Date: Sat, 23 Feb 2002 16:20:54 -0500
From: Tom Cup <tom_cup@hotmail.com>
Subject: Tommy Series (Mr. Steel - Revised) Chapter 3

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Tommy
By Tom Cup
Part I
Mr. Steel
CHAPTER 3



I woke to find Mr. Steel standing naked at the little stove making grilled
cheese sandwiches for lunch. My whole body felt like it was wrapped in a
warm glow. I slipped quietly out of bed, came up behind him, and press my
warm naked body close to his.

"Mmmmmm," he moaned, "You hungry?"

"Yup!" I replied, "I could eat a horse."

We went out to the deck to eat. Mr. Steel explained that no one would see us
out there naked because we were in the center of 40 acres. The cabin, the
lake and the surrounding land belonged to him.

After lunch we went skinny dipping in the lake. Feeling the cool water on my
skin and then the heat of Mr. Steel's body kept me excited. After splashing
and playing around for a while we hugged and kissed at the side of the lake
as the sun warmed our naked bodies.

Around 3:30 Mr. Steel suggested that we get dressed and grab the fishing
gear from the side of the cabin.  He said that it would start getting cooler
and the fish would start to bite in an hour or so.  We went back to the
cabin and chatted and laughed a lot.  As I was looking for my shoes I called
out, "Mr. Steel, I can't find my shoes."  Mr. Steel called me over and I sat
on his lap as he sat in his armchair.

"Look," he said, "Since we're lovers and all... do you think you could call
me Ron? I mean when we're alone at least?"  Hearing him call us lovers made
my cock get hard and my ass quiver. It made me feel that good.

"Sure... Ron," I said. And we kissed deeply.

We arrived at the dock near the southeast side of the cabin just before
sunset.  The sky was a beautiful shade of purple and red mixed with orange
and blue.  Ron told me that in the city the lights block out most of the
colors of sunset as well as most of the light from the stars.  He then
taught me how to bait the hook and cast the line.  It didn't take long
before I felt a slight tug on the line.  It startled me; Ron and I laughed
out loud.  We caught five trout that night. Ron taught me how to clean and
dress them.  We took them back to the cabin where Ron wrapped three for me
to take home.  The other two he fried with garlic and butter.  Boy was it
ever good!  We cleaned up our dishes and lay on the bed together in each
other's arms

We fell asleep like that and woke just before sunrise. Looking into each
other's eyes, we began to kiss. I was so horny. Ron slowly undressed me and
I paid attention to every feeling I was having. I didn't want to forget any
of it.  Finally I was lying naked on the bed.  He kissed me and stood up to
undressed himself.  When he removed his pants, I stared at his wonderful
cock with its bright red knob. It curved slightly up with a mound of rich
curly brown pubic hair.  I looked down at my crotch and played with the
newly introduced growth of hair there.  Ron smiled, bent down, and began to
lick my cock and balls.

I closed my eyes and took in all the wonderful feelings of his tongue on my
balls and cock and belly button and nipples.  When, he came up and kissed
me, I could taste myself on his lips. I reached down and took his cock in my
hand. He moaned and rolled over on his back. I immediately took his cock in
my mouth. I rolled my tongue around his beautiful red knob, kissing and
sucking it gently. Then I worked it up and down in my mouth, causing him to
shudder just a bit.  I ran my tongue up and down his shaft; and tongued his
balls, before moving back to the shaft and taking his head into my mouth
once again.

Mr. Steel repositioned himself and began to suck my cock while fingering my
ass.  For the first time I realized that my hole was a bit sore from the
fucking the day before.  But he worked it slowly and soon the soreness was
replace by an anxiousness to have more of him inside of me.  The attention
of his finger and tongue were pushing me closer to orgasm.

He continued to slide his finger in and out of my ass. He moved it around in
circles while his tongue swirled around my cock. I let his cock slide out of
my mouth and exclaimed, "Oh God!" He stopped and let his finger slide out of
my ass.

"Roll over baby," he said and I did.  I felt him position himself over me as
I lay on my belly.

"I'm a little sore," I said.

"I know,' he replied, "I'll go slow."  And he did.

The soreness had all but disappeared and I accepted his cock as it slowly
sunk into my ass. When he was finally completely in, he reached around and
began to stroke my cock. He made a rhythm of it. As he would push into my
ass, he would stroke down on my cock; and as he would pull out of my ass, he
would stroke up.  He was pumping me in and out, up and down.  I ground my
ass back on his cock and eagerly fucked his hand. The pumping of my ass and
cock finally took control of me and I screamed, "Oooh God, I can't take it
anymore! I'm gonna cum right now!"

"Go ahead, baby," he said. Violently my ass clamped down on his cock and my
cock stiffened and I began cumming into Mr. Steel's pumping fist.

"Yes!" he exclaimed and pumped my orgasming ass with his own love juice.

************

After breakfast Ron took me out on the lake in the small boat he had tied on
the right end of the dock. He paddled the boat lazily as I lay on his lap.
He asked me about Keith. I told him about how I spent time with him and that
we had become sort of best friends.

"Oh," he said.

"Not like you and me," I responded, "I mean we do fool around sometimes but
his mother is always there. Besides, you know I love you."

Mr. Steel smiled and let the boat drift on its own. "Hey, you should have
friends you own age too. No one wants a kid your age sending too much time
with a guy my age." I thought about it and agreed. "You know," Mr. Steel
said, "You can invite him to come along next time. It's not like I haven't
seen you two together."

We both laughed but I said, "No, I like it when it's just you and me."

Mr. Steel laughed. "You mean you like having both of us just to yourself!"
Again we laughed. I turned, hugged, and kissed him until we both fell in to
the lake.

We swam to the edge of the lake with Ron tugging the boat along. We secured
it and walked back to the cabin for a change of clothes.

"Really," Ron said, "you can invite Keith. I'll stay out of the way and you
can have some private time together."  I thought about it and wondered if he
was trying to get rid of me or was tired of me.... or what? I was quiet for a
long time before Mr. Steel stopped at the deck of the cabin and said, "I'm
not trying to pawn you off or anything. I really do love you and hope we
will be together forever but..."

"Do you want me to break it off with Keith?" I asked.

"No, no," he replied, "I just want you to be happy. I can share you and
still love you. You know what I mean?" I nodded slowly. "OK," he said, "You
think about it and remember that I'll support whatever you decide to do." I
ran into his arms and hugged him.

We then talked about how things would have to go when we got back. I hated
thinking about going home. It was as if the weekend had changed me. I wanted
to live with him. But he was right. We really had to talk about it. We
decided to try and get my Mom to let me mow Mr. Steel's lawn on Wednesday
afternoons. That way, we would always have at least some time together.

After that, we decide to spend the rest of our time together in the cabin.
We lay on the bed and held each other. I sobbed a little with my head buried
deep in Mr. Steel's chest.

************

It was 3:45 when we stopped a few blocks from my house and parked off a side
street out of view.

"What can I do to make it up to you?" Mr. Steel asked.

"I'm OK," I said, "I'm just gonna miss you. This was the best weekend of my
life."

Ron smiled and said, "I really want to take you home with me, you know. Or
run away with you to some deserted island."

I smiled and responded, "Let's go!" Then we both laughed. I quickly kissed
him. He held me tight.

When I got home, Mom hugged me and thanked Mr. Steel -- it seemed like a
thousand times -- for putting up with me. He said a thousand times how it
really was no trouble at all. When he told her what a fine boy I was, I had
a hard time not just breaking out in laughter at the fun of it all.  Mom was
really surprised by the trout we brought home and said we would have them
for dinner -- trout Almondine I think is what she said. It was good but I
liked eating Mr. Steel's trout better.

Mr. Steel told Mom about his lawn and how he didn't have time to take care
of it himself.  He told her that he would pay me to do it but Mom said she
wouldn't here of it. She said that if he wouldn't mind spending some time
with me then I would only be paying my own way. They laughed and I thought
that I would burst for joy!  After Mr. Steel left, Mom told me that Keith
had called twice and that he wanted me to call him.

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