Date: Mon, 25 Jun 2007 02:05:48 -0700 (PDT)
From: Greg <fotogme11@yahoo.com>
Subject: I'll Suck You ch 43

I'll Suck You

By: Photo Guy (fotogme11@yahoo.com)

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from the author.

This fictional story involves gay sex between family members and their
friends, and it is written solely for the reading enjoyment of people who
aren't offended by material of this type!  If you are underage, or this
type of material is illegal where you live, please leave now.

Please read this:

This will be the final chapter of book one, in what will hopefully become a
series of several books.  These guys have come to mean so much to me as
I've written about them over the past ten months!  And I can't thank each
one of you enough, for making it possible!  Without your support, I would
have given up on writing a long time ago!

I've made so many e-friends since last August.  If I started to name names,
I'm sure I'd forget some of you.  But I think you know who you are!  Many
of you have had a part in making this story what it's become.  And each one
of you has a special place in my heart!

Here's an update on the Yahoo group: We had 53 members yesterday afternoon.
And thanks for taking part in the polls!  80% of you said that you'd like
to read chapters that I rewrite.  So I will definitely post those chapters
to the group ... and also to Nifty, if they can post them in the correct
sequential order.  (In my opinion, the revised chapter 1 needs to go after
the original chapter 1 ... and not behind chapter 43.)

Well, enough of all that!  On with the story ...

Chapter 43

Chris narrates

It seemed like all eyes were on us, as we entered the large restaurant. And
I guess we were three pretty hot dudes!

As a guy of around eighteen or nineteen showed us to our table, Dad
commented, "Boys, it looks like the two of you are giving these people
quite a thrill." And I think I saw more than a touch of pride in his eyes!

After noticing that several diners were holding their forks in mid-air
while they stared at us, we all had a good laugh!  Our booth was in the
back of the restaurant, so we had a long walk before we were seated.  Dad
slid into one side, while Kaiden and I took the other.  And after giving us
our menus, the young guy just shook his head before walking away.

"I guess he must be straight," Kaiden observed with a smile.

"Probably," Dad replied; he opened his menu and began to pore over it.  "Or
maybe he's just jealous."

"Yeah," I added.  And I kicked off my flip-flops and began to
absentmindedly play with Kaiden's right foot, while I looked at my menu.

The restaurant was really busy, and the service was pretty slow.  So we had
quite a bit of time to enjoy each other's company while we waited for
someone to take our order.  Finally a young waitress stopped by; maybe it
was just my imagination, but it seemed like she couldn't take her eyes off
of my tanned chest.

"I think she wants you!" Kaiden laughed, after she'd left the table.  And
he gave me a gentle punch in the ribs.  Of course, I couldn't just accept
that from my kid brother and we began to wrestle with each other in the
seat.

Dad just looked on for a little while, but then he put a stop to it.  "Come
on guys and act your age," he said.  "Not in the restaurant; save it for
later."

"Yeah, Chris, stop acting like a little kid!" Kaiden laughed.

Dad frowned at Kaiden, and I wanted to be mad at him; but after looking him
in the face, I realized that I couldn't. So, I just squeezed his knee
before replying, "Sorry, Dad."  Then I rested my hand on Kaiden's thigh.

We talked about all kinds of stuff, until the food finally arrived.  And
maybe it was just because my stomach was growling, but dinner sure tasted
good!  We had a pretty long meal; and I bet it was eight-thirty, or so,
when Dad was ready to pay the bill.

After handing the waitress his credit card, Dad said, "That was a delicious
meal!"  And moments later, when she returned with the receipt, Dad asked,
"Could you suggest something really fun for my boys and me to do this
evening?  This is the last night of a great vacation, and we don't want to
just head back to the motel room and watch TV!"

Her eyes brightened.  "Sure!" she replied.  "There's a new miniature golf
place that just opened up.  My boyfriend and I sure had lots of fun there
last Saturday!"

"That sounds great," Dad replied.  "What do you think, boys?"

And we nodded our approval.  I'd only played miniature golf once before;
and I'd had an awesome time!

Dad got directions to the place, and a few minutes later, we were parking
next to the bright lights of a busy putt-putt golf course.  It was a
beautiful, warm summer evening; and lots of young people, along with a few
families, seemed to be enjoying their Saturday night knocking golf balls
around the circuit.

After watching the group before us putt towards hole one, Kaiden wanted to
go first.  "Damn!" he exclaimed after tapping the ball.  His shot only went
a few feet!

"Go ahead Kaiden; hit it again," Dad said.  "But remember that each stroke
counts against you!"

Kaiden's next shot was a lot harder, as the golf ball rolled past the cup.
And after he stepped out of the way, I took my first shot.

"Not bad, Chris," Dad observed, as my ball rolled along the right side of
the putting green and stopped four or five feet from the hole.  Dad placed
his ball on the fake turf, took a couple of practice swings, and tapped the
ball towards the hole.  Like Kaiden's second shot, Dad's ball rolled past
the hole ... but just barely!

"Wow, that was a good shot!" Kaiden exclaimed.

And after Dad tapped in his ball, he replied, "I bet you didn't know that
your old man used to play golf all the time, did you?"

"Hunh uh," Kaiden answered.  "I don't remember you ever playing golf ..."

"Yeah, Dad ... when did you play golf?" I asked as I took my second shot.
And my ball rolled by the cup.  "Damn!"  But I was able to tap it in on the
next stroke.

Dad laughed.  "Actually boys, I wasn't all that much older than you. I
tried to keep at it after high school.  But after I got married, between
the family and my job, there just wasn't time for it any more." He was
quiet for a moment, while Kaiden took his shot.  "Your grandpa and I used
to go to the golf course just about every Saturday morning for a couple of
years."

"No fair!" Kaiden stated, as his ball missed the cup by a couple of inches.
"I didn't know we were playing with a pro!"

"I didn't know you were either," Dad replied, while laughing and shaking
his head.

And finally Kaiden made the putt.

As the game progressed, both Kaiden and I got a little better, while Dad
seemed to get worse.  And although I wasn't very good at miniature golf, it
was lots of fun just being out on the course and horsing around with Dad
and Kaiden!  Dad won in the end, but our scores weren't all that far apart.

"We need to do this again some time," Dad commented, after we'd turned in
our putters.  "Maybe they've got a place like this in Boulder."

"Or if they don't, maybe Josh could build one!" Kaiden quipped.

Dad just laughed.  "He DOES have a lot of money, doesn't he?"

"Yeah," I replied as we headed to the car.  "I never thought we'd be rich."

"Well, don't let it go to your heads," Dad stated, taking out his car keys.
"We're going to be living in a nice house now ... and be part of a bigger
family; but nothing else has changed ... not really."  And after we all
took our seats, he continued, "I've got a feeling that Josh might work you
boys harder than I ever did!"

Kaiden moaned, but I just smiled.  Other than the basics, Dad had never
asked either of us to do a lot of work around our apartment.  But if he
meant that Josh would have us working on the ranch, I thought that might be
a lot of fun too!

"What kind of work are you talking about?" I asked.

"I'm not sure," Dad said as he started the car.  "But Josh has already
enlisted Ben to help with the fall cattle round-up."  And after he backed
out of his parking spot, Dad continued, "And me too, if I'm not working
back in Missouri."

"You're gonna be a cowboy?" Kaiden asked, shaking his head.

"Don't act so surprised," Dad commented.  "I bet I 'd be pretty good on a
horse!"

The three of us had a good laugh as we imagined Dad on horseback roping
cattle.  And we joked around with each other on the drive back to the
motel.  While we were playing miniature golf, night had fallen; and as we
entered the motel room, I noticed that the bedside clock read a little
after ten thirty.

As soon as Dad chained the door, Kaiden asked, "Dad, can the three of us
snuggle together for a while?"  And he slipped out of his shirt.

Dad smiled at Kaiden.  "Well, I can't speak for Chris, but that sure sounds
nice to me!"  He pulled his t-shirt over his head and looked around the
room, before fixing his gaze on the large overstuffed chair.  "What do you
think, Chris?"  And he nodded towards the chair.

"You bet!" I replied.  "But let's get naked first, okay?"

"Sounds good to me ..." Dad said as he kicked off his running shoes.  And
after he slipped out of his cargos, Dad sat in the large chair.  "Hey, it's
a recliner!" he exclaimed, popping up the footrest and leaning back in the
chair.

While Kaiden sat his naked body on the right arm of the chair, I sat to
Dad's left.  Dad spread his arms wide, and both of us lay down into them.
After we'd gotten comfortable, Dad squeezed Kaiden and me to his strong
chest. And as I relaxed against him, I closed my eyes; I loved my father so
much!

My hips slid off the arm, and I rolled on top of Dad.  And absent-mindedly,
I began to hump my steely rod against Dad's hip and trimmed pubes.  I
turned his face to mine, and we kissed lovingly.  Dad's cock began to come
alive, as it hardened against my leg, pointing downward.

"Kaiden, my cock is trapped!" Dad exclaimed with a pained look on his face.
"Would you try and make it more comfortable for me?"

"Sure," my brother replied with a smile.  And Kaiden kissed Dad's neck
before reaching beneath my thigh and releasing Dad's meat.  He kept ahold
of Dad's huge penis while he began to hump against Dad's other side.
Before long, both of us were grunting with each thrust of our hips!

Dad squeezed both of us tightly, and then he stated, "Guys, I don't know
about you, but I think I'd be a lot more comfortable doing this on the bed!
I feel like I'm being crushed here; and I can't move in this recliner ..."

I laughed; but after looking at Kaiden, we both got up.  Our hard cocks
were tight against our stomachs and mine pulsed with each beat of my heart.
I wasn't sure about Kaiden, but I was so horny for my dad that I could
hardly wait for him to get out of the chair and lie down on the bed!  And
moments later, he'd crawled into bed on his stomach.

"Why don't you roll over on your back?" Kaiden asked; and right away he
turned over.

After Dad was comfortable, Kaiden and I gently spread his arms and legs.
Then Kaiden crawled over next to me, and whispered something in my ear.
"You wanna try it?" was his final question ... and I nodded my agreement.

"Dad," I began, "we want to get you all relaxed."  I knelt by Dad's right
hand and began to deeply massage our father's chest and abs ... while
Kaiden began to kiss his face and neck.

"Boys," Dad moaned between kisses, "mmmmm that feels good!"

Every once in a while, I would let my hand would drop lower, and it would
brush up against Dad's throbbing manhood.  It was just long enough for Dad
to know that we hadn't forgotten about his cock; but not long enough that
Dad got any real stimulation from it.  And at some point, Kaiden and I
switched positions; as he massaged Dad, I got to kiss the man who I loved
like no other!

After what seemed like a blissful eternity, I rolled onto my back and
pulled Dad on top of me.

"Dad ..." Kaiden asked tentatively, in his best little-boy voice, "...Would
you let both Chris and me fuck you at the same time?"

Dad raised his body up until he was sitting on his legs, straddling my
hips.  And he looked at Kaiden and me, like he was assessing the situation,
before he answered.

"You bet, Kaiden!" he replied with a sexy smile.  "I think it just might
work ..." And after pausing for a moment, he continued, "Chris, are you up
for trying it?"

"Yeah, Dad ... I can't wait!" I exclaimed.  I reached up and drew my
father's lips to mine; and we kissed again ... like I now felt every father
and son ought to ... long, slow and lovingly!

Finally, Dad sat up again; and this time, he tucked his feet under my
thighs.  "Okay, Kaiden, now lube us up REALLY good."

And moments later, I heard the click of a plastic cap: followed by my
brother's cold wet hand rubbing over my engorged dick.  Then he grabbed
ahold of my cock and held it at the entrance to Dad's back door.  And as I
thrust my cock up into my father, Dad sat on my meat.  The sensations of
Dad's hot, tight ass on my cock were WAY intense!  As Dad rocked up and
down on my throbbing shaft, I thrust my hips upward.

Kaiden seemed to be sizing up the situation for a while, and then he knelt
around my thighs.  He put his arms on the mattress, just in front of Dad's
knees as he leaned forward onto Dad's back.  "Are you guys ready?" he
asked.  I couldn't see it, but I could hear the smile in his voice.

"Yeah, Kaiden, I think so," Dad answered.  "Stuff it up inside me!"

I felt Kaiden's hard cock pressing on my shaft for quite a while, and
suddenly, he just popped in!

"Oh fuck!" Dad shouted.  "Oh fuck ... oh fuck ... oh fuck!"

I'd almost forgotten how good it felt to have another guy's cock squeezed
against mine in someone's ass.  And I think it felt even better this time,
because it was my brother whose cock was trapped alongside mine; and the
ass belonged to our dad!  It just couldn't get any better than that!

While Kaiden was shouting 'yeah' again and again, I began to moan.

As Dad fucked himself on both of our poles, I put my hands on his hips,
pressing his body back onto Kaiden and me.  The feelings were awesome!  All
the while, Dad was moaning and yelling.  I saw pain in his face, but it was
mixed with what appeared to be unbelievable pleasure!

As my brother's dick pressed hard against my shaft, I knew that I wouldn't
be able to last for long.  It was SO tight in Dad's love tunnel; and
Kaiden's cock was SO hard ...

"Oh fuck!" Kaiden exclaimed.  "I'm gonna nut!"  And before he finished
talking, spurt after spurt of his hot, little-brother seed bathed my cock.
He thrust urgently, and then fell forward onto our Dad.  But he didn't pull
out; instead he let his orgasm run its course, and then began to ram his
dick into our father harder than before!  "Come on, Chris ... I need to
feel your spunk mixed with mine!"

Dad's thick cock was rock hard; and grabbing it in my right fist, I began
to pump furiously.

I was right on the edge ... and when Dad leaned forward and kissed me
... well, I bet you can guess what happened next!

My body tensed up; and with a giant, upward thrust of my hips, I began to
unload.  "Unh!  Unh!  Unh!" I cried as my cock shot again and again.  It
felt like it would never stop!  And my orgasm began in my groin and
traveled down my legs to the tips of my toes, as I stretched them out to
their fullest.  "Fuck, yeah," I gasped, as exhausted I lay back against the
bed.

Dad kissed me again.  "Come on, Chris," he pleaded urgently.  And turning
to Kaiden, he added, "Son, plow my ass like there's no tomorrow!"

I smiled up at my dad; and both Kaiden and I began to piston our cocks into
his cruelly stretched sphincter.  Kaiden grabbed ahold of Dad's hipbones,
pulling our father onto our cocks and then pushing him away.  And as Dad
began to wail, I took his manhood in my hand.

Suddenly his ass tried to clamp down on our meat. And while Kaiden and I
continued to fuck him, Dad yelled, "OH FUCK, BOYS!"  Followed by several
long spurts from his titanic cock.

The first couple of shots hit me in the face; and I closed my eyes. But I
felt the rest as it squirted onto my neck, chest and stomach.  Then I guess
Dad leaned forward, because I felt him begin to lick over my eyes, nose and
cheeks, as Kaiden pulled out of Dad's once tight ass.

I opened my eyes, and Kaiden was crawling into bed next to me.  And he
began to lap up Dad's spunk that had fallen on my torso.

Fuck, I could hardly believe what had just happened!

Still impaled on my rapidly deflating cock, Dad sat up.  And then, after
untangling his legs from mine, he slowly lifted himself off of me.  "Be
right back," he said, as he hurried to the bathroom.  Several moments later
he flushed the toilet, and was wiping a towel over his legs as he came
through the door.  "You guys made quite a mess in my butt!" Dad exclaimed;
and grimacing, he added, "And I don't think my ass muscle will ever be the
same again!"

Dad's face was deadly serious, but as he approached the bed, he laughed to
let us know he was all right.  And after a moment, he smiled warmly.  "Boys
... I love both of you SO much," he declared.  He climbed into bed and
hugged both of us long and lovingly, before giving Kaiden a passionate,
manly kiss.  Then he leaned forward; and I thought I could see a touch of
pride in his eyes, as he tenderly kissed my lips.  "How was I ever so lucky
to have both of you as sons?" he asked.

(Chris continues from his college dorm room four and a half years later
...)

'How could WE have ever been so lucky to have him for our Dad?' I wonder as
I type these words into my laptop.  And I pause for a long, long time and
reflect again on all the great times I had while growing up.

*This is the ending of the first book ... but just the beginning of this
tale ...

(But Chris has a few more words he wants to say.)

For the past couple of years, I've felt like I had to tell the incredible
story of our family.  At first, I'm sure the other guys thought I was
crazy; but when they began to read what I'd written, they all wanted to get
in on it.

The spring and summer of 2002 changed my life!  I began that spring with a
dad who was still missing my mom, and one brother.  But by the end of July,
I had two incredible dads and three awesome brothers!  All of us learned a
lot about loving that summer ... and about how to make love.  No doubt
about it, I've got the best family in the world!

I think that Ryan can't wait to start telling you about some stuff that
happened to the family after Dad, Kaiden and I left Colorado on that
Saturday morning in July.  He says that he's having a hard time finding
enough time to write, what with his last year of high school and all ...
But he sure hopes you'll still be here to read it when he gets the first
chapter finished!

##

Guys ... thanks so much for reading the first book about the lives of this
awesome family!  It started out as a story, but it's over five hundred
pages long, so I think it ought to qualify as a book!  I've learned a lot
about myself over the past few months, and I also discovered that I have a
talent for writing.

But now, after ten months, I need to take some time off ... and get away
from writing for a while, to recharge my batteries.  I sincerely hope that
all of you will understand!  Each of my readers means more to me than you
will ever know!!  And I know how much some of you look forward to each new
chapter.  I would expect that I'll try to post the first chapter of the
still un-named second book in August or September.  At the moment, I'm
planning to keep it under the "I'll Suck You" heading on Nifty.  But I'll
send all of you in the Yahoo group, and on my 'next post' list an update
with exact information before I post it.

It may seem strange that I just started the Yahoo group and now I'm not
going to have a new chapter for a while.  A month ago, when I began the
group, I hoped that I would be able to continue writing through the summer.
But I can tell that I need some time away from writing, because the last
few chapters haven't been fun to write.

I am going to do simple rewrites of a few of the early chapters of "I"ll
Suck You".  For a 'write and post as you go' type of story, I think the
continuity is pretty good.  But there are a couple of things that don't
jive between some of the first chapters and later ones.  And I want to take
care of the formatting error on chapter two!  Even though my writing style
has changed somewhat over the chapters (I think the boys talk in a little
more casual manner now than at first, among other things), I'm not going to
rewrite chapters to specifically address that issue.  That would defeat the
purpose of me trying to get away from writing for a little while.  Anyway,
Steve and I are going to try to keep the group going until I begin to post
the second book.

Have a great summer everybody!  And thanks SO much for reading!

Greg

And now a note from Steve:

While Greg is getting his recharge there will be new stuff posted to the
Yahoo group every week.  We will be creating polls and discussion questions
to get feedback from you the readers on how you would like the story to go.
While Greg has sworn me to secrecy about what is planned for Book Two maybe
I can sneak a hint or two about what you will be seeing in Book Two.  I
think when Book Two begins you will agree it was worth wait.

Steve