Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2016 07:11:08 +0000 (UTC)
From: Takeru Mono <prop_up_up@yahoo.com>
Subject: Captain America and the Young Avengers: Chapter 31

DISCLAIMER: The following story is a work of fiction. All the characters
depicted in story belong to and are copyrighted by Marvel Comics and its
subsidiaries. I am in no way related to the company and have no ownership
over the characters. This is fan made work. This story depicts males in
sexual situations, just so you know. Thank you.

Tommy was running across New York when he passed by the old clubhouse. He
hadn't actually noticed it as he zipped around. It was the scent of old
paper and ink that caught him off-guard. No matter how many times they
cleaned it, they couldn't get rid of the smell. It had come to mean home
for him.

Now it lay empty.

He zipped to the supermarket, bought cleaning supplies and ran back to the
clubhouse. The old gal could definitely used some sprucing up. The smell of
dust and disrepair permeated the room as he entered. It looked even worse
than when they first came in. There were cobwebs everywhere and a thick
layer of dust had accumulated over almost all the furniture. The place was
unrecognizable.

Tommy would fix that. He was supposed to meet with David at three
o'clock. It was only 3:10. He still had five more minutes to be late. That
was more than enough time to do some spring cleaning.

Although it felt like weeks, Tommy pushed through as made sure the place
was sparkling clean. He would never admit it, but he actually like keeping
things neat and tidy. It helped that every piece of furniture held memories
for him. There was that chair where he and Kate had made out after one
night of extremely heavy drinking. There was the cleaning closet where he
hid in while watching Billy and Teddy make out. There was the bathroom were
he accidentally caught Cassie and Jonas making out. Essentially the
clubhouse was their own personal space for making out. It was the best time
of Tommy's life.

By the time he got to David, it was just 3:16 and the man still didn't look
as bored. He needed to wait some more. Tommy ran home, heated a pizza with
his hands, scarfed it down and went back. Now he was at least 20 minutes
late.

"I know your doing this on purpose you insufferable bastard."  David
frowned at him. He did the thing where he pushed up his glasses instead of
explaining more. He was an ex-mutant who had the power to absorb all
knowledge and skills from his opponents. While he lost all his powers after
the Scarlet Witch went insane, he did retain all the skills he had borrowed
before, making him both the smartest and most annoying person on their
team. He had joined the team after befriending Tommy. Tommy had been
championing the name know-it-all for him for weeks. David didn't find it
funny.

"Come on, like you have anything better to than hanging out with me." Tommy
sneered. The team had reunited for a brief second to combat a
extra-dimensional evil Billy had accidentally summoned. After that, they
had gone their separate ways without officially disbanding the team. Kate
went to play small-time hero with Man-Hawkeye. If they were fucking, Tommy
didn't want to know unless he was invited. America had joined a team of
crazy extremists with way too much power and way too much control
issues. He couldn't wait to see how that would blow-up. Billy and Teddy had
joined Robert De La Costa's team. That team seemed to be made of whoever
was available at the time. Tommy felt offended the couple didn't just stick
with him and David if they were going to play hero. So in summary, they
were all a disaster separated.

"I could be working right now." David scrunched up his forehead even
further.

"Now that seems so much more fun than hanging out with me." Tommy laughed,
giving David a playful slap on the shoulder. It was always cute when he
tried playing coy. Despite their obvious differences, Tommy and David had a
natural chemistry.

"Fine. There's a few runaway teenagers we can look into. Their foster
parents are worried sick about them. I volunteered us to find them." David
had been doing the mission gathering for them. So far, they were just doing
community chores. It wasn't much but at least they were helping out.

"Let me see that." Tommy flipped through David's impeccably organized
notes. "I know these kids. Their foster parents are neglectful if not
downright abusive. The kids have already gathered enough evidence to
present them to their case workers. They're hiding out until their pro-bono
lawyer can get all the details straight. The parents probably asked you so
they could catch the kids."

"Damn. I knew the parent were hiding something. I thought their kid was an
inhuman or mutant." David frowned. While he had the the theoretical
knowledge of the smartest people int he world, David still lacked the
wisdom to deploy that knowledge. When it came to living on the wrong side
of the law, no one on the Young Avengers held a candle to Tommy. "What can
we do to help?"

"Nothing. One of the kids wants to gain guardianship of his fellow
siblings. He's building this case all by himself to show that while a few
months short of eighteen, he can be given guardianship of his siblings and
be treated as an adult. It's impressive really. He reminds me of you
somewhat." Tommy tried do as much as he can to help. But people on the
streets tend to find the best solutions for themselves. All they had to do
was give him the opportunity to do so.

"Cool." David nodded. He was looking at Tommy oddly again. "You are way
smarter than you look you know that."

Tommy hid his smile. "Anything else?"

"None. That's all I had. Superhero teams are becoming more prolific
again. People just don't want the help of two dumb kids." David
sighed. "You got any ideas?"

"Actually. I do." Tommy grinned. He grabbed David, and carried him bridal
style. A minute later, they were back the clubhouse.

"I will repeat this every time even if I know you won't listen. Warn me
before you do that." David yelled angrily. He looked completely
disheveled. It was the reason Tommy loved doing it so much. When he finally
calmed down and composed himself, he finally looked around. "Where are we?"

"This is our old clubhouse." Tommy said with a big flourish of his arms. He
had returned it to its former glory all by himself.

"Looks a little shabby." David pointed out. He swiped his finger on the
breakfast counter, and was about to pinch a speck of dust.

Tommy ran too him, swiped his finger clean, and then did another sweep of
the premises, making sure everything was clean this time.

"At least it's clean." David said after rubbing his fingers together. "Big
space. One of Kate's old publishing houses?"

"Yup. We can use it however we want. Her dad won't care." Tommy went to the
fridge. He always made sure the place had enough food. It was a sad to see
it so empty.

"Kate's had a falling out with her dad. Technically, he agreed to let
villains kill her. We're trespassing Tommy." David was so uptight
sometimes. Even more so than Eli.

"Chill man. No one is going to come here on a random afternoon." Tommy
waved him off. Their large screen TV was still here. He figured it would
have been stolen already. "Get yourself comfortable while I go buy some
food."

"Seriously? That's your plan? We just hang out here." David looked
annoyed. He pushed his glasses back up to his face.

"Yes. We actually hung out. The world isn't always ending. We actually
liked each others company. Now go watch some TV. I'll be back in five."
Tommy left. And then he immediately came back with his hand
outstretched. David rolled his eyes but gave Tommy another ten
bucks. "We're in New York. What am I supposed to get with this?"

"Run to Jersey. Money doesn't go on trees."

"Yes it does." Tommy stuck out his tongue. But he left anyway. David was
right, Tommy should have been buying his groceries on the cheaper parts of
the state. He could save so much on food. With all the calories he needed,
the food savings was worth the extra effort.

He ended up at Costco, where he had to slow down and shop. It was always
hard to explain products flying off the shelves and into a cart. Plus, he
was superhero now. He had to pay for things. Shoplifting was technically a
crime. It took him fifteen minutes to get everything he needed. The cashier
was ungodly slow. Tommy had finished Machiavelli in the time it took her to
scan the items. He fired a quick text to David.

Bored as balls. Next time you do the shopping. It takes so long.

The reply was immediate.

Don't scare the security guys, no super speed shopping.

Typical David chastising instead of commiserating. Tommy wouldn't share his
tomato salsa with him. He quickly zoomed back into the house, heading
straight for the fridge and cupboard. He was stocking the items when he
realized, he forgot to buy the actual chips. He zoomed out again.

His phone buzzed.

Where are you?

Still buying chips. Can't find the right isle.

Tommy looked around Costco was fucking huge. He finally got the chips,
walked over to a different counter lady. Once he was out, he ran back
home. He was about to open his mouth and complain, when he saw the large TV
playing.

It was porn. Straight laced David was watching porn.

Tommy quickly ran outside. He flipped open his phone and typed a text,
brain firing off on all cylinders. He didn't know what he was going to do
just that he was going to do it.

Going to be stuck here a while. Some lady is missing her cat, will help her
look for it.

His phone chimed back with a quick response.

Okay.

Tommy didn't actually think of David sexually. He was friends with the guy
for sure. But they hadn't really hung out for that long. David did
technically kiss him that one time. But that somehow brought him back from
whatever place he was trapped in. He didn't actually remember what happened
there. Kate had just broken up with No-Var so he focused mostly on her.

Technically, Tommy hadn't had sex in a long time. Would it ruin his
friendship with David? Impossible. The guy was open to Teddy and Billy, and
he did catch David checking Teddy out on more than one occasion. It was
only fitting that Tommy got to make-out with someone as he refurbished the
clubhouse.

He zoomed in again, making sure David hadn't noticed him. He ran circles
around David in super speed to gauge the situation without being
seen. David was watching the TV with slack-jawed fascination. His shirt was
untucked from his pants, exposing a hard flat stomach. He had unbuckled his
pants but kept both his hands on the couch. There was a sizable bulge in
his crocth. The movie that was playing consisted of a massive orgy with
tons of men and women. Tommy couldn't tell if it was a Bi-movie or not.

He ran outside again. David could be somewhat prudish sometimes despite
being liberal minded. If Tommy went in to early, David might stop. He was a
lot smarted than their other friends. Simple tricks wouldn't work on the
them. He see through Tommy's plan to get him in bed easily. Tommy had to
make sure David junior was sufficiently worked up that David brain wouldn't
mind Tommy joining in the fun. Tommy sped up and ran towards the drugstore
to get condoms and lube. One could never be too sure.

He took another quick check on David. The nerd had now grabbed his cock in
his pants. Tommy couldn't tell how hard David was because of his loose
boxers. Tommy decided to go in anyway. He couldn't wait another moment to
free his dick.

"Hey David. Whatcha doing?" Tommy appeared in front of him.

"For fuck sake." David jumped from the couch. He immediately grabbed a
pillow and covered his crotch are. "What are you doing here so early. You
said you'd take a while."

"I did. Now I'm back. Why are you looking so flustered." Tommy made a show
of turning around. He made fake gasp complete with his palm to his
mouth. "Pornography! How could you David? A kitten dies every time you
masturbate." Tommy teased. He got a pillow to his face for that.

"Shut up. Why do you guys even have a porn channel? You don't get this on
normal cable."

"There were four teenage boys on the team. You think we wouldn't find a way
to get free porn?" Tommy rolled his eyes. He plopped down on the couch
beside David, making sure their legs brushed against easy other.

"No way. Are you saying you guys use to..." David trailed off as if the
words were equal to saying Voldemort.

"Of course we did. Whenever the girls weren't around." Technically they
only used it to watch porn that one time with the cookie. But David didn't
need to know that.

"Wait which of you guys? I can't imagine Eli doing that. From the way you
guys talk about him, he's even more uptight than me. Billy and Teddy? They
have each other. Tommy." David said in the tone he used to berate
Tommy. "Did you download porn so you could jack off by yourself."

"Of course not. All the guys did it except for the Nate cause he was gone
by then and Jonas cause he was a robot. We didn't know if he could." Tommy
should have figured this wasn't going to be as easy as catching David
redhanded and and swapping hands. The man thought too much.

"Isn't it incest between you and Billy. That must have been weird." David
flinched.

"Oh my god. We were just fooling around. Stop talking. Stop sucking the fun
out of everything." Tommy threw his hands in the air in exasperation. His
hard-on had wilted thanks to David over thinking everything. "Are we doing
this or what?"

"Seriously? You're actually proposing a circle jerk." David stood up and
faced Tommy.

Tommy rolled his eyes. He flicked of his shirt. "Yes. You in?"

David looked at Tommy hard. He sighed and then sat back down. He took of
his shirt again.

"Yes. What are we watching anyway?" Tommy looked at the screen. One of the
girls was getting fucked in the ass. The large cock stretched her asshole
wide. Her pussy was slick with moisture. It was pretty hot.

"Senseless porn. Their just having an orgy."

"Come on. I like a little story behind my porn. What do you like?" Tommy
grabbed the remote and began flicking through the channels. He missed the
Captain America sex parody. That actor had been so hot. It was too bad the
series had ended.

"Stop there." David suddenly said. It was a film with a guy bound to the
wall. There were two women in black overcoats walking around him. There was
a lot of leather involved.

"Wow David. I take it back. You are not a fun killer. That is some kinky
shit." Tommy didn't know what was about to happen but it was exciting. He
shimmied out of his shorts.

"Would you stop getting naked. It hasn't even started yet. I'm just
curious. I don't watch leather porn." David defended himself. One of his
hands was covering his cock though.

The actresses methodically pulled go the man's clothing until he was fully
naked. His cock although soft was big. The one actress got a leather crop
and smacked it against his thigh. It left an angry red welt.

"Uhm. I'm not sure I like where this is going." Tommy flinched at she
whipped him again. He wasn't a fan of pain or being held down. The movie
was actually making him uncomfortable.

"Just wait and see." David was still watching aptly, his full attention on
the scene. He didn't even sneak a glance Tommy.

The women then started making out in front of the man. They pulled off
their overcoats revealing, their naked bare breasts. They were wearing
leather corset around that exposed their boobs, stomach and pussy.

"Holy fuck. Thats hot." Tommy reached into his pants as one of the girls
turned around. There was only a tiny strip of leather covering her
asshole. She rubbed her pussy on the man's bare legs.

"That's nothing. Imagine your teacher is wearing that everyday to
class. And she's not only one of the most powerful telepaths in the world
but also a grade A psychopath. Corsets are not fun for me." David grabbed
the remote and changed the channel.

"Oh my god. Stop being so unsexy." Tommy threw his head back in
frustration. He was just getting his groove on.

"Why are you so intent on jerking off together. Are you planning to
blackmail me? Catch me on video?" David scrutinized Tommy's face.

"Can't a guy just enjoy jerking off with a mate? Not everything has a super
villain plot." Tommy looked David straight in the eye.

"It only makes sense if you're a little gay. Maybe a soft 4 on the Kinsey
scale." David stern expression faltered for a bit. And thats when finally
Tommy finally understood, where David's hesitation was coming from.

"I'm bi or pan or whatever it is. I like sex. Both guys and girls. Both if
its possible. I've experimented with a lot of things. You don't have to
worry about being labeled anything. I for sure won't care." Tommy grabbed
David's hips to prove it.

"What have you done with a guy?" David swallowed. He was watching carefully
as Tommy's finger worked it way to the middle of his pants.

"Everything." Tommy grinned. He pulled David's pants down revealing a large
tent on his loose boxers.

"Jerking off?"

"Yes." Tommy answered back. He squeezed David's length. It was thick and
girthy. It had been so long since Tommy had another man's cock in his
face. He had forgotten how powerful a hard cock could feel.

"Sucking another guy?" David asked. His breathing had become more
labored. He pulled off his shirt, revealing his packed body.

"Most definitely. Deep throat even." Tommy rubbed the head of David's cock
through his boxers. Circumcised.

"How about anal?" David managed to ask in between breaths. He was clearly
enjoying everything Tommy was doing.

"Yes. It feels amazing." Tommy tucked his fingers on the waistband of
David's shorts and pulled down.

David's large brown cock bobbed up and down fully hard. It was nice and
thick. Tommy would have trouble getting it to his throat having had so
little practice. He loved challenges. He was about to kiss the tip when
David suddenly pulled away. "What now?" He whined.

Instead of answering with sharp complaint or another question, David just
blushed and looked away. He spoke in a soft voice. "I want to try with
you."

"I'm down with that." Tommy laughed. He sat back on the sofa and put his
hands at the back of his head. "I'm all yours to experiment with. Just
don't bite my dick off."

"Shouldn't we do this on a bed or something. The sofa feels kind of cheap."
David looked around.

"Just do something already. We're not losing your virginity." Tommy rolled
his eyes. He was so ready for anything to happen. "You aren't a virgin are
you?" Because if he was, Tommy had moral obligation to make sure it felt
special for him.

"I'm not. I've had sex. Just not with any guys." David flushed. Still he
knelt in front of Tommy, and placed his hands on both Tommy's thighs.

"Finally." Tommy whimpered. Any other complicated thought left his brain
once he felt David's touch.

"May I?" David pointed towards Tommy's bright green briefs.

"Yes. Ages ago. Please take them off."

David nodded and pulled them down with one quick stroke. Tommy forgave him
for taking so long, once he saw David react to his dick. The nerd was
looking at intently as if it was the most beautiful thing in the world. He
hesitated, then reached out to wrap his hand around Tommy's shaft.

"That's it." Tommy threw his head back in pleasure. He murmured more
encouragements as David squeezed experimentally. The other man's hand were
soft and smooth. David slowly began to stroke him.

"Feel good?" David asked, looking at Tommy with such honest eyes, Tommy
couldn't get mad at him for taking so long. Good things come to those who
wait.

"Yes. Let me return the favor."

"Later. I want to try things first." David reached out to touch Tommy's
abs, trailing his palm over the ridges.

"Fuck." Tommy cursed. The slow pace made everything feel more sensual than
it was supposed to be. With Teddy, Billy and Eli, they were always rushing
or competing. He had never done slow ever in his life. It felt
excruciatingly good.

David raised his hand higher, flicking Tommy's nipples until they were
hard. He studied Tommy's expression.

Tommy was sure David was analyzing everything with his keen mind. The man
forgot nothing. When he allowed David to experiment, he had submitted
himself as a test subject. He should have realized David was going to take
the scientific method even in sex.

"You're leaking." David pointed out. There was a pearly drop of precum from
Tommy's dick.

Tommy hissed as David rubbed the sensitive tip of his cock. He played with
fluid, watching sticky string form on his fingertips.

"That's what happens when guys are really turned on." Tommy sneered at
David. The fact that this was his first time, made it clear the nerd hadn't
had good sex.

"Ever taste it?" David sniffed his fingers.

"I've swallowed cum straight from the tap. It's good. You should try."
Tommy grinned and licked his lips.

"Prove it." David swiped more precum off Tommy's dick and held it to his
face.

Tommy laughed. He took in David's outstretched finger and sucked on it
hard. He rolled his tongue all over the outstretched digit. He made sure
David would know what next to put in his mouth.

"Holy fucking shit. You really do suck cock." David pulled his finger
away. His cheeks were red, reaching all the way up to his ears. The purple
head of his cock throbbed angrily.

"I can do much more than that." Tommy smile wickedly.

"Let me try first." David swallowed. He grabbed Tommy's cock with a firm
grip and brought his face close. "It looks huge man."

"Finally." Tommy shut his eyes, ready to bask in the pleasure.

"Your clean right? No STD's, aids?" David asked completely ruining the
mood.

Tommy resisted the urge to shout. He calmly answered. "Yes. I get checked
every month. We can go over my medical records later."

"Okay." David breathed out.

It started with a kiss, a tentative press of lips against cock.

"Fuuuuucccckkkkk." Tommy let out a long curse. It was taking all his
willpower not to push hips forward and just get inside that mouth.

David didn't seem to notice. He rubbed the cock along his lips testing its
texture. Finally he opened his mouth and swallowed.

"That's a good boy." Tommy groaned in relief. David's mouth was warm, wet,
and full of teeth. He quickly pushed David's head away. "Teeth, teeth.

"Sorry." David fell on his back. His cock bobbed up and down angrily. There
was a string of precum that was going to connect to the floor.

"Wrap your teeth with your lips. Like this." Tommy demonstrated. "Did you
like it?"

"It wasn't bad." David admitted. He took Tommy's cock again. This time it
only took him a second before he took it in his mouth.

Tommy stroked the back of David's head, encouraging him whenever he did
something right. He wasn't a good at giving blow jobs yet. It was still
sloppy and messy, but his eagerness more than made up for it. At first he
was only playing with the head. Then he got more confident and started
swirling his tongue over it. When Tommy moaned, David did it again. He took
more of Tommy's cock into his mouth. He gagged when Tommy's cock reached
the end of his throat.

David pulled away. His lips were puffy, and his eyes were moist. He looked
throughly debauched.

"How do you like it?" Tommy licked his lips.

"It's not so bad." David licked from the balls all the way to the tip
making Tommy shiver. "You getting close?"

"Nope." Tommy grinned.

"Seriously? My mouth is tired already." David pinched his jaw.

Tommy grinned. It was his turn. He stood up and pushed David down on the
couch. "It happens. Sucking cock takes some getting used to."

He forced David to lie down along the length of the couch. Then he
straddled him, pressing their cocks hot cocks together. They were about the
same length. He frotted against David, letting their rigid poles rub
against each other.

"Fuck. Stop." David grabbed onto Tommy's hips. "That feels so fucking
amazing. Is this a thing gay guys do?"

Tommy just grinned, pushed his hips forward. David arched his back in
pressure and squeezed Tommy's hips tighter.

"I don't want to cum just yet. Please." David said in between
breaths. Precum had begun to pool at his navel.

"What else you want to try? Cause I'm pretty sure anything I do will have
you cumming." Tommy laughed. He gave a David's hard cock a squeeze causing
him jerk in pleasure. His hand immediately shot up to grab Tommy's arm to
stop Tommy from playing with his dick.

"Just. Just give me a sec." David took in a large breath. His chest rose
and fell dramatically with each inhale. He was covering his eyes with his
forearm. His body was obviously enjoying but his brain was still trying to
catch up. Tommy needed to fix that.

"You do know we're young right. I could be raring to go in minutes. And we
can do this anytime you want. No strings." Tommy pushed his hips forward
again, only to be held back by David again. David was turning out to be the
most frustrating lover Tommy had ever had.

"Can we try kissing?" David whispered. He couldn't quite meet Tommy's eyes.

"Yes." Tommy leaned forward and placed both hands on either side of David's
face. He leaned in close, just until their breath started mixing. He looked
directly at David's chocolate eyes. He parted his lips slightly. Now it was
up to David to close the gap.

It didn't take him long. David pressed their lips together. Like everything
he did, it was slow and analytical. He swiped his tongue over Tommy's lips,
and the pressed it with the tip. Then David went wild.

It was like a switch had flipped in his friend. David was absolutely
ravenous, claiming Tommy's as his own. The kiss was heated and passionate,
catching Tommy completely off-guard. Soon David was even rutting against
him.

Tommy thanked the gods David finally let go. He wrapped his arms around
David's back and pushed his hips along. Their bodies slid against each
other. He could feel David's powerful muscles pressing against him.

"I'm getting close." David whimpered as he pulled away from the kiss.

"Just let go." Tommy whispered. He kissed David's neck sending the nerd
into a frenzy.

He could feel David's entire body spasm against his. Streak of hot cum
coated his stomach as David grunted through his climax.

"That's it." Tommy ran his hand over David's arm soothingly.

"What about you? Did you cum?" David tried to sit up. He grabbed Tommy's
dick.

"Not yet. You look a little worn out. Let me handle it." Tommy pushed
David's hand away.

"You sure I can't do anything." David said weakly. He did look tired. His
stamina was something Tommy had to work on.

"Just lie there and enjoy the show." Tommy grinned. He scooped up David's
copious cum and lathered it all over his dick. It worked well as lube
slicking up his cock against the friction of his strokes. It wouldn't take
long for him to reach climax after what they had done.

David was giving Tommy his full attention. He was stroking Tommy's hip
gently, goading him on.

"Put a finger in my ass." Tommy pushed himself forward, straddling David's
chest. He guided David's finger to his taint. "Just press on it. Yes like
that."

Tommy moaned as David followed his instruction. He even kept up with
Tommy's strokes. One of David's hands reached up to squeeze Tommy's
nipples. His student was a quick study. Tommy placed his dick in between
David's chest and began rutting against the well-developed mounds.

"Do it. Come all over me." David said, pressing harder against Tommy's
taint. He was taking in the sight of Tommy, probably memorizing each
expression Tommy was making.

"I'm coming." Tommy edge forward, stroking his cock on top of David's
face. His climax was building up. David licked the tip sending Tommy over
the edge. He painted David's face with his cum, shooting all over David's
glasses and mouth. David urged him on, pressing against Tommy's prostate
from his taint.

Tommy sat back in daze as the waves of ecstasy subsided. His ass fell on
David's already hard cock.

"That was so hot." David said as he sat up. His glasses were completely
soaked in cum. There was droplet on his lips which he proceeded to lick
clean. He then did the thing where he pushed his cum covered glasses up on
the bridge of his nose. Nothing looked sexier.

"You're fucking hot." This time Tommy didn't hesitate to kiss David on the
lips.

"You're right. I'm ready to go again." David said in between their kisses.

Tommy agreed. He was already getting hard. Then his stomach growled.

"We can eat first." David laughed. Then his stomach growled as
well. "Correction, we should eat first."

"We have all the time in the world." Tommy grinned, just thinking about all
the things he could teach David.


A/N: I'm back! This is obviously an epilogue of sorts. A lot has changed in
the marvel universe over the years. I wasn't ever planning on getting back
to this series but one day, I realized I missed writing about Tommy the
adorable little goofball. I dabbled in trying to make new adventures with
Tommy. Thankfully, I got sidetracked to writing this little smut piece. I
think it's a great return to the series. I had way more fun with it than I
expected. I wasn't planning on publishing it, working on it as an writing
exercise. But seeing as it fit so well with the series, It bought why not?
Plus it would get my story back on the top of the recent stories
list. Hopefully I can hook in more readers. :D Please comment or
criticize. Any feedback would appreciated.

In all honesty, I don't actually like David in Kieron's run of Young
Avengers. I think he was there to fulfill a quota on diversity. His best
scenes were with Tommy in that one short. After that he just sort of hung
around. His bisexuality with Teddy literally came out of nowhere. He also
didn't really shine as a character. I didn't like him at all. Despite all
this, when I wrote this piece, he wound up having one of the most distinct
voices in the series. He reads so differently from all the other Young
Avengers. He's definitely not a replacement for Eli. I didn't think I'd be
able to explore anything new when I started but David just made it
happen. It's because of him that this series will get a sequel in terms of
a four way. I just have to see how David interacts with the others. He
deserves to get a little taste of Teddy now that I've written him in.

One final note. For longtime readers, if you're still out there, and new
readers alike, can you spot the differences in my writing and if so, which
is better? Chapters 1-30 were written a few years back when I was still in
Uni. I had more free time then, and I was more inspired. I feel like I had
reached my peak then. My writing now, while faster, feels less like it has
flow. Which is better? Send me an email to comment.  Thanks bunchies.