Date: Sun, 8 Nov 2009 14:52:04 +0100
From: sinik ty <sinikty@gmail.com>
Subject: Jeremy and Ben: Comparison chapter 1
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The party had been going on for over an hour, and there were more
than thirty people milling around the first floor. A few people were
already feeling the alcohol, and you could hear loud conversations --
guys boasting, other guys challenging and girls laughing. I had come with
my friend Ron, but I'd left him in the kitchen talking to another friend of
his, a guy I didn't particularly like. I didn't know the hosts of the
party, they were more of Ron's friends. I found myself checking out the
homeowners' CD collection, when I heard a group of people come in the front
door after ringing the bell twice. I was sitting on an ottoman behind the
couch, and so had to bend forward to see who it was coming in. I was
mildly surprised to see my brother among the crowd. Ever since he'd
enrolled last fall in the same university I had been attending for three
years, we'd only rarely seen each other. We didn't have similar crowds,
and our studies were vastly different. I didn't feel the need to say hello
right away. I knew we'd eventually bump into each other sometime during
the night. He and a few of the guys he came with headed for the kitchen,
no doubt for the bar.
Ron found me after another ten minutes or so, and we stuck together
for the next hour, talking to various other guests. During that time, I
saw my brother once. He was in the backyard with the guys he came with. I
was in the kitchen getting another beer. He didn't see me, and it looked
like he was having a good enough time not knowing I was there. We were
three and half years apart, and had never been particularly close. We had
different interests -- I was more academic, he, more social and athletic.
We didn't dislike each other. It was just a lack of common interests.
Ron and I were discussing how much longer we wanted to stay. The
party had gotten more crowded, but neither of us had found anyone
interesting enough to devote more time to. As we were talking, Thad joined
us. Thad and I shared many of the same classes, and although we didn't
hang out together much outside of class, he was someone I spoke to
regularly. He was a handsome guy of my same age, dark hair, brown eyes,
that with his long lashes seemed to constantly be inviting you to his
bedroom, consistent stubble, broad shoulders and nicely muscled legs. I
had a crush on him, but had never acted on it. He was nearly always with a
girl, even it was a different one just about every time I saw him. Ron and
Thad exchanged hellos, and after a bit of small talk, Ron headed for a
refill. Thad and I talked about the heavy requirements of one of our
shared classes when Ron returned. I told them both I had to find the
restroom. As I passed Thad, he leaned in to my ear and told me there was a
wait upstairs and on the main floor, but there was a bathroom in the
basement that most people weren't aware of because the basement was being
refinished. He told me where to find the door to the downstairs, and I
headed in that direction.
I left my empty beer bottle on the kitchen counter as I passed
through and found the door to the basement on the other side of the laundry
room. The stairwell was dark, and when I tried the light switch, no lights
came on. I could see there was light coming from somewhere down there and
headed down. As I reached the bottom of the stairs, I could see various
signs of a remodel -- drywall stacked against the hallway wall, concrete
slab under my feet, tools and other supplies. The light was coming from a
doorway at the end of the hallway, which I assumed was the bathroom. As I
got nearer, I could guys' voices from the lighted room. The door was open
a few inches as the latch hadn't been fitted into the frame yet. I looked
into through the crack of the door and saw four of the guys my brother was
with in the backyard and my brother. They were sitting around an old
dining room table, and from the smoke in the air, they'd been sharing a
pipe. I wasn't surprised that my brother smoked pot. Their conversation
was a bit surprising though.
"I'm tellin' ya, dude. Huge," said the guy facing the door, across
from my brother. He looked around 20 and had light brown hair, blue eyes
and a stubbly goatee.
"And why do you know this, Marc? You spy on Jeremy or what?" asked
the guy at the end of the table furthest from the door. He was Latino with
super short hair and nicely built arms and chest.
Jeremy was my brother's name. I was intrigued to know what they
were talking about.
"We're roommates, dork , and he isn't exactly shy. He's got us all
beat. It's not worth the bet, man."
"I'll stay out of it, if you want. You can just compare among
yourselves. I'll just stick around for the championship round," Jeremy
laughed after he said this.
"Fifty bucks each?" another guy asked, the one sitting next to
Jeremy with his back to me.
"Yep, and we only get five minutes to make it hard," Marc said.
"After the five minutes are up, we compare, dick to dick. Whoever's cock
doesn't touch the other guy loses, and the two winners do a face-off."
I couldn't believe what I was hearing. These guys were betting on
who had the biggest dick, and they were going to measure against each other
to prove it. They each anted up and Marc said go. Marc and the Latin guy
both stood up and undid their pants. They each reached into their
underwear and pulled out their cocks, sliding the waistbands of their
underwear below their balls. The Latin guy spit a hefty glob of saliva
straight onto his flaccid uncut cock and began to work it with his right
hand. Marc's dick seemed to already be at half mast when he pulled his
out. I got the impression that he may be the one most into this bet. He
too spit onto his dick and began stroking. The other two guys both stayed
seated when go was called, but both had begun massaging their dicks through
their pants. The other guy facing me, who had yet to speak was
concentrating pretty hard, as his face was set with his eyes closed. I
could see his arm moving quickly. The guy who confirmed the bet amount was
also going at it under the table. He asked the guy opposite him, "Why
don't go down on me, Scott? That'll get you hard." He laughed as kicked
Scott under the table.
"Fuck off, Neil," Scott said. "You're making me lose my
concentration."
"All right, guys. Time to separate the men from the boys," Neil
said as he stood up and began undoing his pants. I couldn't see what he
took out, but Marc's eyes lit up a bit.
"Looks like we have a competition," Marc said as he checked out
Neil's package. Neil kept stroking himself, over-handed as he turned to
show my brother what he had.
"What do you think? Makes your mouth water just looking at it,
don't it?" Neil said to Jeremy as he thrust his hard cock towards my
brother, whose face was just about at the same level as Neil's dick. Neil
had an impressive piece -- one of those dicks that is big and heavy
enough to curve slightly down when it's hard and sticking out. It was
thick right behind the head, which was somewhat flat, but probably wide. I
could only see the profile, and if my brother's mouth wasn't watering, mine
was. I'd never thought my brother would be into guys. And his reaction
didn't lead me to believe anything else.
"Back it up, Neil. I doubt even your girlfriend's mouth waters at
the sight of that ugly knob."
"Ha, ha. Not what you'd say if you saw her gaggin' on it a couple
hours ago."
"Gaggin? That chick's got no gag reflex. She swallowed this fatty
whole, last night," the Latino guy teased, as he mimed holding a girl's
head as he face fucked her. He'd successfully jacked his cock into what he
appropriately called a fatty. He had to be as thick as a beer bottle,
maybe a beer can and about seven to eight inches long.
"Damn, Manny, what do you feed that thing?" Scott asked. "I'm out,
dude. You guys win."
"You gotta at least compare, Scott. Time's up anyway. Pull it
out," Marc said. Marc's dick was at full mast now, and he too had
something to be proud of. His was a belly-hugger with a pink head.
Although it didn't look near as thick as Manny's and maybe not as thick as
Neil's, his might have been slightly longer.
Scott stood up and unzipped. He lowered his pants and boxers and
revealed the most average of the cocks in the room. About six and half to
seven inches long and of average thickness; he knew he'd lost the bet. He
had managed to get himself hard, but after the comparisons, I was sure his
concentration would definitely be lost.
Marc moved around the table to Scott and in a lowered voice told
Scott to just hold it straight out. Marc did the same with his cock and
moved closer until his cock head touched the skin above Scott's pubic hair.
Scott's dickhead was still an inch or more away from Marc's body. "You're
out, man," Marc told Scott as he used his dick to whack Scott's.
"You're all like six inches taller than me," Scott said as he tucked
himself back into his shorts, zipped up and sat down.
"Manny, you and Neil compare now," Marc directed.
Manny leeringly smiled at Neil and said, "Bring it on." Neil
pushed his chair back and stepped around to the end of the table to face
Manny, jacking his dick the whole time. Manny continued to stroke until
Neil was facing him. They then both held their cocks at the base pointing
them straight out. Neil moved in close enough to go dick to dick, looking
down at his and Manny's cocks. They were approximately the same height,
and their dicks were about at the same level. Marc now moved around the
table to judge the action. His dick remained hard as he held his pants
thigh high.
"Manny, go underneath him," Marc said and Manny bent his knees so
Neil's dick was on top of his. "That ain't gonna work, can't see where
Manny's dick ends," Marc said as Manny's dick head pressed into Neil's
scrotum when Scott leaned in. "Do it side to side."
Manny stood up again and he and Neil positioned themselves so their
dicks were next to each other. This time it was clear that Neil's dick was
longer as his dick head touched Manny's pubes first. "Manny's got you beat
in the width department, but yours is longer," Marc said to Neil. "Down to
you and me."
Neil turned to face Marc for the final comparison. This time, Marc
reached out and pulled Neil closer by his dick. I was surprised Neil
didn't object as Marc held their two dicks together. "I think we're the
same," he said to Neil.
"Nah, I think mine's longer," Neil said. It seemed as if Neil
didn't mind having Marc's hand on his dick. Manny and Scott were both
watching intently, apparently as interested as I was in this awkward
homoerotic moment. Manny still had his hand on his dick and now gave it a
couple of strokes.
"Guess I'll have to settle it," my brother said. Jeremy stood up
and asked, "Care to make it more interesting Neil?"
"What do you mean?"
"You compare with Jeremy. If he's longer, he wins the pot. That
is unless you can deepthroat him," Marc said. He and my brother were
apparently in on the bet. "If you can't, Jeremy wins."
"Ha, ha, then you'd know what it feels like for your girlfriend,"
Manny piped in.
"You really that big?" Neil asked. I could tell he was interested.
"Is it a bet?" my brother asked.
"All right. Show," Neil called, his hand casually stroking his own
dick.
I was pretty sure that Jeremy had a big dick. He was my brother,
and I'd seen him naked before. But the last time I saw him naked and hard
was several years ago when we still shared the same bedroom. My own dick
was a good 8 inches, so I figured Jeremy must be about the same. I wasn't
sure he'd be any bigger than Neil's though. Jeremy unbuttoned and unzipped
himself. His back was to me still, so all I saw was him reach down into
his pants to pull his dick out. I didn't see what the others saw when it
actually appeared.
"Fuck man, you set me up," Neil said as his eyes got big seeing my
brother's dong flop out of his pants. Jeremy had pushed his chair back and
now faced Neil. He was in profile to me, and he easily had the biggest
dick in the room. It was a good 10 inches, and was built very similarly to
Neil's own dick. I was surprised, and jealous. Jeremy moved face to face
to Neil and pointed his dick straight out. He leaned in and the tip
touched Neil's body almost two inches sooner than Neil's was going to touch
Jeremy's. Jeremy whacked Neil's cock with his own saying, "You lose."
"Unless you want to try to deep throat that monster," Manny said
laughingly. It now seemed that Manny was in on this set up as well, and
that they all were trying to pull one over on Neil.
"You wanna see me puke?" Neil asked.
"I can do it," Marc said from behind Neil. "If I can, you can."
Marc moved around Neil and dropped to his knees before my brother. My
brother held his cock out for Marc. They'd obviously done this before.
Marc put his hands on Jeremy's hips and took my brother's cock into his
mouth. As Marc closed his eyes, he maneuvered Jeremy's massive cock all
the way into his mouth and throat, not gagging at all. Jeremy threw his
head back with his eyes closed and let out a low moan as he pumped Marc's
mouth a few times. I noticed that now both Manny and Scott had their cocks
in their hands and were clearly enjoying the show. This had all been a set
up to bring Neil into their secret cock-worshipping activities.
"Shit," Neil said as he watched Marc expertly suck Jeremy's
enormous cock.
"If you can do what he's doing, the $200 is yours. I'll even throw
my $50 in to make it $250," my brother offered Neil.
"You might as well try," Scott said.
Neil looked over at Manny and Scott who were now both standing,
stroking their cocks, watching Marc suck Jeremy's dick.
"Okay," Neil said.
Jeremy touched Marc under the chin and Marc pulled away from
Jeremy's cock and stood up. "Trick is to just relax," he told Neil.
Neil dropped to his knees and gingerly took Jeremy's swollen head
into his mouth. I could tell Neil wasn't comfortable enough to be able to
go all the way. I'd sucked a few huge cocks myself, and even if Neil had
sucked dick before, his body language was indicating he was uncomfortable.
He made a valiant attempt though, and managed to get three-fourths of it
into his mouth and throat before gagging and pulling away, coughing.
They all laughed as Neil stood up. "You can still redeem yourself.
You can keep a hundred of it if you suck Manny. And I think Scott would
even be willing to suck you off while you do Manny," Jeremy said as Marc
resumed his position at my brother's cock.
Neil looked from Jeremy to Manny to Scott. "Sure," Scott said as
he eyed Neil's dick which had now shrunken to a semi. Manny and Scott came
around both sides of the table to join Neil. Manny hopped onto the table
and grabbed his fat cock pointing it at Neil. Neil looked from Manny to
Scott who had started stroking Neil's cock to get it hard again. "Once you
go down on Manny, I'll go down on you. I'll even swallow your load," Scott
enticingly said.
Seeing his friends enjoying themselves and what had obviously been
some curiosity, Neil leaned over and took Manny's thick cock into his
mouth. After getting comfortable with Manny's cock, grabbing the shaft to
stroke it at the same time, Scott got t his knees and went after Neil's
cock. Neil was hard again by this time, and he visibly flinched as Scott
took his whole cock down his throat.
It was a hot scene. I had a raging hard on myself. I was
curiously entranced by watching Jeremy get his huge cock sucked. He
thoroughly enjoyed it as he held Marc's head and face fucked him,
alternating with allowing Marc to deepthroat him in lunges. I found myself
rubbing my cock through my pants. When I next looked up at my brother's
face, he was looking straight in my direction. I realized in my own
ecstacy, my face was partially in the light of the doorway, which had been
pushed further open with my leering. The other guys were still enjoying
themselves, and as I backed away into the dark. I heard my brother tell
Marc to stop for a minute, that he had to piss, and to help Scott with
Neil's dick.
I quickly backed away into the dark of the hallway. I still wasn't
sure which door was the bathroom. As I reached the foot of the stairs,
Jeremy was in the hall and had pulled the door closed as much as it would
go.
"Hey, Ben," Jeremy whispered.
I stopped. Although embarrassed, I was curious what he'd have to
say. He had his pants up and was fastening the buttons as he reached me.
"How long were you watching?"
"Not long," I lied. "No worries. Everyone needs to get their
freak on. I was told there was a bathroom down here with no line."
"We told everyone it was broken, put a sign by the light switch at
the top of the stairs."
"Didn't see it. I'll put it outside the door, so you can finish in
peace," I said.
"Hey, Marc or Scott will blow you too if you're down. They both
give great head. And they deepthroat. They like `em big," Jeremy offered.
"You're assuming I'm hung because you are?" I asked.
"I've seen it before, Ben."
"Well, that was a while ago. I'm sure you were young and
impressionable. I think you may have outgrown me."
"Really? I was just hoping to catch up someday," Jeremy said.
"Let me see it. You hard? We can compare."
"I think you've got enough going on back there," I replied.
"You aren't hard? Marc can suck you...," Jeremy stopped as his
hand came to rest on my swollen cock. "You are hard. Must have liked what
you were watching. Just show me, satisfy my curiosity."
"You too," I said as I reached to unbutton my pants. He undid his
pants again and pulled out his monster. I hardened even more as I saw the
faint outline of his monster spring free of his shorts in the dark. I had
mine out now too, and it was strangely exciting to be standing face to face
with my younger brother both of us with hardons pointed at each other.
Next thing I knew, Jeremy was pulling me even closer to him by my cock
until he had one of us in each hand.
"Feels familiar," he said. I felt his cock head nuzzle into my
pubes and touch my body as he leaned as close as he could get. He was
doing the comparison test, and although I could feel his pubes with the
head of my cock, it wasn't against his body yet. "Pretty close."
"Yeah," was all I could say.
Jeremy backed up a little, but kept holding my cock. "Kinda weird
to be holding both of ours at the same time," but I knew he didn't think it
was that weird, because he was stroking himself and mine as he said it. It
felt good. I was picturing what was still happening at the end of the
hall. Jeremy stopped stroking me and let go. He backed up a little more
still holding his cock. I could see he was looking at me, searching my
face in the dark for some sign. He held his cock by the base straight out
with his other hand at his side. I took it as an invitation, and went to
my knees. I had his cock in my mouth and down my throat in a few seconds.
He moaned low.
"Damn," he said almost under his breath. He took both sides of my
face in his hands and pumped his huge cock into me, and within seconds was
unloading down my throat. As he shot, I heard him half whimper and half
moan, trying to keep quiet. I swallowed it all. When I pulled off of him
and stood up, he said, "Sorry, Ben. I didn't even know I was that close.
You okay?"
"Yeah. You?" I asked.
"Yeah," he said a bit unsure. We then heard the sounds of at least
one of the other guys blowing his load amid moans and "oh fucks!"
"I'm gonna go back," Jeremy said as he tugged his pants up,
stuffing his dick back into his shorts.
I pulled mine up as well and said, "Yeah, I think I'll get going
myself.
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