Date: Thu, 5 Feb 2015 09:22:55 +0000 From: Steve Adams <a_steve@hotmail.com> Subject: NCIS LA part 4 Firstly, massive sorry for the delay in getting this chapter written, Hopefully when you've read it you'll understand why! The feedback im getting is great, thank you to everyone who has taken the time out to read and reply to my stories, Please remember this story is my own work and is complete fiction. It is not a true representation of the people featured or the lives of those real characters from NCIS LA. This story is only intended for adult viewing. If you enjoy reading stories on Nifty please donate to the site. If you are under age (-18), please dismiss yourself from this site. Thank you. Chapter 4 (Ending of last Chapter - In the Boathouse) Callen's eyes dart down to Deeks' throbbing cock, he swallows hard, takes a deep intake of breath and walks over to the table. He grips the side of the table with his hands, and bends over ever so slightly, reluctantly, but willingly. Deeks watches as his mate prepares himself....the grin is from ear to ear. "What do you want me to do mate" Deeks asks. Over the intercom a voice is heard, it is that of Eric, "fuck him" he says. ............................................................................... Both men's eyes snap towards the camera in the corner and notice the red light on, Deeks is a little shocked and confused. "you heard him" Callen says impatiently Deeks is still stunned that Eric has just watched them fuck and is still watching them, he just walks towards Callen's hairy hole that awaits him and drops to his knees. Deeks is now in eye shot of Callen's musty hairy pucker, Deeks spreads open the firm arse cheeks and dives his tongue right inside. A soft moan is heard from Callen as Deeks continues with his tonguing. Deeks sneaks a glimpse towards the camera and makes sure that the focus is on him and he can be seen. He licks and laps and spits on Callen's ring making the stud moan and groan and grunt before him. With one final bit spit of saliva planted on Callen's pucker Deeks finally stands. He looks towards the camera on the wall and begins to slap his thick bell end on Callen's tight ring, "you wanna watch me fuck him again" Deeks yells at the camera........rubbing his cockhead round and round "you like watching me fuck his arse" He calls again before lining it up and pushing forwards. Callen's grips the table hard and the grunt that escapes from his mouth is evident that he is still so tight. Callen can't help himself, he lifts his right leg up onto the table so his arse is stretched open even wider, his cock now starting to stiffen again, his ball sack hanging low as Deeks just edges forward as his cockhead pops inside the tight hairy ring of Callen. Inch by inch it starts to slip inside - deeper and deeper into his mates hard arse. In and out, In and out, Deeks begins driving his 9.5 inch cock into Callen, still looking firmly at the camera. ............................................................................. Meanwhile in the Observation room of the boat house Eric watches on seeing his lover being fucked by his friend, he watches intensely as Deeks starts to pound away on Callen's muscular arse. There is an obvious bulge in his cargo shorts which his left hand can't help but play with and rub, watching the scene in front of him, his two closest friends fucking in the next room, the grunts coming in over the speaker, the sound of sex, and the fixed stern look of Deeks looking right back at him. A tear trickles down Eric's cheek as he realises that he has indeed lost his one true love, a flashback in his head reminds him of the fight they had last night. The argument that had erupted in the afterglow of their love making the night previous. ............................................................................. (Flashback Callen's Apartment) "ummmmmmmm I love you babe, thanks for that" Eric says panting as he cuddles up into Callen's strong arms after the immense fuck that Callen just gave him. "its ok - I love you too" Callen softly speaks as he kisses for forehead of Eric "I do enjoy when you get rough on my hole, and how you pound me so hard" Eric recalls "its great that you're able to take such a pounding babe" Callen says with a smile. "you know what was even hotter, seeing you fucking Deeks the other day" Eric replies "yeah babe, who knew he would end up being part of our little secret" Callen grins "I was shocked however that you let him fuck your arse" Eric softly replies as he circles Callen's hairy chest with his fingers "well its' not like I wanted it to happen" Callen replies in a slightly more sterner voice sensing where this conversation is going "yeah but you promised me that............." even before he could finish Eric was cut short Callen pushes Eric off him and gets out of bed "I know what I promised but it just kinda happened ok" Callen yells at Eric "hey hey what's this about" Eric says trying to calm the situation "for the last time Eric he came up behind me caught me off guard and stuck his dick in my hole, I told him I wasn't up for taking it but he just kept pestering me, I was caught up in the moment and he stuck his dick in my arse, now get over it, I'm sorry he fucked me, but I cant take it back" Callen shouts standing naked and dripping from his cock in front of Eric. "he nibbled your ear and said pretty please, you gave in so fucking easily, his blonde hair, his baby grin, his firm body, his big cock, is that was it was, my dick not big enough for you, I bet you wanted it really, I bet you wanted to give him your arse from the start....given the chance I bet you'd let him fuck you again and again, over and over admit it ... I said ADMIT IT" Eric shouts as he too is now standing naked in front of Callen. Callen just launches himself across the room and topples down on top of Eric onto his double bed, thrusting his tongue deep in Eric's mouth, holding him down, pinning him down forcing his mouth to lock on Eric's, kissing him passionately, firmly and with frustration and lust. ............................................................................. (Back in the boat house) Deeks is still banging hard into Callen's firm arse, his stare has not broken once from the camera, Callen now on his back legs up still getting royally fucked is loving the sensation. Deeks finally looks down to Callen and leans over to kiss him, their lips touch and the kiss is soft and passionate. "what the hell is going on" he whispers in Callen's ear "I told him I wanted you again, and he has agreed" Callen moans "what do you mean you wanted me again, you wanted your arse fucking or you wanted me" Deeks asks "both, I wanted to get fucked again and I wanted you to do it" Callen whimpers Deeks pulls his dick almost entirely out of the gaping arse he is fucking and just holds it there, teasing him looking down at Callen with a grin on his face. "tell him you love my dick" Deeks says with a cheeky devious look. "what? just put it back in me ok" Callen says nervously "I said look at the camera and tell him you love my dick and you want me to stick it back inside you" Deeks replies Callen reluctantly turns his head towards the camera in the corner and yells "I love his big dick and want it back inside me" .... "there I said it now stop fucking with his head ok" Callen says "you asked for it" Deeks just slams the full 9 inches left of his cock back deep inside his arse and it rips into Callen like a bullet.........Callen's head tilts back and his back arches and he screams ..... the sound floods the room and comes over loud and clear on the speakers. ............................................................................ Back in the Observation Room Eric watches on via the black and white small TV the scene unfolding before him, after speaking over the intercom he knows they know he's there. "I loved him" Eric sighs "I know you did Eric" as two hands firmly place themselves onto his shoulders and starts to rub them softly but firmly "why is it then that it hurts so much seeing this, the first time seeing them together was erotic, passionate and hot, now this just breaks my heart" Eric replies "I can't help you with that my friend" as the massage and the shoulder rub continues "look at them, kissing, watching Deeks just pound him so hard, so deep, I wanted that to be me" Eric cries wiping away a tear "stop watching them Eric, come on lets go back to my place" Nate pulls Eric up to his feet, switches off the screen kisses Eric on the forehead and they begin to leave together holding hands ........................................................................... (Flashback Callen's apartment) "admit it, admit you want Deeks to fuck you in the arse again" Eric says panting as he is being held down on the bed by Callen "yeah I do, I wanna feel his BIG HARD 9 inch cock DEEP in my arse, is that what you want me to say, is that what you want to hear" Callen says "You want him, you need him, you need his cock in you again don't you" Eric says kissing his chest and sucking on Callen's nipples "yes I need him, I can't get him out of my head, I love his cock, I love his fucking I love him" Callen speaks before he realises what he has just said. Eric stops frozen to the bed....."You .. you love him" he asks "I don't know what I feel, I love you and him, I think" Callen says confused. Eric pushes Callen off him and stands up.......He walks over to his discarded clothes in a pile on the floor and picks up his T shirt, Callen watches as Eric slow dresses, top, socks, white Calvin Kline boxers and finally his shorts. Lastly he pops his glasses back on his face. He walks over to Callen and kisses him on the cheek and softly mumbles "if you love him then you can have him, I won't be a third wheel, I think I should leave now" As the door clicks closed behind Eric, Callen holds his head in his hands totally confused by what's just happened, if only they hadn't shared their fantasies the other week during sex, if only they hadn't talked about threesomes, if only he hadn't pushed Eric so much on the topic of Deeks, if only he hadn't suggested their little visit to his apartment that night, if only he let Eric fuck him when he begged to. ....................................................................... (Back in the boat house) Deeks is continuing to bash into Callen's arse and is loving the domination he now has over his sexy partner, totally unaware of the fucked up mess he has caused between Eric and Callen. He is just happy to be banging away and is loving the feeling on his cock. He can sense that he is about to shoot and is looking forward to planting it deep inside Callen once more. He looks at the camera and sees the red light is now off. He slows down his pumping and looks at Callen who he now realises is not enjoying it so much. Deeks pulls out all together and asks what the problem is. He sees a tear trickle down Callen's face. Callen apologies and explains to Deeks about the fight and what was said and how things had unravelled between him and Eric. Deeks listens for a few mins and then just stops Callen in mid speech, places a kiss on his lips and thanks him for his role in their little set up. Deeks then tells Callen what he must do. ....................................................................... (Outside the boathouse in the car park) "well your place or mine" Nate asks. "I think I'd like to go back to my place, i've got some clearing out to do and I think I need some alone time" Eric replies "well you know if you want I can help you in more ways than one" Nate replies as he places his hand on Eric's knee and starts to rub his hand up and down ever so slightly Eric turns to Nate and smiles, leans in and starts to kiss him softly on the lips. He breaks off the kiss and removes Nate's hand. "that is really sweet of you Nate, but right now, this moment, I can't, I hope you understand, maybe in a few weeks but right now, I just need" Suddenly there is a hard thumping on the back screen of the car window. Callen is standing there outside the car, banging, and telling Eric's name. Eric reaches quickly for the door handle and opens the door. "What the fuck do you want" he asks, seeing Callen in a state of undress. "you Eric, I want you, and only you, it's always been you" Callen says gasping for breath. Eric looks over Callen's shoulder and sees Deeks leaning against the bonnet of his own car, arms folded, and smiling. "Eric I'm sorry, please forgive me, I don't want this to end, I want us to be together, I got what I thought I wanted and when you left I realised what a mistake I'd made, please don't leave me, I need you" He pulls Eric into a hug and starts crying into Eric's shoulder. Eric stunned by Callen's confession just returns the hug and looks over towards Deeks and mouths the words "thank you" Deeks grins, and mouths the words back "fuck him" with a smile Eric grins, takes Callen by the hand and walks over towards Callen's car, they both hop in and Callen speeds off down the dirt track. Nate heads over towards Deeks and leans back on the bonnet next to him looking as the car slowly disappears into the distance. "What now" Nate asks Deeks takes Nate's hand and places it on his own filled out bulge "well I still haven't shot my load yet" he says Nate heads towards the boat house calling back behind him, "It would be my pleasure friend" The End Phew.................. That's it guys, hope you enjoyed the last in the series. It's taken me about five days to write that one :-) Feedback is always welcome, and please don't forget to donate to this wonderful site. Let's keep the site free for other budding authors like myself who help share in some of our most secret fantasies and like to share them with others.a_steve@hotmail.com