and blues eyes. He had a young and an extremely
good looking face with nice cheek and jaw bone. I took a
quick glance down his body and he was wearing a pair of
shorts and a short sleeve shirt. The shirt was a blue with
white Hawaiian print (store uniform) and his shorts which
were a pair of beige cargo shorts.  The shirt fit very
nicely and showed off his broad shoulders and chest, and the
short sleeves revealed a nice size and well-defined biceps.
The shirt was wide at his shoulders and gradually tapered
down to show his 30" waist. The shorts he wore were on the
baggy side and went down just above the knees. His legs were
very muscular and covered lightly by his blonde hair.  After
the quick scanning of this guy's body I then noticed his
name tag on his right shoulder which said James. I sort of
just stood there in awe for a second taking all of him in.
Between James's face, hot body and his demeanor he could
easily be a model and extremely successful at it.
       Once again James asked me "Do you need any help with
anything?"
       "Oh no, I am fine just getting a few thing before I
head home but thanks anyway." I said wanting to kick myself
after the words came out of my mouth.  I should have made
something up and said I needed help to make him stay for a
little longer.
      "Okay if you need anything just let me know. Have a
nice day." he said and slowly walked down the isle and into
the back of the store.
       As I was picking out what I needed in the produce
section my mind was preoccupied with the vision of James in
my head. There was just something about his cute face, hot
body, and the charisma that he had. I kept replaying the
whole incident of him in the bread isle to him asking me if
I needed help. Damn! Why couldn't I have said I needed help
that way I could have talked to him for a while and possibly
even flirted.
       I finally finished my shopping and was at the
checking out line, and caught myself the whole time looking
to see if I could spot James one last time before I left the
store.  The cashier took my money and gave me my change
back. My grocery items were all bagged, and I was ready to
leave. I left slowly glancing around one last time to see if
could get a glimpse of James, but there was no such luck.
       I got home and was now unpacking my groceries and
planned on staying in for the rest of the day and evening
with nothing to do. I decided to watch some television, and
as I was flipping through the channels for some reason every
person I would see on the TV would remind me of James. It
didn't matter whether it was the voice, hair, height, or
even size I kept thinking and seeing James.  It was actually
start making me crazy, that I couldn't stop thinking about
him. I mean he looked at me once and said ten words, and did
it only because it is his job. Here I am obsessing over him
and I don't even know him. I don't know his actual age,
interests, if he is single, or even if he is even gay. Even
if was all those things it doesn't mean he would even be
remotely interested in me.  Eventually my mind finally
slowed down from thinking of James and I fell asleep.
        The weekend came and went and the week was
progressing just as fast with it already being Tuesday. I
went to work and the gym (it was leg day), and in the midst
of my squats I was thinking about all the things I still
needed to do when I get home. This included what items I
needed for dinner since I was making grilled lemon chicken
and broccoli. Suddenly, I realized that during my
distraction with James in the vegetable isle I forgot to
pick-up the broccoli, so now I have to go to the store
before I go home. I hate doing errands after work and the
gym, but I really wanted the broccoli to go with the dinner
that I was making tonight. After my leg workout I will be
heading to the grocery store.
      I walked in Trader John's didn't pick up a cart or
hand basket, but instead went straight to the vegetable
isle. I just wanted to get in and out of the store, so I
could get home start dinner and unwind from the day. I also
I didn't want to run into James due to the fact that I was
coming from my workout and still dressed in my gym clothes.
Right now I feel and look grubby, and I do not want to run
into James looking the way I am. So my goal is to grab the
broccoli, head to the cashier, and get out of the store.
      I enter the checkout lines, which were three lanes and
I was in lane one, which was the shortest one at the time.
There was only one person ahead of me, and was already being
checked out. I was just glad that I was at the homestretch
and without seeing James. Meanwhile, I was waiting in line
when I heard over the loud speaker "We need assistant on
register two." As I looked towards my right and down the
isle here came James walking towards the registers. All I
could think was oh fuck James is here and he is going to see
me here looking like shit.
      He went straight to register two and started bagging
up the woman groceries. As I kept glancing over to where
James was I could hardly keep my eyes off of him. This time
he was wearing a red short sleeve Hawaiian shirt along with
a beige pair of shorts. The shirt he was wearing today
showed off his upper body even more you then last Sunday;
you could actually see the outline of his cut chest.  The
sleeve's of his shirt was adhering to his biceps, and each
time James moved his arms to put an item into the bags his
biceps would flex forcing the sleeves outwards. Of course I
tried to take all this in with several short but quick
glances without being notice.
        As I was writing my check out and being rung up by
the cashier I heard voice say "good evening how are you
doing today?"
       I replied "I am doing fine thanks how are you?" as I
was said this I looked up and realized it was James talking
to me as he was bagging my one grocery item. Talk about a
double edge sword, because I was so excited to see and talk
to him, but at the same time I was totally embarrassed on
having him see me all grubby.
      The cashier finished checking me out and James handed
me my single grocery bag and I thank him and smiled. When
James handed me the bag he told me to have a nice day,
smiled and then winked at me. Before I knew it he was off to
the next register to start bagging for that customer. I
stood there for a few second not knowing what to think about
the wink. I understand the smiling and saying have a nice
day but a wink what was that all about?
       As I drove home I kept thinking about the whole
checkout incident and trying to figure out the whole wink
thing. He came over to bag one grocery item and usually the
baggers don't bother with just one item they let the
checkers do it. The reality of the wink was probably just a
friendly gesture like passing a stranger on the street and
smiling at them and they smile back.  James's wink could be
nothing more than a friendly gesture. I mean I am just an
average looking guy who is at least five to eight years
older then him. Plus, I looked like total crap today after
the gym, and what is the probability of someone to being
that hot, single, gay, and interested in an average older
guy like me.
       I got home cooked my dinner (which was very good if I
do say so myself). After I cleaned up the mess, did some
odds and ends, and took a shower I headed for bed. I figured
I would watch some television for a bit before going to
sleep.  After my shower I was already for bed with just my
boxer brief underwear.  I turned on the television and laid
on top of the bedcovers. I flipped through the stations
trying to fine something good on but everything was still a
rerun since the fall lineup had not started. I was flipping
through the channels for some reason there was a hot actor
on the television that remind me of James; and from that
point on all I could do was think of James and his hot body.
It didn't matter what was on Television now since the vision
of James was in my head. I envision James's hair, eyes,
body, and how hot it would be to be with him at this very
moment. Before I knew it I was putting my hand on my smooth
chest and slowly started moving it down my body. My hand
moved up and over my two pecs and down to my abs and before
I knew it my hand slid under the waistband of my boxer
briefs. I gradually wrapped my hand around my now semi-hard
cock. Little by little I started stroking my seven inch cock
inside my underwear. After several strokes and a raging hard
on thinking about James I knew I have became too horny to
stop and I had to finish the job.  I gradually slid my
underwear down and off my legs and went straight back to my
hard cock where I left off. I was stroking with one hand
while I rubbed the other up and down my body. I played with
each nipple one at a time lightly pinching them. While I was
doing this was imagining James's hot body standing in front
of me slowly peeling off his shirt revealing his awesome
physique.  My cock was throbbing in my hand as I was moving
it up and down its shaft.  As I continued to visualizing
James and his upper body my precum from my cock began oozing
out and running down my hand.  I then began to run my hand
up and down my cock's shaft to get it nice and lubed.  I had
the mental image of James taking his hands and slowly
rubbing them over his body, and with each movement of his
hands his muscles in his arms and chest would flex. It
didn't take me long before my breathing became heavy. I was
now stroking my cock faster and before I knew it I began
climaxing and shot my wad all over my stomach. As I lay on
my bed I squeezed every last drop of my cum out of my cock.
I began to gently rub my cum into my abs wishing it was
James doing it. I eventually got up and cleaned myself off
and went back to bed and fell fast asleep.
       The week came and went and the weekend was once again
upon me. This meant catching up with the household chores
and errands, but this time I was looking forward to at least
one of the errands. Of course it all depended if James was
working and if I would see him to make that one errand
worthwhile.  I don't know why I am so hot and bothered by
this guy. Yeah, James is very cute and has a hot body from
what I can tell from his clothes; but he is more than just a
pretty face he is nice and has certain charm about him that
I really like.
      I was out all afternoon doing my errands and I finally
arrived at good old trader John's. Of course right when I
walked in I glance over towards the cash registers to scan
them see if James was there bagging but there was just no
James insight.  I still have my shopping to do so maybe I
will run into him out on the floor, or if not maybe he will
be at the register the time I am done.
      As I went up and down the isles picking up the items I
needed from my grocery list I continued to look for James.
Unfortunately, I just picked up the last item from my list
and there has been no James stocking or helping customers
out on the floor. I took a deep breath and let out a sighed
and felt a little disappointed that I didn't see him today.
      I pushed my cart to register two behind another person
who was finishing up on getting checked out. Meanwhile, I
glanced down to look over my grocery list to make sure I
didn't forget anything on my list. Then I heard a voice in
the background I saying I can help you on register one and
before I knew it my cart was being pulled into that
direction. I looked up to see James pulling my cart towards
him and the register as he smiled at me.  I was so shocked
to see it was James that I stood there for a second in daze.
Here I pretty much gave up all hope that I would see him
today, but lucky for me James came out from the back at the
right time. Once I got over the initial shock and got my
composure back I walked up to the register counter and
smiled back at James.
      "How are you doing today" Said James.
      "I am doing fine thanks. How are you? Have you been
busy today? I said.
      "I am not to bad thanks for asking. It hasn't been too
busy today, I usually go on the register only when it gets
busy and this is the first time for me today. The good news
is I get off work in less than an hour." Said James smiling
    "Sounds like you having a good day so far." I said
    "Heck yeah, I can't wait to get off.work that is and
have some fun (James giving me a wickedly grin). Your total
is seventy-six dollars and forty-nine cents." said James.
I could not believe I was actually talking to James and I
was even a little giddy from it. I was looking at him
thinking how hot he is, and how much I would love being with
him that I totally missed his flirting. I only snapped back
to reality when James told me the amount of the groceries,
and began writing the check out to give to him.
      James processed the check and handed me the receipt
smiling at me and said "Here's your receipt Scott. Have a
great day and hope to see you soon."
       I left Trader John's even happier then I could have
ever anticipated being; that right then and there I knew
that I had a serious crush on James.  I also knew if ever
had a chance to date or be in a relationship with him I
would in a heart beat. Of course it is highly unlikely that
it will ever go any further then it has so far, so for now I
will just enjoy my so called crush/obsession for the time
being.
     I got home unloaded the car and started putting my
groceries away. As I was doing this I pressed play on my
answering machine to listen to my messages that were left
while I was gone. The messages started playing and the first
one was a co-worker calling to see how I been doing and to
talk. The second message was an automated solicitor saying I
was one of the few lucky ones that have won a trip, but I
deleted it before it was even finished. Those so called free
trips are always bogus, you may have got an all expense paid
trip but there is always a catch. When you get there most of
your time is preoccupied by seminars and conferences.
Finally, the last message was just about to play when I was
noticing that I was missing a couple of items I bought at
Trader John's.  Meanwhile I heard a familiar voice on the
answering machine "Hi Scott this is James from Trader John's
and unfortunately, a grocery bag of yours was left behind
here at the store. When you get this message please give us
a call at 555-9711, and again we are very sorry for any
inconveniences we may have caused you. Thank you"
     I picked up the phone and called Trader John's to tell
them that I got their message and that I would come right
down and pick up my groceries that were left behind. The
phone began to ring and a voice on the other end of the
phone began to speak "Trader John's how can I help you."
       "Hi this is Scott and I was in there a little while
ago and I received a phone call from James saying that I had
left a bag of groceries there." I replied
      "If you would please hold I will put James on the
phone, thank you." said the man on the other end of the
phone.
      "Hi Scott I am so sorry about your grocery bag being
left behind and it is completely our fault." Said James
       "Its okay and not a big deal I don't live that far
away and I will be right there to pick it up." I said
      "No need to do that Scott. Where about do you live?"
asked James
      "I live off of Briggs Road and Cavern Street, and may
I ask why?" I said
      "I feel totally guilty that this happen and I get off
work in about twenty minutes; so on my way home I could
easily stop by and drop it off. Scott this is the least I
can do for your inconvenience." said James
      I did not hesitate on accepted his offer and gave him
my address. After telling him the directions that he needed
to know I hung up the phone. Suddenly the realization that
James will be coming to my house got me a little excited and
nervous at the same time. I wanted everything to be perfect
which included the house and me.  I quickly finished putting
the last of the groceries away, straighten up the house, and
then made sure that I looked presentable when he arrives.
      The time flew by and almost thirty minutes pasted when
the door bell rang. There standing in the doorway was James
holding my bag of groceries and looking hotter than ever. He
had changed his shirt and now dressed in a light blue shirt
with beige cargo shorts. His short blonde hair was redone
and spiked on top.
       I know it is my house and I am on my own turf, but
for some reason I could not help from feeling a little
nervous. I just hope with me being nervous that I don't make
a complete ass out of myself by say something stupid. I
thought to myself here goes nothing as I became to speak.
      "Hi James come on in. Thank you so much for bring the
groceries I forgot I truly appreciate it" I said
       "Oh no problem Scott, it my pleasure and it is the
least I could do. Besides it wasn't your fault it was mine I
should have made sure that all the bags were in the cart.
By the way you have a very nice house." said James as he
glanced around the room.
       "Thank you James I am glad you like it. I said
       "Wow, is that a pool in the backyard? James said
        "As a matter of fact it is a pool in the backyard. I
try to swim and get some sun when have a chance but
sometimes there is enough time in the day. I said
        "I love to swim but unfortunately, I don't to get to
swim too much, since I don't know anybody with a pool." Said
James
       Don't ask me where or how I got the courage since I
am shy and a bit reserved, but the words just came out of my
mouth. "You now know someone with a pool and you are more
than welcome to use it anytime you like. The pool is always
open to you." I said with a smile
       "Thank you Scott that is very nice of you and I just
might have to take you up on that offer one of these day."
James said smiling back
        "I am sorry, where are my manners, would you like to
sit down and have something to drink?" I said
       "Thank you for the offer Scott, but I really have to
be going I am supposed to be over a friend's house very
shortly." said James
     "I am so sorry I didn't mean to keep you. Thank you
again for taking the time and bring the groceries by." I
said
       "My pleasure Scott I have enjoyed our little chat and
hope to do it again soon." said James.
      With that, we said our goodbyes and James headed
outside to his car as I slowly shut the door behind him. I
leaned up against the back of the door smiling and happy
like a little schoolboy that got his first A on a test.
James is just so considerate, adorable and fucking hot. God!
What luck that those groceries were left behind, so he could
bring them to my house.  It is just too bad that he had to
go so quickly, because I could have talked with him all
night long. I just hoped that I wasn't too pushy with
offering of the pool, because I would hate to offend or push
him away.
        After James personal visit I could not stop thinking
about him all night. I thought of him when I was cooking
dinner, eating, and continued to think about him until I
fell asleep.
      Once again I found myself at Trader John's finishing
up my shopping and for some strange reason all I could think
is that I sure feel that live at this place and chuckled to
myself. I rolled my cart to the register and James was
waiting there with no customers waiting in line. James had a
grey muscle shirt on with blue shorts and I practically got
an instant hard on right then and there. I have never fully
seen James's arms without sleeves. His arms were everything
I imagine they would be with sleeves.
      I pulled my cart up to the register where James
greeted me with a smile.  "Gosh it is sure dead in here
tonight." I said while helping James unload my groceries.
       "Well, Scott it is probably because we closed about
fifteen minutes ago and everyone has gone home including the
employees." Said James
       I stood there with my mouth slightly open not
realizing how late the time was. "I am so sorry that it is
so late and that I have kept you here waiting way past
closing." I said
       "Oh no problem Scott, but if you were some cranky old
person who did it on purpose then I would be mad; but it is
you and I think you are a really cool guy." Said James with
a wickedly grin
       As I smiled back I said "I am glad you don't think I
am some old cranky guy, and I like you too James. By the way
I was hoping that you would be working here tonight." As I
winked at James
        "I am glad I am here too, because I always love to
check you out." As James said this he looked my body over
from head to toe. "Mmm I love what I see each and every time
I see you." Said James
         "I feel the same way, because I can never get
enough of your hot fucking body."  I said
      "Is that so Scott (James putting down the head of
lettuce and started leaning over the counter and towards
me), because every time I see you here at work I have wanted
to do this." Said James
       James continued leaned over the counter towards me
and I followed by leaning in towards him. Our and lips
slowly met and we began to kiss passionately on the lips,
and our tongues started to work in and out of our mouths. We
broke away for a very short time, but only long enough so I
could go around to the other side of the counter. Once I
reached the other side of the counter we immediately started
kissing. Our arms wrapped around each others waist, with
both of our hands on each others asses. James began lifting
my shirt up and over my head, and I followed by doing to the
same with his shirt. With both of our shirts now off
revealing our upper bodies; all I could do was just stared
in complete aw at James's chest. His chest was thick and cut
along with rock hard abs. I took my hand and rubbed it along
his pecs and down to his abs feeling each and every ripple
and bump that his muscles made through his skin.  After we
both got done feeling each other bodies we began to lock
lips once again. Just the few touches and passionate kisses
from James made my cock hard as a rock. As we continued to
kiss our bodies began to press against one another's, and I
knew James was enjoying this as much as I was, due to his
hard cock pressing against mine. Our hands slowly went down
to each others pants and began unbuttoning them.  With both
of us having each others shorts half unbuttoning could tell
that neither one of us were not wearing any underwear. It
wasn't long before both of our pants were around are ankles
leaving us with two raging hard cocks pointing up in the
air. We went back to kissing each other but this time
grabbing and stroking each other cocks. James leaned me up
onto the counter and started working his way down with his
mouth. His lips and tongue stopped at each one of my nipples
servicing them by licking, nibbling and sucking them. He
moved over my abs and onto my hard cock that was pointing up
to his face.  He opened his mouth and stuck out his tongue
licking my cock's head a few times at different angles. He
moved his head down just a bit service my balls by licking
them.  He then gradually moved his way up from my balls
licking the shaft of my cock with his tongue. Before I knew
it James opened his mouth and popped the head of my cock
into his mouth. He played with my cock's knob with his
tongue before taking my whole cock into his mouth. As James
began deep throating my cock I brought my hands up to his
head and started guiding him onto my cock. Every time he
would go down onto my cock I was in pure pleasure.  I could
feel my balls tighten up and I knew it wouldn't be long
before he would make my stiff cock to explode.
        "Fuck James, you have the hottest fucking mouth.
God, you have me so hot and hard, and if you keep this up
much longer I am going to cum." I said as I moaned
       James gradually took my cock out of his mouth looked
up at me and said. "Well, that is my plan for you to shoot
your hot cum down my throat." As James was looking up at me
he smiled and gently licked his lips; before going back down
on my hard throbbing cock. He started sucking my cock harder
and faster to the point that I was just about to cum. Then
out of the corner of my eye I saw a guy come around the
corner and said "What the hell is going on here?"
        James and I were both startled as we looked over to
the guy. Then something strange happened, I was no longer in
the grocery store, but in my own bedroom and bed. I was a
little disoriented for a few seconds until I realized that
James and I getting it on in the store was all a dream. I
took in a deep breath and exhaled a big sigh, because the
dream felt so real damn real. Here I am lying in bed and
still with a raging hard on. I laid there for a few minutes
thinking about James, and what and why I am so attracted to
him. I am so fixated on him that now I am actually having
sexual dreams with him in them. Of course he is very good
looking and young, but there was so much more than just his
looks and age. I don't care if a guy is younger or older
then me or if they are drop dead gorgeous or just an average
Joe.  I think it is important that one another personalities
mesh together, similar interest and somewhat physically
attracted to each other. As I thought in bed for a couple of
minutes I realized that yes I am physically attracted to
James, but what really intrigued me about James is his
sweetness and charm.  He so polite and he has this charisma
about him that pulls me closer each and every time I see and
talk to him. Even though our conversations are brief I just
can't seemed to get enough of him. I just know if he is
single and gay and if he gives me a chance to date him that
we would hit it off without a doubt.  I think I am probably
looking for a miracle, because what are the odds of a young
stud like James which is, good looking, single, gay, and
interested an older and average guy like me. Even thought of
us being together is pretty much a fantasy and a dream at
least I have that for the time being, and who knows maybe
one day my dream will come true.

Please feel free to email me at Jocula9496@aol.com to let me
know what you think of the first chapter. I would love to
hear comments of what others think of my story so far. I
hope most people will like my story. I do have some chapters
in the works, and if I get a good response of people liking
the first chapter I will continue with the story. Thanks you
Tim