Date: Thu, 05 Jun 2003 08:32:29 -0400
From: Tom Cup <tom_cup@hotmail.com>
Subject: David's Fortunes - Chapter 7

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David's Fortunes
By Tom Cup
Chapter 7
Begins and Endings

Val's eyes left the cup she had been absentmindedly drying and met Karen's
worried gaze. Val had insisted that Arnie stay with Jody and Eric so that
the twins wouldn't be home with strangers, even if one of those strangers
was David's mother. It was tempting to believe in women's intuition as the
McDougal women stared into each other's eyes with looks of concern -- had it
not been for the fact the within seconds Billy was also looking longingly at
his mother, Val might have at long last given some validity to the myth --
but this was not female intuition. It was the love of family and logic that
caused the family's concern. David, Adam, Jody and Eric were, for all
intents and purposes, part of the McDougal family.  That was why Arnie had
not resisted in the least when Val suggested that he stay with the twins. It
wasn't that either Val or Arnie felt that Gwen and Betty couldn't be
trusted. It was that in times of stress, one needed the comfort of home and
family. But that wasn't what was bothering Val and her children; what was
bothering them was that David hadn't called. He would know how they felt. He
would know that they would be worried, about him and about Adam, and he
hadn't called. Val sighed, put down the cup and towel and said, "OK, enough
moping around. If we are going to worry, we might as well worry over at
David's." The words had barely escaped her lips before Billy threw Karen her
coat, slipped into his and pronounced that they were ready to go.

************************

"Don't you think he should have called or something by now?" Gwen asked.

"I'm sure David and Adam had some things to discuss privately before they
returned," Arnie answered.

"Arnie," Gwen sighed, "are you being this calm because you really believe
what you're saying or because you don't want Betty and I to worry. It's been
two days. I think we should call someone."

"Who?"

"Well Adam's grandfather for one."

"Gerald already called and told us that David arrived safely; and that the
elders would be counseling both David and Adam. I'm sure they're fine."

"But two days with no word."

"You don't have to worry," Eric broke into the conversation, "Adam's OK. He
knows how to take care of himself. And Grandfather Lee is really smart."

"Grandfather Lee?" Betty asked, "You call Adam's grandfather, Grandfather
Lee."

The twins looked to each other and shrugged. "Well," stated Jody, "really we
just call him Grandfather. He likes that, especially since we became members
of the tribe."

"What?" Gwen and Betty asked together.

Eric and Jody alternated filling the two women in on how they and David
became members of the Cherokee tribe. Betty and Gwen's heads continually
swung from one twin to the other as the Eric and Jody had the habit of
finishing each other's sentences. Arnie couldn't help but smile at the
bewildered women. He himself had forgotten how unnerving it had been when he
first experienced the twins' excited unified speech. "Funny," Arnie thought,
"how when you come to know and love someone all the things that you thought
were strange when you first met become comforting."

"Well, humph!" Betty exclaimed as the boys finished their story, "So they
think they can just take my grandchildren away from me do they?"

"I don't think that is the intent at all," Arnie said soothingly, "The tribe
saw David, Adam, Eric and Jody as, well, orphans in a sense and became their
extended family. There was no..."

"I know exactly what they were doing," Betty said waving her hand for
silence, "And they were right. I had abandoned my son. I am not proud of it
but it is the truth. That doesn't mean I intend to allow things to stay that
way. I want to be a part of my son's life. I want to be a part of my
grandchildren's lives. Yes, don't give me that big-eyed stare. I'm talking
about you two, and Adam also. You are my grandchildren and though I don't
begrudge what the Cherokee tribe has done, I want it understood that you are
also part of my family!"

Eric and Jody smiled, nodded, and embraced Betty. "OK, grandma," they said
together.

************************

Val had known that Billy and Karen were worried but as they drove to David's
house she realized how worried they really were. The possibility that David
or Adam might be hurt wasn't what was bothering them it was Gwen.

"If she finds out she could get really pissed," Billy said.

"Billy," Val chastised.

"Sorry," Billy answered.

"He's right though mom," Karen said defending Billy's comment but not his
choice of adjectives, "I don't know if she can handle uncle Dave being gay
and I think she would have a cow if she knew that Adam was unc's lover."

"Yes, yes," Val said in exasperation, "I know this!"

"OK," Karen said becoming exasperated also, "We're just worried about them,
OK? You don't have to get pissed."

"I am not getting pissed," Val answered annoyingly.

"Hey," Billy questioned, "Why is it OK for you two to say pissed but when I
say it I get yelled at?"

"A woman's prerogative," Val defended, "And watch your language!"

They all laughed and then fall silent, each contemplating David and Adam's
relationship and how it effected them. Billy's mind went back to the year
before when David had taken him to Mexico. It was during that trip that
Billy had realized that David was gay and not simply too busy to be bothered
with women. Up until that trip, Billy had pushed the thought of David's
sexuality out of his mind -- David was his uncle, though not by blood (both
Arnie and Val were only children) he was certainly better than any other
uncle Billy and Karen could have hoped, and until then Billy kept an "uncles
don't have sex frame of mind -- but as they spent time together swimming,
boating, and lounging on the beach, Billy spied David's eyes move
uncontrollably, and unmistakably, over the bodies of the young men in their
scant beach wear.

Billy wrestled with several emotions as he realized that he was in a foreign
country, sharing a hotel room, with a man that was gay -- that liked other
men. He found the situation nervously amusing and exciting. Billy loved
looking at the scantly clad Mexican girls but found that his eyes also,
occasionally, wandered to one of the boys. He also found that he could
become excited from staring at one of the boys as easily as by staring at
one of the girls. He was silent for a day and a half, contemplating his own
feelings -- David realized that something was bothering him but never knew
what -- before deciding that because he became excited over a half naked boy
didn't mean that he too was gay. Some of the boys on the beach were simply
beautiful and sexy. His body responded to the sexiness presented to him, but
Billy wasn't interested in pursuing a relationship with a male. It was the
girls that really interested him. He acknowledged another truth that day
also. David had never tried to seduce him, he had never touched him in
anyway that could be construed as inappropriate. In fact, Billy concluded,
David was so busy trying to be straight that David probably didn't even
realize that he was gay.  With these thoughts settled, he was free again to
enjoy the trip. Though David never realized why, Billy became freer with his
show of affection toward him. David's shock at Billy's hug the morning that
Billy decided that David being gay didn't matter to him proved to Billy that
David was indeed hiding from his own sexuality.

"Duh," Karen had said when Billy returned and told her that he though that
their uncle was gay. Billy shrugged. So he was the last one to figure it
out. Again, it was made concrete in his mind and heart that David was a
trusted member of the family.

"So mom," Karen began her tone signaling mischief, "Adam is fourteen and
Uncle Dave is his lover and that seems OK with you and Dad."

"Karen?"

"I'm just wondering. If it's OK for Adam to have a lover, I guess that means
it's OK with you and Dad if Billy and I have sex too."

"Sure," Val said dryly.

"Really?" asked Billy.

"Really," answered Val, "If you both want to die young, go for it."

Billy and Karen smiled at each other, shaking their heads, as Val pulled in
front of David's house.

************************

Eric and Jody were only mildly disappointed when the front door open and it
wasn't David and Adam. Although Gwen, Betty and Arnie were doing their best
to entertain the boys, the best entertainment arrived in the form of Billy
and Karen. There was nothing like two willing teenagers to entertain two
bored pre-teens. Within minutes the four kids were headed toward the pool,
talking excitedly, and laughing.

"Thanks," said Arnie to his wife, "I think they are better at alleviating
each other's fears than we are."

"Hmmm..." questioned Val, "Does that mean you will start listening to my
advice?"

"And waste all those years I've practiced ignoring your advice? Hardly!"

Betty and Gwen laughed as Arnie and Val embraced and gently kissed.

"So Arnie doesn't think it's strange that we haven't heard from David," Gwen
offered, "I think something might be wrong."

"Well, Arnie's not to terribly bright," Val offered, "He assumes that if
something were wrong that David would call."

"That's exactly right," Arnie said.

"And he would," Val said, "if he is able. Has it occurred to you Arnie that
David may not be able to call? It has been two and a half days. David knows
that we all will be worried about Adam. He should have called by now."

"I know," Arnie defended, "but Gerald said that David and Adam were going to
be counseled by the tribes elders. Chances are that they rested the first
night, were counseled the next day and David and Adam stayed an additional
night to talk things through."

"So why didn't he call to let us know?" Betty asked.

"I don't know. They probably needed time to sort things out," Arnie offered,
"You know we men can be awfully inconsiderate."

"What you mean," Val translated, "is that you can be awfully inconsiderate.
David isn't like that and you know it."

Arnie sighed. He was out numbered and out flanked, three to one. "Might as
well throw in the towel," he thought, "No use trying to argue with women
that have their minds made up."

"OK," Arnie said, "What do you want me to do?"

"Well," said Gwen, "as I have been suggesting, call Gerald Lee!"

"OK, OK!" Arnie said moving toward the phone, "Give a guy a little room. He
picked up the receiver and began dialing the number when they heard the
garage door begin to open.

***********************

David didn't immediately understand why everyone seemed so agitated and
confused.  It took him a few minutes to realize that it had been nearly
fifty-three hours since anyone of them had heard from him. He was
apologizing and trying to calm the worries of the adults when you heard
Billy's voice behind him.

"Where's Adam?" Billy asked.

David turned to see the twins, Billy and Karen, towels wrapped around their
bodies, looking anxiously at him. The twins were nodding in agreement to
Billy's question. Karen's hands were on her hips. Her posture gave her a
motherly, not to be ignored look and reminded David instantly of the look
the Val calmly gave him as he entered the house.

"OK, OK," David laughed, "You guys get dried off. I guess I have some
explaining to do."

"I'll get the kids dried off," Val said moving towards the children and
ushering them back toward the pool.

"I'll help you," Gwen offered.

"I'll put on some coffee," Betty said, "Are you hungry?"

"As a matter of fact," David answered, "Now that you mention it."

"I'll make a bit of lunch while I'm at it," Betty sang, already headed for
the kitchen.

Arnie looked around the foyer and discovered that David and he were alone.
He wondered for a moment if the mass exodus had been planned. He shrugged
and turned to David. It had been obvious, from the moment that David entered
the house, that his reconciliation with Adam had been a positive experience.
David absolutely beamed.  Arnie had watched as Gwen and Betty's looks of
concern turned to pure curiosity.

"You need to calm down," Arnie cautioned.

"Why? What do you mean?"

"David you have the look of a bride on her honeymoon and I am not the only
one that has noticed." David laughed and slapped Arnie on the back. Arnie
took a deep breath and stared into his friend's eyes.

************************

"Go ahead," Val said picking up the discarded towels, "I'll be in in a
minute." She smiled to herself as she dropped the last of the towels in the
laundry basket. David was in love. It was written all over his face. Val
couldn't help but be happy.

"What's going on?"

Gwen's voice startled Val from the warm of her revelry. The heated smells of
the pool swirled in the air giving the moment a surreal presence. Val turned
slowly toward the woman that she had thought exited the poolroom with the
children. Gwen stood staring at Val, tears forming in her eyes.

"I'm not sure I know what you mean," Val answered trying to deflect the
question.

"I think you do. I saw the look in David's eyes. I saw it!"

Val sighed. "OK, so what did you think Gwen? That after all the years you
have been apart that just by showing up you could capture his heart?"

"No, that's not it."

"Isn't it? David's happy. For the first time in his life, he is really and
truly happy. I don't know what happened the last two days and I don't care.
All I care about is that finally, I can look into his eyes and see the
sadness and regret of the past gone. That's all I care about."

"You don't like my being here."

Val sighed again. "Gwen, you came for your own reasons. They weren't good
reasons or bad reasons. They were just reasons. Maybe you love him, I don't
know. I do know that he cares about you, about your feelings but that's it;
it ends there. David doesn't love you; not like you want to be loved. I'm
sorry if that hurts you but it's the truth. I don't want to see you two fall
into the same trap as before, trying to make something work that won't. And
I won't see David sacrifice his happiness trying."

"You talk like I want to see him unhappy."

Val shook her head. "No I don't believe you want to see him unhappy. I
believe that you want to be happy and don't realize that if you get things
your way David will be miserable."

"I can't help the way I feel. I've spent years trying to deny how I feel,
years rejoicing over his success with PowerNet, chatting with Betty at
holidays hoping to hear some word from him. I love him, Val. I really do."

"Do you?"

"Yes. I do."

"This may be the hardest thing I have ever said to anyone, Gwen, but I am
going to say it to you because I love David too. If you love him as much as
you say you do, then walk away. Leave him and don't come back. Make a life
for yourself without David, because you will never fit into his life
comfortably. I'm sorry Gwen but that's the truth."

************************

Eric and Jody sat on David's lap chatting excitedly about the possibility of
living on the reservation with Adam. Billy sat comfortably on the arm of the
chair with his arm draped over David's shoulder as David told of his plans
for turning over PowerNet to Arnie.

"Hey," Arnie said as Gwen and Val joined the group, "You missed the big
announcement. I've been promoted to chief cook and bottle washer. When it
comes down to it I'll make more money and work more hours, so really I'm
taking a pay cut! Doesn't that sound great? I'm really moving up in the
world!"

"So you're moving to the reservation?" Val asked.

"Yes, we talked it over with the tribal elders..."

"And Arnie will head PowerNet for you," Val continued, "Of course the kids
and I will stay on to help. Your mother will stay here, of course; that will
solve the problem with finding her housing and of course you'll want a place
here anyway for when you need to chair the board of PowerNet..."

"Whoa... Board of PowerNet?" David asked.

"David, you can hand over the day to day operations of PowerNet to Arnie,"
Val continued, "But the long term strategy is yours. You direct this
company. You've made it what it is and you'll make it what it will be in the
future. Now, I've already taken the liberty of having Ben draw up a new
corporate charter with an inclusion for a board of directors..."

"What?" David and Arnie voiced at the same time.

"I love you so David but some times you are as slow as Arnie. Of course you
would want Adam to grow up with his grandfather and brother. Once you found
them, I knew that this move was just a matter of time. So I've been thinking
about this for some time."

"Remember earlier when I said that I would continue to ignore your advice?"
Arnie asked Val.

"Yes," Val smiled.

"Forget I said that, will you?"

David laughed and looked at Gwen. He had forgotten that she was there. Now,
a sickening feeling began to brew in the pit of his stomach. "Gwen," he
said.

"Oh," Gwen smiled sheepishly, "I've already overstayed my welcome. Val's
agreed to drive me to the airport."

"What's the hurry? You're welcome here, you know that."

"I know David. And thank you. But it's time for me to go. You're starting a
new life here and I'm in the way."

"You're not...." David began. Gwen step forward and pressed her lips to his.

"Yes, David. I am." She said, turned and hurried to her room to retrieve her
things.

************************

It had taken six months -- Adam was placed on probation for driving without a
license, Arnie was confirmed as the new CEO of PowerNet with David serving
as Chairman of the newly formed Board of Directors -- but every moment had
been worth the effort. The house that was built for David's new family was a
two-story, six-bedroom, colonial style home; it was small compared to the
house they were leaving behind, and had practically none of the amenities of
the mansion that the four males had shared at their meeting. None of them
seem to care. This was their house, the house that they had decided to build
and share together.  This was home.

Most of the reservation came to house blessing celebration. Arnie, Val,
Karen and Billy, as well as David's mom attended the ceremony. David invited
them to stay at the house with them, reminding them that the reason he had
six bedrooms was so that his family could stay with him whenever they
wished.

"I think we will be getting back," Betty said hugging David and Adam, each
in an arm, "Besides, I think Adam would like to be alone with you the first
night in your new home. We'll take Eric and Jody back with us. I'm sure they
wouldn't mind a trip to Busch Gardens."

Eric and Jody nodded readily and begged, "Please Dad, can we?"

"Mom," David said, "You don't have to do that."

"I'm not doing it just for you," Betty said, "I'm doing it for my son-in-law
also." Adam's eyes grew large. David stopped breathing. Arnie, Val, Billy
and Karen fell silent. Jody and Eric fidgeted nervously. "My god," Betty
continued, "I'm a little slow but I'm not stupid. Come on boys get your
things. Your Dad and Adam need to spend some time alone."

************************

They were giddy as they lay with each other. David wasn't sure if he had
ever been more caught up in love. He was panting. It had been the second
time that night that Adam and he had made love. David knew it would not be
the last even before the song began to play:

I never felt like this before
I want to feel like this some more
How did you do what no one's done
Chance were million to one

Betcha you can't do that again
Move me like you did just then
Make me want to spend the rest of my life here in your arms

Betcha you can't take away my breath
Even with no resistance left
See if you can. Betcha can't do that again.

Adam laughed out loud and then lowered his lips to David's ear. He kissed
David's lobes teasingly and then flicked his tongue in David's ear before
whispering, "Betcha I can." David smiled and forced his lover over on to his
back. As the next verse began, he sang it to Adam:

I'm at the mercy of your touch
Never wanted anyone so much
But can you do that one more time
I'd really love to see you try

Betcha you can't do that again
Move me like you did just then
Make me want to spend the rest of my life here in your arms

Betcha you can't take away my breath
Even with no resistance left
See if you can. Betcha can't do that again.

"Betcha I can," Adam whispered between the words of the song. David smiles
and sang:

See if you can. Betcha can't do that again.

Adam's legs wrapped around David's midsection. David sighed deeply as he
felt himself entering his partner. He would lose the bet. All the joy and
happiness of their meeting filled his heart at that moment. His spirit
soared as his heart swam in the warmth of their companionship. From their
meeting in the Target store, Adam had mesmerized and amazed David. From
their first night together, David could think of no other place that he
would rather be than in Adam's arms. Adam had always made him breathless,
David knew he was at the mercy of Adam's touch. Yes, Adam was doing it
again, but as he felt Adam begin to tremble beneath him David knew he was
too.


The End
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