From: bgriffin@ic.sunysb.edu (Eli the bearded)
Newsgroups: rec.arts.erotica
Subject: Heldar
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Date: 21 Jan 1996 11:08:25 GMT
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Archive-name: heldar

With this I am trying to write that in the style of
Old English prosody with alliteration and caesuras.
The rules roughly obeyed: each line consists of five
syllables, caesura, five more syllables; at least
three alliterative stresses per line, at least one
on either side of the caesura; hyphen and apostrophe
are the only punctuation symbols used.

Comments on the technique are strongly requested.

		Heldar

		   by Eli the Bearded

After the wonderful . win we went back to
Heldar's mead hall at . Middenmeer Merry
celebration song . and supping followed
Red Heldar royal . ring-giver rationed
well-wrought weapons . and weighty gold
Heldar bid me follow . him from the feast then
Beneath breastplate of . brightest steel and brass
his chest heaved heavy . He hugged me hard
out of sight from all . others Our bond past
liege-lord and loyal . follower was love

We stripped off strong . armor and steel mail
Heldar's sweat dripped . from huge hairy muscles
Strong I stood above . and stabbed my straight
rod into his red . relaxed rear hole
He greeted me with . great groans of gay lust
Passionately I . pumped my proud purple
sex in the soft seat . Slowly sensations
teetered at the . top Tight tensions then
flowed forth fast hot . fluid fresh from my flesh
Love's liquid leaked . from my liege-lord's loins
and also oozed out . his own hard object
Streams of stinging sweat . stole my attention
from the fresh scent of . our loving's fluid
I licked lightly . at his lazy flow
I hungered for him . He hastened to hump
my mouth I made all . efforts to manage
his size sucking sap . swallowing seepings
His delight shot a . daunting draught of jam

He got a gold ring . from near his gauntlets
and crouching careful . cupped my crotch put cold
ring around my soft . rod and sack of rocks
Wear the well-wrought ring . and we will be one
he told me I touched . his taught torso Yes

Elijah
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elijah@mathlab.sunysb.edu . bgriffin@ic.sunysb.edu

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