Date: Wed, 27 Jan 2010 14:37:13 -0800 (PST)
From: Greg <fotogme11@yahoo.com>
Subject: More is Better ch 17

More is Better

By: Photo Guy (fotogme11@yahoo.com)
Story Consultant: Drew
Editor and Proofreader: Jere

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This is a fictional story ... any similarities to actual people, places,
events or other entities is purely coincidental.  The story involves gay
sex between family members and their friends, and is written solely for the
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***

Guys,

This chapter is the first writing I've done on the story since Drew and I
fell in love.  If you notice any difference in the writing style, I suppose
it is because of that fact!  lol

Greg

***

Special thanks to Steve for his assistance with this chapter.

***

After I posted the last chapter, a reader suggested that I begin to post
some sort of character list from time to time.  I agree that the cast of
characters in this saga has grown long.  If you were to read each story as
a book, I don't think a cast of characters would be needed, but since many
of you follow this story ... as well as lots of other stories on Nifty
... week-by-week, I'm going to begin to include one for characters who have
appeared in past chapters.  If I introduce a new character, he will be
introduced in the chapter and won't be listed in the character list until
subsequent chapters.  I can't guarantee I'll include this list with each
chapter, but, at least, I'm going to try it for a while.

*** Character List ***

Kaiden: 13 year old brother of Chris

Eric: 13 year old abused kid who lives on the ranch

David: 14 year old twin of Carlos

Carlos: 14 year old twin of David

Chris: 15 year old brother of Kaiden

Tyler: 16 year old lover and 'brother' of Chris

Ryan: 13 year old adopted brother to Kaiden and Chris

Cole: 19 year old college student boyfriend of Ryan

Tim: 32 year old biological dad of Chris and Kaiden

Josh: 33 year old lover of Tim's and second dad of the other boys

***

Chapter Seventeen:

(Kaiden tells us this chapter as only a horny 13 year old boy could.)

Following the session in the gym on Saturday night ... you remember, I hope
- after the barbecue ... David, Eric, and Carlos followed me into my
bedroom.  Quickly ... and with a sense of real urgency ... the four of us
toed off our sneaks, while shimmying out of our basketball shorts.

"David, you're leaking!" Eric laughed, pointing to the ass of the older
twin's shorts.  A large, dark, wet stain ... Carlos' cum, maybe mixed with
a little something extra ... was VERY obvious.

"Looks like..." David agreed, with a big smile.  Shaking his head, he
picked up the shorts, while looking at me.  "I guess you better wash these,
huh?"

"Yeah, prob'ly," I laughed, shaking my head at David's comment.  "Come on;
let's get our shower."

Naked, the four of us hurried towards the bathroom.  And as Carlos quickly
drew back the shower curtain, Eric turned on the water.  I sure wished we
had a bathroom like our dads ... with a walk-in shower ... as the four of
us climbed over the edge of the large, porcelain tub, and Eric pulled the
curtain closed.  But excitedly, we took our showers as best we could in
such tight quarters, washing off the sweat from our workout and time spent
in the sauna.

After we'd sort-of dried off and climbed onto my bed, right away, Carlos
went down on his brother's almost limp cock, while Eric and I took up where
we left off a few minutes earlier.  As he lay partly on top of me, our lips
met in a hot kiss.  Like a lot of us boys, I guess, Eric had become a MUCH
better kisser over the past couple of months.  Damn, we taught each other
well!

"Kaiden," Eric panted, coming up for air at one point, "do you feel
something when we kiss like this?"

Because my dick throbbed like crazy when we kissed, I laughed, "Yeah, in my
cock."

"Well, there, too," Eric agreed, shaking his head and smiling a little,
"but I mean inside you."

"I don't know," I replied.  "What's it feel like, anyway?"

"It's hard to describe," Eric answered seriously, his brown eyes focused on
mine.  It was as if he was looking right into me when he spoke.  "It's
almost like I'm on fire inside, I guess."  He shook his head and smiled
that great smile of his ... the one that could melt a heart of stone.

Wow!  That sounded the way Chris told me he'd felt when he and Tyler came
together back in July ... up in the mountains ... when he'd known for sure
there was something more going on than just the sex between them.  It was
when he first began to realize that he loved Tyler.

Eric needed love SO badly!  In all his life, before coming to live with us
on the J bar A, I was sure he'd never even known what real love was.  I
mean ... IF his folks had ever loved him ... it was the weirdest excuse for
love that I could imagine.  He deserved a lover SO much.  Not that I had
anything against Eric, but I wasn't sure if I was that guy, or not.  I
mean, I felt butterflies for him, but I also felt them for Brianne, a girl
at school.  As my lips met his, I kissed Eric again, even more
passionately, this time.

Even though they were making out on the bed right next to us, I don't have
any idea what was going on between David and Carlos.  It was as if Eric and
I were the only two people on the earth right then, as I tried to make love
to him with my lips.  We kissed and licked each other's faces like crazy.

At one point, Eric wetly licked down the middle of my chest; and then,
before I even knew what was happening, he turned around and crawled on top
of me again.  Spreading his legs some, he placed his knees on either side
of my head, before leaning down and taking my throbbing dick in his mouth.
His fingers tangled in my small, dark-blonde nest of pubes.

"Oh, fuck, Eric, that feels SO good!" I exclaimed, tightening my belly
muscles some.

He didn't reply with words, but instead, he sucked me harder.  His tongue
was SO wet against my cock head ... and when it began to toy with that
special place where all the nerves come together, at the base of my glans,
I knew without any question I was about to lose it, big time!

"You're gonna make me nut, Eric," I cried out.  As my body writhed beneath
him, I bucked my hips upward.  "That's the way, man ... oh, yeah.  Suck all
the cum out of me!"

And that's just what he did.

As my orgasm took control of my body, I grabbed hold of Eric's thighs,
while stretching my legs as much as could.  I don't always get the
good-burning feeling in my legs when I cum, but this time I did ... and was
it ever amazing!  I must have cum gallons into Eric's mouth, as I fucked
it, because he couldn't swallow it all.  Or, maybe he just spit it back
onto my shaft ... I don't know ... but as my heartbeat began to slow, Eric
pulled off of me.

"Kaiden, that was WAY awesome!" Eric declared, while gently massaging the
jizz into my still rock-hard shaft.

"Fuck, Eric, you rock, big time!" I exclaimed, meaning every word.  "That
was unbelievable!"

"Thanks," he said simply, turning his smiling face to mine.  Then he licked
my still extra sensitive cock head like a guy might slurp an ice cream cone
on a hot summer day.

His dick and smallish, but loose, ball sack were right in front of my
mouth, so I sucked one ball into my mouth, rolling it around on my tongue,
before vacuuming in the second one alongside it.  And after tea bagging him
for quite a while, I took hold of his extra-hard shaft and guided it to my
waiting mouth.  It wasn't long before we had a hot 69 going.  Eric's
pale-colored dick (I guess it matched the rest of him! lol) was one of
those really skinny ones, and I easily let the head slide past my tongue.

Though my big cock made for a pretty effective gag in his mouth, as his
dick head pressed against the back of my throat, Eric tried to cry out.  It
seemed like he said, "Oh, fuck, Kaiden!  Yeah!"  But while I could have
been wrong about that, there was no doubt about one thing: when I began to
make sounds in the back of my throat, I thought he would go wild!

Wow, it was fun to make Eric feel good!

Anyway, after the two of us made the other feel good that night, the twins
joined us in a foursome.  And afterwards, while winding down from our fun
time with each other, the four of us lay in bed, talking about what we'd
just experienced.  Even after David and Carlos had drifted off to sleep,
Eric and I were still awake.

"That was sure amazing, Kaiden," Eric commented softly, as he glanced over
at the sleeping twins.  "I'm really glad we're friends."

"Me, too," I agreed, with a smile.  "Eric, um ... I'm sure happy you're
living with us now."

"Thanks, I guess," Eric replied.  He smiled for a moment, but then, his
face said something else.  "I mean, don't get me wrong, Kaiden; I love
living out here on the ranch.  It's lots of fun and all; but damn, I just
wish..."  Suddenly, he seemed sad, as he let the thought trail off.  It was
almost like he had tears in his eyes.  "I just wish my mom and dad weren't
the way they are."

"That really sucks," I said, comforting my friend as much as one kid can
comfort another.  Hopefully, all of us would be able to show Eric the love
he had missed out on all his life.

With a deep sigh, he lay his head on my shoulder.  And, sometime later, as
I gently ran my fingers through his mousy-brown hair, Eric fell asleep in
my arms.

Cole has already told you guys about painting the studio on Sunday; and all
day Monday, Ryan was SO excited he was about to pop.  It was all because
Cole was moving in with us that afternoon.  Damn, Ryan had SO wanted that
to happen for a long time!  But he wasn't the only one; all of us were
happy Cole would be living with us.  He was such a cool dude.

Anyway, after the last bell sounded that afternoon, as I hung around with
the guys, in front of the school, Carlos asked, "So, Ryan, is Cole gonna be
at the ranch when you get home from school today?"

Smiling, Ryan answered, "No, but we're going by his apartment as soon as
Tyler gets here.  All of us are gonna load his stuff into the Tacoma."

"Sweet!" David said with a big smile.

"Yeah, I can't wait!" Ryan declared excitedly, as if we didn't already know
that.

As we were talking about Cole, and how awesome it would be to have him
living on the ranch with us, a girl's voice spoke from behind me.  "Hey,
guys," she said.

"Oh, hi, Brianne," Ryan commented, guardedly.  He was neither happy nor
unhappy to see our classmate and her small circle of snickering friends.

Brianne, a cheerleader at Centennial Middle, was one of the more popular
girls in our class.  While there's no way I could explain them to you, I
did have some kind of feelings for her ... that I WAS sure about.  She made
me feel all weird inside ... if you know what I mean ... and it must have
been apparent on my face.  After she said something to her company of girl
friends ... something they must have thought was funny, because, right
away, they began to giggle uncontrollably ... Brianne turned her face
toward mine.

"Hey, Kaiden," she said dreamily, with a big smile, taking my hand in hers.
"You're so cute."

Her girlfriends giggled again, as they glanced at each other, and from
Brianne to me.  Then, chattering among themselves, they walked away ... but
not before they had glanced back at us several times, giggling harder each
time.  Tongue-tied, Carlos looked like he wished he was in my shoes,
talking to one of the prettiest girls in school.  While Ryan, on the other
hand, just shook his head from side-to-side, as if to say 'whatever'.
Though the rest of the guys didn't seem to care one way or the other about
Brianne, my heart skipped a beat, as she and I began to talk.

And we talked for quite a while, I guess.  When a car horn sounded, I was
surprised to look around and see that just about all our fellow students
had already been picked-up by their brothers, sisters ... or maybe, their
parents.

"Are you coming, or not, lover boy?" Chris yelled impatiently, from the
passenger seat, before making exaggerated smooching sounds with his lips.

"Fuck you!" I laughed in my brother's direction, before turning back to
Brianne.  "Okay, tomorrow, then?"

"Yeah," she said, "tomorrow."  And I gave her a quick kiss before racing
toward the truck.

Chris opened his door for me, and I slid in behind his seat, into the back
of the pickup.  Even though Chris and I usually always got along, on the
drive to Cole's apartment, he teased me mercilessly about having a
girlfriend.  I guess most of the guys did, come to think of it.  Well,
except for Eric, that is; he was quiet and just looked at me from
time-to-time with his soulful, brown eyes.  But, damn, I thought Chris
would never let me live it down!  Anyway, it wasn't until after we arrived
at student housing on the C.U. campus, that he finally dropped the subject.

"Come on, let's go upstairs and see if Cole is ready for us," Tyler
commented, shifting the transmission into 'Park' and shutting off the
motor.

As we were walking through the half empty, asphalt parking lot to the front
door, I glanced around.  Several guys were obviously having fun, playing a
rough game of touch football on the front yard.  When we reached the
full-length glass entry door, several college students were just leaving
the building; and after letting them pass, we went inside.  Since we'd
visited Cole before, we knew exactly where he lived.  We took the elevator
to the fifth floor, and after walking down the hall to #512, Ryan knocked
on the door.

"Hey, Cole!" he loudly called out, when no one answered right away.

"Just a sec, Ryan," Cole answered, to the sound of a toilet being flushed.
And moments later, he appeared in the doorway, wearing a pair of
sweatpants, awkwardly perched low on his hips ... and nothing else, as far
as I could tell.  While glancing toward the bathroom, with a smile, he
casually hooked a thumb in the waistband of his sweats.

Offhandedly, he added, "Just taking care of business, guys."

"Yeah, we heard," Chris laughed.

Cole shrugged his shoulders, in that easy-going way of his, while opening
wide the door to his apartment.  As soon as we were inside, he wrapped his
arms around his boyfriend, hugging him tightly to his bare chest. "Hey,
Ryan!" he said cheerily.  And immediately, the fire hose running down his
left thigh began to plump-up some.

"Wow," Ryan said, obviously speechless, before giving Cole a big kiss.

"Wow is right!" Cole exclaimed.  "I sure missed you!"  Then, after gazing
lovingly toward Ryan, he turned his eyes to the rest of us.  "Well, guys,
I've just about got everything ready to start moving."

"Awesome!" Ryan quickly answered.

"Does all this stuff go?" Tyler asked, looking around the room.

"Not the furniture," Cole replied, "but everything else does."

"That's not gonna be bad at all, then," Tyler said, with a big smile.

"Why don't you guys get yourselves Cokes from the icebox," Cole asked,
"while I grab a sweatshirt, put on some shoes, and finish packing?"

"Sure," I agreed, with a grin.  Suddenly, my mouth was dry, as I crossed
the studio apartment to the efficiency-sized refrigerator.

After pulling open the door, I smiled.  I guessed college guys must not do
a lot of cooking, because, other than a few sodas and a couple six-packs of
Coors Light, the inside of the fridge was empty.

"Did you say we could have a beer?" I laughed, removing one of the
six-packs and holding it high.  I'd never tasted the stuff, so I didn't
even know if I would like it.

"Hey, it's all right by me," Cole chuckled.  "Except..." he paused for a
long moment.  "I don't think your dads would be very happy with me, when
all you guys show up buzzed at the J bar A this afternoon."

"Yeah, you're probably right about that," I agreed, setting the beer on the
counter and taking out sodas for the five of us.  There was no 'probably'
about it; Dad would be pissed if he knew we had been drinking ... SUPER
pissed!

As we popped the tops on our cans, Chris and I sidled our legs around a
couple of bar stools, while Tyler and Ryan lounged comfortably against the
short bar.  Ryan's eyes, especially, were fixed on Cole, as he pulled a
bulky C.U. sweatshirt over his hard, college guy torso.

Since Cole lived in a furnished apartment, the only big items to be moved
were his weight set and bench, and a fair-sized TV.  Of course, he had
quite a few boxes of clothes, books, and other personal stuff that had to
be carted away, too.

After he'd tossed a couple of things into a carton and interlocked the top
flaps, Cole stated, "Well, guys, that's that." And as he walked over to
where we were, he added, "Sorry I won't be able to help you move
everything."

"Yeah ... I bet you are!" Tyler snickered, shaking his head, as Cole got a
Coke for himself out of the refrigerator, popped the top, and began to take
a long swig.

"What can I say?" Cole laughed, like any guy in his situation would.  "I've
gotta work this evening at the sporting goods store."  He glanced at his
wristwatch.  "Damn, I'd better get moving"

"Hey ... I'd move it all myself, if I had to!" Ryan exclaimed.  Smiling
broadly, he flexed his slim arms to show us that he had the muscles to do
it, too.

"I bet you would," Cole replied, tousling Ryan's mop of unruly hair, as our
brother beamed at his boyfriend.  "Well, I DO need to go."  After giving
Ryan a loving kiss, he opened the door to the hallway.  At that very
moment, three or four guys around Cole's age were walking down the hall,
and they said 'hey' to each other.

"What's going on?" one of the guys asked, glancing into Cole's apartment.
"Are you moving, or something?"

"Yeah," Cole laughed.  "I got an offer of a better place to live ... and I
jumped at it!"

"What ... better than these luxury apartments?" one of the other guys
cynically replied.  "It must be SOME digs!"

All the guys laughed heartily.

"Your neighbors here are sure gonna miss you, Cole," the first guy added,
glancing toward his two friends.

"Hey, what can I say?" Cole answered with a smile.  "I'm gonna miss you
guys, too."  Then Cole turned to my brothers and me.  "These guys will be
my neighbors, now."  He laughed.  "They're gonna be moving me this
afternoon."

While nodding toward us and smiling, the third guy said for his friends,
"You know we'd offer to help, but fuckin' work/study...  You know how it
is."

"Yeah," Cole laughed, "I've gotta go to work, too."  He paused for a
second, before adding to his fellow college students, "Well guys, I'll see
you around campus."

Ryan's boyfriend stepped into the hall, and the four talked for a short
time longer, before the other college guys ambled out of sight.  Then Cole
turned to us and asked, "Well, guys, any questions about what goes?"

None of us had any; I guess it was pretty obvious what needed to be moved.

"See you guys later tonight, then," Cole commented, with a big smile.

As soon as we said goodbye to Cole, the five of us set to work carrying the
big items ... and then the cartons ... to the elevator and loading them
into the truck.  It didn't seem like Cole had all that much to move, until
we tried to fit everything into the pickup bed.  But finally, everything
was loaded; and after tying it down with a couple of stout ropes, we left
for the ranch.

"So, Ryan," Tyler began, as he carefully turned out of the parking lot onto
busy Colorado Avenue, "your room is sure gonna be full with all of Cole's
stuff in it!"

"Yeah, I know," Ryan answered, from his seat by the driver's side window.
"But that's okay, I guess.  We'll find someplace to put all of it."

"Maybe the extra bedroom," Chris suggested, glancing at Tyler, before
turning his face toward the back seat.

"That'd work," Ryan agreed, smiling at Chris' suggestion.

"Or, what about?" Eric began, but left us hanging.

"About what?" Ryan asked.

"Well, I was just thinking," Eric continued.  "What if..."

"Come on; out with it, Eric!" I laughed, nudging him with my right elbow.

Eric smiled, before continuing.

"Well, Kaiden ... what if YOU would move into the extra room, next door to
mine ... and give your room to Cole?" Eric finally concluded his thought.

"Hey, that's an AWESOME idea!" Ryan agreed, with a huge smile.  Looking
back on things, I'm sure there was a little something extra, besides the
obvious, in his smile.  But I didn't see it that night.

"Yeah, it is," Tyler added, thoughtfully, glancing from Eric to me in the
rearview mirror.  It was as if he wanted to say something more, but he
didn't.

"It sure is, Eric" I said, smiling broadly.  "That'd be good for ALL of
us!"

"It's really great that we've GOT so many bedrooms in the first place,"
Chris added.

On the rest of the drive home, we discussed the move, and decided we would
cart all of my things into the spare bedroom before dinner.  Then, after we
ate, we'd move in Cole's gear.  It wouldn't be any fun taking down
everything in my bedroom and setting it back up again, but Eric had made a
good suggestion.  Ryan and Cole would be able to set up their bedrooms like
Chris and Tyler had, if they wanted to, that is.

There are many reasons why having a bunch of guys in the family is a good
thing, but lots of brothers is really handy when it comes to moving
furniture and stuff.  By the time Tim called us to wash our hands for
supper, we'd switched the bedroom furniture and moved most of my things
into the room next door to Eric's.  All of us washed our hands in the
washbasin in Eric's and my shared bathroom, before we headed downstairs.

The savory aroma of supper was coming from a large copper kettle, still
simmering on the stove.

"So how's the move going?" Josh asked, with a smile, as we ladled large
servings of homemade vegetable beef soup into our bowls, and found seats
around the counter.  "You guys were sure making plenty of noise up there!"

"I'm moving across the hall from you and Tim," I advised.

"I guessed as much, from all the racket," Josh laughed.  "Is that room
going to work for you, Kaiden?"

"Yeah," I laughed, "I mean, it's just like the one I WAS in."

"I suppose it is, at that," Josh agreed, with a smile.

"And now you'll be closer to me!" Eric declared, lifting a spoonful of the
steaming-hot, extra-chunky soup and blowing over it, before taking a bite.

"Yep ... I will, at that, won't I?" I smiled.

***

Well, I'm going to end this chapter with that line.  I wonder if changes
are in the offing for the J bar A household?  Stay tuned to find out!  And
if you enjoyed this chapter, I'd sure like to hear from you
(fotogme11@yahoo.com).

Thanks, Greg

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