Date: Fri, 31 Mar 2006 20:46:09 -0800 (PST)
From: Steam Train <steam_t2000@yahoo.com>
Subject: Alternative Deterrence Chapter 22

Alternative Deterrence.
By Steam Train    (steam_t2000@yahoo.com)

Chapter: 22 Golf.


When Daniel arrived home from college on the Monday
afternoon he immediately had to set to work assisting
Tom. When his brother and sister arrived home Tom met
them at the front door and he relayed Mr Greens
instructions that they were to undress immediately
they entered the house. Blushing instantly they both
stripped naked before Tom and placed their clothes on
to the clothes rack.

Not long afterwards to Mel's obvious horror her friend
Kim arrived and Melissa answering the door, as it was
her duty that day and had to let her in.

"Like your dress sense' Kim teased, pity about the
flat chest though!"

"Ok Kim leave it alone" Mel replied. She could see
that Kim was enjoying her newfound status over her and
was determined to claw a little respect back.

Trouble was she was powerless to do much except get
her friend to stop tormenting. Kim was standing in
front of her fully dressed wearing jeans and a tight
fitting top that highlighted her rounded boobs. She
was obviously far better developed than Melissa who
desperately wanted to cover up her naked shame but was
unable to do so.

Things were even worse at the beginning for Eric who
had to endure a visit from the whole Henson Street
gang. They came to be with Daniel but were
disappointed when Tom informed them politely that his
master had left firm instructions that Daniel was to
work after school, not relax.

Eric left the house to hang out with then and this at
least allowed him to redress. This fact was not lost
on Melissa who soon convinced Kim to go back to her
house with her so that she too could dress on leaving
the house.

That night after dinner Daniel received another
pleasant surprise and Eric and Melissa suffered
further humiliation.

As Daniel was clearing the dinner table Melissa again
asked Daniel would he prepare her bath for her?

"Yes mam" Daniel replied trying to sound pleasant and
happy but not really succeeding.

`A good idea Mel" Mr Green commented, "And when it is
ready Daniel, I want you to call Mel up and personally
wash her".

"But I can wash myself," Melissa objected in horror to
her fathers new idea.

"Maybe, but today I'm ordering Daniel to wash you just
as an added re minder of who is in control in this
house" Mr Green firmly instructed.

At this news Eric started giggling but his merriment
was short lived.

"Don't sound so happy son, Daniel will be washing you
straight after Mel's bath is finished!"

"Dad no, can't Tom do it if this must happen, not
Daniel please" Eric begged.

"Enough, it is Daniels duty tonight to be on bath
duty" Mr Green said putting a stop to the complaints.

When Melissa's bath had been run and she had been
summons into it Daniel stood there not knowing what to
do next. At that moment his father opened the bathroom
door and from behind him instructed.

"You can get to your feet Mel so Daniel can wash you
thoroughly".

When Melissa was slow to move Mr Green ordered, "You
better stand up fast or you'll be having your bottom
smacked ".

Melissa rose reluctantly from the water. She was
shamefully aware of the eyes of the two males, her
father and her brother examining her body at close
range.

On his fathers instructions Daniel began soaping
around Melissa's face and throat.

"Lift up your arms for your brother" Mr Green ordered.

Melissa obeyed and she squirmed as her brothers
soaping fingers began to tickle her. Worse was to come
when Daniel began to soap Melissa's chest. She was
horrified to find her nipples standing up hard as
waves of sensation flowed over her. She squirmed away,
hunching her shoulders.

"Stand straight Melissa," snapped Mr Green.

His own erection indicating that he like his sister
was aroused Daniel began working his way down to the
top of her legs.

Melissa knew what was going to happen even before
Daniel began to lather her pubic region. More shameful
sensations began to flood her body and she gasped and
squirmed as Daniels soapy fingers slid over her most
private and intimate parts, rubbing her clit and
edging up into her vaginal slit.

Though he wanted to linger his fingers in there longer
Daniel moved on and washed down Melissa's legs.

"Turn around" Mr Green instructed and Daniel soaped
Mel's back. Mel knew now as Daniels hands moved down
to her lower back that her dad would order Daniel to
wash her bottom and hated the thought.

She had the strangest thought at that moment and hoped
her bottom was properly clean.

"Melissa bend forward," came the command from her
father. Melissa bent and felt her cheeks being pulled
apart and then she felt Daniels soapy fingers brush
her sensitive sphincter. This tickled too in an oddly
pleasurable way, which caused her to again wriggle and
squirm.

"A bit ticklish, hey?" chuckled Mr Green as Daniel
washed down the backs of Melissa's legs.

Her bath over Daniel emptied the water and prepared a
new bath for Eric.

Eric behaved very similar to his sister. He was
mortified that his brother was feeling his naked body
all over with his soapy fingers. He could not say
anything because his father stood in the bathroom
doorway and gave orders that ensured every inch of his
naked body was washed thoroughly by those marauding
soapy fingers of his brother.

When Daniels fingers began soaping the area around
Eric's genitals, Eric could not withstand the sexual
arousal and he began to moan and twist and squirm his
body..

"Stand still" Mr Green ordered.

Try as hard as he could Eric could not stand still and
as he approached an orgasmic climax his whole body
shuddered and his throbbing dick pulsed to the feel of
Daniels soapy fingers. Cum shot forward from Eric's
penis into the bath water as intense pleasure pulsed
through his body.

Daniel didn't know what to do after he had finished
his bath duty. His own penis was raging with a very
painful erection. He desperately wanted to go off and
masturbate himself but he knew the NEWDD rules
prohibited that and if caught he knew he would be in
big trouble.

The though entered his head what he would like to do
but it was such a shocking thought that at first he
rejected it. If you had told Daniel even a day ago
that he would be thinking about asking his younger
brother to jerk him off he would never have believed
it. He still couldn't believe he was seriously
thinking of offering himself to his brother. Sexual
desperation is a powerful force and Daniel at this
time would do just about anything to have relief!
Relief that was legally sanctioned and he was allowed
to request under the NEWDD guidelines.

Mustering all his courage and fortitude Daniel went
into his brother's bedroom and asked Eric for relief

Eric couldn't believe his ears when he heard his
brother's weak voiced request.

`What? Did I hear you right bro, you want me to give
you relief? Eric questioned in disbelief.

"Yes" Daniel meekly replied.

That request was all it required to brake the barriers
down for Eric, because without even pausing to think
over Daniels request Eric reached out and had his
fingers clasped around Daniel's penis stroking him,
while saying, "Huh, you like this big brother? I think
you do, don't you Daniel?"

It was quite a show in Eric's bedroom. Daniel was
trying to hold out as long as he could, so he could
gain the maximum satisfaction from his relief, going
as far as pulling his now throbbing dick out off
Eric's grasp before thrusting it back into Eric grasp.

As Eric continued to manipulate his brother's shaft
and balls Daniel was mere seconds from his climax, so
he quickly let his brother know that he was about to
orgasm. Daniel screamed, "I am cumming!" Then his body
went into  spasms. He rocked back and forth, moaning
as he shot his load into his cupped hands, then
opening and closing his eyes in disbelief, before
finally gasping out "Oh man. That felt so good Eric,
thank you so much!"

After that moment the relationship between the two
brothers was forever irrevocably changed.

Tuesday at college was better than Monday for Daniel.
The new Taking Back Control rules were being forcibly
and enthusiastically enforced by all the lecturers and
this resulted in a seemingly endless stream of other
students ending up the centre of attention not Daniel.

Most of these students it seemed were just required to
strip naked and suffer the humiliation of being
exposed for the first time in their life in front of
their fellow classmates, which was bad enough, however
in Daniels third period history class the teacher Mrs
Yates took the `Taking Back Control' programme one
step further and ordered one of the students, Drew
Greer out to the front of the class for not paying
attention.

She positioned Drew facing the class behind her
teacher's desk and said to the class "Class as part of
Drew's punishment you get to choose if you want Drew
to lower his underpants or to take them off
completely?"

The class hardly hesitated to think over an answer
before chanting in reply, "Remove them, remove them
completely".

Drew's burning red face at this decision was sure
something to look at.

Mrs Yates told Drew to, "Take all his clothes off,
fold them, and set them on her desk".

You could see Drew was taking a quick rough eye
measurement, to see if the teacher's desk was high
enough to keep the class from seeing his most private
parts when he was naked. Slowly Drew slipped his
clothes off, folded them and put them on the desk as
instructed.

"Now go around to the front of the desk and lean over
it. Once you are in position put your hands behind
your neck and leave them there" instructed Mrs Yates.

Drew turned an even darker shade of red at this new
order. It meant that the class would be able to see
all of Drew's naked body.

"Please Mrs Yates, please don't make me do this" Drew
begged.

"You have no reason to be this modest, this modest
attitude is just what Taking Back Control is trying to
prevent." This comment  caused some snickering but Mrs
Yates ignored this and just folded her arms and stared
at Drew till he wilted in resolve and moved around and
bent over the desk quickly so as to hide his genitals
from the view of his class.

He was that quick in moving that Daniel and the rest
of the class were prevented from seeing what Drew had
to offer.

Mrs. Yates said. Drew, you have a choice to make. You
can have thirty hand spanks now, or you can have
fifteen spanks today and fifteen tomorrow?"

It only took Drew a few seconds to decide he would
take all his punishment at once.

"Drew, each time you remove your hands from behind
your neck I will start the count over again' Mrs Yates
informed the sweating nervous looking Drew Greer.

Mrs Yates then began a ruthless spanking of Drew's
butt. Each time her hand hit it's target it made a
very noticeable sound. Mrs. Yates counted out the
strokes. The third one hit slightly below his buttocks
brushing against Drew's hanging scrotum and Drew
instantaneously reached back and tried to block the
next blow.

"Drew, I warned you not to move your hands or we would
start over" Mrs Yates warned.

"But it hurt miss, you hit me in the balls" Drew
yelled.

"Move up the desk further then" Mrs Yates said,
pulling Drew further across the desk until his head
and shoulders were over the far edge.

"Now, put your weight on your legs instead of the
desk, I want your belly off the top."

In order to do this Drew had to spread his legs out to
the side.

"Good" said Mrs Yates as soon as Drew's arms were
behind his neck again.

"Now we have start all over again." Mrs Yates informed
her miserable recipient.

Soon there was the tell tale sound of crying and
sobbing as tears ran down Drew's cheeks as the smacks
continued to rain down on Drew's ever reddening
bottom. Mrs Yates hands were also suffering and she
decided there and then that she was going out to
purchase a paddle that afternoon.

When the spanking was completed Mrs Yates ordered,
"Stand up and face the class with your hands behind
your neck".

Drew stood up and exposed myself to everyone in the
class. Drew had a smooth hairless taught chest. He
revealed as he raised his hands and placed them behind
his neck that he had small patches of short light
brown hair under his armpits. A thick patch of brown
pubic hair surmounted his erect five and a half inch
cock, which was sticking up at forty-five degrees
above a plump set of pinkish balls.

Mrs Yates asked Drew "Do you think that the spanking I
gave you was sufficient?"

What a question! Daniel thought to himself, as if he's
going to say no!

"Yes, I do" to no ones surprise Drew answered.

"Right then back to your seat and pay attention in
future. You can stay naked till the bell" Mrs Yates
informed the despondent boy.

Drew's punishment was a further learning curve for the
students as it was crudely and painfully bought home
to them how much the rules had changed. They all knew
they lived in a very authoritarian society, with its
forced slavery and NEWDD juvenile justice but now the
total authoritarian nature of the state was being
bought right into their living rooms and  lecture
rooms where they could no longer pretend to ignore it!

Just before lunchtime his friends returned to school
having been seen early in the session at the Juvenile
Court. Over lunch Daniel heard how they had been
bought before the Judge as a group with their parents
permission and had to present themselves for a medical
examination tomorrow or Thursday before sentencing on
Friday. They had all pleaded guilty.

Apart from the continuation of his maths lesson Daniel
was not used for any special lesson assistance the
remainder of the day. When his last lecture ended he
hurried quickly out to the bus stop and following
Tom's written instructions caught a bus from in front
of the college into Downtown Eastbrook.

There he caught the next bus to Piney Hills. There
were other NEWDD's on the bus with him who he
recognized from Sunday at the Mall.

After the bus turned into Piney Hills Road, and began
the long steep ascent to the top of the hills for
about a mile or so, the turn off for Piney Hills Golf
club came into sight. Daniel pulled the bus indicator
and alighted at the corner of Piney Hills Road and the
entrance road to the Piney Hills Golf Course. No one
else alighted with him.

As Daniel walked alone up the long sweeping drive,
which seemed to wind on forever he was swept away into
another world. All sign of suburban civilisation
disappeared and the sight and smell of the lush green
growth of the magnificent Piney Hills Golf Course took
over his senses.

Finally Daniel emerged from the trees into the parking
lot, partly filled with expensive cars and the
occasional pony slave standing at rest tethered to
hitch rails in front of their master's slave hauled
carriages.

As he walked on further Daniel stopped momentarily as
he saw for the first time the unique Piney Hills
caddies in their two enclosures at the edge of the
parking lot between the first tee and the clubhouse.

Daniel had heard stories of the way that caddies were
dressed at Piney Hills, or rather, undressed!

They' were totally naked, with only a small strip of
Mohican hair on their heads and tattoo stripes running
down their heads, arms, bodies and legs. And they were
wearing chain "waistcoats" similar to the shopping
trolley baskets that can holster a set of golf clubs
and at the same time keep the caddies' arms neatly at
their sides out of harms way. It was very difficult to
tell any of them apart as they stood there in the
shade, it looked as if they were all clones, and it
was only the small differences in their heights that
distinguished them in any way at all.

Daniel knew that for a while the caddies had been made
to cover up their nakedness once the decency laws were
enacted but the patronage numbers had fallen when this
novelty was removed and eventually the clubs board had
won legal approval to have the common slave caddies
naked again as the courts ruled the clubs grounds were
private property and out of the publics view.

Off to the side of the main caddy pen there was a
smaller enclosure, which had a much smaller number of
clothed slave caddies, wearing the clubs khaki polo
shirt and slave shorts with stripes that lined up with
their tattoo markings. These were the elite alpha
advice caddies who could be hired to provide not just
carrying services but actual course advice to assist
their master's golf game.

Daniel knew better than to enter via the main entrance
and instead following the signs went around the right
side of the building till he came to the slave masters
office.

Nervously he knocked on the door and waited.

"Come" he heard a voice bellow out.

Daniel entered and took up the slave's position in
front of the Slave Masters desk. The Slave Master, Ben
Woods was a balding stocky man who appeared to be in
his mid sixties. He was sitting at his desk reading a
newspaper. He didn't look up and Daniel stood there
for what seemed like minutes and this built his
tension, however he remained very still in the slave
position awaiting instructions.

Finally the slave master put down the paper and looked
at Daniel. "You must be the new NEWDD starting his
four months with us every Tuesday and Thursday?"

`Yes sir master, Daniel Green sir" Daniel gushed out.

"Right well I run a tight ship around here boy. I have
lots of permanent slaves to worry about so I don't
expect or want to hear anything about you till the day
your time is up, is that understood?"

`Yes master sir' Daniel replied.

`Wait outside my office and I will fetch one of the
slaves to take you and show you your Community Service
Duties, dismissed".

"Yes sir" Daniel replied and moved out and stood
outside the Slave Masters office.

He was not standing there long when two elderly but
sprightly Negro slaves appeared and introduced
themselves.

"Hello boy I'm Jim and this is Bill, the master has
asked us to help you settle in to your Community
Service. You may call us both `Boss'".

"Hello Boss" Daniel replied, "I'm Daniel Green sir".

"Not sir, boy, that title is for free citizens, no
were just boss, boy understand?"

"Yes si ... Ummm boss" Daniel stuttered out.

"Right boy we've lost count of the number of slaves
and NEWDD's that have passed through this place in the
sixty years we have served our masters here. Bill and
I even remember when our current slave master was but
a boy following in the shadow of his father who was
slave master here going on fifty years ago. If either
of us can be of help just ask, we have seen it all
over those years, the good and the bad".

Daniel was dreading the next part of his induction; he
had convinced himself he was going to be used as a
public urinal, just like Greg Pearson had told him.
When Jim and Bill slowly lead him into the foyer of
the locker rooms his nervousness mounted. Perhaps he
thought NEWDD's were used at the clubhouse as well as
half way through the course.

Jim and Bill took Daniel over to the wall between the
men's and ladies locker rooms and there against the
wall stood a little shoe-shine stand, a couple of
raised leather chairs, with a platform along the front
so that the shoes are about a foot or so off the
ground.

There was a length of chain with a leg manacle coming
from a hasp in the wall on the right hand side of the
stand and a similar chain on the left only it was
firmly attached to the ankle of a NEWDD female.

"On your knees, Boy", Bill ordered. He brought the
manacle end of the wall chain and fastened it to
Daniels right ankle.

"OK boy, here's the routine. Your right ankle is
chained to the wall so you can't wander away. You are
to stay kneeling as you need to be down there to shine
the masters shoes. If you are caught standing up you
will be punished like a slave should for disobeying
the rules".

"You cannot drink, piss or shit whilst on duty, but,
if you're really desperate, there's a red button in
that box in the front of the stand, press that, and
one of us will get here as soon as possible but it's
intended for emergencies only, you are not to soil the
members foyer. Make sure you're really careful not to
get any polish onto any masters socks or slacks
either, as any form of complaint will result in
punishment!".

Bill and Jim locked Daniel to the chain and left him
with his female NEWDD companion. Daniel was just
relieved that all he was required to do was shine
shoes, which he felt could never be as bad as being a
public urinal.

There were no customers for a while and with no one
around Daniel turned on his knees to have a close look
at the girl. He instantly recognized her as Sarah
Thompson; the 12 year old sentenced for shoplifting
just before Daniel. Sarah's little breasts, firm and
pointed with prominent, dark pink nipples were
displayed right before Daniels gazing eyes and her
equally prominent vaginal slit shaved of it's once
fine fringe of curly brown pubic hairs also taunted
Daniel to the point that his little penis was soon
fully erect betraying his arousal to Sarah.

Daniel introduced himself to her and she did the same
to him but then Sarah suggested they should be quite
because they would be punished if caught talking and
then pointed out the security camera monitoring them.

Soon some members began returning to the locker room
after their game and when they emerged cleanly washed
and immaculately dressed Daniel and Sarah seemed to
have an endless stream of customers. Daniels arms soon
ached from all the polishing. Even worse was the
incessant pain in his knees and legs, from having to
kneel all the time on the hard marble floor. No
thought had obviously been given to providing a
kneeling pad, and so Daniel was forced to keep moving
constantly to try and ease the aches.

It didn't take long before Daniel was sick of shoes,
sick of the smell of polish, sick of members coming
and laughing at his small shaved appendage, sick of
the guys who slipped their other shoe off as Daniel
cleaned their other one and used their socked foot to
gently caress his balls and penis in an attempt to see
him erect and try and make him orgasm.

Daniel didn't know if it was the men or the women
members who were the worst at staring at his tiny
erect penis but after the first hour or so, he didn't
care. Like the mall and school he soon became adjusted
to his new humiliation.

When Bill came to release Sarah and Daniel that
evening they were both tired and sore from their hours
of almost non-stop labour.

Fortunately the majority of the players had to come
off the course at least an hour before Daniels time
was up as it was getting too dark and so the pace of
work had slackened near the end of their time, and he
had been able to sit on the ground with his legs
crossed relieving the pain for short periods of time.

As they walked with Bill who was taking their
Discipline Books to the Slave Master Ben Woods for
signing Daniel asked Bill about the rumour he had
heard of NEWDD's serving as public urinals.

"Ewwwe yuck" squirmed Sarah on hearing Daniels
comment.

"Yes it happens sometimes boy, but not usually for
first time offenders like you two, unless it was a
very serious crime. That type of Community Service is
reserved for second time offenders. Never seen a third
timer come back after taking the piss out of the good
masters" Bill chuckled, though Sarah and Daniel could
hardly suppress their revulsion.

On the bus home Daniel reflected on his afternoon at
the golf course. It was boring and hard on his knees
but it was nothing compared to what he had expected.
He felt the urge growing in his groin for relief. All
the stroking by those socked feet at the shoe shine
stand and now from the vibrations of the bus was
arousing him. He needed to gain relief, would his
brother be interested again?

Daniel got his relief that night at home and got to
bath both his brother and sister again as a bonus.

By the Wednesday at school Daniel had settled into a
normal NEWDD routine and the novelty of his small
appendage had worn off most of his tormentors except
for Karen and Megan Prescott at the bus stop in the
morning.

The Wednesday might have gone well for Daniel but he
was very worried as were Eric and Melissa about the
Community Watch meeting at their house that night. A
lot of the local neighbourhood were coming and all
three of them would be naked!

They all were hoping that their parents did not have
any further plans to demonstrate to the neighbourhood
just how effectively they had `Taken Back Control'


End Chapter: 22.

Acknowledgements:


`A Middle Class Slave Revisited' by Steam Train

`Shoe Shine, Boy!' by Pete Brown

`UAABB Code of Conduct' by Aldric