Date: Fri, 14 Mar 2008 01:32:36 -0700 (PDT)
From: Greg <fotogme11@yahoo.com>
Subject: I've Got the Best Family ch 24

I've Got the Best Family

By:  Photo Guy (fotogme11@yahoo.com)
Proofreader and Story Consultant:  Steve

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Archive.  It may not be copied to another website without prior permission
from the author.

This fictional story involves gay sex between family members and their
friends, and it is written solely for the reading enjoyment of people who
aren't offended by material of this type!  If you are underage, or this
type of material is illegal where you live, please leave now.

***

Special thanks to Trenton, for his knowledge of middle and high school
football, which he so graciously shared with me.

***

I always ask for email, every chapter, but I guess I almost demanded some
after the last chapter.  (Almost, but not quite! lol) Anyway, I suppose it
worked, because I heard from quite a few of you guys.  And I really want to
thank each of you for sending them.

I've gotten several benefits from writing on Nifty.  For one thing, I
learned that I could actually do it; writing was something I'd wanted to
try my hand at for quite a while, but I never thought I had any talent for
it.  Then there are the friendships that I've forged and acquaintances that
I've made.  You can't put a value on those.  But another benefit is the
positive email my readers send me.  (Okay ... once in a while constructive
criticism has been good, too! lol) If it wasn't for supportive email from
my readers at the time, I would have stopped writing before I really got
started; and the first two benefits would never have happened!

Anyway, I guess I said all that to say this: I hope you keep sending me
email (fotogme11@yahoo.com) and that you send it to the other Nifty authors
you like, too.  It might be just what an author needs to keep him writing
that story you enjoy!

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Chapter Twenty-Four

(Kaiden narrates)

Football practice was a real bitch this week!  I got off on the wrong foot
with the coach on Tuesday.  And since I'd never played on a football team
before, I was behind all the other guys when it came to learning the
drills.  But those of you who know me well, know I'm not a quitter; at
least, not if it's something I really want!  I threw everything I had into
the practices, and by Friday afternoon, I was starting to feel comfortable
with the position Coach assigned to me ... defensive lineman.

As Friday's hot, sweaty practice was coming to an end, and the guys were
heading off the field towards the locker room, Coach put his hand on my
shoulder pads, holding me back.  "Matthews, I never thought I'd be saying
this," he said, with the barest hint of a smile crossing his lips.  "But
you've got the makings of one hell of a player!"

I just stood there, tongue-tied; honestly, I didn't know what to say for a
moment.

"Th - thanks, Coach," I finally spit out; and then I smiled.

Coach patted me on the butt.

"Get your shower, son," he advised.  "And don't forget everything you
learned this week, before next Friday's practice rolls around."

Coach had told the team several times that he hated the practice schedule
the administration had devised for this summer, but there wasn't anything
he could do about it.  There had been a two-week football clinic, which was
just over, and then we'd have practices every Friday morning for the next
two weeks.  But after the school year started, on August 19, all the guys
on the team would have daily first period gym class during the fall
semester.  Our first game was against another middle school in the
district, on a Thursday evening, August 29.

Anyway, when I got to the locker room, Devon and Ryan were joking around
with a few other guys, while they took off their uniforms.  Even though
most of the guys on the team were sore from the tackling drills, they were
in really good moods this afternoon.  Practice was over for the week, and
everybody wanted to take advantage of the remaining, few vacation days
before school began.

Although they weren't saying much, I could tell that Carlos and David were
really excited ... and I was pretty sure I knew why.  They exchanged
knowing glances between themselves, and their faces would break out in
smiles when nobody was saying anything funny.  They were sure putting that
secret communication system of theirs ... the one that Ryan had told me
about ... to good use!

"Okay," Devon began, hooking a thumb in the waistband of his small, mostly
empty jock, "what gives with you two, anyways?"  He looked towards David
... then his eyes traveled to Carlos and back to David again ... as he
stepped out of the tiny garment.  "You two are acting weird!"

David glanced at Ryan.

"I wouldn't call it weird," he laughed.  "We're just happy."

Carlos smirked at his brother, before looking in my direction, where I was
hurrying to undress.

"We're spending the night with Ryan and Kaiden," Carlos added with a BIG
grin, taking a towel and soap out of his gym bag.

"Awesome!" Devon replied.

"Hey ... would you like to spend the night, too?" Ryan asked.  "I think
we've got room for one more."

Devon's face lit up, but then it clouded over, as the five of us headed
into the showers.  "Boy ... I sure WANNA come over," he said.  "But we're
leaving for my grandmas in Greeley this afternoon.  And we won't be back
until Sunday morning."

"Well," I added, turning on the water of my shower, "maybe your mom would
let you stay with us while the rest of them go."

"Yeah, maybe she would," Devon agreed.

As we showered, the five of us began to make plans for this evening.  Even
though we didn't talk about any sexy stuff, it was all I could do to keep
from getting a hard-on as I thought about what I hoped we'd be doing later
tonight.  We showered quickly, before slipping into shorts, t-shirts and
flip-flops.  But then we had to mill around outside, for quite a while,
waiting for Devon's mom to pick us up.

The rest of our teammates came out of the building, alone or in groups, and
either walked away from the school or got into waiting cars.  We all wished
each other a fun week, and when we were finally by ourselves, Devon spoke
up.

"So, what are you guys REALLY gonna do tonight?" he asked with a devious
smile.

"I'm not sure exactly WHAT," Carlos replied, grinning, as we goofed off in
front of the school.  "But whatever we do, I KNOW it's gonna be fun!"

Devon had a look on his face, like he couldn't wait; and I knew I couldn't!

Finally, Mrs. Myers pulled up, and the five of us piled into their
Explorer.

"Sorry, I'm late," she said after we were in the car.

"That's okay, Mom," Devon said from beside me, in the back seat.  And as
soon as the car started moving, he added, "Mom, can I spend the night with
Ryan and Kaiden?"

Mrs. Myers looked into the rearview mirror with a frown on her face.
"Devon, you know we're leaving for grandma and grandpa's as soon as your
brother gets home from football practice."

"But Mo-om," Devon broke the word into two syllables.  "Ryan invited me."

"That was nice of him," Devon's mom smiled over at my brother, in the other
front seat.  "But we've been planning this visit for weeks, and your
grandparents will want to see you."

"But their house is so tiny; I hate it," Devon added.  "Jared and I will
have to sleep together on that daybed ... out on the front porch."

"You and your brother need to learn to get along with each other,"
Mrs. Myers replied.  "It's only for a couple of nights."

Devon argued with his mom for quite a while, with a ton of good reasons why
she should let him stay with us, but she wasn't convinced.  And a
dejected-looking Devon pouted in the back seat, as they drove away from the
ranch.

"Wow, I sure wish Devon's mom would have let him stay," Carlos stated to
his brother; but then, his face brightened, as he turned towards Ryan.  "So
what ARE we gonna do tonight?  BEFORE we go to bed, I mean."

Carlos laughed in his own unique way, fast and fluttery.  I was learning!
Both Carlos and David were closed-mouthed about the subject of how to tell
them apart ... I guess, if a guy is lucky enough to have an identical twin,
he likes to use it to his advantage!  But I was beginning to pick up
differences between them.  Little things, like the way they laughed.  And
while neither twin was shy, Carlos was definitely the more outgoing of the
two.

We discussed what we wanted to do this afternoon ... before supper
... deciding we'd spend some time in the pool, or maybe the hot tub.  And
the twins dropped by their house to pick up some clean clothes, saying they
would meet Ryan and me at the indoor pool.

As all of you know, who've read my brother Chris' story about our family,
I'm not self-conscious about going around naked.  In fact, if I didn't have
to wear clothes out in public, I wouldn't ... plain and simple.  Although I
never flaunted being naked in front of strangers, in the days since we'd
been here, a lot of the people around the ranch had probably seen me in the
buff, running from the pool to the hot tub or the other way around.  And
today was no exception.

While Ryan went into the house for something, I entered the pool building,
stripping out of my clothes as I went.  And after diving headfirst into the
deep end, I swam across the pool and pulled myself up and out on the other
side.

"Wow ... you're cute!" a female voice said, off to my right.

I thought I was alone!

Surprised, I turned in that direction.  Sitting in one of the chaise
lounges was a small, brown-skinned, Hispanic woman with damp hair, wearing
a blue one-piece swimsuit.  A magazine lay open in her lap.  She looked to
be an attractive eighteen or twenty ... young to most of you guys, but
pretty old to me.

"Hey ... I'm Kaiden," I said with half a smile, walking in her direction.

"Hey yourself," she replied, returning my smile.  "My name's Elizabeth
... but the family calls me Liz."

I was confused; I thought I'd gotten to know all the people who lived on
the ranch, but I'd never seen her before.  I guess my confusion must have
shown on my face, because she laughed.

"Sorry, I'm Elizabeth Lopez," she added.  "We live here on the ranch.  Or
at least, my family does.  The summer term is over at SMU and I'm back
visiting for a couple of weeks."

"Oh," I answered, as a light started to turn on over my head, "so you're
David and Carlos' sister?"

"Yeah," she laughed.  "I guess you weren't expecting anybody to be out
here.  Especially not a girl."

I shook my head no, as I glanced down, slipping my hand in front of my
dangling four inches.

"Don't you think it's a little late for modesty?" Liz asked, laughing.  She
had a cute smile, like her brothers.

She was right, of course; and grinning, I pulled my hand aside.

Then, leaning forward in her chair, while swinging her shapely legs around
to one side, Elizabeth asked, "Does your dad work on the ranch?"

"Well, I GUESS you could say that," I replied.  "We just moved out here,
and he's gonna open a photography studio here at the ranch."

"Oh," Elizabeth said, looking confused.  "When ..."

Just then, the twins burst through the outside door to the pool,
interrupting Liz's question.  And they paused for a second when they saw
us.

"Hi, Sis," one of the twins called out.  "Good to see you again!"

"Hey, guys!" Elizabeth replied with a huge smile.

Carlos and David ran towards their sister.  And after standing, Elizabeth
gave both of them warm hugs, before glancing at the three of us.

"Well ... I bet you three aren't looking for female companionship out
here."  Then she added to the twins, "At least not from your sister."

As they nodded, she laughed again, picked up her magazine and tucked it in
a tote from off the floor by her chair, excusing herself.

"See you later," one of the twins called after her retreating form, before
turning towards me.  "Wow, Kaiden, weren't you embarrassed, being naked in
front of a girl?"

"Sorta," I answered with a grin, "but not really ..."  I paused for a
second while Elizabeth pushed open the door and left the building.  "She
called me cute!"

"Well ... you're not!" the other twin advised, punching me lightly in the
upper arm.

The three of us joked with each other until Ryan arrived, and then we swam
and played around in the nude for quite a while.  Every so often, the four
of us would run outside to the hot tub, and spend a few minutes in it,
enjoying the steaming water jets against our naked bodies.  Damn, it was
awesome being a boy!  And life on the J bar A, with my family and new
friends, was great.  Put those two things together, and it just couldn't
get any better!

After supper, the four of us, along with Josh, Tyler and Chris headed
downstairs for some friendly gaming on the PS2.  We didn't really keep
score; and both Carlos and David were so fidgety that they couldn't play
very well.  But the evening passed quickly, for me at least, and when nine
o'clock rolled around, Ryan began to yawn.

"I'm ready to head up to bed," he announced to everyone.

And as Ryan, the twins and I headed towards the stairs, leaving the
Play-Station to the other guys, Tyler commented, "You don't fool me, guys.
Don't keep Chris and me awake all night!"

Josh laughed.  "I'm glad my room is on the other end of the hall!"  And
after a brief pause, he added, "Good night, boys."

"We'll see you in the morning, Josh," I replied, placing my foot on the
bottom stair.

"Yeah, good night," Carlos added.  "And Josh ... thanks a lot for letting
us spend the night!"

"Any time, boys," Josh smiled.  "Any time."

And with that exchange, we hurried up the stairs.  Ryan wanted us to sleep
in his bedroom, so the four of us went inside and closed the door.
Immediately, David turned to Ryan and kissed him on the lips.

"I've been wanting to do that all night!" David exclaimed with a big grin,
after pulling back.

"Me, too," Ryan replied as he pulled off his t-shirt.  " Wow, you sure got
my cock excited!"

The rest of us took off our shirts, too, while laughing at Ryan's last
comment; and within seconds we each had another guy in our arms.  But
Carlos pulled back from me for a moment.

"Kaiden, I'm not gay," he advised.  "I'm just doing this so I can learn how
to do it with a girl."

Then he took me in his arms, planting a wet smooch on my lips.

'Whatever,' I thought with an inward smile.

It didn't matter to me WHY Carlos wanted to have a good time with us
... only that he wanted to do it.  He was such a fun guy to be around.  And
I kissed him back, firmly.

I caught sight of David and Ryan out of the corner of my eye, and it looked
like the two of them weren't wasting any time!  They'd already lost their
shorts.  And David was sitting on the edge of the mattress, while Ryan
climbed onto the bed around him, straddling David's body.  Nudging Carlos,
and nodding in the direction of the other two, we watched as Ryan lowered
his ass onto David's lap.  Then the two guys hugged each other tightly,
naked chest against naked chest.

Carlos laughed before returning his attention to me.  And I lost track of
Ryan and David for a little while.  Carlos' first kiss had been pretty good
... maybe a little too wet and hard.  But he quickly turned into a really
good kisser, and it seemed like he loved to do it as much as I did.  But I
guess he'd never tried it with an open mouth, because when I pressed my
tongue against his lips, he resisted for a while before he realized what I
was trying to do.

Finally, Carlos opened his mouth a bit and my darting tongue found its way
inside, feeling his teeth.  The younger of the twins closed his lips around
my tongue, trying to hold it in his mouth.  And we had fun with this game
for a while, as he reversed the process with me.

After falling, arm in arm, into a large overstuffed chair, Carlos' and my
tongues continued their onslaught on each other's mouth.  We opened our
mouths wide, and as our tongues darted back and forth, they dueled one with
the other, like there was no tomorrow.  Finally, we closed our mouths for a
while, kissing that way, before we began to french again ... hot and heavy.

Coming up for air, Carlos murmured, "Wow, Kaiden ... I never knew kissing
could be so much fun!"

"Yeah," I laughed, "and you do it better than anyone else I've tried it
with."

"Really?" Carlos asked with a big smile.

I just kissed Carlos again, as a response.  I guess some guys might say
what I just said to flatter their partner, but I meant every word of it.
Carlos put his whole being into kissing me.  If he was just doing this for
practice, I sure envied the girl who he ended up loving!

"Oh, fuck!" Ryan cried out, and I turned my head in that direction.

David was now lying on the bed, while Ryan was kneeling with spread legs
around the older twin's face.  David was holding Ryan's half boyish, half
manly, stiff four incher in his hand, pulling it downward as far as he
could.  And as David lifted his head off of the bed, he slurped wetly over
Ryan's member.

"Mmmm, you taste good!" David exclaimed with a big smile.

Ryan just groaned in reply, as my fingers blindly searched for Carlos
hairless, barely defined abs.  And as I turned to my darkly tanned
neighbor, with an evil grin, I lowered my mouth to his chest, taking his
tiny right breast between my lips.  I sucked at first, but then closed my
teeth on the nipple, twisting my head slightly while I bit down harder.

Carlos sucked in his breath and tensed up for a moment.

"Oh, yeah," he moaned softly, tangling his fingers in my shaggy,
sun-bleached hair, while holding my face against his brown-skinned chest.
"Fuck, Kaiden, you know how to make a guy feel SO-O-O good!"

I smiled inwardly, as my fingers groped over Carlos' shorts, searching
... and finding ... his steely rod angling upward, and off to the right
side.  And I brushed my hand over his throbbing pole a couple of times,
before fumbling with the button on his shorts.

"Fuck, I'm close, Ryan," David cried, as I began to unzip Carlos' cargos.
And then David added, "I'm cummin' man ... I'm cummin'!"

I released Carlos' nipple, and while pressing the side of my face against
his slender chest, I watched my brother and David.  At some point, Ryan had
scooted back on David's torso, until he was straddling the Mexican boy's
belly; and Ryan's hand had reached behind him and taken ahold of David's
fat, torpedo-shaped, cock, stroking it urgently.

As David sprayed his creamy load over my brother's back, Ryan began to rock
back and forth on David's chest, while he continued to stroke the slightly
older boy's meat.  My brother's cheeks were brushing up against the head of
David's dick from time to time, causing the twin to thrash his head from
side to side.  And thrusting his stomach as far forward as he could, Ryan
stretched his torso upward, while leaning his slim chest back and his head
forward.  Ryan's writhing, deeply tanned body formed sort of a sexy "s"
shape above and around David.  I'd never seen a hotter sight in my life
... at least not up until then!

"Fuck!  That looks SO hot!" Carlos exclaimed.  And I noticed he was looking
at the other pair too.  "Can we try that, Kaiden?"

***

Well, this is the perfect spot to end this chapter!  I hope you guys
enjoyed it.  One of my long time readers sent me an email after chapter
twenty-one, saying that I wasn't being descriptive enough.  I was in the
middle of writing this chapter, at the time, so I tried to make it VERY
descriptive.  I hope I was successful, without going overboard.

If you'd like to email me about this chapter, my address is
fotogme11@yahoo.com; and if you'd like to join the Yahoo! Group for my
stories, you can do that here:
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Steve and I have been discussing upcoming events in this story.  And
there's a lot that needs to happen before I draw it to a close.  I see
another twelve or maybe fifteen chapters.  Then I will probably need to
take the summer off, like I did last year.  My work schedule goes crazy
over the summer!  Anyway, that's the plan.  But this time, I will include
the title of the third story in the series at the end of the last chapter
of "I've Got the Best Family".  Unfortunately, it took some Nifty readers
months to discover the second story ... and some may have never found it.

I hope each of you has a great week!  Greg