Date: Wed, 17 Mar 2004 03:21:11 -0800 (PST)
From: starixus@yahoo.com
Subject: The Mystic Within Chapter 1

Disclaimer: The following fictional story deals with erotic relationship
among males.  If you are offended by such material, are too young, or
reside in a location where it is not allowed, please depart. Though not
observed in this story, care enough about yourself and humankind to
practice safe sex.


Hi, my name is Keth, Keth Straunas. I'm just an ordinary guy; normal and
just like everybody else.  I'm fair, slim and 5'8" tall. I have short dark
hair and brown eyes. I'm not bad looking nor do I have a splendid
appearance. So, from my appearance you can't tell how special I am compare
with the others, but there's just something inside me which I still can't
tell. I don't even understand it myself. It's in my blood that makes me so
special, and up until this moment, I'm still trying to figure it out, and
this is my story.

I grew up in a simple family, had a lovely dad, mom, one dog and a cat. We
lived in a street called Cambusry. It's a very special street; I bet you'll
love it if you were to stay here. People living here were the nicest
neighbors I ever had. There was one common thing about the people living
here, they all loved to do gardening. We even had an annual competition for
the best garden award and my neighbor Mr. and Mrs. Senneth had won the
award for five consecutive years. I could tell you their garden was indeed
beautiful and awesome.  They planted a variety of flowers, which I could
not even name one. They had the flowers planted in rows, ascending upward
with different colors; from green (leaves plant) to yellow, and to red
(something similar to rose but it was not rose). They even had some small
water fountains located at each corner of their garden.  Basically, I never
asked Ms Senneth the names of the flowers they planted on their garden. I
didn't care at all, as long as they were beautiful.

Well I guessed you were not interested in my living area, so I better
started to talk about my life.  I was nineteen and about to start my
college life. Since my high school, I always like to study chemistry.  To
me, chemistry was the most interesting subject humankind had ever
discovered. So, I took applied chemistry and chemical engineering in my
college. I never thought my study would somehow leaded me out of many
trials and tough time in the future. It was like everything was well
determined by someone who was greater above; you couldn't run away from it.
Because of the fact that I was nobody, not a really cute guy nor had a
muscular figure, so I knew I was not that popular as compared with other
guys. When I first entered the college, you could see gorgeous guys were
surrounded by girls, and pretty girls busied themselves with guys. I just
wished that I was one of them. Being not good looking was bad enough, and
the worst was being teased and bullied by those so-called good-looking
guys. Was I going to spend the rest of my life this way, was I destined to
be tortured if you were not good looking. I was so despaired that I even
thought of committing suicide. But, you never knew what lied ahead of you,
especially when you had something so unique and special in you.

* * * * * * * * * * * *

	"Get off, you skinny rat!" Eddie shouted and pushed me aside as I
tried to get into the classroom when we both were about to get through the
door at the same time. The whole class laughed and nobody was giving any
sympathy to me. Eddie was one of the popular guys in the class; he was
handsome, with dark brown s hinny hair, brown eyes, and above all muscular
and yet fit body. A lot of girls were trying to hang around with him and he
seemed to enjoy it very much. But where there was good there must be bad,
somehow he was not that smart in his study but not too bad either. He's got
a gang with him all the time, and they were all good looking as well. I
guessed all the goods were in the same community and wanted to be separated
from the defect creation.

"I'm sorry" I apologized timidly, trying to avoid his eyesight.

"Think you are small enough to slip through the door, aren't you!" Eddie
said sarcastically.

"I said I'm sorry!" I raised my voice a little higher, and I was getting a
bit mad cause it's not my fault after all.

"How dare you talk to me like that?" He then seized me by the neck and
pulled me aside to the wall.

"Think you are somebody else huh!"

"Errr... ehh.... let.... go..." I choked as I said the words. He's really
strong and almost smothered me to death.

"Say you're never do it again" he started to let go a bit.

"Ehh... I'll...never...do...it...a...gain...." at that instant, my face had
gone red to almost bursting.

"Next time you do it again, I'm gonna kick your ass till you can't sit" he
then let go with derisive sniff.  When he let go off me, I tried to breath
as much as I can as if I never breathe before.

"You beefy bully pig" I said in my mind.

Sweats were rolling down my face everywhere, suddenly there was something
stirred vigorously in my body, and I couldn't tell how it felt. It felt
like as if you were having a dreadful thirst and then suddenly you drank a
whole lot of ice water. The icy feeling like a thousand of needles pierced
through your body from inner to outside of your body. I couldn't think, my
mind was blank and I knew I had to ease my feeling, I knew it's the only
way for I had experienced it before during my high school. I did not know
how I managed to get up and found a seat at the back. When I realized it, I
was in the middle of Professor Alaska lecture.

"Well as you all know Uranium is an extremely toxic and radioactive
element..." said Professor Alaska in his lecturer. Though this was my
favorite lecture, but I just could not concentrate until that weird feeling
drifted away slowly...

* * * * * * * * * * * *

Later that evening, I went to get some showers after my work out. Before I
got into the shower room, I always tried to check to make sure nobody was
in the shower room cause I didn't want to look for any trouble especially
for someone like me. Well, looked like nobody was using the shower, so I
quickly took off my shirt and pants and stepped into the shower.

"Ooohh..." the water was so cooled and refreshing. As the water was running
down my body, I took some time to check my body.

Well, I wasn't that slim after all, at least my body didn't show any sign
of bone. My body was hairless, nice and smooth, thought I didn't have any
six packs for my abs, but at least it's flat smooth.  While I was enjoying
my shower, suddenly someone came in and used the shower. I didn't know who
he was, cause he didn't make any sound except making awful whistling which
I thought it sounded like the pig was making sound for mating. Without any
hesitation, I stopped the shower and quickly dried myself. While I was
busied putting on my clothes, suddenly that guy stopped using the shower
and came out to get the towel.  Oh my goodness, it was Eddie who was using
the shower and now he was totally naked in front of me.  Man, he such a
jock with muscular and firm body. I'd never seen anyone with such a
beautiful body.  He's about 6'2" tall with some hairs on his chest and he's
got a beautiful manhood I'd ever seen in my life.  His manhood was about 6"
in its limp state. I wonder how long it's going to be when it was hard.
He's cut, and his manhood's head was so mesmerizing that it's shape was so
wonderfully created. At that instant, t here was a funny feeling burgeoned
in my body especially when I saw the water dripping from the head of his
manhood.

"Hey, what are you looking at you little faggot!" he shouted when he
noticed me looking at him.

"Nothing..." I said bluntly. "Beside, I'm not a faggot." I said in protest.

"Don't you dare say you're not a faggot, you queer! Or else you will not
fix your little rat eyes on my dick"

"It was just a glance." So he's not that stupid after all, his observation
was quite good.

"Looks like I shall teach you a good lesson so that you'll know what cost
you to look at me" as he was saying this he was rushing towards me. " You
little faggot rat!"

All of a sudden a shivering feeling ran through my body, then all I had in
mind was to run away from this crazy bastard before I ended up myself in
hospital. But I was too slow, the feeling I had earlier had prevented my
legs from receiving signal from my brain and Eddie caught me by the neck.

"I didn't mean to look at it" I struggled to let go.

"So, what should I do to faggot?" he said in menacing voice with wicked
smile on his villain face.

"I'm not a faggot...you...let go of me..." I tried to untangle his deathly
grip on my neck by hitting his rock solid arm, but it was no use.

"Do you know what...I think I'm going to kill you" As he was saying this,
he was then punching my head to the wall un-realizably.

Blood started oozing from my head, and I was getting dizzy. At that
instant, a strong stir was moving throughout my body. The feeling had
become more vigorous as my madness aroused. While I was in my unconscious
state, suddenly Eddie let go of me and I was kind of confused when I heard
him said something strange to me.

"Oh My Gosh...what are you...your blood..." his eyes were starring at me
blankly. Then he let go of a high pitch screamed and ran away.

"Wait...what did you mean...?" I was in puzzle to what he said.

"Haven't you seen someone bleeds..." my body was fallen to the ground and I
tried to maintain my balance by sitting on the ground.

"So...you're the rat who scares blood..." I shouted at him, though I knew
he wouldn't able to hear it.

"Haven't seen blood before...have you...huh..." without realizing the
severity, I wiped the blood from my head.

When I saw what was on my hand, I was almost shocked to death and my mind
was instantly restored to its full-consciousness.

"Holy...Shit...." I just couldn't believe my eyes and what I saw right
now. I was about to understand the words oming out from Eddie's mouth.

"It...can't...be..." I was so sure I was still as sane as the others, but
now what lied in front of me, was my hand covered with something slimey in
blue color...and to my greatest surprised... it was the hand I used to wipe
the blood from my head...so my blood wasn't red...it's BLUE!!!

End of Chapter One

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