Date: Sun, 1 Jan 2006 19:22:45 -0800 (PST)
From: Steam Train <steam_t2000@yahoo.com>
Subject: Alternative Deterrence Chapter 1

Alternative Deterrence.
By Steam Train    (steam_t2000@yahoo.com)


Introduction:


This fantasy is a version of my original story
`Juvenile Deterrence'. It contains older characters in
a similar but not identical plot.

The original story and thus this version is an attempt
on my behalf to combine some of the very common
concepts and themes raised in the erotic writings of
numerous writers. Themes such as `Naked in School',
`Nudie Judie', the `Police Strip Search' and not
forgetting the `Medical Examination'. Overriding all
this of course is the concept of slavery, my favourite
fantasy universe theme.

I will acknowledge specific writers or groups of
writers at the end of chapters where I have drawn on
their work to formulate the base structure of the
chapter. These are writers whose works I have enjoyed
and admired.

Enjoy,


Preamble:


The economic reforms introduced many years ago by
President Shelley had long ago bought about the return
of a "normal" life to the bulk of the population.

For about fifteen percent of the population however it
had meant a radical change in existence. The poor,
long term unemployed and the criminally convicted were
after the reforms mandatarily placed in servitude for
life.

Officially the acts that set up the reforms referred
to the process as `Servitude' however everyone
referred to the participants as slaves.

It was cheaper to provide adequate food and housing
for slaves rather than for the poor and the long term
unemployed who were previously on welfare or the
criminals who had to be kept in prisons and of course
enslavement made it easy to stop them continuing to
breed and adding to the problem.

President Shelley had set up a system that clearly
differentiated between the rights of those citizens
who remained free and those who through enslavement
lost their freedom. The free citizens were still able
to make their own life decisions; slaves on the other
hand had their life decisions made up for them by
their owner or masters.

There was now a clear delineation in the status of a
citizen and a slave. The laws that applied to citizens
did not apply any longer to slaves. Slaves were now
items of property just like livestock.

The owners and masters were required by law to look
after their property and ensure they were adequately
watered and fed and that the slaves treatment not
sadistic, but that was the limit of their
responsibility. Free citizens no longer had to worry
about set working hours, unions, holidays or wage
demands as far as slaves were concerned.

Major body modifications and alterations like
castration or body piercing for slaves was allowed
upon legal authorization, provided it could be shown
that the modifications or alterations were required
for the better performance of the slave.

Slaves now did nearly all the `blue collar' jobs that
had been done previously by free citizens. Slaves
worked the production lines, collected the garbage,
kept the streets clean, delivered the mail, and when
you saw delivery trucks coming and going you knew that
slaves would unload the goods.

The slave reforms of President Shelley had solved the
problem of what to do with criminals and vagrants but
it did not address the anti social behaviour of the
youth of the community.

The authorities soon realised this problem and
President Shelley had legislation passed that
authorised the states to sentence juveniles aged
between ten and fifteen under a new initiative called
the `NEWDD'' Program for Juvenile Deterrence.

Over the years particularly at the urging of Senator
Michael F Wright, Democrat New York and his mother the
political activist Mrs Jaclyn Wright the age range was
extended to define Juveniles as aged between ten and
under twenty one years of age. They had campaigned
successfully that the original slave laws were too
harsh and that a `half way house' was needed. For all
but major offences the `Juvenile' could be sentenced
into the Juvenile Deterrence programme instead of
straight into slavery

These NEWDD juvenile slaves could be seen like their
permanent counterparts working away in their spare
time serving out their sentence performing community
service projects. The only differences being that they
were unlike their decently dressed permanent
counterparts almost totally naked at all times, they
were younger and there were legal limits on the sexual
use and types of punishment applicable to the
temporary juvenile slaves.

NEWDD juvenile slaves were not broken in spirit to the
same extent as adult slaves but their totally
humiliating and embarrassing experiences in the
temporary slavery of NEWDD juvenile deterrence usually
resulted in very upright law abiding young citizens
emerging from the scheme.


End Preamble.


Chapter 1: Caught.


It was a sunny Saturday afternoon and Owen and Vicki
Green and their three children Daniel, Eric and
Melissa were cutting through Poulton Park to their car
after a family bonding session at the movies.

As they turned a corner of the shrub lined path that
wound through the centre of the park they came across
a coffled council work gang. It was comprised of six
slaves watched over by their overseer.

Eric the middle child upon seeing the gang of sweaty
slaves immediately commented out loud "No ones ever
going to make me into a slave". His older brother
Daniel looked across at him and replied "Well you
better make sure then, that you obey the rules a lot
more than you do or you never know what will happen to
you"

`Look who's talking" Eric retorted.

"What do you mean by that squirt' Daniel teased.

"I mean look at who's sneaking off and getting up to
mischief with his closest friends. And in case your
blind `squirt', I'm taller than you now so shut your
mouth" Eric replied.

Though he didn't want to show that Eric had scored
with that last comment, Daniel felt his face blushing.

"Yeah well I'm more mature than you, who's the little
high  schooler?" Daniel responded.

"Yeah you think your so cool being at college don't
you" Eric replied.

`Daniel, Eric grow up and stop tormenting each other,
this is supposed to be family time" his Mum rebuked.

"Yeah bossy boots" Melissa chipped in supporting Eric
and poking her tongue out at her eldest brother
Daniel.

"Well it's true Mum, they are so immature, neither
Eric or Mel do what they are told when I ask them when
your at work. If they keep that up they will end up in
trouble" Daniel replied.

"Oh and you never break the rules?" Vicki Green asked?

I'm not like the pair of them mum I follow the rules;
I am never going to end up as a slave that's for sure"
Daniel replied.

"Ok that's enough son" Owen Green interjected in a
voice that told all the matter was closed.

They walked on through the park in silence but just
before they reached their parked car the family came
across a group of naked youths picking up rubbish as
part of their community service requirements as
temporary slaves.

The three teenagers and even the parents couldn't help
glancing at the naked bodies of the five miscreant
youths who were serving their time in NEWDD Juvenile
Deterrence or `nudie', as it is called in the local
community.

NEWDD which stood for `Notice of Exemption from
Wearing Decent Dress' was a special form of temporary
enslavement that enforced complete public nudity to
humiliate and embarrass the offender that much that
they would never progress to more habitual criminal
activity.

"Man that must be so embarrassing, I'm never going to
end up like those guys, no one is ever going to make
me go around naked in public" Daniel asserted.

"Well then son you too had better be on your best
behaviour" Dad responded.

"I always am dad you know that" Daniel replied.

"Hey isn't that nudie over there picking up rubbish
Ryan Muller?" Melissa blurted out.

Eric looked across and said, "Yeah sure is".

Eric and Melissa ran across to where Ryan was working.
When he noticed them approaching his face turned an
instant shade of pink.

17-year-old Ryan was in 11th grade with Melissa,
though not in the same classes, nevertheless she knew
of him, so did Eric who was one grade ahead.

When they arrived in front of Ryan he stopped
collecting pieces of rubbish and took up the display
position. NEWDD juvenile slaves were required to
comply with any reasonable requests from free citizens
to display their naked bodies for posing or
examination and to cooperate in those activities,
providing that it did not interfere with the juvenile
slave's schedule.

Melissa giggled as she took a close look for the first
time at Ryan's genitals.

Standing naked in front of his two middle school
companions Ryan displayed an erect 6" cock that
surmounted a shaved hairless ball sack that was
hanging low. He had a standard trimmed pubic bush
extending to either side and to the top of his penis.
Pubic hair that was hard to see at any distance as it
was trimmed so short.

Turning to the nudies overseer Melissa asked, "Can we
examine him?"

The rest of the Greens had followed the teens over to
Ryan and when he arrived Daniel recognised the
overseer as Blake Rivers, a senior from his college
who only last year when he was 20 had been a nudie
himself.

Blake replied "Sorry Miss, but Ryan's work schedule
does not allow him time for examinations today".

"Oh what a pity, still I guess we will have plenty of
time to examine you at school on Monday Ryan" Melissa
responded.

Ryan breathed a sigh of relief but still turned a
deeper shade of pink.

Daniel admired Ryan's matue genitals but he was never
gladder at that moment that he was a free citizen
fully clothed in decent dress!

Of course as a kid growing up especially once you
turned ten years of age you had to be extra careful in
your public and private behaviour, less you were
sentenced under the `NEWDD', `Notice of Exemption from
Wearing Decent Dress' Program for Juvenile Deterrence.


None of Daniels friends or family had ever served time
in NEWDD. All of them had been careful to keep out of
trouble as they were just too petrified of being
placed into `Nudie' to do anything wrong. That of
course was the whole aim of the program. However life
under all these harsh rules was boring and Daniel like
many others occasionally ventured into activities that
could lead him into trouble if caught, he and his
friends had always been very careful not to be caught!


Public nudity enforced by a court order was a powerful
tool in keeping kids always on their best behaviour.
Good manners and being helpful to your parents around
the house was now expected of all children still
living at home. The NEWDD program now ran until you
turned twenty one, then you were sentenced under adult
law, which often meant enslavement for life. In fact
the enslavement laws still came into effect from the
age of sixteen so once a Juvenile turned sixteen they
had to be doubly careful as they were at the courts
mercy as the wether they would be sentenced into
Juvenile Deterrence or Community Servitude or slavery
as it was commonly referred.

Though the state had recently passed new public
decency laws and slaves had to be kept `decent' in
public so as not to offend the decency of all the free
citizens the law still allowed with authorisation the
stripping of slaves in public as a means of specific
punishment and humiliation. NEWDD juveniles were also
exempted from the decency laws under the court-imposed
conditions contained in the Notice of Exemption from
Wearing Decent Dress.

Apart from the nudies working on the community service
projects like the family had just passed you would see
juveniles at school or at the mall who were totally
naked. They were the focus of much torment and
ridicule apart from the embarrassment and humiliation
of being seen totally naked. This of course was just
what the NEWDD program set out to achieve.

Daniel Green had grown up amongst this `normal' life
in a leafy tree lined street in suburban Eastbrook
named Henson Avenue. His father Owen was employed in
Real Estate sales and his mother Vicki was a Retail
Store Manager.

The Green family only had the one slave, Tom. He was
elderly and did all the cooking and housecleaning. He
had a small bed-sitter room in one corner of their
house basement, next to the laundry. Tom kept to
himself most of the time.

In the Green household just because Tom was a slave
did not mean that he was not shown the respect due to
an adult. Daniels parents had always taught the nearly
19-year-old Daniel, his 17 ½ -year-old brother Eric
and his 16-year-old sister Melissa to be respectful to
Tom.

Daniel had never seen his parents punish Tom like he
had seen some of his friend's parents punish their
domestic slaves. Daniel had been shocked and a little
aroused when he first saw grown adults forced to strip
and be beaten with the tawse or cane on their bare
buttocks. He had never witnessed a whipping and never
wanted too!

The Green household was an average middle class
suburban family. The jobs that Owen and Vicki Green
held down meant that they had to work on a rostered
basis on the weekend.

They tried to ensure that one of them was rostered off
work to be at home with the children over the weekends
but as the kids got older this became less of an
issue.

Daniel being the eldest had been since he was a young
teenager entrusted to be in charge of the household if
they both had to be at work on the same day of the
weekend. Both Eric and Melissa resented their older
brother's authority over them and as Daniel had
complained they entrusted tried to push their limits
with him as far as possible.

To make the sibling rivalries even worse Daniel was
always laundering his superior status being a College
sophomore compared to his 12th and 11th grade High
School siblings.

Daniel was a popular guy. He excelled at sport and was
a high academic achiever. These twin attributes gave
him a high self confidence level and had by natural
selection made him a natural leader

To go with his academic and sporting prowess, Daniel
was also a handsome boy. Even though he was of average
height for his age being 5 feet 10 inches his slim
build with his light blond hair, blue eyes and pale
complexion attracted the attention of a lot of girls
and unbeknown to Daniel quite a few guys as well. They
all secretly wished to know him better. He was
considered `hot' even though he was also considered a
bit shy.

Daniel was shy! He was too embarrassed to go out on
dates with girls other than group type outings where
one-on-one situations could not develop, not because
he wasn't curious about girls, but rather because he
feared what the consequences for his reputation might
be if he was too successful with the girl. The law was
very tough on premarital sex and Daniel had private
reasons for his shyness as well.

Daniel was the youngest guy in his year and one of a
handful of students who were not already 19 years old
when college resumed after the summer holidays in
early August. He would turn 19 years of age next
Friday on the 1st of September, the last possible date
for him to have entering his 2nd year. If he had been
born just an hour later on the 2nd of September he
would have just finished High school and be starting
College.

As they got into the family car Owen Green commented,
"I hope the three of you noticed how embarrassed and
humiliated that boy was. Let it be a warning and a
lesson to all of you of the consequences of
misbehaving".

If it was a warning, Daniel he did not seem to head
it.

The very next day after the family outing to the
movies, both parents were working and so in the
afternoon, Daniel with five friends, went over to the
old Thompson's Foundry site. It was a great place to
hang out, lots of old buildings with many nooks and
crannies to explore and hide your activities.

Daniel had formed a local street gang called the
`Henson Avenue Gang' during 7th grade when he was 12
years old, soon after he had returned from a long
period in hospital recovering from injuries received
when a car driven by runaway slaves hit the stationary
car his Grandfather was driving. The subsequent
hospitalisation and the trial and execution of the
slaves had made Daniel quite a local celebrity at the
time and catapulted him to the top of the local
popularity stakes.

Eric sometimes hung out with his older brother and his
friends but mostly he had his own group of friends.

Even though Eric was 1 ½ years younger than Daniel he
was already taller than Daniel, being 5 foot 11 inches
tall and much to Eric's amusement his voice was way
deeper than his older brothers.

Eric really resented his little brother treatment by
Daniel and had told his brother so on numerous
occasions, often threatening Daniel with the words,
"You wait bro, your time will come".

Melissa was 5 foot 5 inches tall and had filled out
nicely where it mattered most to horney guys. Her firm
large breasts hadn't gone unnoticed over the last few
years either by, lots of guys who saw her and even by
Daniel and Eric.

She never wanted to hang out with all her brothers
dorky friends, though she had become very interested
in boys. She had her own group of girlfriends who were
constantly sleeping over at the Greens house much to
the annoyance of Daniel and to a lesser extent Eric
who saw this as a great opportunity to chat up some
girls.

As the guys in the gang got older they became bolder
in the activities that they undertook to keep
themselves amused. This boldness was fuelled by the
fact that none of them had ever been caught and placed
in the NEWDD scheme.

Daniel was the leader in planning a lot of these
activities. It was becoming more and more important to
Daniel that he maintains the respect of his peers so
as he grew older the gang drifted apart but he
actively led and encouraged bolder escapades amongst
his group of close friends.

On this occasion two of the guys had bought along some
cans of spray paint and Daniel being the natural
leader had insisted he start the first graffiti of the
afternoon.

"Michelangelo Green shall now commence his latest
masterpiece' Daniel boasted.

Like most things he undertook Daniel was a pretty good
artist with the spray tin. He had not long started
when Joey yelled out "split, cops!"

All the guys darted from the site in different
directions, but Daniel in the middle of spray painting
the graffiti on the wall hesitated just momentarily
before dropping the can and bolting.

The delay however was critical.

Daniel was a good athlete and had he moved immediately
he would have cleared the grasping hands of the police
as they ran towards the wall where Daniel had been
painting. Because he delayed those few seconds he felt
a hand grasp the back of his tee shirt as he began to
run away.

"Oh shit' Daniel exclaimed.

The next thing he knew he was grappled to the ground,
his hands forced behind his back and hand cuffs
applied.

"Fuck off let me go" Daniel screamed to no avail.

He was caught!


End Chapter 1.


Acknowledgements:

Pete Brown for originally creating this universe.

This fantasy is written in the same universe as my
story `A Middle Class Slave Revisited'. This was a
sequel to Pete Browns original story.

The term NEWDD, `Notice of Exemption from Wearing
Decent Dress' is a concept developed in `Seven Naked
Ambersons' by Nap.