Date: Thu, 12 Jun 2003 20:47:30 -0400
From: Dom R <dom6789@hotmail.com>
Subject: Hot Younger Brother - Chapter 5
HOT YOUNGER BROTHER CHAPTER 5: A Return to Loving Ways
Copyright (c) 2003 by Pete Marenga
THE BROTHERS: Pete, 16 Todd, 14
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*** IMPORTANT NOTE TO ALL READERS:
Because of your email, starting with this chapter, 5, I am TAKING
THE HEAVY DOMINATION, ETC., OUT OF "Hot Younger Brother," and
restoring the brothers' relationship to the way it was, before.
I think you guys were right about this, thanks.
I've started a "spin-off" story, "Spankin' Younger Brother" --so
people wanting the rougher element will have a place to find it.
1. "Hot Younger Brother" returns to its original tone.
2. A separate Nifty tale, "Spankin' Younger Brother" begins--for
those who prefer the heavier domination/pain/bondage element.
Look for a separate Nifty listing: spankin-younger-brother,
in "Authoritarian." Todd, Pete will still be the characters.
_______________ CHAPTER 5: _______________
There was no scream, and I was relieved. My little brother made
a tight-sounding moan, as if to say, 'God, that hurt, but no big
deal.' Still, I felt terrible. Todd's nakedness made me horny,
but now, my own nakedness made me feel wrong.
"Urgh."
"Todd, I'm sorry!" I said, as I unhooked the strap that held my
brother's wrists. For all my past fantasies, I now hated the
fact that I'd hurt him. At that moment, my heart broke, and I
cried. Then it came to me that it was good that we were naked.
At least we were both the same.
"Forget it, Pete--it wasn't that bad," Todd said reassuringly,
twisting his body to look at the marks. Meanwhile, I rubbed his
tight, sore-looking globes.
"It wasn't?" I said, trying to stop my tears. I guess his butt
really wasn't as bad as I'd first thought. I grabbed Todd and
hugged him. My hands absent-mindedly kept rubbing his red
cheeks.
"No. It wasn't the worst but it hurt more than I thought it
would."
When Todd's eyes met mine, they looked almost tearful, despite
his brave tone. But, it was an odd look. Suddenly my brain
translated my brother's expression: He felt sorry that I was so
upset.
"It's ok," Todd said, his lips suddenly on mine.
Damn, I thought. It was Todd that sounded like the older
brother. What a reversal! He kissed with power. I could feel
him--something from him or inside him seemed to crawl out of him,
and into me. I was out of breath with the thrill of him. After
that, he gave me a few short kisses, with his mouth over mine at
different angles, as if he were fixing something in me that
required different kinds of kisses. He had me melting.
Shit, who was I kidding?! I was already melted. I was like
putty in his hands, at this point.
"Mmmm," Todd, continued, as if he were still kissing me.
"Oh, God, that felt good," I said--the passion momentarily
overcoming the guilt I felt about swatting his butt with a strap.
Soon the guilt took over. "Todd--I'm really sorry." I was still
shaking (and overwhelmed) from his kiss.
"Don't be sorry--the rubbing feels good," Todd said.
I admired my cute, young brother's face and magnetic smile.
Something very wet and warm touched my leg. When I realized it
was Todd's dick, wet with his precum, I started to get the
picture.
"I'm glad," I said, hugging him. I looked down at Todd. There
were his eyes again, as if waiting to look at mine. This time, I
pushed down toward him, and kissed.
"Ummmph, peerrrrtt," Todd said--with lips firmly pressed against
mine--an announcement that only I, as his brother, could
translate into its original meaning: "Oh, Pete!" At this point
my cock--hell, my whole body--was on fire. I wasn't all that
interested in spanking him anymore, but that didn't mean I'd lost
interest in fucking his skinny, young, pretty, virginal, smooth,
tanned, fucking irresistible body. I couldn't afford to scare
him off. I needed Todd on MY side, one hundred percent.
Then again, if I knew I could get away with it, I'd take my slick
cock, and shove it up his hot little butt so fast...!
Of course, I couldn't rush into it, I thought, coming back to my
senses. I dropped to my knees, behind him, licked his sore
cheeks, reached around and squeezed his half-hard dick.
"Oh, geez--that feels so good, Pete, but--"
"Shhh!" I said lovingly, "Enjoy yourself." Then I realized Todd
was finally seeing the marks on his ass. "Oh, you can see them,
now!" I said, happy for him.
"Yeah, Pete--wow, my butt looks cool! It's like it's got red
paint on it--only I know what it took to get those marks there."
"Well, um," I said uncomfortably, "like I said, enjoy yourself."
I slid around to the front of him.
Todd turned around. "You want me to really enjoy myself?" he
said, with his rising erection at my lips.
I didn't need a book to tell me what my little brother wanted, so
I inhaled, and slid my lips down his cute little bone.
"Currrrghhhh!" I almost choked.
"What's wrong, Pete?"
"Wow, it's bigger than it looks!" I said, thinking that giving
Todd a compliment would only add to the pleasure.
"Oh," he said, sounding disappointed, "you mean it doesn't look
big?"
"No, that's not what I meant! It looks big, Todd--but in your
mouth it feels a lot bigger."
"In MY mouth?" Todd said, knowing that's not what I meant. With
a mischievous grin, Todd slid across the floor to the bed, and
climbed up on it.
"Todd, what are you--"
"Push my neck down," Todd said excitedly, with his lips a few
inches away from the tip of his dick.
I stood up, pushed--and sure enough my brother could suck
himself. I let go of his neck to see if he could do it on his
own. Nope. That got an immediate reaction.
"Aw, come on, Pete!" Todd said in frustration, "Push again! I,
ohh--I mean--"
I knew he was only fourteen, but he sure had an older teen's
horns. At that point, I just wanted to please my little brother.
I pushed his neck down again, and watched his lips continue
making a new friendship with his best friend--Todd, junior.
"Urrfff!"
The neatest thing was hearing the sexy little sounds my brother
made. I didn't think anyone--especially a 14-year-old--could
make so many sounds that said, "this feels way good," but Todd
made them.
"Um, did you wanna get off this way?" I said pleadingly. I was
beginning to feel left out.
"NNN, nnnnn." Todd shook his head, then lifted his mouth. "Man,
that felt so good, Pete!"
"It was hot to watch," I said, playing with my boner. It was
turning me on, seeing Todd's dick jump with excitement, if that
was the word for it. I could see he wanted me to finish the blow
job that had started all this.
Underneath it all, my little brother's eyes were telling me that
he shared a lot of my desires, and wanted to take his turn on me.
The more I thought about it, the more I was surprised at this--
that Todd seemed to want me. He seemed more mature, all of a
sudden, and I started to think of him as an equal.
"Come on, Pete, I just--"
"Oh, just shut up," I said lovingly as I pushed his back to the
bed, shoved a finger in his mouth, and sucked on some little
brother nipple, for the first time.
"Oh, GOD!" Todd screamed, sucking my finger so sensually, my cock
throbbed as if Todd were sucking THAT.
His little nipple was round, and that reminded me of something
else. I slid my hand to his nipple to replace my mouth. My
fingers made love to it, almost as well as my lips had.
"Ohhh, uhhhhh," Todd moaned helplessly.
I took advantage of his sudden weakness, and raised his legs,
pushing them back--folding by brother's skinny little body in
half--and exposing that other round thing I was interested in.
First, I wanted to experiment with his nipple. I bent forward,
and let my mouth replace my hand.
I pressed hard with my tongue and slid it quickly over Todd's
sensitive nipple.
"Ahh!"
Inside my head, I was thinking, This is no 14-year-old. I
wondered if it would work with three licks.
"Ahh! Ahh! Ahh!"
It did. I wet my finger, and poised it over his tight, quivering
hole. Then I alternated between first my tongue sliding over his
nipple, and second slipping my fingers across his hot opening.
His groans were louder when my fingers slid across his hole.
"Ahh! AHHH! Ahh! AHHH!"
He was just a boy, some would say, but he had a man's passion in
his voice, and a man's throb in his respectably-sized cock. I
lubed my hard, 17-year-old dick with the lotion from the night
table. I pressed his legs tighter to his body with my chest. I
moved the tip of my cock to line up against my little brother's
love hole--the heat of it against my eager dick made me shiver.
"Go ahead, Pete--do it."
"Oh, God--are you sure?"
Please write me at Dom6789@hotmail.com. I'm dying to write the
next chapter, but I'd really love your feedback, first.
Thanks. --Pete
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