Date: Fri, 2 Mar 2012 18:25:41 -0800 (PST)
From: BR
Subject: The Village Idiot: Deleted Scenes

       This story is fictional. As always, don't read dirty stories on line
if you're not supposed to.


		    "The Village Idiot: Deleted Scenes"


       When I wrote "The Village Idiot", I realized that I had a story that
had a good chance of being rejected by Nifty due to excessive length. I
didn't want to submit the story in sections so I cut out several scenes. A
couple of the scenes were actually pretty important in terms of character
development and in adding depth to the story. The other scenes were meant
to give insight into the day to day routine of Camp Laurel Ridge, and were
not erotic scenes, so they got cut too. There are also a couple of nude
scenes and a sexual scene that had to go to as well. I wanted "The Village
Idiot" to be more of a nostalgia story than an erotic story, so it was a
tough decision to throw those scenes out. I saved them, and they are now
available here to read for anyone who liked the original story. Enjoy.





                                                                          1


 We all introduced ourselves to each other. David shook hands by taking the
others hand and giving it a vigorous pump, like you see little kids do. I
was thinking to myself that there was no way he was twelve, and that he
surely didn't have hair one on his dick. Then I realized that I was
virtually guaranteed to find out if he did or not, as the cabin offered
absolutely no privacy at all. There wasn't even any kind of lock on the
door.

         David went to the bunk below me and began unpacking his things
from a large duffel bag he was carrying. I noticed that he had quite a few
books with him. I had only brought a paperback of "The Return Of The
King"with me, but David had brought along a small library.

       "Where are you from?" I asked him as I sat on my footlocker.

       He started pulling bed sheets out of his duffle bag, looked at me
and paused.

       "Me?" He asked pointing to himself. Yes of course you, I thought.

       "Yeah, where you from?"

       "Camden Delaware." He replied.

       "You like the O's?" I asked. I wasn't a big sports fan but I did
like going to Orioles games with my dad sometimes.

       "Of course I do!" He replied crossly as he began putting his sheets
on his bunk.

       "Do you ever go to any games?" I inquired.

       "Uh... yeah. We have season tickets." He replied sarcastically, as
if I was supposed to already know that somehow.

       "Do you have good seats?" I asked.

       "They're ok," he replied with less attitude this time. "We're on the
third base line in the upper section."

       "Cool." I said. I got up and helped him put his sheets on his
bed. He didn't thank me but he did tell me that I could borrow one of his
books if I wanted to. I was hoping that I would be too busy to read books,
but at least I knew I would have that option.

       Ralph then announced that all of his campers were here and that we
would be having a group meeting...








                                                                            2


    I sat down on the bench to dry off my feet. "What is Lloyd's problem
any way?" I asked.
    "He doesn't want to be here." He replied as he pulled on his
shorts. "His parents sent him here from San Diego 'cause they can't stand
being around him either. "

       "He came all the way here from San Diego?" I asked.

       "Yep, and he's here all summer too." Replied Aaron as he put his
tshirt on and picked up his towel and soapdish. "See you." he said as he
went out the door. I put my bathrobe back on and headed back to my
cabin. Martin was writing a letter, David was lying on his bed reading and
Hayden was folding some of his shirts. I went up to Martin's bunk and and
looked at over at the letter he was writing, it was all in Danish. He
immediately closed up the pad to keep me from seeing what he was writing.

       "Martin, you know I can't read that!" I said with a grin.

       "It is still not any of your business. Don't be nosy shit." He said
and turned on his side with his back to me and continued writing his
letter. I shrugged and went over to my bunk to get dressed. I got some
clothes and my notepad out of the footlocker and put all of it on my bed. I
took off my bathrobe and stood naked while I got the pair of underwear I
had selected to put on. As I started to put it on I saw David peeking over
his book and his eyes on my dick. Once my underwear was on he disappeared
back behind his book like a rabbit going down a hole. I smiled to myself
and thought it was funny that he thought that my dick was more interesting
to him than his book.


         After I finished getting dressed I sat on my footlocker and began
writing a letter to my parents. After a while, Ralph came in and announced
that we were all taking a trip to the Equestrian Village and to be at the
firepit in five minutes. We all gathered and walked towards the stables in
a big teenaged herd. We walked down the main road past the lake. As soon as
we were past the lake we made a right turn on a road that ran along the
opposite shore. We stopped at a building to our left, which was the camp
medical center. The two women who ran the clinic came out and warned us
about snakes and chiggers and tics and poison ivy. After that we moved on
and soon we were at the Equestrian Village. The Equestrian Village was
co-ed for kids 8 to 15, but was usually mostly girls. In this particular
session it was all girls. They were milling about in equestrian gear, some
leading horses. I had been bitten by a horse when I was little so I
 tried to stay as far away from them as I could. It was very hot out and
the whole place had that manure smell, so I was starting to not want to be
there, although the sight of all the girls kept me interested. Hayden was
openly flirting with them despite his new girlfriend Lelei being right
there.

       I went off to the side and sat on a fence. David saw me and came
over and sat down next to me and wondered out loud when we were going to
have lunch. I was starting to think about that too. After a few minutes
that Greg kid came over and sat with us on the fence. He and I struck up a
conversation and it turned out we liked many of the same things. We both
had PS2's and were GTA fans. We also both liked "God Of War" which had
recently been released. We were both also into cooking and movies and we
both hated sports. I noticed while we talked that he would sometimes look
me over, and I would do the same to him. We would also sometimes find
ourselves just silently staring into each others eyes for a few seconds
before we would quickly look away from each other. I was starting to feel
confused about some of the feelings he was giving me. I also found myself
sneaking some glances at David on the other side of me as well. One of the
times
 I looked at him he was staring down at my crotch.

       We saw the crowd of teenagers all start moving in a big group. Tracy
started waving to us to come along and we all jumped off the fence and
followed the crowd into the outdoor arena. David's lunch query was answered
with the sight of several weber grills all cooking hot dogs and
hamburgers. We all got in line and were fed with copious amounts of
coleslaw and potato chips to go with the burgers and dogs. Afterword we
took a tour of the village, saw the horses and checked out the indoor
arena. I went towards the bleacher on the side to sit down. Just then Lloyd
came up behind me and dumped a handful of the mulch-manure-dirt mixture
that covered the ground down the back of my shirt. I turned around and he
was laughing. As soon as we made eye contact he stopped laughing, flew into
a rage and knocked me down to the ground. He pinned me down, closed up my
nose with his hand, and then picked up a handful of the stuff and started
shoving it
 into my mouth. I couldn't breathe and it was getting into my eyes so I
couldn't see.

       "Geek! Loser! Faggot!" He snarled as he picked up a second big
handful and started shoving it into my mouth. I closed off my throat to try
to keep the debris from getting pushed into my lungs. I started digging my
teeth into his arm. A thought flashed into my mind that he was going to
kill me right there and then. Suddenly he was pulled off of me and I
cleared the debris away from my eyes and spat it out of my mouth and
started coughing. Kai and Tracy had pulled him off of me and Ralph was
running over. Lloyd then yelled "Fuck you, nigger!" and took a swing at
Kai's face. Kai ducked out of the way and grabbed Lloyd's fist and put him
in a head lock with his fist held behind his back. Lloyd began bellowing
and kicking like an animal. Tracy helped me to my feet and I vomited on the
ground. I was still coughing and my eyes were watering, but I could see all
the other campers staring wide eyed and open mouthed at the scene. Ralph
made Kai
 release Lloyd and the counsellors all lead him out of the building while
he yelled curses and threats. Tracy asked me if I was ok and I nodded that
I was, and then started crying. I sat on the bench to get my composure as
Martin, David, Kai and Greg came over. They formed a protective circle
around me and each asked me if I was ok, which I thought was really nice of
them.

       "Lloyd's an asshole." Greg said.  There was something about the way
he said it that sounded really funny and I started laughing. Eventually I
got back up. Martin patted me on my back and we rejoined the festivities.

       After an hour or so, we returned to the Senior Village. I was still
dirty and grungy from Lloyd's assault, and my clothes and myself both
reaked of horse manure. I got to the cabin, grabbed my towel and
toiletries, and went to the showers. The first thing I did was brush my
teeth, not one but four times to get the manure taste out. I had been given
water and soda afterwords, but it did little to help. I went into the
shower room and saw Ralph in there under the far left of the three shower
heads washing his hair. I disrobed and went to the far right shower head
and turned on the water. Ralph looked over and saw me.

       "Oh hey, John." He said. "Are you doing ok?"

      "Yeah I'm ok." I said as the refreshing water ran over my head.

       Ralph was rubing a bar of soap over his chest. "You're not going to
see Lloyd anymore. He's been expelled and banned from Senior Village. He's
going to be staying with the ground crew for the rest of the summer."

       I began shampooing my hair. "He's here for the whole summer right?"

       "He sure is, and he's going to be spending it digging and sweating
now. Fucking dumbass."

       As I washed my hair I looked over at Ralph's dick. It was big, at
least seven inches, and very thick. He had an enormous ballsack and his
dick wrapped around the bottom of it. He had a mass of hair around his dick
and balls which ran up his chest. He began soaping his groin up. I looked
for a few seconds and then went back to staring straight ahead.

       "So now he's going to have access to garden tools?" I asked.

       Ralph laughed. "Don't worry, he's not going to fuck with those
guys. If he behaves himself he might get back in next session, but I'm not
expecting that to happen, at least not if I have anything to say about it."
He said as he began rinsing off. He shut off the water and went to the
bench to dry off. I continued to soap up and shampoo to make sure all the
debris was washed clean.

       "Hey John." Ralph said. I turned around, and as he pulled his shorts
on, he said "If anyone gives you any trouble, or if you see anyone giving
someone trouble, just let one of us know, ok? We're always here."

       "Thanks Ralph." I said.

       Ralph smiled and went out the door. I stayed under the cleansing
spray for a few more minutes. I turned off the water and sat on the towel
and dried myself off. I finished drying off and returned to my cabin in the
late afternoon sunshine. As I walked back I thought about all the cock I
had seen that day. I went through the list in my head. Martin, David,
Hayden, Evan, Lloyd, Ralph, Kai, Matt, Burkett...Oh shit! I forgot about
playing ping pong with Burkett! I went over to his cabin and knocked on the
door Burkett and a couple of his roomates were just sitting around, so he
was glad to have something to do then. We went over to the ping pong table
in the common room. He crushed me. He absolutely destroyed me in three
sets. The third game I didn't even score. He apparently was a tournament
player, no wonder he wanted to play Ping Pong. As I watched him I couldn't
help but think about how his little dick stuck straight out in the shower
that
 morning. It made me unable to get mad at him for destroying me so badly in
Ping Pong.







                                                                   3




       Wednesday was July 4th. To celebrate the national holiday a huge
field day for the entire camp was planned. We had a big synchronized parade
with all of the villages marching simultaneously to the big athletic field,
carrying sparklers and singing patriotic songs. At the field we heard
speeches from the camp directors, the camp owner, and a couple of
politicians. After that we had a big picnic and barbeque with an assortment
of activities. There was archery, bean bags, running races, and a softball
game. Kids were playing pickup soccer and football games everywhere. I hung
out with Martin, Greg, and David the whole time. Hayden was off somewhere
with his girlfriend. At one point that Caitlynn girl whom I met at
basketball a few days before came and sat with us. When she sat I saw from
the gap in her shorts that she was apparently not wearing any underwear and
her pubic hair was clearly visible. I stared at it openly as she almost
seemed
 to want me to see it. At one point she also leaned over while pulling her
shirt forward and her unbrassiered boobs were clearly visible in the
sunshine. I thought she was really cute. I looked to the side and saw the
ground crew eating off of paper plates and drinking sodas. Lloyd was with
them and was wearing a bandana, shades, and a wife beater tshirt. He had
his arms folded and was chewing on a toothpick. He looked like he had
finally found his niche. There was a talent show, and then a bluegrass band
played. At one point Ralph went up on stage with his acoustic guitar and
jammed with them. We spent most of the rest of the day swimming and that
night we returned to the field for a big fireworks display. After the
fireworks we all returned to our cabin, stripped to our underwear, got into
our bunks and fell right to sleep without exchanging a single word.








                                                                    4



        The night after we returned from our canoe trip there was an
announcement that the Senior Village would be having an ice cream
social. It was held in the dining room and all of the Village Idiots were
there for it. Of course it deterierated into total
 chaos, with whip cream, ice cream,
 soda water, and chocolate syrup all over everybody and everything in an
ungodly, sticky mess.

       On Friday, the last full day at Camp Laurel Ridge, I decided to go
play one last basketball game with the guys. I got to be on Kai's team so
of course we won. Afterwords I went into the bathroom in the gym to take a
shower. As I went in I heard that one of the showers was on. I looked in
and a young camper was showering by himself in the big room. He looked
seven or eight years old and was happily twirling around under the
shower. I recognized him as one of the kids I saw in the shower room the
week before. He was skinny and had dark brown hair and looked like that kid
from "Searching For Bobby Fisher". I took off my clothes and walked into
the showers and went to a shower head two down to his right. As I walked in
he was visibly startled and he covered himself with his hands and backed
away a little. I turned on the shower and started hosing down. The showers
were low so I had to pivit it horizontally toward me so that I could get my
 hair wet. I looked over and he was no longer covering himself. He was
standing there and watching me with his tiny little shriveled up,
circumcised penis showing. He wasn't staring at my dick that I could see,
it looked like he was watching me struggle to use the five feet off the
ground shower nozzle.

       He turned his water off left the shower room. I finished up my
shower a few minutes later and went to the bench. To my surprise he was
still there, sitting naked on the bench next to my towel to my left, and
staring at my dick as I walked out of the shower. I smiled at him when I
sat down and he smiled back. I began drying myself off. I looked over and
he was staring at my dick. He didn't have the mesmerized look that David
gets, he was just looking at it. I looked at his little dick and judging by
how small and shriveled it was I guessed he wasn't particularly impressed,
he was probably too young to be.

       "My name is John. What's your name?" I asked him as I dried my hair
off.

       "Kevin." He said in a barely audible high voice.

       "Nice to meet you Kevin." I said as I reached out my hand. He smiled
and shook it.

       "Are you Pee Wee or Junior?" I asked him.

       "Junior. I'm eight." He said.

       "Do you like the camp here?" I asked.

       "Yes." He replied.

       "There's lots of things to do, right?" I asked again.

       "Yes." He answered again. He then took his towel and started
toweling off his legs, pretty much imitating what I was doing. I looked him
over and noticed he had a large, splotchy birthmark on his right thigh. He
was staring at my dick again. I guess it probably looked enormous to
him. He was probably also checking out the hair.

       "Is this your birthmark?" I asked as I ran the tip of my left index
finger over his thigh, tracing the birthmark.

       He grinned and giggled slightly. "Yeah." He replied.

       "Mine is on my balls." I told him. It's true. I have a small, oval
shaped birthmark on the underside of my scrotum right under my right nut.

       "Really?" giggled Kevin.

       "Yeah, let me show you." I said.

       I then got up and put my leg over to his left thigh. I then pulled
my scrotum upward and he leaned over to look with his head cocked to his
right. "See?" I said.

       "I can see everything." He said, grinning away. I laughed at that
and sat back down to finish drying off and he went back to staring at my
dick. I then put my underwear and shorts back on. He started putting on his
white jockey shorts, which looked at least two sizes too big for him. I put
on my shirt and sneakers, collected my towel and got up.

       "See you, Kevin." I said.

       "See you." Kevin said back to me with a smile as he finished putting
his underwear on.

       I walked out of the bathroom and exited the gym. I took the wooded
path back to the Senior Village and to my cabin. I walked in and Martin and
David were both standing in the middle of the room. It appeared that I had
interupted something.

       "What are you guys up to?" I said.

       "Nothing." said Martin who retreated to his bunk.

       "Martin it's ok. He knows. I told him." David said.

       "What did you tell him?" Martin asked, upset.

       "It's ok Martin. He's not going to tell anyone." David said.

       "Are you talking about jerking Martin off? " I said to David.

       "Oh come on Dave! You not supposed to tell!" Martin exclaimed.

       "He's cool Martin. He does it too. Come on I want to do it. Please?
John can keep watch out the window to make sure Hayden or somebody doesn't
come in. Come on, please? We leave tomorrow." He begged.

       "Yeah Martin, I've seen your dick a hundred times since I've been
here." I said. "I've seen you piss out of it, wash it and I've seen it up
close. What difference does it make if I see it boned?"

       "Ok. Just don't tell anybody." He said and went back to the middle
of the room. I positioned myself by the window to make sure no one came
in. David pulled down Martin's shorts and boxers and his dick popped right
up. It went out straight and then dramatically curved upward at the middle
of the shaft. It looked very sausage like. David got down on his knees, put
his hand around it and began jerking the skin back, eventually exposing
Martin's purplish looking head. David ran his fingers over the head, kind
of caressing it. He then skinned Martin all the way back. He leaned over
and started licking the tip of Martin's dick like a lollypop. He would fold
his tongue between his teeth and rub the tongue over Martin's head. Martin
had his head back and his eyes closed.

       "Where did you learn to do that, Dave? That looks like it feels
really good."  I said.

       "I don't know. I just do it." He said.

       "Well when we tried it you almost bit my freakin' dick off!" I
said. Martin laughed at that.

       "Well I guess I've gotten better at it since then." He said. He then
stuck his tongue out at me, turned back to Martin's dick with the tongue
out, and started running it over Martin's pee slit.

       "Geez, wow. Chris isn't going to know what hit him next time he sees
you." I laughed. David turned and winked at me, and then began jerking
Martin off, starting off slow and getting steadily faster while tightening
his grip, just like I do. Martin began shaking and grabbing at the bed post
behind him. He knees began wobbling and his breath came out in heavy
pants. He then threw his head back, made a kind of gurgling sustained
grunt, and ropes of cum began shooting out of his dick. He speckled David
pretty good, one rope went up to the ceiling, and another barrage landed
just short of our bunk. David wiped off Martin's dick with his shirt, ran a
finger over the cum that had hit his face, and popped it in his
mouth. "Wow"was all I could think of. Just then I looked over and saw
Hayden coming across the compound. Martin pulled his shorts up just in the
nick of time as he barged in through the door. I looked over and David was
on his
 bed with a book and Martin was acting like he was shifting his bed sheets
around or something. Hayden had a small trophy with him.

       "Look what I got." He said as he held up the trophy. "I won the BMX
trials today." He then turned to me with a suspicious look. "Why are YOU
standing there?" He asked. David giggled and buried his head behind his
book.


       We celebrated our last night as Village Idiots with a pizza party
and a movie in the main building. The next morning rolled around and it was
time to leave. David's parents came early so he was gone before
breakfast. He stepped out of the cabin with his Orioles cap and his duffle
bag, and as he waved goodbye to us, I felt sad that I would probably never
see him again. I looked over at Martin and he looked like he was sad
too. By noon almost everyone was gone and new campers were moving in. Girls
were crying and hugging each other. I said goodbye to as many people as I
could. Martin's parents got there and as he was leaving he gave a single
wave to me and disappeared forever. Shortly after I saw my own parents
approach. We hugged and Mom told me how healthy and fit I looked. As we
drove off I looked back at Camp Laurel Ridge, the place that changed my
life forever, one last time.