Date: Tue, 13 Sep 2005 22:46:48 -0400 (Eastern Standard Time)
From: Ed Sookikian <WritHot@comcast.net>
Subject: The Man I Became  chapter 16 using Word doc

THE MAN I BECAME
by  70s Child

The following story is totally fictional.  It is about how a person
develops into what he is.  The characters are fictional and any relation
between the characters and actual people is purely coincidental.  If you
are under the age of 18, it is illegal to possess adult stories, or if you
are put off by gay sex, then just leave.  If you are totally homophobic, I
have two words for you - ***SUCK IT***.


I have other stories on Nifty:

Air Force Fun				(Military) - completed

A Brady Bunch				(Celebrity) - completed

Brother v. Brother			(Historical, Incest, Interracial)

Geostrobe				(Celebrity, Science Fiction) - done

Good Things Come In Small Packages	(Young Friends)

Night of the Strippers			(Beginnings)

Is It Real or Is It a Dream			(Science Fiction) - done

FROM CHAPTER 15: He hugged me and kissed me goodnight.  I went back to the
tent and we all settled down for the night.  Danny was sleeping on Byron's
chest.  Jimmy and Paul were snuggled up.  Jeff and Davy were spooning nice
and tight.  I took off my shorts and wrapped my body around Mark.  I kissed
him goodnight and fell asleep happy, but worried.  Why was I passing out?

CHAPTER 16: DEATH OF AN UNKNOWN WOMAN

As we got up the next day, we also knew the inevitable was about to happen.
We dressed in our clothes from the night before and Mom had breakfast ready
for us.

"Well, it's about time."  she said.  "John and Bill will be here shortly."

We all sat down to eat, but the silence was deafening.  We looked at each
other and Mom thought all of us were sick.  She felt our foreheads and was
ready to take our temperatures.

"You guys know that you will be over at Davy's house as much as he will be
at ours."  she said.  "Besides, this nephew of mine will always be
welcome."

She kissed his forehead and we began to smile until we heard the doorbell.
My heart sunk because it was John and Mr. Whittington to come collect my
cousin.  Mom answered the door and they came into the kitchen.  John kissed
his son, then Mark, my brothers, then finally me.  The two men noticed how
depressed we were and John dropped the surprise.

"Well, I guess you guys need some cheering up."  he said.  "There will be a
campout at our house next Friday for the weekend."

It was as if someone gave us happy pills because the smiles radiated in the
room.  Mom wanted to make sure they would not be taking on too much and
John said they were prepared for the onslaught.  It was at that point Davy
did something unexpected.

"Dad, Jeff's my lover."  he said, holding the teen's hand.

"Well young man, what are your intentions for my son?"  John asked.

"Sir, I love your son."  Jeff said.  "I plan to go to a local college.  By
the time he graduates from high school, I will want him to move in with
me."

"Are you having relations?"  the marine asked the trembling teen.

"Yes sir."  he replied, blushing.

"Dad, he loves me."  Davy chimed in."  "He never hurts me and he makes me
feel good."

Mom was beginning to blush, which was the first time I saw her do that.  I
began to smile as John and Jeff continued their discussion.

"Jeff, just remember this."  the large man said.  "If you ever hurt my son,
I will definitely hurt you."

"And when he's finished, I'll continue the pain."  Bill Whittington added.

"Yes, sirs."  Jeff said with a tremor in his voice.

Dad had been disassembling the bed and called the two men to come upstairs.
They brought the bed downstairs and we knew it would be permanent.  We went
upstairs and helped Davy pack his stuff.  As we lugged it down the stairs,
Dad had me load it in our car, then had us pile in.  Paul, Byron, and Jeff
got in Jeff's car.  Mark, Davy, Danny, Jimmy, and I got in Dad's car and we
all drove to Davy's new house.  As we unloaded, the men, Jeff, and I took
the bed parts to my cousin's new room.  As we entered, Davy had a new
dresser and a desk with a computer.  We stared in astonishment and I
uttered the first words that came into my mind.

"HOLY SHIT!!"  I yelled.

I then felt three hands hit my backside so hard, I actually lurched forward
three feet.  I cried out in pain and saw the three men looking at me.  I
realized at that point of what I said and did apologize.  We began to
reassemble the bed as Davy and Mark put his stuff away in the closet and
dresser.  As we finished getting the bed together, we went downstairs and
John had lunch ready for us.

"Help yourselves."  he said to all of us.

Now eight boys and three men can quickly devour food faster than a swarm of
locust.  Within ten minutes all the food was gone.  Davy, Jeff, Paul, Mark,
Byron, and I had the lion's share, but we made sure Danny and Jimmy had
enough.  We began to clean up and then went outside to play football.  It
was the men against the boys.  We decided to play touch football to make it
fair for Danny and Jimmy, but there was some tackling every so often.  The
hardons that sprung up on each of us were exceedingly unmistakable.  The
game wound up to be one of grope and stroke and we did not care who was
winning.  It was agreed the game was a tie and he sweat was pouring off out
bodies.  I grabbed the hose and turned on the water.  I started to spray my
face, but Danny started to grab the hose , so I began to spray him.  Jimmy
then began to charge, so I turned the hose on him.  I had gotten so carried
away and decided to spray everyone with the hose, including Dad, John, and
Bill.  Dad came to me and I thought I was going to die.  After he wrestled
the hose from me, he put the end down the front of my shorts and the hose
sprayed my burgeoning dick.  Dad took charge then.

"All right, everyone strip."  he ordered.

No one ever disobeyed my dad, even Mr. Whittington.  We all removed our
soaked clothes and the varying sizes of erections were in full bloom.  Dad
sprayed our bodies down so we were cooled off.  After he sprayed his thick,
hairy chest, he went to call Mom.  He told her that we were playing and
would be home in a few hours.  It seemed she did not care because it gave
her quiet time from her rambunctious boys.  When he came out, he was met by
everyone paired off.  We were kissing and stroking each other.  Dad was
shocked to see his two youngest boys kissing Paul and Byron.  I saw his
gaze and his hard cock, so I walked over to him.

"Dad, I guess all three of your boys are gay."  I said.  "Danny loves Paul
and Jimmy loves Byron.  I hope you're not disappointed."

"Have they don't anything?"  he asked.

"Just sucking."  I told him.  "And some fingering.  I told Paul and Byron
no fucking."

At that point, John came over and pulled Dad to where he and Bill were.
John got on all fours to receive a hot cock in both the front and back.
Mr. Whittington licked John's male pussy to get him ready for Dad.  Dad got
his cock at the large black bottom's mouth and felt the wonder that John
gave with his oral cavity.  Mark and I found a nice patch of grass where we
laid down.  We kissed and stroked each other.  I began to move down my
lover's body and swallow his smooth, hairless cock.  I tongue-fucked the
piss slit diligently.  He moaned loudly and twitched severely.  I moved to
the are neither balls nor ass.

"OH FUCK!!"  he screamed as I teased him.

I lowered my face to the wonderful boycunt I loved.  I lightly flickered
the hole, because I knew he was so sensitive.  The more I played, the more
Mark writhed in pleasure.

"OH SHIT BILLY!!"  he cried out.  "SHOVE IT IN!!!"

I worked my tongue in earnest and tongue-fucked his hole.  His ass muscles
collapsed on my taste bud receptors.  Mark raised his legs so I could get a
better angle to ram my tongue in him.  I then turned around to put my
dripping cock at his mouth.  He swallowed my pole like a starving man.  His
head bobbed on and off, wetting my flesh for the invasion.  For several
minutes we looked like a contortionist team.  As I moved off Mark's ass, he
surprised me by putting on my back.  He grabbed my 6" and put it at his
hole.  As my lover lowered himself, he leaned forward and kissed me gently
on the lips.  He moved back and forth as he caressed my body.  I felt his
fingers move all over my body, especially my face and chest.  I felt so
much love for him at that my heart swelled in my chest.  He rode me slowly
while I caressed his legs and torso.  I looked around and saw Dad hammering
John's tight ass, while Mr. Whittington was feeding his 9" to his partner.
Jeff was making love to Davy, Jimmy and Paul were in a hot sixty-nine, and
they were fingering each other.  To my amazement, Byron was receiving
Danny's cocklet in his hole.  My baby brother was a true top and Byron was
a very willing bottom.  I felt the cum churn in my scrotum and knew I was
ready to shoot.  Mark anticipated this and began to rub the sides of my
head.  The first load exploded through my shaft deep into Mark's bowels.

"SHIT!!"  I cried out.

Six more shots exploded from my being and Mark kept rubbing my head.  The
strange thing was I was fully conscious of what happened.  As my climax
ebbed, Mark leaned down to kiss me.  I felt his hard 4" press against my
stomach.  I began to stroke the hard cock and Mark began to purr softly.  I
loved that sound because the sensation he was feeling also made me feel
great.  It did not take Mark long.

"OH BOBBY!!"  he squealed in a high pitched tone.  "I'M CUMMING!!"

His body shook and his head popped back.  I felt his cock twitch in my
hand.  As he came down from his dry orgasm, he fell on me and I rolled him
on his side.  I kissed his lips gently and we cuddled.  My dad and Bill
filled John's body with their man cream.  Jeff filled Davy's ass to the
brim with his teen jizz.  Danny had spasmed on his first fuck in Byron's
ass.  Jimmy and Paul climaxed in their mutual blowjobs.  We all were
relaxing on the grass when Dad suggested we head to Ryan's Steakhouse.  We
all went to the bathrooms to get quick showers.  As we finished, we
dressed, then were ready to head to dinner.  Our clothes dried in the sun,
so at least we were comfortable.  Dad had called Mom about our plans for
dinner and she just told him to have a nice time.  We were in a private
dining area and we either had the buffet or steaks.  I decided on a sirloin
and baked potato.  We finished our meals and I let out a loud belch.  Dad
and John rolled their eyes while everyone else laughed.  We left and Dad
drove Mark, my brothers, and me home.  Jeff took Paul and Byron, while
John, Mr. Whittington, and Davy left for their first night as a family.  I
hugged Davy and told him I would see him on Monday.  As we got home, Mom
was laying on the couch listening to some music and reading.  As we came in
the living room, she looked and smiled.

"Oh well, peace and quiet gone forever."  she said.

We gave her a kiss and she said that Mark's parents wanted him to stay for
the night.  We ran to my room and we began to play again.  I went down to
workout, even though the move should have been enough.  Mark and I lifted
weights for an hour.  When it was time for my brothers' bath, they stripped
to their birthday suits.  Mark and I stripped down and we all got in the
tub.  I began to wash Danny's body, while Mark made sure Jimmy was nice and
clean.

"So how was your first time in a hole, Danny?"  I asked.

"Weird, but fun."  he said.  "Byron's bum hole is so tight.  He said we can
do it again."

"Just remember, don't let anyone do it to you unless you are okay with it."
I said sternly.

The nodded and their cocklets were bobbing in the water.  After we finished
washing, shampooing, and rinsing, we all got out and dried Danny, while
Mark did the same to Jimmy.  We then dried ourselves and I took Danny to
his room, where Jimmy and Mark followed us.  I put my baby brother on his
bed and he lifted his legs.  His exposed pucker was tempting.  I lowered my
mouth to it and shoved my tongue deep in his hole.  He moaned and jumped on
the bed on the bed.  Jimmy, not to be left out, raised his legs.  Mark
tongue-fucked his sweet, pink ass and caused the same results.  We worked
their holes until they were covered in saliva.  I them put my middle finger
in Danny and Mark followed right along by entering Jimmy's hole with his
middle finger.  We then swallowed their cocklets with our mouths.  Our
heads pistoned up and down in unison as my little brothers wriggled,
giggled, and moaned.  Our fingers mastered their prostates which educed
more sounds of pleasure.  As if perfectly orchestrated, with one last push
into their bodies, by sweet siblings arched and groaned with joyous
orgasmic gratification.  I felt Danny's body shake uncontrollably.  After
several minutes, he collapsed on the bed and whimpered almost inaudibly.  I
moved up from his now limp cock slowly removed my finger from his rectal
cavity.  At the same time, Mark was doing the same to Jimmy.  We dressed
Danny in his briefs, then his pajamas.  I put him under the covers, then
Mark and I kissed him goodnight.  I then picked Jimmy up in my arms and
carried him to his room.  We dressed him also and kissed him goodnight.  We
left my brothers and went to my room.

"Billy, I hope we get to have kids of our own."  Mark said.

"Oh man, you're planning way ahead."  I replied.  "But it would be great if
we could adopt one boy and one girl."

We climbed in bed and began to kiss with wild abandon.  Our tongues dueled
a sensual dance as my hard 6" pressed against Mark's body and his
inflexible 4" jabbed me also.  We caressed our bodies all over and I
slipped two fingers deep into my love's hole.  His legs unconsciously rose
to allow me better access.  He pulled my head up and gazed into my eyes.

"Billy, I love you so much."  he said.  "Just never leave me.  Always love
me."

With that, my fingers left his boycunt and was replaced by my hard cock.  I
slowly make love to Mark.  We kissed and felt each other.  He rubbed my
head as he did that afternoon.  I loved this person with me heart and soul.
I knew I would never hurt him in anyway.  As I began to speed up, our moans
increased in volumes and they traded in our mouths.  I could feel his balls
pull to his body and I knew he was close.  His body began to shake with his
orgasm and he let out a loud moan.  I lifted my head as his eyes rolled
back in his head.

"OH GOD!!"  he cried.

For almost a minute, Mark's body quivered with his climax.  His ass
tightened around my dick and I blasted white cream deep into him.  I
grunted and roared, but I did not pass out.  Six blasts of boy juice filled
Mark's body.  I collapsed on his body and held him tightly.

"Oh Billy, I love you."  he said

"My sweet Mark, I love you so much."  I replied.

We fell asleep as my dick softened and came out of his hole.

Sunday was a quiet day and I did miss my roommate/cousin.  Mark had to go
home, but promised to be by later in the day to workout.  Jimmy and Danny
came to cheer me up and they were the twin terrors I loved and would
protect with my life.  They began to tickle me and I began to retaliate.
We were rolling around on the floor and our parents appeared at the door.
Dad and Mom joined in the fun and we were one happy family.

Later that afternoon, John arrived with Davy to go to the gym.  Mark's dad
pulled up and let my sweet guy out.  We climbed in John's car and we went
to the gym for our daily session of sweat and pain.  Tony was there and he
waved to us.  We entered the locker room, changed, then entered the weight
room.  Frank was there and the five of us trained with ferocity, especially
me.  After two hours, I was drenched in sweat and Mark looked at me.  He
glanced at my developing pecs and abs and smiled broadly.  He leaned into
me to whisper.

"My guy is going to be the sexiest one in school."  he said quietly.
"Everyone will be jealous."

I began to laugh and dropped the dumbbell on the floor.  I began to flex my
muscles and Mark began to feel them, followed by Davy, John, and Frank.

"Damn boy, you're gonna be bigger than us."  Frank said.

I smiled and resumed my workout.  After the third hour, we called it quits.
We went and showered.  I noticed Davy glancing at his dad's massive member.
I also noticed Frank glancing surreptitiously at my cock.  As we finished,
we went to dress and Mark swatted my ass cheeks, so I retaliated.  I
rat-tailed him as he yelped.  Davy tried to get me, but I shifted at the
last minute.  John, however, did get me and I leaped two feet and let out a
howl.

"What the hell?"  I exclaimed.

We finished drying off and went to the car.  Frank shook our hands and said
goodbye.  We climbed in the car and I leaned to Davy.

"Did you get to suck your dad yet?"  I whispered with a smile.

He looked down and shook his head no.  He told me that John and
Mr. Whittington told him under no circumstances were they going to have sex
with him.  He felt they think he was unworthy.  I decided to let myself get
involved.  I climbed in the front seat and smiled at John, who returned the
favor.  My hand crept over to his lap and I began to stroke his beefy
thigh.  The large marine started to feel good as his anaconda moved down
his pant leg.  I stroked the thickness and moved over.  I began to tongue
his ear, which almost caused him to crash.

"You better stop before we crash."  he said breathlessly.

"Only if you do one thing."  I replied.

"What?"  he queried.

"Let Davy join you and Bill."  I told him.  "He loves you guys, but he
feels that you think he's not worth it."

I saw Davy blush and I continued on John.

"He's my son."  the man uttered.

"DUH!!"  I responded.  "And he loves you.  Just give him a chance."

John was about to argue some more and I really began to work on him.  My
hand slowly jerked his snake gently as my tongue worked all over his ear.
This caused him to moan and almost swerved off the road.

"Okay."  he said.  "But stop before we die."

"Your word?"  I inquired.

He nodded and I stopped.  We dropped Mark off first and I moved to the
backseat to give him a loving kiss.  We broke the kiss and he left the
vehicle.  John then drove me home.  Davy and I talked along the way.

"So how do you like your first week here cuz?"  I asked.

He nudged me and we wrestled in the backseat until we go to my house.  As
we pulled up the driveway, I kissed my cousin and then John.

"Thanks John."  I said.  "He really loves you."

"Just don't ever do that again while I'm driving."  he said.

"But I know how to get to you."  I replied with a smile.

I got out and was met by my brothers.  They pulled me to the kitchen where
my parents were sitting.  I wondered what was going on and I sat in the
nearest seat.

"Billy, your grandmother died this afternoon."  Mom said.

"You mean your mom?"  I asked.

"Yes."  she replied.  "She had a heart attack."

"So what does that mean?"  I queried.

"I have to make funeral arrangements."  she responded.  "Most of my family
has died, so I guess we're gong to be it."

"Honey, how do you feel?"  Dad asked her.

"I don't know."  Mom replied.  "I don't have any feelings right now."

Dad told me to take my brothers to the living room and put in a video,
which I did.  Halfway through the movie, Dad came out and pulled me aside.

"Your mom and I are going to Florida to claim the body."  he said.

"Do you want us to pack?"  I asked.

"No."  he said.  "You will be taking care of your brothers.  You are
becoming more mature.  I will have Mark's parents check in on you along
with John and Bill.  Just don't disappoint me son."

"I won't Dad."  I said as I hugged him.

I went upstairs to call Mark about the circumstances, then called Davy.
The pain the woman put him through was evident in his voice.

"I'm glad she's dead."  he said.  "I hope she burns in hell."

"Well I do understand cuz."  I replied.  "I never met her so I don't know
what she's like.  Mom is taking it calmly."

"Do you want me to come over?"  Davy asked.

"You know how much I want you to come over."  I replied.  "But Mom and Dad
have put this situation on a tight rein."

"Billy, if you ever need me, just call."  he said.

"I will."  I told him.  "I love you."

I went downstairs and told my parents I called Mark and Davy.  I relayed
Davy's reaction and Mom was very understanding.  It then dawned on me that
I had a doctor's appointment the next day.

"What about the doctor's Dad?"  I questioned.

"John will take you."  he replied.  "He will call me with the results."

That night I got my brothers ready for bed as usual.  We did not have our
fun time because my mind was full of questions.  How could a woman be so
hateful to her own children and grandchildren?  She never visited or
called.  Maybe a card or present for our birthdays or Christmas, but no
love.  No wonder Mom and Davy have the hate for her.  My brothers stayed
with me and we slept quietly.

TBC...

NOTE: Sorry that I have taken so long in getting the chapter done.  I have
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