Date: Sat, 23 Feb 2002 15:07:05 -0500
From: Tom Cup <tom_cup@hotmail.com>
Subject: Tommy Series (Mr. Steel - Revised) Chapter 1

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Tommy
By Tom Cup
Part I
Mr. Steel
Chapter 1



It happened on my sixth grade camping trip. I was going to be in the cabin
with the "good" boys. They turned out to be not so good. They were assholes
and thought it was funny to water my bed. Mr. Steel, the school gym teacher
and boys' camp chaperone, moved me to another cabin. When I got there it was
almost time for `lights out'. I fit in better with this group of kids and
soon a game began.

Keith had the bunk above mine and went first. A sheet was placed over his
body and he had to guess what he was wearing that the group had written
down. If he guessed incorrectly, he had to take off whatever he had guessed.
Keith guessed until he had nothing left on. We told him that the item he was
wearing that was written down was the sheet, as we snatched it off of him.
He stood in front of us naked, with a hard on, and said "I don't care if you
see me naked." That's when we heard Mr. Steel yelling, "lights off!" Keith
grabbed his clothes and jumped into his bunk, still nude.

I was almost asleep when he reached down and shook me. "Did you like what
you saw?" He asked.

"Uh, yeah," I answered.

"Man, I still have a hard on. Do you?" I hadn't before he asked but got one
quickly from the question. "Let me see!" He said, and reached down and
started to feel my cock.

Did that ever feel good? Yes! Then we heard the door open and Mr. Steel came
in waving a flashlight. We both turned over and pretended we were asleep.
Mr. Steel looked around briefly and left. Keith asked me to come up to his
bunk, which I did. He was still naked and his body was soft and radiated
warmth. He removed my pajamas and underwear. Then he took my hand and put it
on his cock. It was hot and hard and soft all at the same time. He showed me
how he liked me to move my hand, slowly up and down. I was doing this for a
little while and then he moaned and grabbed my cock. I loved the feeling.
His cock became harder in my hand. He suddenly pulled my hand away and said,
"I want to show you something."

Keith started moving around under the covers and I thought he was looking
for something but then I felt something wet and warm on my cock. He had my
cock in his mouth. I couldn't believe how wonderful it felt. He was really
good at it. I relaxed on my back and he sucked me as he began to feel my
ass. Then he started to lick my balls and his tongue went down to my ass. He
pushed my ass up some and started to lick it. I let him but was afraid one
of the other guys would wake up and catch us. He came up and lay on top of
me and asked if I liked it. I told him I did.

"Can I do more?" He asked.

"Yes but quietly" I answered.

"Okay," he said,  "turn over and lay on your belly.

I did as I was asked and Keith moved in on top of me. I felt the hard tip of
his cock playing around my crack as he was trying to find my hole. I moved
my ass a bit to make it easier to find and then I felt it go in. It shocked
me. I gasped and clamped down on my teeth to keep from crying out. Keith
moan. I tried to relax my ass but it hurt. Then I felt a 'pop' and the pain
increased. I was near tears. Keith kept moving and, finally, the pain
started to go away. It started to feel good. My dick was growing harder. I
could feel his weight on me, the warmth of his chest on my back. He was
humping me slowly but getting deeper in my ass. All of a sudden the door
opened and Keith rolled off of me. Mr. Steel was in the room again with his
flashlight. It took me a second or two to realize he was talking to us. We
had to get dressed and come with him. Some of the guys were now awake
wondering what was going on. I was so scared as I got dressed and followed
Keith and Mr. Steel out into the cold night air.

************

We found ourselves in Mr. Steel's cabin. He was yelling at us, and asking,
"What the hell do you think you were doing! I should call your parents" and
shit like that. Keith said, "Mr. Steel, we're sorry. We were just fooling
around and we'll never do anything like that again." I was so scared. I
nodded with tears coming down my face; agreeing to what Keith was saying. My
Mom would beat the shit out of me if she found out; and I couldn't even
imagine what Dad would do. Mr. Steel told us that he was going to separate
us from the other boys for the night. I was to wait in his cabin while he
got Keith settled in the infirmary.

When Mr. Steel came back, I was still standing in that same spot. I was so
scared. Mr. Steel sat down looking at me for the longest time; then he told
me to sit down and that he wasn't going to tell my parents. I sat down. He
told me that he expected such behavior from Keith but not from me. We were
both quiet for a long time. Then he asked me if Keith was my friend. I told
him about the game and that we had just met that night. He nodded and asked
if I liked what Keith and I were doing. I started to cry but nodded yes. He
came over to me and put his arms around me, saying it would be all right. He
was rubbing my back and I was beginning to feel better.

I always liked Mr. Steel because when the bigger guys picked on me at school
he always took my side. And even now, he was making me feel better. I was
getting tired but I liked the way Mr. Steel made me feel. It was then that
he picked me up and carried me to his bedroom. I just hung on to his neck.

I was laid gently in his bed. He ran his hand through my reddish blond hair
and tucked me in; he then turned to leave the room.

"Mr. Steel," I said. He turned slowly. "Where you gonna sleep?"

"On the couch, " he said turning and walking out of the room.

I lay there for a while thinking about things, about Keith, the way Mr.
Steel made me feel, all the time playing with my cock. I had fooled around
with a few boys before Keith and I met that night, nothing too serious. But
for some reason that night became a defining Moment for me, I understood who
I was and what I wanted. I liked what Keith and I had been doing. And though
I hadn't known it until that Moment, it was what I always wanted to do with
Mr. Steel. I realized what I had always felt for him. It was like something
inside of me clicked on and I went "Oh, that's why I always feel that way
around him." Finally, I got up and went into the other room. Mr. Steel was
sitting and staring out of the window. He turned and looked at me as I
walked into the room.

"Can't sleep," I said quietly.

He motioned me to come over and join him. I went over and sat on his lap,
put my arms around his neck, laid my head on his shoulders and closed my
eyes. He seemed a bit shocked at first but in a short time he relaxed and
held me in his arms. I moaned as he rubbed my back. I really liked that. I
adjusted myself closer and began rubbing his shoulders and neck. I could
feel his dick was starting to get hard. Mine was already tenting my pajama
bottoms. He tried to push me away. I held on tightly around his neck. He
tried to lift me off him. I held on tighter. He sighed in exasperation and I
kissed his cheek. He relaxed, looked at me, and said, "You really want this,
don't you?"

"Yes," I said.

"You know what kind of trouble I can get into if someone finds out you were
here alone with me, sitting on my lap?" He asked.

"I won't tell anyone."

He thought about that for a while and then asked, "What do you want, Tommy?"

I kissed him on the mouth. He didn't resist. I liked kissing him and looking
at his mouth. He had a kind of pouty bottom lip that was really red. He
smiled and kissed me back. "So that's really what you want and you sure you
won't tell anyone? You know I could get in a lot of trouble."

"It's really what I want and I won't tell, promise."

I took his hand and put it on my crotch so he could feel my cock. He played
around with it for a while and we kissed. I felt his hard cock on the side
of my leg. Finally he picked me up and we went back to the bedroom.

He laid me on top of the covers this time and removed my bottoms. My cock
was standing straight up He bent down and began sucking it. It didn't take
long for me to start feeling a warm feeling in my stomach and balls. My cock
felt like a rock and I shot my first load into Mr. Steel's mouth. Oh, how
warm and wet and wonderful it felt. It was like being in the most wonderful
dream. When I opened my eyes Mr. Steel was lying beside me stroking my hair.

"You okay?" he asked.

"Yes," I said and leaped into his arms, hugging and kind of wrestling; but
not really.

I ended up on top of him and could feel that he was still hard. His hand was
on my bare ass. So I started moving around some. He said, "Wait," and
reached down and slipped off the shorts, and undies, he was wearing. Man,
did his cock look big! I sat on his legs and started playing with it. He
moaned and closed his eye. I moved it up and down real slow like Keith said
he liked it. Mr. Steel liked it too. Then I decided to try what he did to
me; so I bent over and started to lick him. He moaned again and started to
rub my back, and ran his hands in my hair. I took the head in my mouth and
began to lick and suck him.

Mr. Steel began to tell me things like `watch your teeth', `a little
harder', `little slower' and things like that. But the best was when he just
said, `mmmmmmmmm.' I knew I was doing it the way he liked when he said that.
So I would remember what I was doing, and how, and try to do it again the
same way later. I was getting a lot of mmmmmmm's when he said, "You better
stop now. I'm gonna cum." I sat up on top of him and he began stroking his
cock. Soon his eyes rolled up and he gave one last `mmmmmmmm;' and shot cum
all over him and me. We both started to laugh, hugging and rubbing his cum
all over each other. We kissed and fell asleep in each other's arms.
************


I awakened to the sound of the morning half hour bell. It took me a few
Moments to realize that I wasn't in Mr. Steel's cabin but in the infirmary.
Keith was sitting on the side of the bed looking at me and said, "Better get
up; you're late."

"Whaaat?" I answered still trying to figure out what was going on.

"You're on for kitchen duty. Better hurry."

With that he finished tying his laces and darted out the door. I slowly
climbed out of bed and realized that I was dressed in my pjs. Mr. Steel must
have dressed me and carried me to the infirmary after I fell asleep. I moved
slowly toward the door thinking about how great it was to be at camp. I
opened the door and rushed quickly across the quad to my cabin. I got
dressed and headed for the kitchen lodge.

I didn't see Mr. Steel much for the rest of the day. When I did, he seemed
to be as cautious of me as I was of him. At the docks we caught each other's
eyes for a Moment and we both couldn't help but smile. I wanted him again in
a bad way. But I didn't really get any time alone with him until the last
night's bonfire. I was sitting by myself at the edge of the circle, rather
out of sight of the others, when I felt a hand rub my back. Mr. Steel sat
down beside me.

"How ya doing?" he asked.

"OK I guess," I said.

"Why aren't you joining the others" he replied.

"Oh, they don't like me much," I said truthfully.

He nodded slowly and then turned to look seriously at me before saying, "I
do. Maybe we can get together during the summer? You know, fishing, hiking,
camping... that kinda thing?" I was smiling from ear to ear and nodding. "OK
then, "he said, "it's settled."

As he got up to leave, "Wait!" I said, "My Mom..."

"Leave that to me," he said, turning for a wink and a smile, off he went to
the center of the bonfire.

************

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Boyztown - Gay Pictures and Stories
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Eroscities - Featuring the writings of Richard Dean
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All my best,

Tom Cup

"Why is it that the words we write for ourselves are so much better than the
words we write for others?" Sean Connery as William Forrester in the film
"Finding Forrester."