Date: Thu, 17 Mar 2011 21:10:20 -0400 (EDT) From: J Subject: DOCTOR WHO, JEREMY, AND JESSE 104 (remove email address) DAMIAN LEWIS DOCTOR WHO OPENING CREDITS 104 MASSACRE ON GALLIFREY part one Walking outside on Gallifrey, the Doctor was not sure how many of his past selves he had gone through, backwards. 137? 138? 938? He lost count. "I know. I know where I'll go...home...home..." He was not sure he could take the changes his body was undergoing so fast and furious. His form seemed to settle on looking like actor Damian Lewis. Jesse's eyes opened. The first thing he saw as they focused was his own muscular bare abs, a rounded washboard, his deep set navel with outtie bits, as he flexed awake. "What the hell?" He blinked. Apparently he had on a black leather top of some kind, almost not a covering at all. It was in two pieces attached by metal rods in small leather cylinders, almost undetectable, to the back piece on both sides, far below his underarms. His nipples were just barely covered, his shoulders were not as the harness...for it resembled a kind of skimpy leather harness...was low on his chest but came up to the neck piece. The neck piece was a collar, attached to the back collar in similar fashion as the main piece. The effect was a collar from which came a piece that curved over his nipples in front, and the back collar has a piece that came down and curved under the shoulder blades. There was a metal ring in front where his pecs meet underneath the leather and a metal ring in back almost where his shoulder blades would meet but slightly under that. The edge of the leather piece in front was far above his navel, the back had the edge low beneath it...and his butt crack was almost certainly showing. It was like an upside-down thong made for the upper body. The entire piece was finished off by a green skirt like affair, pieces of cloth covered over each other and held by a metal rod in a cylinder at his right hip. The whole thing was making him hard and he felt the crotch area was not going to do much to conceal it...for he had on no underwear. He also had on slip on feeties. Black. Jesse stood up, un-self consciously, "Hey, hey, cor, who put me in this get up?" Jeremy was similarly awakening in a red cushion seat to his right, "I don't know but I'd like to find them and thank them for it." "I did," Commander Maxil walked in. The room had two walls that looked metallic and the other two were plain white color. A drapery hung from one of the walls and paintings adorned the others. "Kleptons put those type of clothes on all their slaves." Jesse smiled and seemed uplifted, "You're Commander Maxil!?" "That's right." Jesse dropped his smile, "I don't like you." Maxil frowned. Jesse, "And for the record...ewl." "Bow your heads as President Borusa enters." As the doors opened of their own accord, Jesse asked, "Enters whom?" Borusa came in as Maxil put two hands on Jesse's head and started to try to make him bow his head, "That'll be enough, Commander Maxil. At ease." "Yes, at ease, Maxil," Jesse stuck his tongue out. Borusa was a but skinny and old Jeremy thought but he sat up in his seat, "Of course, the Doctor sometimes talks about you." "Really? He's a far outshined pupil by my standards," Borusa stated. "Now then..." "He doesn't have that air of confidence the Doctor always carries," Jesse turned as he sat down again. Jeremy smiled, "No, nope, he does not have that air of confidence. Probably due to being around Maxil's kind too long. You know, having others always have to protect you." "Yes," Jesse said, "You'd think being Time Lords they'd be much more confident." Borusa was infuriated and stood up, "You will both stop your vocalizing now." Jesse pointed at him, "See, Jeremy, like that. Who talks like that? You will stop your vocalizing now." He addressed Borusa directly, "Why don't you just say shut up?" "Shut up!" Jesse smiled, "Like that. That's better. See, you're improving. I think he's improving, don't you, Jeremy?" Maxil looked at Borusa, "Sir, may I?" Borusa waved a hand. With the other he held a staser gun. Jesse feigned confidence, "Wondered when you'll pull something out." "This can be set on kill, stun, or somewhere in between. I don't have time for aliens under my Presidency." Jesse leaned forward, "What about under you?" Jeremy said, "We'll stop, won't we, Jesse?" Jesse frowned and sat back. "Good ..." Borusa came around the desk and moved to Jeremy's chair, lowering the gun slightly. "Now, why have you come?" Jesse interrupted what Jeremy was about to say, "I cum because I like the way he..." he points to Jeremy, "...looks." "Jesse," Jeremy sat forward, "You know full well that we're the Doctor's friends..." He looked for a moment, "What have you done with Leela?" "She'll be sent back to her proper time." "That's just it. There is NO proper time." Jeremy whispered. Maxil seemed to lean in a bit. Jeremy looked at him. "That's all right," Borusa said, "He's a part of the Chancellery Guard." Jesse clicked his fingers and looked back at Maxil, "Any chance of celery, guard?" Maxil fumed, and moved forward. "You shall not speak to me that way." Jesse stood up, "Then what way shall I speak to you , Maxie, my boy?" Borusa nodded, "We were waiting for the Doctor's return. Yes." Jeremy frowned, "You're going to waiting a long time or no time at all really. He's not coming. Listen to me, Sir...time on Gallifrey has gone wrong. The past, the present, the future...it's all rolled into one on Gallifrey now." "That can happen, yes." Borusa said, "But not here on Gallifrey. We have rules for that kind of thing." "NOW he's talking like a Time Bored," Jesse sat back down, glancing sideways at Maxil, who took out his staser. "We know you're waiting for the Doctor, we know that you might be from the past and Maxil there might be from the future," Jeremy said, "We know you've used us bait to lure the Doctor here. We know you've got the TARDIS." "Leela does seem to be a bit out of her time," Borusa said, "But that does not mean ...she's an alien. She might have done something wrong to the TARDIS to get here." Jesse nodded, "And we know the Master is most likely highly involved in doing most of this." "The who?" Borusa asked. Maxil stiffened. "Sir, shall I bring them back to the museum?" "Not yet, Maxil," Borusa stated. "She, from her story, seems to be from the future of myself." Jeremy bit his lip, "I'm not sure she's right in that but..." "What do you know about the Omegans?" Borusa asked. "I do know that Omega was one the Time Lords that was helped get the power for time travel and I think he's the one that mostly did get it but that Rassilon got most of the credit while Omega was locked away in some black hole dimension or something..." Borusa's eyes widened. Jeremy swallowed, "What? What I say? Did I say something wrong?" Borusa swung the staser up at him, Jeremy slumped in his seat. "They know too much, Maxil. We have to kill them." Jeremy slumped so far that he used his weight on his lower body to raise his foot up at Borusa's staser and it shot off and hit Maxil's staser which in turn fired up at the lights and turned them out. Jeremy jumped up and pushed Jesse, "Now our chance! Move out!!!" "Bye Maxie!" Jesse gasped as he ran out the door, which Jeremy opened with a wave of his hand. A staser blast from Maxil's gun followed but hit the wall not far from Jesse's head. He blinked and jerked his head back. Jesse and Jeremy ran down a corridor. Jesse asked, "What about Leela?" "Just keep running!" Jeremy gasped, "For all we know she might be back in her own time." "But as you said, there is no one's own time on this planet any more and they don't even seem to realize it," Jesse gasped. They turned a corner and stopped at a huge metallic purple colored wall holder. They crouched down. Borusa opened a drawer in his desk and inside turned a switch. The emergency lights came on. "I cannot believe two alien mutts have pulled that off." "Rather down to luck than to skill," Maxil frowned, "I shall find them and kill them before they tell anyone." "Alien mutts are not so much my worry. It is these," he points to a screen behind him and he turns it on and dials up a video image. The face of a young man, jet black hair to his ears, appears. He is in Time Lord robes. "Yes, we await your final decision." "Rassilon's name has been too revered already, I regret to say, Morbius. What you intend to do is not only brave but also sacrificial. We do not even know that Omega can be pulled out. The time distortions, not to mention the anti matter effects on his body, may have so altered his being, his very atoms and molecules and how they operate as to have made him almost surely beyond our own evolution and energy construction. He may be a very different sort of living being...if he is alive." "He IS alive," Morbius grew impatient. "I for one, have heard his pleas for help from that other universe. I for one intend to do something about it. And I have followers as you know." "There is no need for threats, Morbius. If it is possible, which it is not. Even that type of travel is beyond our advancements. It is why he was trapped in the first place." "I have found a way into the hole," Morbius stated. "You always have found ways into holes," Borusa mocks. "You were always a good President Morbius and the people already know that." "So your answer is no?" "My answer is, regrettably, no, for now." "The longer we wait, as you say, the longer the forces acting on Omega's body have to change him utterly." "Which they may have already done. He may not even exist as we understand it." Borusa sighed. "We've had enough of your wheel spinning on this. I am going to alert the public and see what they believe we should do on this situation. Save the founder of our people's future beyond the Pythia curse or leave him to an eternity of lonely isolation in some black hole somewhere." "DON'T DO THAT," Borusa shouted. He turned a switch to stop the sound. He turned to Maxil, "Kill them, Maxil. Kill them all." "Sir?" Maxil smiled. "You heard me. Take your most trusted men and kill all the Omegans. I have a back up cover plan for such a contingency." Borusa turned the sound back on. "If you are insistent on this course of action, there is little that I can do." He turned to Maxil, who was still trying to come to terms with his orders, but then blinked himself out of it. Maxil nodded to him, eyebrows furrowed. He put his helmet back on and stormed out of the room. Outside, he motioned to a dozen men to follow him and they in turn, nodded back and they trooped off. Borusa steadied his voice, "As President in the past, you know that there are things we have to keep from our people. You also know that we have to make difficult decisions." "I intend to make such a decision just now," Morbius stated, "After our ...discussion..." he sneered the last word out as if it there poison in his mouth, "...I shall go on every vid screen to tell them all. The news net will be awash of the most positive news that Omega can be rescued. Not just Time Lords, but all Gallfreans, even the few aliens that live here, the alien Time Lords and the aliens who live outside the Citadel, all will know of Omega's survival and of my plans AND of your desire to stop them. At the same time, I might just admit to them all that we are not even from this planet..." "You do go too far. I beg you not to..." As Borusa talked rhetoric, the doors of the chamber meeting that Moribus was in, burst open with bomb like devices going off. Morbius seemed to be thrown under the vid screen he was talking to Borusa on. Smoke filled the room. There were many staser blasts and many yells of dying Time Lords. Gurgles, moaning, death screams, indicating both fast and slow deaths. Borusa tried to see. He did not want any to get away. He heard Maxil order, "Make sure you utterly destroy each heart of the ones who have two. I do not want any regenerations this time! Those who have one heart it will suffice to shoot them there ...as many times as you like. I shall take care of their brains." Borsua shut his eyes in disgust. "Nasty business." He shut off the vid screen. Maxil gunned down many Time Lords in the hearts and for good measure shot each in their head as well. He didn't see the two sets of feet that vanished through a small square shaped shaft. A door was just closing and the underling that saw it noticed only the escaping smoke...smoke that issued from the door bomb and burned flesh. It rushed out and then closed off. "Sir?" He pointed his staser at the trap door in the wall under a computer bank. "Wynter?" Maxil sneered, turning from blasting a Time Lord brain. "Sir? I think two of them got away." "What?" "I think they are wounded, sir." "Find them and kill them!" Maxil rolled his eyes as the underling waited. "NOW, Wynter, NOW!" "Yes, sir!" Wynter nodded to others and they left the room. A huge mountain valley overlooking a thick river called Cadonflood: a large house: "I bet I look like Damian Lewis, don't I, Innocet?" "We love that show Life." "Ironic title." "Come in, Cousin. At least this time you're ginger." The girl smiled. "You know you shouldn't be here." "No, Innocet, I shouldn't and I'm afraid, neither should you." Something about the way the redhead smiled made her uneasy. He stepped up into the house of Lungbarrow. Hiding at the wall support, Jesse asked, "Where should we go now?" "Home? The Doctor's home," Jeremy said. "Where's that?" "I think it's in the Southern Mountains of Gallifrey," Jeremy said. "I remember reading about that in the databanks." As they talked, a skinny boy with multi colored hair, some jets of strong black and some lighter colors of light brown and blond mixed in, came over to them. The hair was short and the boy was shorter than both of them. He leaned between them and listened. Jesse gasped, "Oh no, that means more walking through the landscapes?" "I know." Jeremy shrugged, "I think it's the place the Doctor might go to on his way here." "Why didn't we?" "Same problem that we can't find it now...we don't know exactly where it is in the mountains or how to get through any defenses it has." Jeremy propped himself up on the sideways pole, "But...we don't have any other choice but to try..." "Even so. All that walking. Again." Jeremy sympathized, "We have no way of getting there." The boy whispered, "I do." Jesse nodded, "Sure, sure, sure, kid. I'm sure you do." Then he realized someone was behind them. The two both turned rapidly and stood up, standing far above the boy's head. The boy had on thick spectacles, which he now straightened. He wore a long white robe with a red cape behind it and...red platform shoes. His arms came out of the robe, "No weapons." "Who are you?" "My name's Roman." The boy smiled nervously. "I know you're trying to get to the Doctor's ancestral home. Lungbarrow. I know a secret way to get there." "Can you take us?" Jeremy asked. "Yes, I can." "What do you want in return?" Jesse asked. "Nothing. Just a surety that I helped the Doctor and he will eventually, be told." "You know the Doctor?" "Yes, I do. Or rather I did. A long, long, long, long, long, long, long..." Jesse snapped, "Okay we get it. A long time ago." "No. A long, long, long...well, yes, a long time ago." Jeremy smiled sadly, "You are in love with him, aren't you?" Roman smiled and looked up, his chin perking up at them, "Who isn't in love with the Doctor in some way?" Jeremy nodded, "You got me there. I see what you mean. I...can we trust you?" "Sure. Either way," he turned, "It'll save you time and there is no other choice that you have." Jesse frowned, put his hand on the boy's shoulder, which was bare as he moved his robe behind his shoulders, and turned him around. Jesse then picked the kid up with his hands on the kid's sides. He looked into his eyes, "Are you putting us on or...or do you really want to help?" "The later of the two." "If you say so, kid." He put the boy down. "Besides, if one can't trust a kid..." "Kid? Oh, you mean...this way," Roman nodded and spoke as he took them down a rounded, curved corridor that seemed to go downward slowly and sway as if it were not solidly built into the structure of the rest of the building. It also got smaller on all sides the further they moved down it. Soon, the two lovers had to crouch down in order to not hit their heads. A turn revealed a solid wall. "Kid? I'm really...oh, my, I think I've lost count. I'm about 380 years old. I'm so old now..." "Oh, not to worry. The Doc's much older than you..." "Yeah? I know." The solid wall vanished and they moved into a more square shaped hallway with a lot more room to move. Behind them, the wall reappeared. Jesse went on, "We're not even sure, with all the time travelin Jeremy and I do, and the whole suspension of our aging thing, how old we are! So cheer up, kid." Roman looked at them after they went through what seemed to be a force field. They passed right through it and a green outline moved across the outline of their bodies. "We've arrived." On the other side was a transporter device not unlike the one in THE ARMAGEDDON FACTOR. "I build it myself." "Why?" Jesse asked, still curious. "Because I know my people," the boy used one hand to brush away some of his hair from his ear, "And I knew that one day I'd need it to get away from them. Because they'd turn on me." "Who are you?" Jeremy squinted his eyes. "All in due time," he smiled, "I'll wait for you here." "Wait?" Jeremy asked. "If I know the Doctor...he'll want to come back and get his hands dirty right in the thick of things." "I want to get my thick of things right on his hands," Jesse joked. "I'm not sure what you mean exactly," the boy said. "Never mind him," Jeremy said, "You're too young to know things like that from our planet." "You are from Earth?" "Yes, of course," Jeremy nodded as Roman gently pushed him back into the tripod of three netted slates. Jesse moved back with him. "Now, hold on to each other." "No problem there." Jeremy smiled. His blue eyes almost melted Roman. Jeremy found his body wrapped in Jesse's hands and the two were now chest to chest and face to face. Jeremy looked sideways from his lover, "Is that part of the teleport process?" Roman smiled, "Naw, just thought I'd look cute." He threw a switch down and the shimmering of color...blue, green, red...began. It engulfed the two older boys. "How bout I add a bonus cuteness," Jesse said and planted his lips on Jeremy's and began a long lustful kiss. Jeremy responded in kind and the two shared tongues. Roman smiled and took off his glasses to reveal bright blue eyes. "Or should I say boner?" Roman smiled, "Good luck. I'm sure you'll find him." Jesse and Jeremy appeared with their mouths locked in a deep kiss. When they parted, they realized it had been several minutes before they parted lips. "It didn't matter to you that our mouths might have appeared together as one?" "Naw. What's the problem with that?" Jeremy shrugged, "I felt the same way." He laughed and left the three columns of the teleport and looked around. "SO this is the Doctor's family's house?" The entire cavernous room they were in was decorated in a brown motif. There were stained wood panels on the walls, which were far apart. It almost felt as they were outside but the room wasn't cold or hot. It felt ...admirable and comforting in a way. The high curved ceilings seemed to have artistic stalactites, made by intelligent beings, glossed by some alien hand or machine. The floors seemed marble and decorated with what appeared to a map of some alien universe, large circular blue globes spanning velvet blackness of space, dotted by shining stars. Jesse gasped and was impressed, "It...it's amazing. The whole place...like a fairy castle." "Got that right," Jeremy joked. "It is...though, it is amazing." The furniture was lighter colored to offset the darker parts of the room. There were lightly stained and tanned granite chairs with dark red rug like cushions. Huge rectangular light structures hung from the ceiling in various places and glowed with a haze. "It's...very alien though." Jeremy went to a window, "Wow." Outside, the second sun hit the shining mountains and they, too, illuminated bright against the patches of snow. Bouncing off the mountain rock, the colors turned purple, red, white, silver leafs of trees blended in. Brown and purple cascaded. "It...It's like a rainbow but all over the place." Behind him, Jesse put a hand on his back and watched with him, his face eventually coming to the same level as they both bent to look out the window. As the rays of light and color hit the window with the second sun, Jeremy stood up and took Jesse's hand and then the other hand. They kissed in front of the window as the rays came in. They pulled each other to each other and stood there, stomach to stomach, chest to chest. Then they had to look outside again. They had to pull themselves away from the window to continue on. The two of them moved past the area they were in and found it opened to an even larger area that simulated a cave but the windows of gray that had a dark blue night shining outside proved to the two boys that they were, indeed, still inside a huge structure. The granite like floor seemed to end at a side curve...that had water in it. The splashing came from the other side. Jeremy and Jesse moved over to it. There, standing on one side of the water was a young boy. His hair was blond. His eyes were shining light blue. He stood completely naked, his shoulders shrugged. A girl, young but not as young as the boy, was in the water, her long brown hair hiding in the shallow end of the elaborate pool. It was made to resemble a lake that emptied out into a river but it was all made by intelligent hands. Jesse looked at Jeremy, "Should we ask?" "We have nothing to lose," Jeremy said, "Some have helped us, some haven't." They moved to the area. The boy was butt naked. He turned to see them coming at him. He seemed afraid. "Uh," Jeremy put his hands out, "We won't hurt you." "Aliens?" The boy gasped, "My first aliens..." "We are aliens," Jeremy said, "But we're here..." "Badger!" The girl snapped. Jeremy turned as he heard a loud roar. From out of seemingly nowhere... a dark recess in the huge cavern/living room/pool, a huge mass came charging at Jeremy and Jesse. It came so fast, they could only watch. The thing zeroed in on them both, and they could see was a huge furry arm on either side of the mass. Serrated black stripes over a cream colored pelt which seemed to cover the entire seven foot body. Whisking rapidly through the air were three sharp claws sprouting out of the hairy wrists. Jesse stood, transfixed. Jeremy yelled. The face--with a reptilian but pug nose and big round bear like eyes--- reared up in the darkness, seven feet overhead, a face that was close but getting closer...huge tusks sprouting from its mouth and on either side of the head curling horns large enough to hang a coat on. The thing's mouth opened wider and the fangs and razor sharp white teeth dipped toward them both!!!! "DOCTOR!!!!!!" DAMIAN LEWIS DOCTOR STING MUSIC into theme song... Badger: http://images.wikia.com/tardis/images/6/66/Badger.jpg EXTRAS: DELETED SCENE: This was originally envisioned as a sort of joke and a very short sequence of Jeremy and Jesse walking past, in the Citadel I might add, the ten year old Doctor who was said in LUNGBARROW, to be skinny dipping with his cousin Innocet. Jesse was supposed to encourage him and somehow maybe even make him even a bit less inhibited. It was not to be a long sequence. Somehow I just couldn't make this sequence work and I'm not sure I will be able to in the next chapter but here is the original reworking of it that just didn't work and wasn't really funny or interesting or anything really. It just wasn't doing what I wanted it to do which was just to be a funny nod to LUNGBARROW. Somehow sending the boys to the Doc's house to find him became more serious then just the two of them or one of them passing the Doc and Innocet in the pool skinny dipping and maybe being chastised by a stuffy Time Lord while somehow Jesse encourages the Doctor from either behind the Time Lord or up front in his face. This imprints on the Doctor. In the scene as is below, it just does not really work and before anyone gets all stuffed up in their pants or angry, the original idea of The ten year old Doctor and Innocet skinny dipping was in LUNGBARROW the novel, not my own idea. Besides, nothing sexual happens. I think. As written the dialog is sort of...stilted. I hate when this happens and I feel I have to discard a scene but it was just not working dramatically or comically. THE DELETED POOL SCENE "Yeah," Jesse gasped. They heard splashes and moved toward the sound. "Doctor?" "Maybe," Jeremy shrugged. The two of them moved past the area they were in and found it opened to an even larger area that simulated a cave but the windows of gray that had a dark blue night shining outside proved to the two boys that they were, indeed, still inside a huge structure. The granite like floor seemed to end at a side curve...that had water in it. The splashing came from the other side. Jeremy and Jesse moved over to it. There, standing on one side of the water was a young boy. His hair seemed blond. His eyes were shining light blue. He stood completely naked, his shoulders shrugged. "What the hell?" Jeremy asked, almost silently. Whispering. A girl, young but not as young as the boy, was in the water, her long brown hair hiding in the shallow end of the elaborate pool. It was made to resemble a lake that emptied out into a river but it was all made by intelligent hands. "A pool?" Jesse asked. "We can't stop for this, we have to find the Doctor," Jeremy said. With that, the boy reacted as if he heard them. He turned. "He's got to be about ten," Jesse noted. "Sorry. Sorry to have scared you..." The boy dove head first into the water to hide himself. The girl cried out, "Very good!" The boy came up from under the water and swam toward the girl, "Innocet, who are they?" "Skinny dipping? On Gallifrey?" Jesse asked Jeremy, "That ten year old boy...he must be..." "We're looking for..." Jeremy started. "Jer, don't," Jesse put a hand on Jeremy's shoulder. "We're guests here. We came by Roman's transmat." The girl rose up out of the water, his bare breasts dripping. She walked to them up the shallow part to the stone steps, "We don't have a transmit here yet." Jesse and Jeremy's eyes widened. Of all the things they expected to see in the Doctor's house, this was not one of them. The boy stood looking at the others. He admired the two males that he saw. He looked them up and down. He shivered but then made sure he was in the water so as not to be seen. "He looked so scared of his own body," Jesse noted. "Oh, it's his first time," Inocet said and then added, "Skinny dipping." "Ahhh," Jesse retorted. Jesse gave him an okay sign made with his thumb and forefinger and winked at him. The kid looked at him. Jesse smiled and flashed his green eyes at the boy. Jesse also nodded yes to the boy. The boy made the okay sign and winked back at Jesse. Jeremy gave him a thumbs up. The boy made the thumbs up sign. "Who are you two? Really?" "We're...friends." Jesse said and then realized the boy in the pool WAS the Doctor. He looked at the boy nervously. "Uhm, we've really come from the future..." "Oh that's not good," the girl said, her total nakedness as she came totally out of the water, not hindering her. "No," Jeremy said, "And the less we tell you now, the better. We have to find...the Doctor." "The Doctor?" Innocet said, "I've not heard that name before." "He...he might be one of your friends or one of your family members?" Jeremy explained.