Date: Sat, 23 Feb 2002 16:07:28 -0500
From: Tom Cup <tom_cup@hotmail.com>
Subject: Tommy Series (Mr. Steel - Revised) Chapter 2

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*************

Tommy
By Tom Cup
Part I
Mr. Steel
CHAPTER TWO



Summer vacation started a week or so after the school camping trip and in
the time left at school I didn't see Mr. Steel once. My stomach was turning
and I felt sick the last day of school. I couldn't believe I wouldn't see
him again. He had said we would get together during summer and I wanted to
find out more, and to tell him how much I liked what we did at camp.

But the last period bell rang and school let out with no sign of Mr. Steel.
I was half way home when I heard someone calling my name. I turned and
running up behind me was Keith waving his hand wildly.

"Man, can't you hear," he said with a smile when he finally caught up with
me. "What are you doing for summer vacation?" he asked.

"Oh, nothing really, Dad is on TDY, who knows when he will be back, and Mom
is working all the time..."

Keith was quiet for a time and then said, "You can come over to my house
some time, you know, I mean if you want too."

I smiled and answer, 'Sure I'd like that."

"I'll walk you home and you can drop off your things and then I'll show you
where I live."

"OK," I said, and off we went.

I became a regular guest at Keith's house for the first two or three weeks
after school was out.  We explored our sexual awakening at every chance we
got. But we could never get very far before his Mom would be checking up on
us with calls of, "Are you boys OK in there? You're mighty quiet" or "You
boys get washed for lunch" or "Keith, time for your chores."

There was always something. But we manage to kiss a lot and feel each other
up. I learned a lot about jerking off after getting all hot and bothered
with my new best friend.

So it was about three weeks into the summer, after one of my sessions with
Keith, I was out shopping for dinner with Mom and dying to get home to
finish myself off, when I heard Mr. Steel calling my name. He immediately
came over and introduced himself to my Mom. He told her that he really
shouldn't be saying so but that I was one of his favorites at school. My Mom
was just in heaven! He told her that we all had a great time on the school
camping trip and that I really seemed to enjoy it (boy was he right about
that).

Mom and he chatted for quiet a while about this and that. Mom told him that
Dad was on TDY and that sometimes she worried about me being alone when she
was working. That was what he was waiting for! He told her that he didn't
live too far and that he really would be glad to have me hang around him
this summer; and if she didn't mind, he was going fishing and camping for
the weekend, and could use a fishing and camping buddy.

To my surprise she said that it would be great and thanked him so much for
caring for me. He told her that the pleasure was all his and that he would
pick me up in the morning around 4:00am. And just like that I had a weekend
date with Mr. Steel.

************

It was about an hour's drive to the campsite. When we drove up the long
twisting dirt road I was spell bound by the beauty of the place.

"Here we are," Mr. Steel said as we made a final left turn into a dirt
drive.  There in front of me was a small cabin facing a rippling blue lake.

"This is it?" I asked, "You mean the cabin?"

"Yes," laughed Mr. Steel, "This was my father's fishing lodge, as we call
it.  He died right before school let out.  It has a lot of good memories for
me."

"Ooooh," I said, "So that's why you weren't around the last couple of weeks
of school."

"Yep," he replied, "Had to see to the funeral and such.  Anyway, enough of
that. Let's get unpacked."

We unpacked the car quickly and had breakfast.  I was staring out the window
when Mr. Steel came up behind me and put his arm around my shoulder.  We
stood like that for a while and then he said, "We gotta talk."

"OK," I said.  We walked over to a large old armchair that was in the corner
of the room.  Mr. Steel sat down and I stood between his legs.  We were just
about eye-to-eye this way. He looked at me and smiled.

"I love the color of your eyes," he said as he brushed my bangs away for a
better look, "You have the most beautiful green eyes I have ever seen."  I
blushed. He reached out and lifted my chin so we were still looking into
each other's eyes.

"Tom," he started, "I really liked what happen on the school camping trip
but if you don't want to do anything like that it's OK. We can still be
friends."

"I know," I replied, "but I do want to. I really, really like you."  This
made him smile.

"I just want to be sure you understand what is happening here and that you
know you are in charge.  If you say 'no', then that will be fine with me,"
he said.

"I'm not gonna say no," I replied.  He seemed a little shocked at first but
then started to laugh and said, "Come here."  I moved in closer between his
legs, into his embrace.

He held me tight and I could feel both of our dicks getting hard. "You can
have all of me," I whispered, "I want you too".

He backed me away and looked again in my eyes. He then touched my lips with
his fingers and asked, "You mean this?"

"Yes," I replied and he kissed me gently. I parted my lips and welcomed his
tongue. He looked at me again and gently rubbed my chest through the white
BVD T-shirt I was wearing.

"And this?" he asked.

"Yes," I replied again. He pulled the T-shirt over my head and tossed it on
the floor and slowly ran his tongue over my chest and nipples.

I groaned. He stopped and kissed me passionately. His hands roamed freely
over my chest, back and stomach as we kissed. Again he stopped to ask, as he
felt my cock through my tight fitting Levis', "What about this?"

"Yes," again I replied. He unzipped my pants and pulled them down around my
ankles with my underpants. He kissed me again as his hand played with my
cock and balls.  I was in heaven.  He stopped as his hand rested cupping my
ass.

"Even this?" he asked.

"Yes," I said, "Anything you want." With that he scooped me up into his arms
and standing up took me to the bedroom that was in the opposite corner of
the room.

As Mr. Steel laid me on the bed, I kicked my sneakers off to make it easier
to get my pants all the way off. Mr. Steel pulled them off and then my
undies. But left my white gym socks on. He was kneeling between my legs now
and rubbing his hands up and down, all over, my body.  Finally he paused
long enough to get undressed.

I watched him, loving how muscular and handsome he was.  He climbed back
into bed and we held each other. I could feel the warmth and hardness of his
boner pressing against me and my boner pressing against him. We kissed as he
cupped, kneaded, and played with my ass. His kisses began to leave my lips,
and he kissed and sucked on my ear.

"Mmmmmm," was my only rely.

His tongue slipped down to my neck and on to my chest. He played circles
around my nipples. I was breathing faster now. He continued licking my belly
button and finally I felt the warmth of his breath on my cock.  His lips
wrapped around it like he was savoring his favorite flavored lollipop. He
sucked me slowly but firmly, licking my balls as a side dish.  I played with
his hair as he did this and lifted and lowered my hips as it went along.

He grabbed my ass at one point and began to lick and suck and poke his
tongue in and out of it.  That made me thrash back and forth on the bed and
he slowly came back to my balls and cock.  I was ready to explode when he
stopped and reached over to the dresser drawer next to the bed.

"Please," I begged, "Don't stop."  He bent over and kissed me.

"I'm not going to," he whispered and kissed me again.

He rolled me over on top of him and I could feel his finger playing with my
ass and sliding in.  He pulled it out and it was then I saw that he was
putting something on his hand and then on and in my ass. I didn't care; it
felt so good and whatever he want to do I wanted to do.  I really loved and
trusted him.

He continued fingering me until I was grinding his finger ever time he put
it in my ass. My cock was as hard as a rock. He rolled me back onto my back
and lifted my legs.  He sucked me just for a bit and then put the head of
his cock at my ass entrance.

"If it hurts too bad," he said, "You tell me and I'll stop, OK?"  I just
nodded and closed my eyes, preparing for what was coming.

The first thing I felt was the warmth of his cock against my asshole and
butt, and the pressure of him leaning into me.  I felt my ass begin to part
as Mr. Steel gently but firmly continued to push. Then there was a slight
pop and a sudden flash of pain. I gasped and Mr. Steel stopped pushing.  The
pain was intense but subsided as quickly as it had started.

"It's OK," I said as the pain began to leave, "It doesn't hurt anymore."

Mr. Steel smiled and said, "I know but let's just wait a minute."

He laid on top of me with the head of his cock in my ass and looked deep in
my eyes, rubbed my cheeks with the back of his hand and kissed me.  My ass
really began to relax and he slowly moved forward.  This time it wasn't pain
but extreme pleasure I was feeling.

"God," I groaned, "I think I'm gonna cum."

"Not yet," replied Mr. Steel and backed his cock out a bit to give me time
to calm down. We waited until my cock stopped jumping up and down and he
said, "OK?'  I nodded and he slid his cock into me to the hilt.

I had never imagined that such pleasure existed in the world. Mr. Steel
would pull his cock almost out and then slide it slowly back into my ass.
Each time the warmth filling my ass made me gasp for air.  He bent over me,
slowly fucking me, and at the same time either kissing me or sucking on my
ear or nipples.  I knew I couldn't take much more of this without shooting
my load; and yet, I wanted him to fuck me forever.

He began to pick up the pace, fucking me in short thrusts. He was deep in my
ass and it felt like his dick was clear up in my stomach.

"You OK?" he asked.

"I don't think I can take much more," I replied in the rhythm of his
thrusting cock, "I'm gonna cum."

"I'm close too," he replied, "You wanna?"

I nodded and managed a "please;" with that he began to fuck me in earnest.

Each time he thrust into me I could feel my balls fill with more cum.  I
could feel his cock pushing me to the brink of orgasm.   I could feel my ass
opening wider to accept more of his pulsing member. And then I felt the
first spasms of fulfillment. "Ummmnnh!" I grunted as my ass began to spasm
and clamp around his cock. Cum began pumping out of my dick.

"Oh god," he moaned, and thrust one last time deeply into me, shooting his
hot cum into my ass.

************

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visiting these sites:

Boyztown - Gay Pictures and Stories
http://www.boyztown.net

Girlztown - Lesbian Pictures and Stories
http://www.girlztown.net

Eroscities - Featuring the writings of Richard Dean
http://www.eroscities.com

Alternative Lifestyles of Youth - Advice, commentary and Youth Related
Stories
http://www.anysexuality.com

All my best,

Tom Cup

"Why is it that the words we write for ourselves are so much better than the
words we write for others?" Sean Connery as William Forrester in the film
"Finding Forrester."