Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 12:10:56 -0700 (PDT)
From: Greg <fotogme11@yahoo.com>
Subject: I'll Suck You Revised chapter 1

I'll Suck You

By: Photo Guy (fotogme11@yahoo.com)

The author copyrights this story, with permission for posting on the Nifty
Archive.  It may not be copied to another website without prior permission
from the author.

This fictional story involves gay sex between family members and their
friends, and it is written solely for the reading enjoyment of people who
aren't offended by material of this type!  If you are underage, or this
type of material is illegal where you live, please leave now.

For those of you who read the original chapter one, I was brand new to
writing at that time.  And over the months, I refined my writing skills.
I'm going to post revised chapters one through four ... and probably a
chapter or two in the middle of the story, with some very minor revisions.

Some people might ask why I would post a story, if I wasn't 100% happy with
it.  I guess that's a good question, but I could have never written this
story without all the support I've received from my readers!

This revision is how chapter one should have been written in the beginning
...



HOW IT ALL BEGAN ...

I'LL SUCK YOU 3:15 April 27

They were only words on a bathroom wall, but I think my reaction to them
changed my life forever!  I know it brought me a lot closer to those I
loved the most.  Hi, everybody!  I'm Christopher Matthews ... Chris to my
friends.  And I'm a sophomore at the University of Colorado; but this story
actually began a few years earlier, in the spring of 2002:

I always thought of myself as a pretty normal fifteen year-old guy; average
height and build with brown medium-length hair and eyes, and a dark smooth
complexion.  I lived with my dad Tim, and my thirteen year-old brother
Kaiden.  Mom was killed in a car accident a couple of years ago.  We all
miss her a lot, but Dad has never been the same since she died.

We used to be a fun-loving, close family; but after Mom's death, Dad
retreated into his work.  He's a photographer, and a good one so I've
heard.  He always SAID he loved us and usually gave us what we asked for,
but we were never really affectionate, like we were before the accident.
We didn't talk a lot any more.  It was as if he was afraid to get too close
to us.  Maybe he blamed himself for her death; I don't know ...  like I
said, his work came first and I felt like Kaiden and I were afterthoughts.
My dad and brother play a big part in this story, so I plan to tell you
more about them later.

We lived in a small Missouri town.  It was large enough that you didn't
know everybody, but small enough that you hardly ever went anywhere without
meeting someone you knew.  I was nearing the end of my first year in high
school.  (You remember how it was when you were a kid; as Memorial Day
approached, the school days seemed to get longer and longer ...)  The days
were crawling by!

It was a beautiful late April day. The kind TV weathermen called 'resort
weather'. Whatever ...  If you've ever lived in the mid-west, you know
exactly what I'm talking about.  After the cooler weather and sometime snow
of winter and before the oppressive heat and humidity of summer, it was one
of those spectacular days that made you wonder how you could ever want to
live anywhere else.  And at fifteen, I'd never even THOUGHT about moving.
We'd lived in the same place for as long as I could remember.

I guess I was a pretty popular kid.  I never really thought about it, but,
looking back, I never had to try hard to make friends.  In fact, it seemed
like both kids and adults were attracted to me.

Once, when I was eight or nine, I overheard Dad telling Mom, "I think we
made a couple of pretty great boys!"  I wasn't quite sure what he meant by
that, but it sounded good!

"In a few years, the girls will be knocking down our doors!" Mom agreed,
and then they kissed.

I sure didn't know what she meant by that; girls were the furthest thing
from my mind when I was nine.  Maybe what Dad had just said wasn't so great
after all ...

Anyway, let's get back to the story ...  like I said, I was a freshman in
high school.  In our town, the junior and senior high schools were next to
each other and shared the same gym and cafeteria.  The city park was next
to the schools, and the school used the park pool and baseball diamond, as
well as the streets for a running track.  I had just finished Phys. Ed., my
next to last class of the day.  We had played softball, and I pitched the
first half of the game.  (I was on the school baseball team.  Yes, we
barely had enough boys to field a halfway respectable team.)  Anyway, our
team lost that day.  But I was about to have an opportunity to win big
... and in a way I never would have expected in my wildest dreams!

Before heading to the showers, I stopped by the park boys' room to take a
piss.  As I was taking it out, I looked up from the toilet.  And written on
the wall I read:

I'LL SUCK YOU 3:15 April 27

Wow ... that sounded interesting!  Today was April the twenty-seventy; the
last class ended at 3:05 and it was already 1:50.  Some kid must have
written it ... probably as a joke.  But I was getting hard while I was
pissing, just thinking about it!

I guess I'd written my share of exaggerations on bathroom walls when I was
in junior high; and this message was probably just like those I'd written.
But I really wanted ... no, NEEDED ... to experience a blowjob; and I
couldn't let this unlikely opportunity slip by.  I'd never even considered
sex with another guy; and probably, nobody would be there anyway.  Even if
it WAS for real, the message could have been written last year, although I
couldn't remember seeing it before.  I just HAD to check it out!  If a
teacher, or some old perv was waiting, I would just piss and leave.

On the way to my last class of the day, I text messaged Kaiden, telling him
to walk home without me.  And then I suffered through another boring
lecture on English Literature.  How could I be expected to concentrate on
Shakespeare when I had a boner that wouldn't go down?  That hour seemed
like ten!

Up until then, my sex life had consisted of raging hormones and a very
active right hand; and that was great, as far as it went!  I would dream of
girls doing all kinds of kinky things to my body!  In fact, I'd dated a
couple of girls, but we didn't go beyond kissing.  I definitely needed
more; and a blowjob sounded like a pretty good next step!

Last period finally ended and I raced to my locker to deposit my books.  No
studying tonight!  At exactly 3:15 I walked into the bathroom, and it was
empty.  Just what I figured; it couldn't have been true!  My cock began to
deflate.  But, I decided to check each stall.  And sure enough, a boy was
standing in the last one.  But not just any boy ... Kaiden!

"Um, Kaiden ... what are you doing here?" I asked.  I was surprised to see
him!

"I decided not to walk home without you," he replied.  He seemed a little
nervous, as he looked around.  "I - I see you read my note ..."

"That was your note on the wall?" I asked, shocked.  "You wrote that?"
Then I was quiet for a moment before continuing, "I never knew you were
into sucking guys!"

"I'm NOT into sucking guys," Kaiden answered.  "But I might be into sucking
YOU though; at least ... I'd sure like to try it!"

I gave Kaiden's words a moment to sink in.  "How did you know I'd be the
one to see it ... or that I'd think it was for real, if I did?" I asked,
and then I paused.  "Wait a minute ... did you just say what I THOUGHT you
said?  That you only wanted to suck me?"

"I sure want to try it!" Kaiden said. "I was leaving the bathroom this
afternoon when I saw you walking this way.  I thought, 'What the hell!' and
quickly wrote it in the first stall and waited back here until you left.
If someone else showed up wanting me to go down on him, I'd pretend I
didn't know what he was talking about and leave."

It sounded pretty risky to me.  "What if a senior, or worse yet, an old guy
FORCED you to suck his cock?" I asked.

"Well, I guess I didn't really think about that happening," Kaiden said.
"And besides, I've been wanting you for SO long!!"

I was floored!  Kaiden wanted me and I didn't know what to think ...  I
guess I'd done my share of checking other guys' packages, but like I said,
I'd never thought about sex with another guy ... much less my brother!
"Let's get out of here," I said intelligently.

"Don't you want me to suck you?" he asked, obviously dejected.

"You bet I do!  But not in here, let's do it at home!"

We lived in a small apartment over Dad's studio.  Grandma and Grandpa
Matthews set him up in business after high school.  Dad had been interested
in photography since he was a boy, and never wanted to do anything else.
Over the years, he had built quite a reputation in our small community, as
well as the surrounding area as THE wedding photographer to hire if you
wanted cutting-edge photos.  Because money was tight back then, the
apartment was basically one large room with folding screens to divide off
the two bedrooms.  We were comfortable now, and before Mom died they had
plans to build a house.  But it never materialized.

In such close quarters, seeing each other naked was a common occurrence,
but I'd never really paid much attention to what I was looking at.  I guess
we were all just comfortable around each other.  I know I never tried to
hide myself and I don't think Dad or Kaiden did either.  Today, probably
for the first time, I really looked at Kaiden.  I didn't just see my kid
brother but an incredibly SEXY boy.  He was a couple of inches shorter than
me, with slim hips and a perfectly proportioned body.  He had Mom's blonde
hair, but he got Dad's brown eyes and dark complexion like me.

"But what if Dad is there with a customer?" Kaiden asked as we started
walking.

"So-o-o.  What if he is?  We always come home around this time.  And you
know he never pays any attention to us while he's working."  I think I
needed a little more time to think about all of this, so I changed the
subject. "How long have you been planning this, anyway?"

"Chris, I've always looked up to you, but I guess I started to see you as
more than just my brother last fall; about the time you started working
out.  I've always thought you had a great body, but now... your muscles are
so awesome!  Sometimes it's embarrassing, because my cock gets hard
whenever I'm near you.  Every night, when I jack off, I think about you
... or maybe Dad.  I love your smooth hard chest and the hair in your
armpits is awesome!  But Dad's in great shape too, and his dark, hairy body
really turns me on!"

(Dad wasn't unusually hairy, but I could see how someone who had just
entered puberty might think so.  I know I was STILL proud of the hair on my
lower legs!)  As we were talking, my cock was getting stiff again!

Wow ... three revelations ...  until today, I didn't know that Kaiden had
even noticed my body, and I SURE didn't know that he thought I was hot!
(But he was right about my muscles.  I had been hitting the weights and I
loved the fact that they were getting really big and hard.  I could stand
in front of a mirror for hours and flex, admiring them.)

"How long have you been playing with yourself?" I asked about his third
admission, as I adjusted my package.

His eyes moved to my crotch.  "Um...Since I was about ten, I think.  One
morning, I woke up early and saw your hand moving really fast under the
sheet.  At first, I wasn't sure what you were doing, but you had to be
holding your cock.  So, I kept watching.  You looked so ... I don't know
... I guess sexy is the right word.  Your eyes were closed and your mouth
was hanging open ... like you were really enjoying what you were doing!
After a minute, your mouth opened real wide, you started nodding your head
and it looked like you were stretching your legs.  Then a stain appeared on
the sheet.  I remember thinking that you better not be wetting the bed!"

"That night, after you went to sleep, I tried to copy what I'd seen you do.
My cock was still little, but the feelings were unbelievable!  I almost
stopped several times, but then I remembered how it looked like you'd
enjoyed it, so I kept on.  Boy, was I glad I did!  I've been doing it at
least once a day ever since!  I've seen you lots of times, after that first
morning.  You always have that same look on your face; and sometimes, I
wondered what you were dreaming about.  Lately, I've hoped that maybe you
were thinking of me!  I was always afraid you'd laugh at me, or tease me,
so I never told you how I felt towards you.  But this afternoon ... I don't
know ... I just had to do something!"

I stopped walking and hugged Kaiden, hard.  "You know, I've always loved
you; just because you're my brother, and I've never really teased you," I
said as I looked up and down his lean body.  'Could there be more to my
love?' I wondered.

Although I admit that a long dick or a guy's muscular body turned me on, I
always planned to marry and have a 'normal' family.  But on that afternoon,
Kaiden sure looked awfully inviting!

Staring into his brown eyes, I said, "You're the hottest little brother a
guy could have!"  And I meant every word of it!  I leaned over and kissed
Kaiden on the lips for the first time. He started to pull back; but then he
must have understood what I was saying, because he pressed his lips harder
into mine.

He hugged me hard and smiled his shy, little boy smile.  For the first
time, I noticed he had dimples!  We laughed, punched and wrestled with each
other the rest of the way home and by the time we got there, we were pretty
sweaty and had taken off our shirts.

Unlike some brothers, we never really fought, but the two of us could
wrestle for hours.  Sometimes, Dad would join in ... (Mom used to call him
her big kid) ... but not so much lately.  Before today, I'd never
considered it sexual, but now I was looking at things a little differently
... okay, a lot differently!  I was beginning to realize that my brother
was one of the hottest guys around.  And he was in my hands.  And HE only
wanted ME!

When we entered the front door to the studio, a chime sounded.

"Boys, is that you?" Dad asked.

"Yeah Dad, it's us," Kaiden answered.

I heard a muffled "just a minute" and Dad's head appeared from behind the
black curtain that divided the portrait studio from the reception area.

"I'm just finishing a shoot," Dad said.  "How was school today?"  He
smiled.

It seemed like ages since I'd seen Dad smile!  "Same as usual," was my
stunned reply.  (Well ... not quite!)

"Good!"  And wow, Dad smiled again!  "Do you have homework tonight?"

It was Friday, and neither of us had brought home books, so I told him no,
as we headed for the stairs to our apartment.

"My photo session is about over," Dad said.  "Let's have dinner at Red
Lobster tonight."

Since neither Kaiden or I could cook worth a darn, and Dad wasn't much of a
cook either, we spent a lot of time at McDonalds or Taco Bell.  But I
couldn't remember going to a sit down restaurant since before Mom died.
Red Lobster was forty-five minutes away, but I could taste the fried shrimp
already!

"Great!" I said as we ran up the stairs.  Like all teenaged boys, I liked
to eat.  But my mind had never left my hard cock; and it was urging me to
hurry!

Dad never brought customers into the apartment, so I wasn't worried about
some stranger walking in on us.  In fact, I heard Dad and the customer
talk, laugh and the front door open and close.  Kaiden and I would have
enough time alone, if we didn't get too loud.  Dad usually did paperwork
for an hour or so after his last session of the day. But, I guess Dad could
finish up early and come upstairs at any time; and if he did that, he would
see us.  But my little head was doing all my thinking right about now!

We went to our bed, stripped off our shorts and resumed our earlier
wrestling match.  Although I was older and stronger, Kaiden got me in a
hold and had me pinned until he felt my hard cock press against his chest.
All of a sudden, he pulled down my boxers and took my cock into his mouth.

I pulled Kaiden off and looked him square in the face.  "Are you sure you
want to go through with this?" I asked.

"I don't think I've ever wanted anything more!" he replied, as he again
brought his lips to my cock.  He gripped my shaft with his left hand and
began pumping.

I put my hands on the back of his head and pressed lightly, as he engulfed
my manhood.  I had never felt anything so incredible!  I knew I wouldn't
last long as he bobbed his head and his tongue slurped my rod.  Every nerve
in my body seemed to be on fire and when his teeth grazed the head, I shot
without warning!  He didn't pull off, but started sucking me in earnest.
He was actually DRINKING my sperm; and seemed to be enjoying it!

All of a sudden my orgasm REALLY overtook me. They were always good ... but
I'd never felt THIS way before!  A warm, tingly, good-burning feeling
started in my cock, and traveled down my legs to the tips of my toes.  I
stretched my legs and feet as much as I could and began shaking, almost
uncontrollably!

I thought it was all over, but Kaiden didn't want to let go!  He kept on
sucking and nibbling and I stayed hard.  His mouth made an "O" around my
penis and he gently bit my cock just beneath the head.  His front teeth
were pushing on that most sensitive area.  And then he began to pull on the
head.  You might think it would hurt, but the feelings were WAY intense!  I
arched my back and moaned while pounding my fists on the mattress.  He
sucked me like a hungry, nursing baby, until I came again.  I laid back,
completely exhausted; my heart was pounding in my ears.  Still Kaiden
sucked until I gently asked him to pull off.

His face had a radiant glow and the sexiest smile I'd ever seen.  "That was
the most incredible feeling I've ever had!" he exclaimed.

I sat up and hugged him tightly.  "YOU ever had?  You're the most awesome
brother!" I gushed.  "I didn't know it could feel so good!"  I paused for a
moment.  "Where did you learn to do that with your teeth, anyway?"  My skin
was still covered in goose bumps and I shivered one last time.  "I don't
know if I can make you feel the way you just made me feel, but I sure want
to try!"

He looked so hot, with his blonde hair and dark tan (even for April).  How
could I have lived with him all these years and not have noticed?  I pulled
his face to mine and kissed him, running my fingers through his shaggy
hair.  It wasn't a brotherly kiss, but a real, passionate lovers' kiss!

He pulled off his underwear and sat on my stomach while looking deeply into
my eyes.  "I was hoping you'd say that!" he replied.  "I so-o-o wanted to
make you feel good!  I read some stories about cock sucking on-line, but I
wasn't really sure what to do.  They all said 'no teeth', but I don't know,
biting you like that just seemed like the right thing to do!"

"Thanks, Kaiden ... it was so awesome that I'm still shaking!"  I pulled
him back to me and we kissed again.  I pushed with my tongue; and his lips
parted, letting me enter his warm mouth.  I licked his teeth and felt the
metal of his braces.  I suppose they would be coming off soon; his teeth
looked perfect to me.  I had never eaten my sperm, but I guess I could
taste my seed inside his mouth.  It was hard to describe: I think it tastes
like it smells.  But I sure wanted to sample it in Kaiden's mouth again!

He lay down next to me, and his flesh made hot contact with mine.  I looked
into his brown, wanting eyes while I rubbed my hands over his slim chest
and shoulders and down his sides to his ass, kneading the pale cheeks
between my thumbs and fingers.  Every nerve in my fingertips was marveling
at the perfection that was his body!

We smiled at each other.  His raised his body onto mine until his steely
cock was pressed firmly into my pubes; and he began to hump me fast and
hard.

With my hands on his ass, I pulled him closer to me with each of his
thrusts; and then relaxed as he pulled away.  Unbelievably, my cock was
getting hard again!  Kaiden grunted, "Unh! Unh! Unh!" as he came on my
belly.  And then his tongue invaded my mouth for the first time.  I grabbed
Kaiden's ass and pulled him tighter to me, while his ejaculation slimed our
bodies.

He had a look of love and pure contentment on his flushed, boyish face.
"Let's do each other at the same time," he suggested.  Then he turned
around in the bed, and suddenly he thrust his impressive boyhood in my
mouth.

I started to gag and quickly pulled part of the way off.  Of course, I'd
never tried sucking a cock before, but after what he'd given me, I so
wanted to please him!  I tried to imitate what he had done to my body, and
sucked like there was no tomorrow ...

Kaiden gently grabbed my balls in one hand.  And wrapping the other hand
around my stalk, he began kissing and worshiping my manhood.

"Boys, let's talk!"  Dad said from the top of the stairs, as he walked
toward our bed.  He wasn't smiling any more...

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Thanks for reading the revised chapter one.  I hope you enjoyed it!  If you
are new to this story ... I'm really glad you decided to read the first
chapter, and I hope you decide to read on!  If you'd like to comment on it,
I'd sure like to hear from you!  (fotogme11@yahoo.com)

The revised chapter two needed a LOT more work than chapter one!  There was
a formatting error in the original post to Nifty.  But besides that, the
original chapter two left a lot to be desired!  It will be posted shortly!

Greg