Date: Fri, 25 Jul 2008 02:09:51 +1000
From: sakurakangen@gmail.com
Subject: Finding You: Chapter 1
Hi Everyone!
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This story involves relationships between males aged 17-19. If you do not
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ABOUT WAITING FOR THE MUSIC
If any of you read my prior story, Waiting for the Music, you may be
upset to
learn that I have permanently abandoned that story. I am sorry for that, but
looking over it now I truly think it is utter crap. I think this story will
be better because I am putting more of my soul into this one :)
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And now, without further adieu.....
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FINDING YOU: CHAPTER ONE - Sakura Photo
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I looked at his picture.
His blue eyes were very piercing. They were piercing in the photo too. A
soft half-smile on his lips. I remember when I had taken that photo. On the
holiday. Our holiday.
He looked so beautiful in that picture. The background covered in the
pale pink of spring blooming sakura, cherry blossoms. He looked so at home,
so happy in a country that was totally foreign to him.
My lip began to quiver, and a tear ran down my cheek. Every single time I
looked at that picture I cried. I guess that would be a good reason not to
keep it in my wallet - but in my usual valiant defiance of logic I had kept
it there for a whole month, and had no plans as such to remove it.
I quickly put away the photo when I realised that if I were to cry any
more it would surely be noticed by my friend, Chris. I was still wiping my
eyes when he walked back in.
"Hiya, I got us some crackers.. hey.. what's up? Your eyes are all
red. Are you okay?"
"I'm fine, Chris, don't worry about it."
He must have heard the tremolo in my voice, because he wasn't buying it.
"You just stay right here, I'll get you a glass of water and then you'll
tell me what's wrong." he said just as he was rushing out of the room,
leaving the tray of crackers on the bed I was sitting on.
I just sat and waited for a while - he seemed to be taking a long time
just to get a glass of water. I looked around. His room was pretty
unusual. Dark purple walls, and a lighter purple ceiling. There was a big
teardrop shaped black wall adornment in one corner next to the window. On
the other side there was a bookshelf absolutely packed with stuff. I looked
at some of the books: Descartes, Russell, Lacan, Swinbourne.. Chris
certainly wasn't your average 17 year old. The top part of the bookshelf
was full of figurines from cult sci-fi TV shows. You might think that these
figurines would lead to him being instantly labelled a geek, but somehow he
managed to avoid that label - I think he did this by wearing fashionable
clothes and keeping quiet about his love of science fiction. I didn't. I
was the school nerd - but that didn't bother me too much. We both went to a
school where knowledge was regarded highly and being a nerd wasn't
necessarily a bad thing.
Of course, I didn't have to worry about any of that any more. I had just
finished highschool and Chris was just about to begin his final year.
Hence he asked me to come over so I could give him all my old notes and
homework. He was going to have the same mathematics teacher I did, and
this particular teacher was well known for setting exactly the same
exercises year after year. What was less well known was that he also knew
exactly what each of his student's hand- writing was like, and he would
recognize my work in an instant.
Therefore, Chris' dream of a maths-homework-free year would be
tragically crushed. Q.E.D... or something.
Chris finally came back carrying two steaming mugs.
"Water was too easy, so I got the next-best thing! Hot Chocolate!" he
said, grinning.
"Uh.. thanks?"
I took the mug from him and took a sip, putting it down on some empty
space on his bedside table.
"Soooo are you going to tell me what's wrong or am I just going to sit
here eating crackers?" he said after a moment of silence.
"What made you think there was something wrong?"
"One, you haven't said anything since I gave you that hot chocolate.
Two, you were definitely crying before, and don't try and hide it, and
Three: You haven't eaten any crackers."
I took a deep breath and opened up my wallet again, showing him the
photo.
"Ohhh, your ex-boyfriend.." he said.
"He's not my ex-boyfriend."
"Well, he was once your boyfriend, and he's not your boyfriend now, so I
think that means he's your ex boyfriend."
"No, we're still together, he just hasn't called yet."
Chris looked puzzled.
"Um, dude? Didn't you say he went to Japan like, a month ago?"
"Yes, and he'll call me as soon as he can. It's like he said, a
scholarship at Toudai is not something you pass up, even for love. He'll
call me as soon as he has time. He said he would."
"Dude, it's been a month. If he was so desperate to call you he would
have done it by now."
"Chris.. please don't... I don't want to talk about this."
"Yeah? Well I do want to talk about it. Because I think it needs to be
talked about. Ever since he left you have done nothing but stare
cataconically at that.. that.. fucking picture!" he was raising his voice
now. He grabbed the photo and tried to tear it, but the glossy film was
pretty tough, and he wasn't very strong, so eventually he just threw it on
the ground. He continued:
"Ever since he left, you haven't shown one iota of concern for me or
anyone else!"
I was getting kind of pissed off now, "Yeah, and you think it's all
about you, don't you?" I shouted back.
"Oh for fuck's sake." He replied, his voice softening a little, "You've
got to realise that he's gone, and he's obviously avoiding contact with
you. To be honest, short of packing your bags and flying over there, there
is no way you'll ever see him again..."
I sat quietly for a moment. Then I pulled out my mobile phone.
"You're right." I mumbled softly as I punched a familiar number into the
keypad of my phone.
"Uh.. William? What are you doing?" Chris asked, somewhat alarmed.
As soon as I heard my phone answer I began speaking, "Hello. Is this the
University of New South Wales? Yes? Great, I have decided to defer my
enrolment. That's right, I'll be taking a gap year after all. William
Davis, that's right. Yes. Okay, thank you, bye."
"William? What the hell are you doing?" Chris asked, sounding even more
frantic.
I made another phone call, impersonating my father's voice.
"Hello, my name is Edmond Davis. I was just wondering if I had enough
frequent flyer points for a free flight to Narita, Tokyo? One-way is fine,
thanks. I would like to purchase one ticket for my son William. Yes he has
travelled before. Right, the frequent flyer details, just a moment."
I made the sound of rustling paper, pretending to fetch the card, and
then proceeded to recite the details of my father's frequent flyer card and
PIN from memory.
"Yes, he can travel economy. I can afford it? Wonderful. When is the
flight? Right, that would be just great if you could do it that
quickly. Will I.. er, my son be able to pick up the ticket at the airport?
Excellent. Thank you. Bye now."
Chris was looking at me with a steely gaze now.
"William, you aren't just trying to fuck with my head are you? What the
fuck do you think you're doing?"
I ignored him, and bent over and picked up the photo from the ground,
putting it back in my wallet. I immediately walked out, hopped on my bike
and began cycling away to the train station, with Chris running after
me. It didn't take me long to lose him.
Once I arrived at the train station, wheeling my bike beside me, I
looked at the noticeboard that announced the departure times. Three minutes
until a train to the airport.. quickly I hurried over and bought a
ticket. Cost me a bloody fortune. Airport tickets are ludicrously expensive
in Sydney. I pulled my bike into an elevator and went down to the platform,
where the train had just pulled in. Perfect timing.
I wheeled my bike onto the vestibule of the train, turned around, and
took a look through the still-open doors. I saw someone hurrying down the
stairs, and realised that it was Chris, after he got down to the
platform. He began looking for me, and it didn't take him long to work out
where I was. He ran over to the platform alongside the carriage in which I
was standing.
"Dude.." he said, panting, "You still didn't give me my maths notes."
I realised then that I still had them in my other hand. I had almost
forgotten.
"Here.." I said, tossing the books over to him, through the doors of the
train. He managed to catch them all, but dropped one immediately afterward.
When he looked up at me after picking it up, I noticed he had tears in his
eyes.
"Dude... what the fuck?" He said.
"Bye." I whispered just as the train doors closed.
As the train pulled away I secured my bike to one of the poles in the
forward part of the carriage and sat down. Almost instinctively I opened up
my wallet and got out the worn photo, tears already begin to run down my
face.
"I'm going to find you, baby, I promise." I sobbed as I clutched the
photo to my heart, rocking back and forth.
"I'm going back."
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You have... two messages... first message.. from.. 0 4 3 1 4 7 7 6 0 2
"Hi Mum, Hi Dad. I guess you're probably wondering where I am. I'm actually
at the airport. I'm going to Japan to find him. I have to find him. I hope
you understand. Sorry for spending all your frequent flyer points. I love
you all. Please don't worry about me. I'll be fine. Bye."
BEEP
You have.. one.. more message.. Second message... from... International
Number. 8 1 3 5 3 5 6 9 1 4 4
"Hi? Is this still William's number? I hope so. Anyway I just wanted to let
you know that Toudai wasn't for me and I'm going back to Australia to study
at the University of New South Wales. That's the same place you're studying
right? I'm sorry it's been over a month since I called. I have been so
extremely busy these last few weeks. Anyway please give me a call back on
+81353569144.
"I'll be in Japan for another few weeks and then I'll be flying back to
Australia! It'll be great to see you again, I've made so many friends
here. One of them will be coming back with me. Bye now!"
BEEP
You have.. no.. more messages. Delete messages, or replay?
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Well, that's all for this installment of Finding You. You may have noticed
some similarities between certain references in this story and my other,
incomplete (and abandoned) story, Waiting for the Music. Waiting For the
Music was something I was writing really as a way to gradually introduce
myself to writ- ing, however the story was largely governed by real events
which made it difficult for me to express myself.
This story is only very loosely based on fact. No, I did not actually fly
to Japan after a long lost sweetheart, but the angle I am putting on this
story is something that psychologists tell me will help me to deal with the
actual trauma I experienced last year where I lost someone I dearly loved.
I absolutely love feedback. Please submit your feedback, good or bad,
lengthy or brief, in Japanese or in English, (although preferably English)
to:
sakurakangen@gmail.com
You may also add me on Google Talk or MSN Messenger at the same address. I
love talking to you.
Doumo arigatou gozaimashita.
-SK
(written in vi improved 7.1.. beats emacs any day)