Date: Fri, 2 Jun 2000 21:14:19 -0700 (PDT)
From: Steve Pederson <tremyus2000@hotmail.com>
Subject: Darrien and Eliah - A Summer To Remember Teen/Teen
Darrien and Eliah - A Summer To Remember
Written by: S.C.Pederson
**Authors Notes**
I first wrote this story back in 1988. The was my first attempt at
writing this type of story. I thank my boyfriend of the time, Pat
(I miss him so much), for convincing me to try and write a story.
At that time, I had no idea really how to write this type of story.
Anyway, over the last few days, I have re-written it. I have added
a lot of stuff I had not in the original version. Thanks again to
Pat for convincing me to write a story.
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**Legal Stuff**
This is a story about two consenting teen males, discovering
love for the first time. It contains graphic sex scenes, and other
homosexual activities. If you are under legal age where you live,
or if you find this type of stuff offensive, then please leave. If
you are of legal age, and like this stuff, then read on dudes!!
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Darrien and Eliah - A Summer to Remember
Summer is a great time to be with your friends and family.
Basically just hanging out, and having fun. It was for myself and my
friend Eliah, a time of learning, and other stuff.
By the way, My name is Darrien McDermott. I am sixteen years old,
and gay. I stand about 5'9". I am in the 11th grade. I stand about 6
feet tall. I have almost black hair, almost shoulder length. My eyes
are really cool. They seem to change color depending on what type of
mood I am in. My skin is very fair in complexion, and I burn real easy.
I am not that skinny, or a twig as some friends would call it. Nor am I
very muscular. I am sort of in the middle. I usually wear dark colored
clothing, or dress slacks, and shirt. On of the best features I have is
my cock. When hard, it's about 9 and a half inches. On a normal day I
usually jerk of four or five times. Usually thinking about my friend
Eliah.
My friend Eliah Jenkins, is totally opposite of me. He is the same
age as me. He is a complete jock. His body is so buff. He works out
in the weight room at school. He is about the same height as me, maybe
a bit taller. His hair is a sandy blonde color. His eyes a really cool
green. His usual attire, is either a addidas track suit or shorts and
a tanks top. He is so total sexy in anything he wears. He also has a
really sexy ass. One thing I like on him is his cock. It's got a really
cool shape, an it's uncut.I see it all the time in the showers after
gym class. I think it's 6" soft.
Anyway back to the story.....
It all began in the winter of 1987. Eliah and I had agreed to spend
the summer together, as we had not spent a lot of time together during
the school year. We planned what we were going to do this summer. At
first we could not really decide what we were going to do, but then
finally after some argument, it was decided that we would go camping.
Not having been camping in a long time, it sounded like a great idea.
Some people thought we were nuts, planning everything far in advance,
but it was the only thing, that kept us happy and occupied. One thing
that became a major argument, was whether or not we should invite or
friends or not. After arguing, I finally agreed that we wouldn't invite
anyone else. The next thing we did was make lists of everything we
needed to bring with us.
During the remainder of winter, and all of spring, we went over
everything at least a thousand time. We wanted everything to be perfect.
Finally, summer arrived, and the countdown to summer break started.
Time seemed to drag on endlessly. During this time we decided to go for
two weeks, but agreed to take enough supplies for four, in case we
decided to stay longer.
After waiting an eternity, the big day finally arrived. We had not
decided on a place as yet, and when I phoned around, most of the good
places were booked. After an exhaustive search, we opted to go to a
small lake, three hours outside the city limits. Bear Lake sounded
great, as it was quiet, and none of our friends would think of going
somewhere like that.
It took us two days to get everything loaded into the trucks. We
were only going to take one truck, but realized we had too much stuff
for one truck.
During this two days, some of our friends invited us to go with
them, but we said no. Plus we did not tell anyone where we were going,
but just that we were traveling for a couple weeks. No one said shit
about, or bugged us about it. Luckily the place we were going, was
not a camping hot spot.
Once everything was packed in the trucks, we were on our way. We
decided to spot half way there, for gas, and maybe a quick bite to eat.
We arrived early in the evening. We found a semi-secluded site right
away. It was near the water, but not really near the other sites.
A perfect place for things to come. We unloaded the trucks, and
pitched my folks eight person tent, a big tent for two people,but it
gave us mor storage area. We also pitched a mesh tent over the table
and the cooking gear. We decided to use the stove and barbecue, and we
would use the fire pit only if we wanted to sit by a fire.
I happened to notice, when we got there, that most of the other
people were older, except for a group of kids our age. I didn't care
and neither did Eliah, we were just happy to be out of the city.
After a light supper, we headed down to the lake for a quick swim.
Then we headed back to our sight, and warmed ourselves by the fire.
Eliah made some hot chocolate, and we talked till early morning,
something we had not done in a longtime.
We finally hit the sack, but I didn't sleep much, so after tossing
and turning for several hours, I finally decided to get up. I looked
over at Eliah, and looking so peaceful, I let him sleep and headed
down to the lake. I sat by the water and wrote in my book.
I had lost track of time, and the next thing I knew Eliah was
standing there. At the same time, the big group of guys came down.
Eliah and I headed back to camp, as we did not want to hear all the
noise. We had a quick breakfast, and then headed into town to look
around for a bit.
It was late afternoon when we got back. Eliah decided to go for
a swim, and I stayed and made supper. I was done, and had eaten by the
time he returned. He apologized, and I never said anymore about it. He
looked a little upset, but I didn't push it. I had things on my mind
too. We had an early night, and the next day, I woke up and decided to
go for a walk. I noticed that several of the sites were now empty, I
guess people had to go back to work, or got tired of the noise. I
happened to walk by the other guys campsite, and although it didn't
occur to me at the time, they we sleeping in pairs by the fire. I
decided not to mention it to Eliah, because to my knowledge he was
homophobic. It did make me depressed because I was hiding things from
Eliah about myself, but we'll get to that later.
Anyway, Eliah decided to go for a walk, and when he came back he
was in a good mood. I never mentioned it to him, or asked him why. That
night as e sat around the fire, I noticed he was really quiet. He
mentioned out of the blue, that the other group of guys were all gay.
I thought to myself, that he was going to freak. He just sat there. He
had a sad and depressed look on his face. He had mentioned when we were
heading out hear he had a secret to share with me. I finally figured
out what it was, or I hope I had. He was gay. I wanted him to tell me,
so I never said anything. That night as we lay in bed, I heard Eliah
crying. I wanted to go to him, but I didn't know if I should. Then he
turned to me and asked what I thought of gay people. I told him they
were people like him and I. Then he blurt out that he was gay. I told
him I figured it out already, but wanted to hear it from him. He said
he was with one of the guys from the other group. He had wanted to
spend time with his friend Aaron. He had been upset when he had seen
Aaron the day we arrived, and scared, but thankfully Aaron had realized
things and kept quiet. He told me he acted homophobic to fit in, but
it hurt him inside. I felt bad for him, having to hide it away all this
time. The relief in his voice was good to hear. I promised him that our
friendship would never change.
I still had not told him my secret. I knew he had a boyfriend, or
I assumed he and Aaron were going out. So how could I tell him now? How
could I tell him how I felt about him? I was hurting, and confused
inside.
I had a very restless sleep that night, I had wanted to tell Eliah,
but I couldn't.I was angry at myself. I wanted to go home, but I wanted
to stay.
The next day, I got up before him, and walked into town. I needed
time to deal with the emotions going through my head. I sat in a coffee
shop for a couple hours, and then went back. When I got back Eliah was
gone. I figured he was with Aaron, but I found a note. He said he knew
I needed time to sort through everything. I sat there, and cried, what
was I to do? When I heard Eliah coming, I took off.I didn't want him to
see me like this. He tried to stop me but I just ran. I ended up at the
lake, and sat down crying. I didn't know what to do. I was lost in my
confused thoughts that I didn't even hear anyone come up. It was one of
the guys from the other group. He had come down to get away from the
others. He'd seen me sitting there crying and came over. At first I
didn't say much. (His name was Jesse by the way). Then I just lost it.
I told him I was having trouble telling Eliah the truth, and that I was
hurting our friendship in the process. Jesse made me realize that I was
going to drive myself crazy if I didn't tell Eliah. He also told me
Eliah called me a liar, and that I hated him. He had said that
everything I had said the night before was a crock of shit. I felt like
an ass for doing this to him. After all he was my best friend. I had
to tell him. I went back to camp, and Jesse went and got him. He came
back with Eliah,and then he left so I could talk to Eliah alone.
All I did was look at him, and I broke down. I apologized over and over
for being such an ass. Then I told him the truth, that I was gay. He
looked at me. I told him I had been to scared and confused to tell him.
Then I told him how I felt about him, but that I knew he was going out
with Aaron. He started laughing. I looked at him confused. He told me
that he and Aaron, had not gone out for some time. Aaron and Jesse
were going out. He said he was single, but that he was interested
in seeing someone again. He kept looking at me, and winking. I finally
clued in. He was asking him out. I said yes almost right away.We sat
talking for a long time, about everything that we had kept from each
other.
That night we went to bed together. We laid in bed cuddling for
some time. Then Eliah started running his hand over my body. Exploring
my body. It felt so good. His hands found their way into my shorts, and
he started to jerk me off. I was in heaven. He asked if I wanted him to
suck it. Oh gawd did I ever. I helped him get my shorts off, and then
watched as he moved down to my now fully erect cock. He licked the tip
of it, and then ran his tongue down the shaft, and then back up to the
tip. He was good. He soon had taken my whole cock in his mouth, and
slowly moved up and down, occassionally stopping and licking my nuts.
Then he moved so he could get access to my engorged nuts. He sucked
on one and then the other, then he took them both in his mouth. Then
he lifted them and started licking the fleshy part underneath. I lifted
my ass up to give him better access. He moved towards my waiting fuck
hole, and started to lick around it. Then he started to tongue fuck my
hole. I had never had this done before. I was in total bliss. It was
also pushing me closer to shooting my load. I warned him, and he
returned to my cock, and took it quickly to the hilt. Up and down he
went. Getting faster and fater. I couldn't hold out much longer, and
soon I was filling his mouth with my warm juices. He swallowed every
ounce that I shot. Then he came and laid beside me.
After resting for a bit, I decided it was my turn. I finally was
getting the one thing I had dreamt about. I was going to suck Eliah's
cock. I reached over and pulled down his shorts. His beautiful cock
sprung out. I wrapped my hand around it, and started to slowly jerk
him off. Then I moved so I was over his cock. I didn't tease him, like
he did me, I just quickly took him to the hilt. He tasted good. I began
to slowly move up and down on his manhood. I hadn't had much parctice at
giving head but I learned quickly. Soon I had built up a rythme.I reach
my other hand up, and started to massage his nuts. Eliah moaned as I
continued to suck him and massage his nuts. I started to pick up the
pace, and then stopped. I wanted more. I wanted him to fuck my virgin
ass. I let him know. He smiled at me. He reached in his bag and pulled
out a bottle of lube. I turned over so I was on all fours. He poured a
generous amount of lube in my ass crack, and then he push one of his
fingers in. It didn't hurt much. Then he pushed in a second finger, and
then a third. Once the third finger was in, it started to hurt a bit.
Then he pulled his finger out, and replaced them with his cock. He
gently started to push his cock in. It hurt like hell. He stopped,
but I told him to keep going. He kept pushing his cock in and then he
would pull it out a bit. I was soon getting use to his big cock in my
hole. He kept working at it until his whole cock was in my ass. The
mixture of pain and pleasure was intense. I felt myself getting hard
again. Eliah kept pumping away at my ass. every shot of pain I felt,
was intensified with pleasure, as he hit my prostrate with every inward
thrust. I blew my load, as he was pumping my ass. I was no longer a
virgin. I felt him increase his speed, and soon I felt his warm juices
explode inside my ravaged hole. He colapsed on my spent. Not long after
that, we fell asleep. With him laying on me.
The next day we hung out with Aaron, Jesse, and their friends. we
ended up stay for four weeks. The trip turned out to be my greatest, our
greatest, time. I had a new lover, and I felt great.Soon we would have
to back and face our friends and family. Eliah and I really didn't care
what people thought, but they needed to know.
When we got back, we got our parents together and told them. They
were shocked but supportive of us, all the same. Over the next week we
told our friends. Out of all our friend, both his and mine, only three
of them told us to fuck off. The rest of the were fully supportive of
us. Some of our friends turn out to be gay, and a few of them were
bisexual. A couple of Eliah's team mates came to us and show curiousity
towards sex with another guy. We helped them out (that is another story
though), and the decided they enjoyed it, but never really did anything
about it.
All of this took place ten years ago. Eliah and I are still
together today. Of the people who told us to fuck off, only one never
really came around. The other two turned out to be gay, and got freaked.
They didn't know why, but they had gotten scared, and ran.
Well that was my summer to remember. I sure won't be able to forget
finding the love of my life, in an unsuspected way, and place.
The End
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Well there you have it, my very first story, I ever wrote. Revised,
but still the same storyline. When I wrote this story, I was only
meant to be this one installment, but since revising it, I am thinking
of continuing it for a couple of chapters or so. I will have to see what
happens.
Don't forget to read my other story, Jase and I. A first installment in
another series, I am working on.
Love to you all,
Steve.
Email me at: tremyus2000@hotmail.com