Date: Sat, 13 Feb 2010 12:46:03 -0800 (PST)
From: j c <writerscramp71@yahoo.com>
Subject: Caleb Comes Undone

This is a complete work of fiction. Any similarity to anyone living or dead
is purely coincidental. This story is copywrited and sole property of the
author. It may not be reproduced in any media format without the express
written consent of the author.

Don't say a word, I have to tell you what happened and if you talk I don't
think I'll be able to get through the whole thing, so just listen. Last
night something happened that has changed me forever. I never would have
guessed a kiss could have turned my whole world upside down. Just a few
simple kisses, of course they were the best kisses I've ever had. Not that
I've had many but still, it was like electric fire on my lips running down
all the way to my toes. I still can't believe it has affected me this much.
Those soft lips, my god they felt so good on my mouth. I wasn't prepared
for the taste, like strawberries or some fruit. Wow... I don't think as
long as I live I will ever have a kiss so full of passion. There's just one
problem...well I'll have to tell you from the beginning so you understand
that it really wasn't my fault.

I went to Marissa's party; you know the one I told you about last week. It
was suppose to be a wicked party, the best one all year. Free booze and
weed, guaranteed to get laid, well that's what everybody claimed anyway. So
you know I was excited to go, especially since I'm a freshman and like only
four other freshman were even invited. Man I was so excited, you know I
haven't made it with a girl yet so I was practically dripping to have some
fun. They still talk about the one she threw last year. I was pretty sure
that by the time it was over I wouldn't be a virgin anymore.

I knew as soon as I walked into her house that I was way out of my league.
I mean I've been to parties before where people were drinking and making
out, stuff like that. But this was the wildest party I had ever seen.
People were all over the place, guys and girls practically fucking anywhere
they could find the space. A garage band was blaring out the latest songs
somewhere in the house. The stench of weed was giving me a contact buzz, so
you know I was feeling pretty good after about 15 minutes. Well a few beers
later and I was feeling really good. So when Marisa called everyone
together in her family room and announced we were going to play a game I
was all for it.

 She picked out four guys from the crowd, Tom, Ben, Hayden, and me. Then
she picked out four of the hottest girls at the party, Tami, Rachael,
Grace, and Beth. She had us line up across from each other, two girls on
one side along with two boys, boy girl boy girl. We were going to be blind
folded and spun around the room so we didn't know who we would be lined up
with. Then we were suppose to kiss the girl and try to guess who it
was. Who ever guessed right first would get to go into Marissa's parent's
room with the girl and..... you know. Man I was already half hard before
she got done explaining it all. I couldn't say why but I was certain I was
going to win.

Before I knew it rough hands had grabbed my shoulders and someone was tying
a blind fold over my eyes. Immediately I was pushed and shoved around the
room so hard it felt like I was on a carnival ride. Good thing I didn't
drink too much or I might have spewed right there. After what felt like an
eternity we were all lined up across from a girl. While I fought to gain
control of my breathing I heard Marisa's voice.

"Ok now these are the rules, and any failure to follow the rules will
result in swift and terrible punishment." She warned.

"No talking or use of hands and no peeking. And just so you know I'm
serious anyone who breaks these rules won't be invited back next year
understand?" she said with a giggle.

All I could do was nod my head, no way would I screw this up and get banned
from ever attending another one of Marissa's parties. God this was the best
thing that could have ever happened to me. My popularity as a freshman was
assured.

"Now you have to kiss for 3 minutes, then step back and I'll ask each of
you for your guess." I heard lots of chuckles and hushed laughter when she
said this. "And if no one gets it right you'll be reshuffled and given
another chance."

With that we were gently guided to stand in front of a girl. God I could
feel the heat coming off of her that's how close we were standing. And I
smelled the faintest hint of green apples.

"It starts now!" Marissa yelled.

I leaned forward slowly, I admit I was kind of scared to be doing this in
front of a whole room full of people but I knew without a doubt I didn't
want to be anywhere else at that moment.

As soon as my lips touched hers I was in another world. Man she had the
softest lips I had ever kissed. And even though at first she wasn't into it
after a few seconds I could feel her give in. I knew she was feeling the
same thing I was. I wish I had the words to tell you exactly how it felt.
This wasn't a normal kiss, somewhat wet and pleasant. No this was the kiss
to end all kisses. Once her tongue entered my mouth I couldn't help the
full on wood that tented out the front of my pants. Like an explosion tiny
little shocks of excitement radiated out from my lips to every part of my
body. My brain was melting and my senses went into overload, I felt like
one big giant raw nerve.

I know I was a little bit high and a little bit drunk but I swear this kiss
totally opened my eyes to a different world. I know I'm still a virgin and
all but it isn't like I haven't had my fair share of kisses. This kiss
wasn't like any other I ever had; it was a totally different experience. I
never knew it could be so good. It felt like hours later when Marisa called
a halt to the kissing and asked for our guesses.

"Beth?" Someone said.

"Wrong! Next." Marissa crowed.

"Was it Tami?" I heard another voice say.

"Wrong!" Marissa shouted again. I could hear snickers and stifled laughs
throughout the room. "Next!"

"Has to be Rachel, I'd know those sweet lips anywhere," Said the next guy.

 It was then that a loud eruption of laughter burst from the crowd.

The entire time I was standing there I kept wracking my brain trying to
remember which girl had smelled like green apples. I could have sworn that
I remembered passing someone and smelling that faint scent. But all too
soon it was my turn to guess and in desperation I blurted out the first
name to come to mind.

"Grace?" I said in my hesitation.

"Wrong again "Marissa yelled. "Since no one got it right it's time to
reshuffle and try again. Now you might get the same girl or it might be
someone different, who's to say."

Once more I was tossed around the room like a sack of dirty laundry. And
considering my sobriety and the experience I just had kissing, it felt like
I was floating on air. As we lined up and stepped closer I could once again
feel the heat of the girl across from me. And as I took the final step
forward I prayed it was the same one I was kissing before.

As I tilted my head and leaned in I caught a whiff of green apple soap. And
the nagging feeling that I had smelt it earlier hit me hard. But before I
could think about who it was I was lost in another world.

I really wish I could explain to you the complexity of this kiss. I know
I'm not doing it justice but dam if this kiss wasn't a religious
experience. Like a life altering epiphany this kiss changed my very soul,
reached in to touch my heart and yanked it out in the process. All while
sending every nerve in my body into sweet confusing ecstasy.

This time when Marissa called a halt to the kissing we didn't stop. Last
time she was more hesitant but this time I could tell she had fully given
herself over to the kiss same as I had. And as we continued kissing the
crowd exploded into laughter, shouts and applause. After another few
seconds someone pulled us apart and I couldn't help a tiny moan of
disapproval as our lips were separated.

"Alright you two settle down it's time to guess, and for your sake I hope
you get it right this time." She giggled

Once again we took turns guessing who we were kissing, but no one got it
right.

"OMG I don't think it's ever taken this long before, you guys suck!" Marisa
exclaimed loudly as the crowd's laughter boomed in the background.

"Ok lets get em set up again, and come on guys really put some effort into
it this time, these girls are just about to melt here." Marissa said while
laughing.

Man I couldn't get my heart to slow down I was so excited, somehow I just
knew I would get the same girl. One way or another I was going to find out
who she was, because at this rate I didn't think I could hold out much
longer before I blew a load in my pants. That's how crazy those two short
kisses made me feel, weird right?

I can't remember being tossed around before the last kiss, I'm sure we were
shuffled like the other times but my mind was only focused on one thing,
her. The next thing I know I'm standing face to face with her and that
hypnotic, entrancing scent of green apples was about to over whelm me. I
don't know if it was her body that was so hot or if my body heat was
reflecting back from her, but suddenly it felt like I was standing in an
oven.

Even before Marissa shouted go I leaned in and gently placed my lips on the
mystery girl. I didn't even hear the laughter as she began to kiss me back;
I was totally lost in her kiss. What started out with gentle passion soon
turned into savage lust. She pushed her tongue deep into my mouth which
only fueled my eagerness. As my tongue fought for control tremors began to
shake my legs, a low buzzing began in my ears and if anyone could have seen
I'm sure my eyes had rolled up inside my head. My entire body began to
pulse, clenching and releasing, clenching and releasing over and over
again. Somewhere in the back of my mind I was screaming at myself to stop.
I knew where this was leading but for some reason I couldn't turn away from
this kiss. With each passing second I could feel my body getting closer to
that final release.

Somewhere in the fog of lust my mind focused on that scent of green
apples. I remembered heading into the kitchen to get a beer and there
standing in the open door of the fridge was Ben. And as I reached past him
to snag one for myself I couldn't deny the luscious scent of ripe green
apples. As my lips worked overtime and my body went into orbit my mind
shouted at me to stop. Suddenly it all became clear; and while my brain
screamed out to run away my body wouldn't let me.

Never in my life had I thought about Ben or any other guy in a sexual way,
it honestly never crossed my mind. I had never felt anything like this
about a guy or girl for that matter. But in that moment of sexual bliss I
realized I didn't care. All I knew was that anyone who could make me feel
this way deserved my complete attention.

As Ben continued to kiss me it felt like his lips were throbbing, pulsing
with a burning passion. Then I felt and heard a growl in the back of his
throat that soon turned into little whimpers of excitement. I kissed him
back harder than ever before trying to give him the same amount in return.
It was then I knew what I had to do.

If there was a way for you to delve into my mind and experience it then
maybe you'd feel a fraction of what I felt. No amount of words can describe
what happened between us. Even if I spent the rest of my life trying to
explain I doubt I could make you understand. It's beyond words; it's beyond
any form of expression. .....sigh......I fell in love by that third kiss. I
know it started with the first but that third kiss sealed my fate. There's
no way on earth anyone could have resisted.

"Ok ok settle down boys and girls." Marissa yelled. "Let's see if anyone
can get it right this time."

As I stood there waiting for my chance to guess I began to smile. I knew
with a certainty that he felt the same thing I did. I mean there's no way
anyone could have lived through that kiss and not have been changed by
it. And even if he hadn't realized he was kissing a guy I knew it wouldn't
matter in the end. That's how amazing this experience was. And now I knew
what had been the inspiration for so many, now I knew why someone would cut
off his ear or how someone could walk on water. There was nothing that
could stand in the way of this, and there was nothing I wouldn't do. Even
if it meant destroying what little bit of reputation I had.

As the first two guys guessed I waited with so much anticipation I thought
my heart was going to explode. And when Marissa asked for my guess my whole
body was still tingling from the excitement of it all.

"Well" I said as I cleared my throat. "it can only be Ben."

For just a split second I thought I might have made a mistake, the entire
room fell silent. Just as I was pulling off my blindfold to look at the
person standing across from me Ben was doing the same. And when he looked
at me he gave me the most adorable little smile I had ever seen. Then he
began staring at the floor while blushing furiously. My god he was the most
beautiful thing in the world at that moment.

I didn't hesitate; I walked right over to him and took his hand.

"Are you ready?" I said as I bit my lip.

He couldn't speak he just nodded and we walked up to Marissa's parents room
to claim our prize.