Date: Wed, 15 Mar 2000 22:48:26 EST
From: Double A
Subject: Raven Hair (Part 7)

Disclaimer:

     After a hiatus of sorts, I am back with another story! Yay!
Anyway, due to personal problems, I've been unable/unwilling to write much
of anything for a long time. Here is a new story from me to you. For those
of you who know my style and enjoy it, you should really like this
one. Like I said, though, I haven't written anything for a while, so I may
be a bit rusty. For those who don't know my style, I tend to use a lot of
build-up and "storyline".  So, if you came on to find a story for a quick
jack-off, then this probably ain't for you. However, if you want to take
the time to read a beautiful tale of young love, then sit back, take a sip
from your glass of wine, and enjoy!

And remember...Always stand up for what you think is right, don't listen to
bullshit, no matter who is saying it, and always speak with your fists and
swear a lot to be heard!

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Part 7:

	"Okay." David mimicked.

	The two sat there in the darkness for several seconds, just looking
at each other, the redness of their faces now quite prominent.

	Finally, Aaron took a deep breath and whispered, "So...umm...how do
we do this?"

	David shrugged and whispered back, "I...I don't really know. Are
you going first or am I?"

	"First for what?" Aaron asked.

	David shrugged, becoming quite nervous with all the talk of it,
"You know...first to ...umm...suck."

	Aaron shook his head, "Nyuh Uh, not me."

	"Well, not me either." David replied, adamantly.

	The two sat in silence, both appearing deep in thought. David was
wondering whether he should just call the whole thing off, or at least move
down to just stroking, but as his eyes gazed down at the shape of Aaron's
penis underneath his boxers, appearing to look quite stiff, David just
couldn't let this opportunity pass.

	"I'll do it." David sighed.

	Aaron turned toward him, "You'll do it?"

	"I'll do it." David replied, shrugging, "I'll...I'll suck you."

	Smiling nervously, Aaron looked down at himself and replied,
"O...Okay."

	David took a deep breath, "Okay...here goes. Umm...I guess...Lie
back a bit, like the guy was doing."

	Aaron took a deep breath too and slowly leaned back on David's bed,
supporting his body with his hands behind him.

	David bit his bottom lip in concentration and got onto his
stomach. Looking up at the nervous eyes of the long haired boy, he asked,
"How should I do this?"

	"What do you mean?"

	David looked over at the television screen and said, "In the porno,
the girl was between the guys legs, but in this other one I saw, the girl
was on the side of the guy, and this other one..."

	"I'm not sure if I want to do this anymore." Aaron replied, cutting
David off.

	"No, no." David shot back, "I'll just go between your legs."

	Aaron sighed and nodded, "Okay. Umm...Hold on...."

	Avoiding David's gaze, Aaron slowly lay prone on the bed, then
reached down and took the waistband of his boxers between his
fingers. Forcing a laugh, he looked up at David and said, "I guess there's
no point in asking you to turn around, eh?"

	David shrugged, "I could anyway, if you wanted me to." then added,
"I'd do anything for you."

	Aaron took a deep breath and smiled, this time genuinely, "You
would, eh?  Well, you don't have to turn around."

	With that said, Aaron pulled his knees up against his chest and
drew down his boxer shorts. For a brief moment, before Aaron put his legs
back down on the bed, David spotted the slightly split crack of Aaron's
ass. David had heard that guys did things with each other that involved
that, but the idea seemed way too sick for David to fathom. Meanwhile,
though, David had something totally different before him. No longer
contained by his underwear, Aaron's penis was now in David's clear view for
the first time.

	It lay half-erect against his stomach, surrounded by only a few
strands of black pubic hair, and appeared to be bigger than David's, but
then David didn't have a very high opinion of himself. The circumcised head
shone somewhat in the darkness, from some residual water from Aaron's
shower and, perhaps, sweat.

	As David gazed at it, his breathing quickened and he began to feel
dizzy.  He hadn't seen many penises in his life, but this was probably the
most beautiful one he'd ever seen. His own erection throbbed and his heart
was filled with the longing to do something which he still wasn't quite
sure of.

	His forehead beginning to shine with a sheen of sweat, David looked
up at Aaron and asked, "Are...Are you ready?"

	Aaron shrugged and spread his legs slightly, "I...I...I'm not
sure. I guess."

	David smiled awkwardly, "Let me know how I do."

	Slowly, David crawled forward a bit, so his head hovered over
Aaron's penis. His hand slowly reached down toward it, with all the grace
of a man reaching out to pet a strange pitbull. Aaron's eyes regarded the
hand as the very same pitbull. When David's fingers made contact with it,
Aaron jumped, like a bolt of electricity went through him, and whispered,
"Hold on, hold on. Time out for one second!"

	David pulled his hand back and looked up at Aaron.

	Aaron shrugged, "Just go slow, okay? I mean, like...you were going
slow, but...but be careful and don't...I mean, you have to stop if I say
so, okay?  If I say to stop, you have to stop, okay? Right away, okay? I
mean, if you don't, then...Well, just...oh...I don't know..."

	David frowned and nodded, "Aaron, we don't have to do this if you
really don't want to."

	Aaron shook his head, "Umm...Well, let me do something...."

	Aaron reached up and took David's hand. David allowed Aaron to
guide it, as he knew almost exactly what Aaron was doing.

	Slowly, shakily, Aaron brought David's hand down and gently touched
the tips of his fingers against the shaft of his penis. Aaron took a deep
breath and closed his eyes, biting his lower lip, then let go of David's
hand and let it just sit on his dick. After a couple of seconds, he opened
his eyes again and said, "Okay, you can do it now."

	David took a deep breath and slowly wrapped his fingers around the
shaft of Aaron's penis. It was the single most amazing feeling he'd ever
experienced.  He could feel the organ getting stiffer in his fingers and
could feel it throb with every pulse of Aaron's heartbeat. He looked up at
Aaron's face, and saw Aaron's looking down at his hand with nervousness in
his eyes.

	"You ready?" David whispered.

	Aaron nodded and whispered back, "I think so. Just, go slow okay?"

	David nodded, "Okay."

	David's face slowly descended toward Aaron's stiff penis. When his
fingers pulled it upright in anticipation, he heard Aaron take a deep
breath. He looked up quickly, but the raven-haired boy just nodded.

	Not wasting another second, David lowered his mouth down until two
inches of Aaron's penis were in his mouth. His eyes looking up at Aaron's
face, he could see a small smile come across Aaron's lips. That smile
quickly disappeared, as David clamped his lips down around what he had in
his mouth and gave it a gentle suck.

	The gasp that escaped from Aaron's lips sounded something like,
"Mmmmmahhhargh" but it was single most beautiful sound that David had
heard, to date. Aaron's eyes had squeezed tightly closed, and David could
feel the muscles in his pelvic area tighten up briefly.

	Aaron's penis on his tongue didn't taste as weird as David had
anticipated that it would. He could taste a bit of chlorine from the pool,
combined with a bit of soap and the bitter, slightly salty taste of sweat.

	The smell, on the other hand, was something else entirely. Maybe it
was the mixture of sweat and chlorine, or maybe it was just the unique
scent of Aaron, but something entered David's nose and travelled to his
brain, bringing him up to a whole new level. The feeling that if he
happened to die right now, it wouldn't even matter. The feeling that his
entire life had led up to this moment. The feeling that...well...it was The
Feeling again, only much, much stronger. It was a feeling that David only
got at one another particular time in his life.

	He had been idly masturbating once, when he was 11, and he kept
feeling this feeling creeping up on him, but he wasn't sure what. Every
time he'd stop stroking himself, it would go away, but when he started
again, it would come back a little bit stronger. He'd managed to play this
game with his body for over an hour, until, finally, he'd stroked himself
for a second too long and this...this thing had happened to him, where it
felt like his whole body had been filled with a feeling of...of Good, that
was so strong and so powerful that he swore he was going to squeeze his
eyes closed so tightly, that his eyeballs would pop out of his sockets and
roll out of his mouth.

	Now, David had that feeling again, but he hadn't even touched his
own penis and he wasn't having a prepubescent orgasm. He just had the penis
of a long-haired, monotone-voiced boy that he'd been friends with for less
than two months, in his mouth, but somehow it felt like his whole life had
ascended to a new level. Like the script of his life had hit a new beat.
Like the song of his soul had hit a new note. Like...

	"Ah, shut up and just do it already!" David thought to himself.

	With one hand grasping the shaft of Aaron's dick gingerly, David
started a slow up and down movement on two inches of Aaron's dick, in his
mouth. Each suck or lick of his tongue brought a new groan to Aaron's
lips. David couldn't bare to stop and tell Aaron to shut up, so he prayed
that his mom was asleep.

	In between pants, Aaron hissed, "Oh God, please don't stop!"

	"Not for a million dollars and total Israeli-Arab peace." David
thought to himself, as he sucked and slurped Aaron's throbbing dick, drool
dripped from David's mouth.

	Aaron's hands behind him, he pushed up and thrusted his hips
forward against David's mouth. David tried to time it, so he pulled back
slightly, but several times he mistimed it and ended up gagging to the
point where he nearly vomited, but still he sucked on Aaron's dick. His jaw
was getting very tired from its work and his neck was getting stiff, but
still he went on.

	Suddenly, Aaron tossed his head back and let out a noise that sound
that alternated between a high-pitched whine and a low-pitched hum, and his
thrusts into David's mouth became more urgent. David was still sucking on
Aaron's dick and working to meet his thrusts, when the taste in David's
mouth changed from just saliva to saliva and something else.

	It only took a few seconds to realize what happened and he pulled
his mouth off Aaron's dick. Not sharply, but still quick enough that
Aaron's eyes shot open and a look confusion came across his sweaty face.

	"Wha...What?" He panted.

	David swallowed what was in his mouth and wiped his wrist across
his lips, before replying, "You spermed in my mouth!"

	Aaron blinked and then a smile came over his lips again. His braces
glittering in the darkness, he replied, "I did, didn't I? I'm so sorry. I
couldn't help it, you know. It just sort of happens."

	David shrugged, "But you should have told me before you did it!"

	Aaron sat up and shrugged back, "Just go spit it out, then."

	David turned to Aaron and he smiled, "It was only a little bit, and
I swallowed it already."
	Aaron frowned, "Are you mad at me now?"

	David wiped his lips with his wrist again and shook his head. He
giggled, "No, stupid. I'm not mad at you."

	Aaron nodded, then cocked his head and asked, "So, what does it
taste like?"

	David thought for a second, than came up with, "Sort of like milk
that's going a bit rotten, but a little sweet too."

	Aaron smiled, "Cool. Want me to do you now?"

	David nodded and lay back.

	Aaron reached over and pulled his boxers back up over his now-soft,
wet penis, then, without wasting any time, pulled David's legs apart and
grabbed at his briefs.

	"Whoa!" David whispered, slapping Aaron's hands away, "Lemme! And
go slow, okay? I did it for you!"

	David reached down and gently eased down his briefs, tossing them
over to the foot of the bed. His fully erect dick stood at the 45 degree
angle from his pudgy stomach, surrounded by a small bush of pubic hair.

	"Wow, you have hair!" Aaron commented.

	David shrugged and his blush deepened in reddish pitch, "I guess."

	He's always been embarrassed of his early development. He was the
only one at summer camp that past summer who had pubic hair, and he always
showered off in a corner, away from the bare-crotch'ed other boys.

	Gingerly reaching down, Aaron wrapped his slender fingers around
David's penis and looked down at it, then up at David's face. "Now what?"
Aaron asked.

	"Well, you just put your mouth onto it and suck. Watch your teeth,
though, and go slow at first." David replied.

	Aaron nodded and, licking his lips, he reached up with his free
hand and pushed his hair away from his face and behind his ears. As soon as
he lowered his head, though, the hair went right back into his eyes.

	So much so, in fact, that they acted as a curtain and David jumped
as he felt the slimy, hot presence of Aaron's mouth surrounding his
six-inch penis. Obviously, Aaron didn't take that as a sign to stop,
because the next thing David felt was Aaron's lips clamp around his dick.

	He knew now why Aaron had made all those weird sounds. No matter
how often and in how many different ways David masturbated, this was
probably the best feeling yet. Like him, Aaron didn't seem to know exactly
what to do, and just seemed to use his instincts to guide him. David lay
back and panted, as he felt Aaron's tongue stabbing at his dick, while his
mouth sucked on it.  His hips slowly thrust forward, not nearly as
desperately as Aaron's had, but still involuntarily.

	The arousal of sucking Aaron's penis had heightened David's own
arousal, so it didn't take longer than a couple of minutes, before David
felt that familiar feeling in his stomach and balls. Only, it was coming a
lot faster now than when he jerked off. He was about to open his mouth to
tell Aaron, but, instead, decided to pay him back.

	With a shudder and a sharp intake of breath, David felt two streams
of his young seed stream from his penis into Aaron's mouth. Aaron didn't
seem to mind though, as he continued to suck on David's dick for a few more
seconds.

	"Oww!" David yelped, as he felt Aaron's teeth bite on the head of
his dick.

	Aaron pulled up and smiled, "You spermed in my mouth too."

	"Paid ya back!" David mocked, as he reached over and grabbed his
briefs.

	Aaron smiled, "Well, I swallowed it too. It tasted kinda like a
medicine that I took once for an ear infection. Salty, but sweet and kind
of icky."

	David nodded and pulled his briefs back up.

	The two boys sat and smiled at each other for a few more minutes,
than David laughed and said, "That was fun, wasn't it?"

	Aaron nodded and smiled, "A lot of fun."

	With that, Aaron slid down out of the bed and back down onto the
floor and David gathered up his comforter and slid underneath it.

	Laying his head on his pillow, Aaron looked up and whispered, "Good
night, David."

	David turned over and giggled, "Good night, Jesus."

	"Asshole." Aaron giggled, before turning over and closing his eyes.

	The two boys, tired from the night's activities, fell asleep rather
quickly.