Date: Fri, 6 May 2016 03:18:43 -0500
From: NDBareBear <ndbarebear@yahoo.com>
Subject: Life's Good - Chap 22 - Final

Hey everyone - NDBareBear here.

I would greatly appreciated any feed back on this story (good or bad!).  I know
I don't follow all the correct grammatical rules, especially when it comes to
dialog.  But, I need to know if it was easily readable and made sense.  I'm new
to this writing stuff, but am really enjoying it and want to keep doing more.
If my "style" isn't working for you, let me know so I can correct it.

Would a short character list at the beginning of each chapter help follow who
the players are?

ALL eMails will be responded to.  I'm not looking just to get my ego (or
anything else!) stroked - I just want to be good!



Thanks
NDBareBear
ndbarebear@yahoo.com