Date: Mon, 26 Sep 2011 05:35:18 -0700 (PDT)
From: Friedrich Craig <fitchboy@att.net>
Subject: Up on the Roof

This is a work of fiction, a complete fantasy.  If you can
not separate FANTASY from reality, are offended by the
subjects of Gay incest & men having sex with boys or this
material is illegal where you live; DO NOT READ this story.

If you have comments, suggestions or requests please contact
me at FitchBoy@att.net


                       READER'S CHOICE

A reader named Alex sent me a long email describing an
incident that happened to him when he was 16.  While messing
around on a roof he caught sight of a hot man who thought he
had privacy and was outside naked jerking off.  Nothing
happened between Alex and this stranger, but he has been
fantasizing about what could have happened ever since.  The
situation got my mind going with my own fantasies.  I hope I
do Alex' justice with:


                       Up On the Roof

     We were running out of things to do.  It was a long hot
summer day and nothing was going on.  None of us had any
money to spend or a car available to get anywhere.  The five
of us were all hanging out at Alex's place wishing his
parents and little sister would go out and leave us alone,
but that didn't seem too likely.  My brother suggested we
head over to the school down the block, our old grade
school.  For lack of anything better to do, we went over
there.

     The place was deserted; not only was school out, it was
too damn hot to even touch the playground equipment.  The
school was a maze of classroom buildings attached to each
other, the gym, the cafeteria and the offices by covered
walkways.  There were lots of shade trees and landscaping so
it was cooler around the buildings.  After a while we found
ourselves hanging out in the shade not doing much more than
we had been doing at Alex's place.

     Alex and I were the oldest, both 16 and going into our
Junior Year in High School.  Alex had a bit of a bad boy
image and he was the one who usually got things going.
Today was no different.  Out of the blue Alex made a comment
about how he used to get up on the roof at the school and
hide out when he was in trouble.  A few minutes later we
were all up on the roof.

     Looking around the rooftops with swamp coolers and
skylights and vents all shaded by the trees and painted
white to reduce heat it was really cool.  My brother said it
would have been a great place to play hide and seek when we
were kids.  Drew said a game of hide and seek sounded better
than what we had been doing all day, which was nothing.
Josh suggested we try a game he learned at church camp
called `Sardines'.  Josh explained it was like reverse hide
and seek; one guy hides and the rest look for him, but when
you find the hider, you have to stay with him in the hiding
place until the rest find you.  The last one to find the
hiding place is the loser and `it' in the next round.  There
was not much enthusiasm for what sounded like a lame kid's
game until Alex said, "I think it sounds like fun, I'm it
for the first round, give me a minute to hide than come
looking for me."

     With Alex' stamp of approval, the game was suddenly
cool.  About a minute after he ran off, the rest of us
spread out looking for him.   Once we all found Alex, there
was another round and then another.  I lost the third round
and it was my turn to hide.  I found a great spot, in a
little nook formed by a skylight, a swamp cooler and a vent
over the cafeteria.  Sitting in my hiding spot I looked down
over the service courtyard.  It was enclosed on three sides
by the Cafeteria, the Gym and the locker rooms. There was a
chain link gate with that privacy stuff laced through it
over the open end where trucks made deliveries.

     I had only been there a few minutes when one of the
janitors came out of the cafeteria.  When I was in school
there the Janitor had been a fat old man who gave me the
creeps.  This was a new Janitor.  He looked to be in his
twenties, and he sure wasn't fat.  The guy walked out to the
middle of the courtyard and up to a stack of pallets about
two feet high.  He reached behind his head and undid his
pony tail letting his shoulder length Sandy Blond hair
loose.  I could see that his hair was wet; whatever work he
was doing that day had really worked up a sweat.

     I noticed his coveralls had big sweat stains under his
arms, down his back and between his legs.  Once he'd shaken
some of the sweat out of his hair the guy sat on the pallets
and took off his work boots then he stood up again and
unzipped his coveralls.  I watched as he stepped out of the
coveralls and then turned around to lay them out on the
pallets.  The guy wasn't wearing anything underneath and as
he bent over the pallets to spread his coveralls out, I was
staring at the most perfect ass.

     When he turned around again I was awed at the sight of
his scruffy beard which continued on down his neck to his
chest hair.  His chest hair was long and curly, a shag
carpet that continued on down his abs getting shorter and
narrowing down to a glory trail pointing straight down to
his bush which surrounded a big dick hanging over hefty
balls swinging in a sweaty sack.  Even from up on the roof I
could tell the dude was uncut and it looked like he was
starting to chub up.  As he lay back on top of his coveralls
and pulled one foot in a heavy white work sock up onto the
pallet the guy reach down and grabbed his dick.  He worked
it up to full hard right before my eyes in what seemed like
just a few seconds.

     He sure wasn't a fat old man like the old Janitor, but
he had a good ten years on me and he was more man than I'd
ever seen naked before.  I was transfixed by the sight of
him, naked but for his white socks, lying in the sun
dripping sweat and beating off.  I didn't hear anyone
approach; I didn't know Alex had found me until I felt his
hand over my mouth.  Alex was right behind me, watching the
janitor beat off over my shoulder.  Alex whispered to me
that everything was cool; he just didn't want me to make any
noise and let the dude know he was being watched.

     I nodded and Alex let his hand drop from my mouth right
to my crotch.  Alex felt my hard dick inside my shorts and
smiled.  He grabbed at it and squeezed it while pushing his
own hard dick up against my back.  I hadn't noticed my dick
was hard until Alex grabbed it.  I wasn't sure until then
whether I was queer or not.  Alex and I had fooled around
some when we were younger, all of us had jerked off together
and stuff, I'd gone a little further with Alex and even
further with my brother.  We all also dated girls and as we
got older the fooling around stopped, except with my
brother.  This was the first time in a couple of years that
Alex had had his hand on my dick.

     My brother was the next to find my hiding spot.  He was
making a lot of noise as he approached, so Alex ducked out
of the hiding spot to quiet him down and show him back to us
to see the sight in the courtyard.  Alex sat down next to me
and reached for my dick again.  I reached over to grab his
cock and return the favor while my little brother unzipped
and pulled his own cock out.   With my brother beating his
own dick and Alex and I stroking each others, we all watched
the janitor lazily stroking his dick in the sun below us.

     Next to join the party wasn't one of our friends;
another man, dressed in matching coveralls to the ones the
janitor was lying on came out of the same door the janitor
had come out of.  The second Janitor was in the same
condition the first one had been in; his hair was dripping
sweat, and he had the same big patches of sweat showing all
over him. The new guy walked right over to his partner and
reached out to grab his dick from him.  He had his back to
us so I wasn't sure at first, but it looked like the new guy
unzipped his own coveralls and hauled his dick out with his
free hand.

     When the new guy let go of both dicks and turned to sit
beside the first guy to take his boots off I saw that he did
have his zipper all the way down and his hard dick was
sticking out.  This guy was uncut; just like the first guy.
As my eyes traveled slowly up I saw that everything about
the second guy looked just the same as the first guy.  I
thought they had to be twins; they looked to be identical in
every way, except that the new guy had his hair cut shorter.

     I realized just then that Alex no longer had his hand
on my dick.  I turned to say something about that and the
second guy down on the pallets.  I was dumbstruck by what I
saw right next to me though.  Alex had turned his head and
was swallowing my brother's cock.  Alex had both of his
hands wrapped around my brother's ass and was pulling him
into his face.  My brother looked down at me and smiled, put
his hands on the back of Alex' head and started fucking his
face.  I watched for a moment then leaned down and sucked
Alex' cock into my mouth and down my throat.

     Just as I started bobbing my head up and down in Alex'
lap Drew and Josh found our hiding place.  They had to
squeeze in between the Swamp cooler and Vent; when they did
they saw the three of us going at it.  Shocked by what they
saw, one or both of them made enough noise to get the
attention of the two Janitors.

     The next few minutes are a bit of a blur.  I remember
hearing one Janitors boot as he jumped up on top of a metal
dumpster and then up onto the roof with us.  The naked
Janitor was right behind him, coming up a service ladder
built into the wall.  Josh and Drew had tried to scramble
out the way they had just come, but the Janitor still in his
coveralls grabbed them by the backs of their shirts and
stopped them.  Alex and I were still sitting down while the
other five stood around us.  The naked Janitor's dick, no
longer fully hard, was hanging right in front of my face.
My instincts were telling me to run, but my mouth was
longing to suck him back to full hard and keep on sucking
until he fed me his load.

     The two Janitors hustled all five of us off of the roof
and down into the courtyard.  Josh and Drew were still
putting up a fight, trying to get away, but the two Janitors
held on to them and told the rest of us to strip and then
get Josh's and Drew's pants off.  None of us moved right
away, except Josh and Drew who kept struggling.  When the
Janitor still wearing his open coveralls barked another
order for us to strip all three of us shucked our shorts and
peeled off our T-shirts.

     Standing there butt naked with our hard dicks pointing
straight out we weren't sure what to do next, then the naked
Janitor reminded us to get Josh and Drew's shorts off.  Both
Josh and Drew were scared shitless and when we got them
naked from the waist down their dicks weren't hard, they had
both kind of shrunk up and it look like their balls were
pulled up inside them.  The Janitors laughed and said
something about Josh and Drew not being ready to "play" then
told Alex and me to go down on them and get them, ".up and
ready for action."

     I hesitated, but Alex dropped to his knees in front of
Drew and swallowed his cock and balls in one gulp while he
reached over and grabbed Josh's junk and started to pull on
it.  The naked Janitor was holding Josh and he looked me in
the eye saying, "Don't make your fuck buddy do all the work,
get down there and start sucking."

     I thought for a second that I should grab my clothes
and make a run for it.  I had been thinking about it from
the start, but I couldn't.  As scared as I was I was also
really turned on and wanted to see how far this would go.  I
got down on my knees in front of Josh, pulled Alex's hand
off of Josh's cock and started sucking.  As soon as Alex
went down on him, Drew had started to calm down and ease up
on his struggling to get away from the Janitor holding him
from behind.  My sucking on Josh's cock had the same effect
on him.

     As Josh relaxed and his cock started to swell up and
fill my mouth, working it's way towards my throat, I saw out
of the corner of my eye as the Janitor holding Drew let go
of his arms, pull the shirt up over Drew's head then reach
around and take a nipple in each hand and start tweaking and
pinching them.  I rolled my eyes up to see the Janitor
holding Josh do the same to him.  It wasn't long before both
of my friends were leaned back into the chests of the men
holding them grunting and moaning while they thrust their
hips forward to push their cocks as deep as they could into
Alex's and my sucking mouths and throats.

     I had forgotten about my little brother until he
stepped up behind Alex and me, right between us.   I
couldn't see him, but I could hear and feel that he was
frantically beating his meat.  When his breath got choppy
and he started making little gasping cries the two Janitors
each reached a hand between Josh and Drew.  One grabbed my
brother's balls and the other took over pulling on his cock.
The Janitors pulled Baby bro towards them until he had his
legs bent and his knees were resting on Alex' and my
shoulders.   I felt my brother's hand on the top of my head
and saw that he had the other hand on Alex's head.  As he
braced himself my brother pushed Alex and I further on Josh
and Drew.

     When my brother started to sluice the Janitor pulling
on his dick managed to catch almost all of the scum in his
hand.   I saw the two brothers grab each other's hands and
share the load between them then they pulled their hands
back behind Josh and Drew to start working my brothers load
into their holes.  I could tell the cock in my mouth was
getting close and it sounded like Drew was ready to spray
down Alex' throat any second.  I caught the first shot out
of Josh's cock on my tongue, then his cock violently rammed
deep into my face, I heard him scream as his pubes mashed
into my nose.  A second or two later Drew's screams joined
Josh's.

     After I had sucked every last drop of cum out of Josh I
crawled out from under him (he was now bent over me at his
waist, taking janitor dick all the way up his no-longer
virgin hole).  Right next to Josh Drew was getting the same
treatment from the other Janitor.  Both Josh and Drew
continued to shout and scream at their respective fuckers.
The Janitor still wearing his open coveralls barked more
orders at Alex and I without missing a beat as he pumped his
dick in and out of Drew's hole.  Doing as we were told, Alex
and I stepped up to our friends, whose cocks we had just
sucked dry and fed them our own raging hard cocks.

     Josh and Drew were no happier about having their faces
fucked then they were about having their holes opened up by
Janitor Dick, but they weren't able to do much about it.  I
was a little worried about Josh trying to bite down, but I
was more worried about not taking orders.  I have to admit I
was also enjoying watching Josh and Drew get drilled by the
janitors, and my dick needed something hot and wet to slide
into: Josh's throat was just the thing.

     Alex didn't hesitate at all, he was already fucking
Drew's face, hard and fast, when I stepped up to Josh,
pushed his forehead back and slid my cock into his mouth and
on down into his throat.  The janitor pounding into Josh's
ass was fucking so hard he was driving Josh's face back and
forth on my cock.  All I did was stand there and enjoy the
sensation.  Josh was obviously no more of a practiced cock
sucker than he was accustomed to taking Dick in his hole but
his gagging and choking felt good on my cock as it slid in
and out.

     After a few minutes I felt my brother behind me.  He
pushed me forward until I was bent over Josh, watching the
Janitors cock plowing in and out of Josh's hole.  Josh was
obviously tight and the Janitor was fucking him practically
dry.   Josh's hole was clinging to the Janitors cock each
time it pulled out.  I wasn't sure what my brother was going
to do.  He'd fucked me once, but for the most part I fucked
him.  I had never been sure (up until later that day) how
much my brother liked getting fucked; he always made me suck
him off in exchange for letting me breed him.  I was
pleasantly surprised to feel my brother grab my cheeks, pull
them apart and then bury his face in my ass, tearing into my
hole with his tongue.  I heard one of the Janitors say,
"That's it boy, eat your brother's hole.  I always eat my
brother out before I fuck him and breed him, and then I eat
my load out of his hole".

     The picture of the two Janitors fucking exploded in my
mind and I started spraying my cum into Josh's throat.   My
brother's tongue kept darting in and out of my spasming hole
while I fed Josh my load. Then when I was collapsed on
Josh's back I felt my brother's cock pushing inside me. He'd
fucked me once before, and Alex had played with my hole a
couple of times, but I was still tight and he hadn't gotten
much spit up inside me.  Spent from just having spewed my
balls dry down Josh's throat, I had no energy to resist
with.  Truth be told: I didn't want to.  It hurt like hell
as my brother slowly rammed his cock into me, but I wanted
it: I wanted him fucking me and breeding me so bad I reached
back with both hands to pull him in faster.

     I wasn't paying attention to anyone else anymore; my
brother's cock sinking into me was the only thing that
mattered.  I think I heard one or both of the janitors
encouraging him on, but I don't think he needed any
encouragement.  When he finally bottomed out, and I felt his
pubes crushed against my ass he exhaled like he had been
holding his breathe.  After he sucked in a new lung full of
air he reared back and started pounding away.  He was long
dicking my hole, letting me feel every inch of him pumping
in and out of me until, way too soon, he started hollering
about breeding my hole and I felt his cum spraying inside me
while he fucked.

     Before he was completely through sluicing my hole, Alex
pulled him off me and took his place.  As I felt Alex' cock
slide into my hole on my bro's load, he leaned forward and
said in my ear, "I've wanted this ass for a long time,
Buddy, but you said you didn't take it up the ass.  You were
holding out on me, playing hard to get, but you've really
wanted this as much as I have: haven't you?"

     I didn't want to talk, I just wanted my best friend to
use my hole and breed me.  When I didn't answer, Alex
grabbed my hair and pulled my head back telling me he wanted
an answer.  All I could say was, "Yes."

     Alex told me he wanted to hear me say it; he wanted to
hear that I wanted him to fuck me.  I couldn't hold back any
longer, I found my voice and I shouted, "YES, I want you to
fuck me, I want your dick in my hole, and I want you to
breed me, I want all of your scum deep inside."

     Alex picked up the speed of his fucking for about a
minute after that and then he rammed his dick into me and
started grinding his pubes against my ass saying, "Take it
bitch, deep inside, just like you've always wanted."
     When Alex was through sluicing deep in my gut, he
collapsed on top of me then rolled off and lay on the ground
panting.  Without thinking I spun around on my hands and
knees and sucked Alex' softening cock into my mouth.  I
tasted my brother's scum, mixed with Alex' and loved it, but
not for long.  I could have stayed there nursing on Alex'
cock until he was hard again and fed me a fresh load, but
suddenly somebody grabbed my hair and pulled my head up.  I
was staring at a hard slimy dick sticking out of a pair of
open coveralls.  The Janitor holding my hair said, "My
brother and I flipped a coin for you.  He got tails; I got
heads.  Open up."

     Keeping hold of my hair, the janitor used his other
hand to pull my jaw down and open my mouth.  As he stuffed
his cock into my mouth and down my throat, I felt his
brother ram his cock balls deep into me from the other end.
I was instantaneously skewered on Janitor cock, the biggest
cocks I'd ever seen, let alone had in me, at either end.
Even though I'd just been fucked and bred by my brother and
Alex and was thoroughly lubed with their loads, the Janitors
cock stretched my hole much further and it hurt like hell.
The cock in my throat felt just as big. We learned later
that they were twins and their cocks were as identical as
the rest of them.

     As my hole was being violently opened up my throat was
being forced open further than I'd thought possible.  The
Janitor fucking my face was going at it so hard and fast I
could barely breathe.  I started to feel faint, and then all
of a sudden I wasn't up on my hands and knees; I was lying
on top of Alex.  The Janitor in my ass was on top of me and
still pounding away at my hole, while his twin was on his
knees in front of me with a hand under my shin, holding my
face up and looking into my eyes, he asked me if I was OK
and I guess I nodded because then he said, "Good, now take a
deep breathe and try to stay with us here."

     Once I had my lungs full of air, that monster cock
started relentlessly fucking my face and throat again.  This
time though, he came before I passed out.  When his twin
froze on top of me with his cock buried inside my hole while
pumping his scum deep inside me the cock fucking my face
started sluicing, coating my throat and tongue with what
felt like gallons of scum.

     Once the twin janitors had drained their balls in me I
felt Alex' cock pressing against my chest.  I pushed back up
on my hands and knees then swallowed Alex' cock and resumed
the blow job I'd started earlier.  I could still taste the
scum on Alex' cock and was doing my best to suck it clean
before sucking it dry when Alex tapped me on the shoulder
and said, "I really appreciate the excellent suck job buddy,
but Josh and drew are finished with your baby bro, and I
think we should hop on that ride.

     I looked up to see Josh pulling his half hard slimy
dick out of my brother's ass.  The strings of slime
stretched about a foot before they snapped.  I looked down
at my bro's gaping hole and could see scum oozing out and
running down his balls.  Alex got up from underneath me,
stepped over to my brother, knelt down behind him and sank
in.  My bother moaned and pushed back onto Alex.  Alex told
me to get around front and feed him.  Still in a daze, I did
as I was told.

     My little bro slurped down my cock as I watched Alex'
cock pounding away at him from the other end.  I started to
fuck into my bro's mouth with the same rhythm Alex was
pounding his ass.  When I started to get close, I guess Alex
could see it on my face because he said, "Hold off buddy,
don't feed it to him.  I'm about to breed this hole and you
will want to slide in and empty your balls in here after me.
Take it from me; this hole is not to be missed."

     I felt the mouth slide off of my cock and then heard my
brother tell me to save it for his hole.  It was just then
that Alex rammed in and started grinding on my brother's
ass, just like he did to me while he was sluicing in my
hole.  Again, just as he had after emptying his nut in me,
Alex collapsed on top of my brother then rolled off onto the
floor, calling up to me, "Your turn: breed the bitch."

     I was close just from watching Alex.  I scurried around
behind my brother, sank into his hole, pumped in and out
less than a dozen times and let loose, adding my own load to
my buddies' three loads in my brother's hole.

     My brother just stayed there, on his knees with his ass
in the air until the janitors picked him up and put him on
his back on the stack of pallets with his ass hanging off.
The Janitor still wearing coveralls finally peeled them off
while his Twin stepped up to the edge of the pallets,
grabbed my brother's ankles, pushed them back and spread
them apart.  The Janitors monster cock was pushed up against
my brother's hole and then slowly started to sink in.  I
knew how much that thing hurt going into my freshly fucked
hole, but my brother just moaned and took it in.  When the
Janitor hit bottom and their balls were smashed together, my
brother started to beg to get fucked.

     For the next hour or so I watched my baby brother get
gang banged and listened to him begging for it, "harder" and
"deeper" the whole time.  After the first twin bred that
hole, the second janitor added his load.  Josh and Drew each
took another turn, followed by Alex.  Then it was my turn.

     I looked down between his legs to my brother's face.  I
asked him if he wanted to flip over and get more
comfortable, but he said he wanted to see my face while I
fucked him this time.  I told him that I wasn't sure I
wanted to fuck him, now that I knew what a cum slut he was:
ready to bend over or throw his legs up for anybody.  When
he started begging for it, I let him have it.  His hole had
been open and lubed up with a few loads when I'd fucked him
earlier, this time it was a loose, sloppy mess, and it felt
great.  I sank in and started fucking.  I leaned forward and
told my bro that he'd gotten his last blow job from me, now
that I knew his ass craved cock and scum, I wasn't going to
be sucking him off for the privilege of using it.

     That hole was so loose and sloppy it took me almost
twenty minutes of fucking before I finally dumped my third
load of the afternoon.  When I was through, I heard Alex
right behind me, where he'd been watching my cock fucking my
brother's hole.  As Alex put his hand son my shoulder and
push me down to my knees he said,  "A good brother always
felches his load out of his brother's hole.  Alex pressed my
face into the slimy mess and I started licking and sucking
for all I was worth.  I had churned all the cum in that hole
until it was a frothy mix of scum and sweat.  I couldn't get
enough, I licked and sucked every bit of it I could.

     When I had Baby Bro's hole cleaned up the Janitors told
us all to get dressed and get out because they had to get
back to work.  Once we were all dressed, the Twins opened up
the service gate to let us out.  As we left I heard one of
them tell Alex to drop by anytime.  Alex answered, "Sure
thing Chad, I always have a good time with you and Tad."

                       <<<<<<<>>>>>>>


When I started writing stories and submitting them to
Nifty I was unemployed.  Just after I began work on `Up on
the Roof' I got a full time job.  It's taken me nearly six
months to finish this; I hope to get back to writing more
often if you all want to read more of my stories.  Let me
know at FitchBoy@att.net.

My past submissions to Nifty include:

'Trained By The Best', 16 episodes.
'COACH.ED', 20 episodes.
'What's Mine is Mine'
'Pajama Games'
'Raising Caines'
`Blended Family Ties', 3 episodes.