Date: Sun, 16 Feb 2003 17:45:53 +1300
From: arthur <rochopa@xtra.co.nz>
Subject: the commander part 2

						THE COMMANDER

						Part Two

						By Arthur



Authors Note:

I do not normally make a dedication with my stories but I feel that this time
It should be done for two young men I met in Nifty.org Writers Chat Room,
This chapter is you Alex and Matt, hope you enjoy.



Cameron looked over at Jopty as he watched the strange heiroglyphs floating
in the air before them.

"Ahm, General, why did you ask me if I was the Commander back on earth when
you knew all along?"

"I didn't want to alarm you Sir."

"No really, so you just sort of fuck with my head instead?"

"No Sir, that was not my intention Sir, I felt it would be better to try to
break it to you gentley Sir."

"Well if that was gentle then don't get rough with me General."

"Sir?"

"It's a joke General."

"Yes Sir."

With that Cameron looked at the blank frontage of the craft just in time to
see it disappear before his eyes, he let out a shout of shock and fear as
the front of the craft seemingly vanished and he was suspended over open
space, the feeling of vertigo took over his senses as the craft turned a
little and he was looking into the maw of the largest cavern he had ever
seen.

"What the f..?"

"Sorry Sir I should have warned you, that is the landing bay Sir, I have to
take the ship in manually this close in."

"If thats the landing bay just how big is this bloody station?"

"It is two Braes long Sir and one Braes Wide, the total height including
instruments is one Imbraes."

"Look General can you use earth terms until I know what the hell you're
talking about?"

"Sorry Sir, the station is about two kilometers long and one kilometer
wide, it is a total of 500 meters tall."

"Shit thats certainly no VW beetle, for sure."

"It is the newest station we have Sir, it is specially set up for your task
here, we have never done this before so it had to have a few things extra
to what the normal station would have."

"Hope you have a kitchen on it."

"Yes Sir it has a fully operational Galley Sir."

"It was a joke again General."

"Yes Sir."

Cameron watched as the landing bay became larger and larger as they got
closer, it was lit up brightly and he began to see in the far distance of
the bay rows and rows of stick like figures all in different coloured
clothes lined up along the length of the landing area.

"This is bloody huge, is it the only landing bay here?"

"No Sir, there are nineteen more, we can launch one hundred fighters from
them at the same time, if needed Sir."

"How many fighters are there General?"

"You have two thousand single fighters, and one thousand double fighters
sir, there are four thousand ground attack troops, one thousand on board
guards, one thousand five hundred personell to run the station and the
other five hundred are made up from your operational staff and personal
guards."

"Sheeeit, this place has ten thousand people on it?"

"Ten thousand and one Sir."

"One?"

"You Sir."

"But that number will increase depending on how many intimates you would
like."

"Intimates?"

"Yes Sir your personal staff for your pleasure Sir, they take care of all
your needs in private Sir, clothing, cooking, any services you need as well
as your bed Sir."

"You mean I get some guys as well to ....well you know?"

"Yes Sir you can have as many as you would like for any favours you need
from them."

"Who picks them?"

"You have already Sir."

"How, I haven't seen anybody yet."

"Yes you have Sir, we take them from your memories of boys that have been
your favourites in your head."

"In my head?"

"Yes Sir we take the images of boys that have impressed you in your past
and develope them while you are in stasis, they will be ready for you when
you awaken, all we need to know is how many you would like to serve you,
then we take them from your memory in the order of favouritism, that way we
are assured of getting the best boys for you."

"So you run up some robots for me?"

"Oh no sir, they will be real boys, we have the technology to produce them
perfectly to your needs."

"How long will I be in this stasis thing?"

"Five Bita...sorry Sir..days, Sir."

The craft was now low to the floor of the huge hanger, Cameron could see
that around the upper walls were suspended in what appeared to be mid air,
hundreds upon hundreds of small silver craft, some with a larger dome than
others, these he assumed rightly were the two man fighters, the others had
a single dome, along the wall on the floor stood huge craft that had to be
transporters, all of the craft just hung in the air or just above the
floor, there was a faint shimmer under each craft but nothing else to hold
them up.

Jopty settled the craft to the floor of the bay and reached upward to flick
his finger at a small red dot near his head, the humming of the drive
disappeared and the craft sat there as the front darkened again surrounding
the two inside.

"What do we do now General?"

"I will just fill in a couple of things for you so you know what to expect
Sir, then we go out there and they will greet you."

"But I'm a bloody mess, wont they snigger or something?"

"Definately not Sir, you are the Commander, they would never do that Sir,
they all know the way you have had to live on earth, there will never be
anything said about your appearance Sir."

"So what now?"

"Well Sir the first ones to come to you will be your guard, they will have
red tunics, they will kneel and give the oath to you, next will be the
operational staff, they will be in green tunics, the rest of the crews will
stay where they are and give the oath from there, the pilots will be in
blue tunics and the troops in brown, the station crew will be dressed in
grey tunics, we don't use insignia except for yours Sir."

"What will mine be?"

"You will see it Sir when you come from stasis, it will be attached while
you are in there."

"Hmm, well ok."

"Are you ready now Sir?"

"S'pose so General."

"I will translate for you Sir until your biosync is opened, the greeting
must be in our language as well as the oath Sir."

"Fine lets do it General."

The sides of Camerons craft disappeared and the two youngsters stepped out,
Cameron heard a growing rumble like thunder as he stepped out and onto the
floor of the bay, the rumble grew in intensity as he was escorted by Jopty
to the center of the bay to stand alone in an area that seemed to go onto
nothingness for ever.

The rumble became indistinct words as the ten thousand throats spoke out as
one.

"KASON BEDAT BESAT KHAMRUNE, KASON TISAY OTA BESAT KHAMRUNE,KASON VENASAMAT
BESAT KHAMRUNE."

"We see Commander Khamrune, we stand for Commander Khamrune, we welcome
Commander khamrune."

Every one in the bay then knelt down on one knee bringing their right hand
upward to there chin with the edge of the hand facing outward like a knife
blade, their heads bowed.

What appeared to be about four hundred men dressed in red tunices and
holding in their right hand a small short silver staff with a top like a
pyramid about four inches across, marched in perfect step toward where
Cameron stood with Jopty behind him, the troops turned to the right and
then when they were all standing at attention in front of Cameron in four
long ranks they went to their knee as the others were and laid their staff
on the floor with the pyramidal tip facing Cameron.

"KASON BREY SEFIET ASMAN DOW MISTAN PITA KODURE ABA BREY KRAMADAL SIPI
BESAT KHAMRUNE"

"We the loyal lay our staff and life to the defense of Commander Khamrune."

As soon as he had spoken Jopty stepped back and four of the guard picked up
their staffs and approached Cameron as he stood alone, Cameron looked
frantically about but no one was close enough to help as the four guards
came closer, the staffs in there hands began to hum and as he watched the
shafts grew longer until they were long enough to reach above his head, the
guards then stood around him forming a square then tilted the staffs
forward at the tip until they touched, there was a hiss and then Cameron
found himself surrounded by a blue glow as the staffs formed a pyramid
around him, the guards stepped back leaving the staffs in position.

Cameron heard Jopty's voice clearly behind him.

"Besat Khamrune, this energy field can not be broken by anything we know
of, it will always be ready to protect you, after stasis you will also have
your own field but this one is for the guards to make sure you are never
harmed, there will be always thirty guards with you where ever you go
except your private quarters which have their own field for you
protection."

Cameron watched as twenty eight more guards joined those near him, taking
up positions the same as the others in the form of a square, the other
guards rose from their feet and returned to their original place at the
head of the rest of the station staff.

Next came the one hundred green tunics who also now knelt before him with
the single hand salute.

"KASON BREY MILLIDAEMIAN DESTAP BRINAM SKOPMAN, BESAT KHAMRUNE."

"We the officers await your commands, Commander Khamrune."

At the last of the oath by the officers and as they went back to their
places near the other of Camerons personal guards, the rest of the crew
began with the thundering rumble again as they gave their oath.

"KASON BREY SOMATA SIPI TALIMATA KHAMRUNE DESTAP BRINAM SKOPMAN ABA PREFIS
NINAL BRIDAXMAN SIF BREY GAND SIPI BRIDAX, BESAT KHAMRUNE."

We the crew of station Khamrune await your commands, to follow until
reissue at the hall of Bridax, Commander Khamrune."

Cameron heard a voice near to him but still outside the square of energy
around him.

"Sir there is no need for you to speak to them, if you would be so kind as
to nod to the assembled they will know you have accepted them and will then
disperse to their duties, I will escort you to the stasis room and prepare
you for your biosync opening."

Cameron followed the advice and as soon as he had nodded the crowd began to
break up and head out of the bay, Cameron now began to see the real size of
the hanger area as the men went to their duties until only his personal
guard and Jopty stood there alone in the vast space of the floor.

The four original guards stepped forward and took up their staffs and they
began to quickly retract back to their usual length of about twelve inches,
Jopty stepped forward.

"Sir would you follow me and I will take you through to stasis now."

"Jeez General this is a bit much to take all in."

"It will all be clear after stasis Sir, this way please."

Cameron followed Jopty to a small silver circle on the floor noticing that
all the guards were already standing on one of them, Jopty touched the
small bracelet on his arm and the disc lifted without a sound carrying the
two of them forward, Cameron tried not to show the shock of the movement
and sudden lift to the others as it began to gain speed and whisk them
along the length of the bay toward the far end where the wall disappeared
and they passed through it without a door being seen.

Jopty almost let Cameron see a smile as he looked over at his Commander.

"The station is controlled by the bio-magnesian-mass, it is like a computer
on earth but much more advanced, it is part living cells and part energy,
when you come from stasis you will have a direct linkage to it at all
times, you will only have to think a command and it will be obeyed or you
can ask for assistance with a problem and it will give you the answers you
want."

"Thats some computer General, what if it gets damaged, what happens then?"

"It can't be damaged Sir, it is protected as well as you are Sir, there is
only one person that can go into its shelter, thats you Sir, it will only
recognise your biosync so that anyone else trying to approach it will be
destroyed before they can get into the shelter."

"What happens if the stations is destroyed though?"

"That would be most unlikely Sir, but in the event that it did happen it
would be self contained and wait for you to join it and then take you to
our home world to be given another station and crew to continue your
command."

"Wait a minute, you said another crew, why?"

"Oh if the station was destroyed Sir we would all perish and could not go
to the Hall of Bridax to be reissued, but your survival will always be
assured by the bio Sir, your life span must be protected until you have
fulfilled your duties."

Cameron noticed that reguardless of where they went, up shafts or along
halls, through walls or down long tunnels that the guards were at all times
placed two in front and two behind him close enough to almost touch if he
reached out with an arm.

The other twenty eight were in two lines either side of the four guards
around him, half in front and the rest behind and so forming a phalanx of
red as they moved about the station.

"General, are the guards always like this?"

"Yes Sir they take their duty very seriously, your protection is all they
know and have traind for, it is all they live for, they can't be bribed or
coerced in any way, the only way they will leave you is when they perish or
are sent to reissue."

"What's the youngest and oldest people here General?"

"The youngest is a mere boy of 80 earth years Sir, I am the oldest, most of
your Staff are about 150 earth years old sir, because of your younger years
and the need for many of us to go to earth later the Gandule selected the
youngest people they could to follow you."

"Damn, young boys that are 80 years old is going to be hard to take."

"Now Sir how many intimates would you like to care for you?"

"Hell I don't know, what about half a dozen is that about right?"

"Six Sir, is that all you will need?"

"How many do the other Commanders usually have then General?"

"Most of them have between twenty and thirty Sir, but don't worry if the
six is not enough you can ask for more when you are feeling comfortable and
are used to the stations systems."

"Well thanks General, yes I think six will be plenty to handle for now."

"Very good Sir, they will be waiting for you when you come back from
stasis."

Jopty took Cameron into another vast room, it was lined with panels that
looked a little like teak wood but shimmered like polished steel, in the
center of the room was a small metal cabinet laying on its side with the
top open, looking inside Cameron could see what looked like pink jello half
way to the top.

There was a faint smell of some kind of flower coming from it, not strong
but just noticable, at the strange look on his face Jopty spoke.

"We have made it smell like your earth lavender for you so it will seem
familiar, if you would care to strip off your clothes and lay down on it, I
will set it to your body state and then you will sleep and wake up in five
days with full recall of your biosync."

In somewhat of a daze Cameron stripped off his rags before he realized he
was going to be naked in front of all these people, 'to late' he thought as
his briefs hit the floor, shrugging his shoulders he stepped up and into
the pink mass, much to his surprise he didn't sink down into it but it just
seemed to flow away from his body then settle back around him until only
his face was not covered, a soothing warmth engulfed him as he looked up at
Jopty's smiling face.

"In five Bitayan Commander Khamrune."

The voice faded as sleep overtook him, his last thought was that he didn't
realise how tired he was, then blackness.

*********************************



Camrons eyes opened to see his guards still standing beside the chamber and
Jopty in front of them still smiling, Camerons forehead felt a little
strange but apart from that he felt only fit and healthy, he stood up from
the chamber and as he reached the floor he rubbed his brow and felt the
strange roughness of three dots on his forehead.

"They are your insignia Sir."

Jopty held out a gold coloured tunic so that Cameron could slip it on and
cover himself, as he did so he glanced downward at himself and gave a
start, his pride and joy had grown in length and thickness, where before he
had only 5" of normal thickness he now had a hard straight thick shaft of
7"s, he looked questioningly up at Jopty.

"I hope you don't mind sir but the Bio decided that you should be developed
to enjoy your intimates a little better and the ahhhhh...hardness is normal
after stasis, your intimates will see to it for you if you will follow me I
will take you to your quarters to rest."

"Rest, I've just been asleep for five days?"

"Yes Sir your body has been resting but your mind has been very busy, it
will need rest for a while and your..ahm.. manhood needs to be taken care
of as well."

At the mention of the now new erection Cameron realised it was throbbing
madly wanting him to get some relief quickly, Cameron followed Jopty to the
nearest wall as it parted for him to walk down a short corridor to a wall
that was decorated with many of the strange heiroglyphs he had seen in the
space craft that brought him here five days ago but this time he could read
them without trouble.

They told of his families history which seemed to stretch back millions of
earth years into the past, as he neared the wall the guards and Jopty
stopped a short distance from it.

"Whats the matter General, oh thats right, my field, well thank you General
Jopty for your help, I will see you later."

"Yes Sir, your guards will wait here for your return."

"Thank you General."

Cameron turned and walked to the wall and as he neared it, it opened for
him and for the first time he saw his quarters, even though he knew then
intimately from his biosync he was still amazed at the first actual sight
of them, the reception area was large enough to hold fourty or fifty poeple
at the same time and still have space to move around, but this time there
were only six young boys standing there with huge smiles on their faces,
they were dressed in sheer white tunics that were almost see through and as
Cameron watched them with his rigid member pulsing at the added sight the
asian boy of about 16 came to him.

The first time cameron had seen him was in an arcade playing games, he had
not spoken to him that time but he had made a real impression on him with
his flashing dark eyes and the lythe movements of his body as he twisted
and turned at the game machine.

"Welcome home Besat, may I service you now?"

Cameron stood as the boy neared him and went down on his knees gentley
reaching for Camerons hard shaft, the delicate slim hands and fingers of
this beautiful china doll like figure loosened the metallic cord holding
Camerons tunic and slid the clasp loose then reached inside and eased out
Camerons now dripping new 7"s, leaning forward with his lips parted the boy
pushed out a small pointed red tongue and began to softly lick the very tip
of Camerons cock head.

That first tentative touch sent a shiver through Camerons new body and his
newly awakened senses drank in the touches as the boy lowered his lips
further until he was begining to swallow the glans and then continued until
the full length of Cameron was deep inside his throat in what seemed to be
effortless ease, then the throat muscles began to play around the thickness
of the shaft buried deep inside him.

Wave after wave of sheer pleasure ran through Cameron as the boy kept the
full length in his throat using only his internal muscles to pull and suck
on Cameron, it was only short minutes before Cameron felt a hot rising in
his belly as his cum came racing to the end of his cock and was then with a
loud shout from Cameron rushing down the throat of the boy on his knees in
front of him.

Cameron shuddered time and again as the orgasm of his life shook him from
head to toe in giant muscle constricting blasts, the boy swallowed and
swallowed until all of Camerons hot juice was down his throat, with a smile
as he looked up the boy spoke for the second time.

"Besat may we bathe you now?"

Still twitching from the almighty orgasm Cameron nodded his head in
agreement as he wasn't sure his voice would hold out long enough for him to
speak.

The other five boys came to him and caressed his body as they removed his
tunic fully and lead him to the bathroom where the sunken tub was more like
a large indoor swimming pool and spa pool combined, soaps and scents were
arranged around the pool for the boys to use.

While the boys stripped off their tunics Cameron made his unsteady way
toward the steps leading down into the pool, the first contact with the
water sent a warm shiver through his body as he settled down in the water.

All the boys were in the pool in no time, each with something different in
their hands, soft clothes, fragrant soaps, smooth warm oils, Cameron felt
hands moving all over him in a twelve handed massage as they worked oil
into his muscles then used the scented soaps to wash him all over, Cameron
had no idea how long it took all he knew was that he had died and gone to
the garden of eden for gay guys.

An impish face appeared before his eyes, he recognised the face of the
young guy he had seen at the railway station with a bag on his shoulder and
ragged jeans with a torn tee-shirt last year, he was going to go and help
the kid but he had been to slow and an older guy had taken him away before
Cameron could get to him.

Cameron had seen him only once more after that, it was the next morning and
he had found the boy laying in an alley with finger marks around his throat
where he had been strangled and left naked near a dumpster for the street
cleaners to take away, it was the first time that Cameron had really cried
for someone else when he saw the limp little figure in the dirty morning
light, now he was here with him alive and asking for a kiss.

Cameron leaned forward and accepted the soft sweet young lips onto his own,
a small hot tongue tip poked askance on his own now demanding lips then
slipped inside to run over his teeth and further into his mouth tasting
Cameron with desperate need.

Cameron lifted his arms and encircled the small blonde, blue eyed bundle
and pulled him closer feeling his hard little 4" nail pushing into his
stomach as the impish figure thrust forward, a thought passed through
Camerons mind as the tongue dove deeper.

'Hell and I only asked for six of them.'



To Be Continued: