Date: Wed, 8 Sep 2004 09:50:32 -0700 (PDT)
From: Jay Winton <spokenword87@yahoo.com>
Subject: erik's song 17

Erik's Song

I'm wrapping this stuff up...

Jay's P.O.V

	I couldn't make out everything but I heard the doctor mumbled that
he'll be ok, that he regained life...what's that mean? I'm going insane in
my own thoughts. I sat down, in that all familiar darkness of my brain as I
started to hum...and there it was...the half-completed song. I sat
down...and prepared my self to write.

You were the one, the one that was there...in my dreams, you answered my
Prayer.  You believed in me did everything you could to make me Succeed.
Your words, when u speak, are like an angel breathing on my cheek.

Time goes by, but I know in my heart, the hear that tells no lies, that our
love will never die. I know that it's true, when I look at you that I need
you and want you... I crave you. I'm feeling things that I've never felt
before; I'm loving the boy that I adore. I'm falling though, is this the
end? The true test to see if what we have will ever end? I can't tell...no
one can but as for now you're the one that I give my hand. You leaving me,
my heart wouldn't be able to stand...I wish this love will last so very
long...I wish you could hear this...this love called Erik's Song.

I wiped my tear away as I laid the pencil down...as I felt my heart start
to break.


Back At Home:

"Where the fuck is that faggot?" Jay's step-dad spit out to his wife as he
held her down on the bed and slapped her.

"I don't know!" My mom screamed.

"STOP! STOP! YOU"RE HURTING ME, AND THE KIDS ARE WATCHING" She pleaded with
my step-dad.

"Good, they can see how much of a slut you are" He said as he undid her
blouse and pulled down her pants.

"GET OFF MY MOM" Julian screamed as he jumped on top of my step-dad.

"Get off of me you fucking faggot" My step-dad screamed as he hurled Julian
at the wall...as he hit it with a thud.

Julian got up from the wall and went to the kitchen where he returned with
a knife.

"GET OFF MY MOM" He screamed as he dug the knife deep into the back of my
step-dad...right through the thing he had nothing of...right through the
heart.


Jay:

" GET OFF MY MOM" I yelled in to no one...the darkness just then left.

"GET OFF MY MOM" I screamed again, this time I had awoke and everyone heard
me.

"Doctor, doctor! he's awake" The nurse yelled as she brought the doctor in.

"Well, looks like someone is awake" He said to me with a smile as he
approached me. I looked around.

"Where am I?" I said in a panic way.

"You're in the hospital you were in a coma," The doctor said as he checked
my vitals and blood pressure.

"Call his parent's" The doctor ordered the nurse."


"Mommy, are you ok?" Julian asked as he and the rest of my brother's hugged
my mom crying.

"Yes, yes I'm fine, are you ok?" She asked Julian as she noticed the big
red spot on his back.

"Yea mommy, I'm fine," Julian said with a smile. Mom knew what she had to
do; she had to call the cops.

"Hello, yes...I just killed my husband" She said as she started to cry.


Back in the hospital room:

" Jay" CJ said as he and Erik's dad came and hugged me.

"Where's Erik?" I managed to cough out.

"We don't know, he said he was coming to see you" CJ said.

"Jay!" Julian yelped as he came toward me running.

"Hey buddy" I said with a smile as I saw him, and the rest of my brothers.

"How's everything?" I asked Julian.

"I killed daddy...and the police came and took mommy away, and they dropped
us off here cause mommy said our real dad was here" Julian said.

" My heart dropped"

heya...look we're almost through with the story...

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