Date: Sun, 03 Aug 2008 19:25:40 -0400
From: J
Subject: TRIO  92-THE ALTERNATE VERSION

NOTE: Some of this was exactly the same but the ending is very, very
different, especially when Phall dies and how Kickai is set up to fight
Sole. I also had plans for Justin, NOT Sole to slay Aran, Leoni, Gobi, and
Lokeen. However, that would have called for Justin to break away from
Kickai and I doubt that would have happened really.


TRIO 92--THE ALTERNATE DELETED VERSION


Sole looked out the window, sure he would see a victorious Justin. Instead
he saw Kickai engaging the white haired one in a violent sword fight. Most
of the other pirate boys were dead or dying. The albino and mulatto were
left and Phall, who was still in his corner. Sole turned from the window,
fingering his sword. "Stay here you two!"

Kelli grabbed his forearm, "Don't go out there! You're hurt already!"

"I've got to help Justin," Sole looked at him, deeply into his eyes,
"Good-bye."

"Kickai'll kill you both!" Kelli, the little boy said, tears in his eyes.

"Yeah, it's a good day to die," Sole said. Before the small boy could
respond, Sole ran out the door.

Kelli began to cry with Iokus. Iokus hugged Kelli and they sat on the bed.

Sole stopped at the top of the wooden stairs. His head hurt. He recalled
others saying that, "It's a good day to die."  An Asian, dark and probably
from the Phillipines. "And don't call me Oriental. Things are Oriental,
people are Asian..."

"Who? Who are you?"  Sole put his free hand to his head. But the clang of
swords above made him clear his head.

Another said that too. A Puerto Rican. "It's a good day to die and to
slay!"

Sole shook himself and ran up the steps.




Kelli pulled Iokus back a bit so he could look at him, "I...I forgot to
tell him...his name...it...it's Sole!"

Iokus smiled, "Maybe you can send it to his mind directly...?"

"It might not be a good time."

"Then again it might help him to know that..."

"Okay, maybe...maybe I'll try," Kelli said.



Outside and above, Kickai was hacking at Justin's newly acquired sword and
was wearing him down, as he had Fargel. Kickai was used to the alien
suns. Moreso than Justin it seemed. Mera came up from the side of the ship
and fired an arrow, grazing Justin's leg and further tiring him. Kickai
continued, pushing Justin toward the outer edges of the ship, the water in
plain sight beyond the dark useless cannons. "You took most of my crew!
Soon I'll let the sea take you, you land lover!"  Justin was at a loss for
words, fighting. He sweated as he began to realize just how many he had
killed and how viciously and that these were, like him, teenagers and boys
and some men he was fighting.

Faster than Cron, Sole rus hed out and ran at Kickai's sword with his
own. In his other hand he waved his spear to keep any surviving pirate boys
back, especially Sem and Stefo, who were just now coming at the two. Kickai
had Justin down on one leg and was about to strike at the white haired
one's chest, a face of rage and joy mixed across his visage. Sole blocked
the fatal blow and Kickai grabbed a dying boy's sword and fought both
Justin and Sole.

Leoni came up to them and watched. Stefo was nearby, "Why don't you help,
Leoni. I've never seen you kill, Leoni."  Leoni just shoved his shoulder
into Stefo.

Kickai could fight these two for a long time. Cron met Sole's sword and
they fought. Cron successfully maneuvered Sole away from Kickai, who
renewed his battle with Justin. Sole, slightly taller, pushed Cron to the
side rail of the ship, the sea beneath. Kickai had Justin in the same
position, not far from them.  Kelli saw this through his window and ran up
to the deck, followed closely by Iokos.

Sem saw them first and waved a knife, "Kill the lads!"

Kickai yelled, not veering his eyes from his victim, "NO! Do not touch the
little boys!"

Kelli ran toward them but the railing seemed about to give way. As Cron
fell, he wrapped a hand around Sole's arm at the same time Sole had turned
to yell to Kelli, "Get back below!"














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Justin yelled, "Get Mera! He's firing arrows at me!"



Above them, on the third deck, round faced, little Mera began to fire more
arrows.Sole headed up at the boy-pirate, dodging the arrows. There was big,
blonde, knife wielding Sem, the noose bearing little dark boy with the
funny mouth Lokeen, the handsome Triear holding Gobi, the large Dark Mall,
the frown faced, thin Aran, and light skinned, freckled Sok who held a
Skiver in one hand and a Macer in the other. Small Vel and Fi star knives
were also out. Sole made his way onto the deck where Mera was firing and
saw him near an open ladder-way.

"Mera, stop! I have no desire to harm you!"  He ran at the boy and swiped
with his spear at the bow, knocking it to the deck. Stunned by Sole's pace,
the much smaller boy quickly took out a thin sabre and met Sole's sword
with a clang.

Sem was close to them, bearing a sharply gleaming Vel which glistened from
the reflecting moonbeams off the waves beyond the ship. In his other hand
was a half star Fi

Sem charged and the others followed.

Sole easily knocked Mera's weapon to the deck but the boy scrambled for it
under Sole's sword. Sole lifted the sword up so as not to have Mera
hurt. Mera grabbed the sabre and turned it on his own stomach. Sole yelled,
"No! Enough killing, Mera!!"

Mera laughed, plunging into his little frame, under his r ibs, "You won't
take me alive!"

Sole sheathed his own sword and grabbed the hilt of Mera's sabre, trying to
prevent him from doing more harm to himself, "Its not deep. You'll live. I
don't want you to ...."




Mera moved himself back toward the open ladder way, causing the sabre to
come out of his bloody navel. He groaned and fell back--out of the ladder
way. His small body fell and thudded behind the two little kids, Kelli and
Iokus,who turned around to see it. Mera's eyes were open and he was dead
instantly.

All the time Sole was trying to stop the death of Mera, big muscled, fuzzy
haired Morcan climbed out of the third deck mast lookout, shielded by the
sails and the night. He was stealthily making his way down behind Sole, a
knife in his mouth. The momentary distraction of Mera's death allowed Phall
to scoop up both boys under each arm and drag them through the air. Away.

Morcan landed on Sole's back, the knife raised in one hand. Sole grabbed
Morcan's knife arm and pushed back into the mast pole, Morcan hitting his
back and falling onto his face, groaning. Sole turned him over to find to
his horror that the knife was embedded up to the hilt in Morcan's
chest. Morcan groaned, "Finish me, uhh. Don't let me suffer-uhhrr."  Sole
gathered up his spear and wincing, poked it into Morcan's muscular belly,
then zigzagged it quickly. He tugged it out and brought it up, then down
hard into Morcan's stomach again. Morcan rose at the hips, "Thank
yooahhhh..."  he fell back, a leg trying to rise, then he rolled over onto
his ripped belly. Sole felt a renewed stirring...in his loin cloth. He
wondered what that was all about. He liked this.

"Damn it! I do! I like this!!!!"

He recalled the Puerto Rican saying something similar.

Sole soon found himself coming down the ladder and going into the deck hold
door, unprovoked.

Below, Sole entered the boy's room to find Phall, the sandy haired
German-like teen, guarding them. When he saw Sole, Phall raised a sword
over Iokus and Kelli, who were huddled over the bed. Kelli looked up,
"You're alive!!! Still?"

Sole calmly put a hand out, "Phall, don't. You don't have to kill them. I
won't hurt you."

Phall raised his sword higher, "I...I am not afraid of you. If I kill
them--you will be enraged enough to fight me so I can prove..."




Sole laid his spear down carefully, "Phall, I..won't kill you no matter
what. You don't have to kill little boys like this. Your own captain didn't
want to. Its your ....your code."  He tried to recall if he ever had such
codes of his own, which did not include his killing of boys.

"The captain won't like it. But he's dead."

"No, no he's not. He's above hunting for me right now. He's...he's got
Justin and will kill him if I don't show up but first I want...I want
 you to let these two innocents go."

Sole gulped, hoping Phall wouldn't notice, "And Phall-what will he or any
of your crew that survived do to you if he is alive and finds out you
killed the boys on his ship--apparently even Kickai has limits in how young
a boy he will..."

"SHUT UP!" Phall went to thrust Kelli at him but stopped, "I'm not
afraid. I am not afraid of him or of you or any of them! Oren, I am not."

"You couldn't save Oren," Sole recalled, "I might have hurt you then if you
had tried. You would have thrown your life away if..."  Sole wondered. Had
he ever given anyone this kind of mercy??? He thought not. He tried to
remember faces of those he may have killed in the past. He found a few came
to mind's eye.

"SHUT!"  Phall ran at Sole, unable to kill the little boys, who
screamed. Sole in a flash swerved his sword into Phall's sword. Phall's
sword dropped to one side and plopped uselessly onto the bed. Phall backed
up to the wall. "Very well, slay me warrior."

"No, Phall," Sole lowered his own blade point to his knees,

"I will not. There had been enough slaying."

"Don't cheat me! I am not afraid. I am not afraid."

Sole looked from him to Kelli, "Are you and Iokus, safe, unharmed?"

"Yes, we're fine," Kelli whispered, "What about..."

Phall whispered, "I am not afraid. I am not."  He lunged forward at Sole.
=0 A

"Watch it!"  Iokus screamed, "Sole!"


Phall bent his knees and ploughed his own trunk onto the point of Sole's
sword which was slightly arched out from the blond boy's knees. It was
enough. Phall impaled himself on the sword, a thick sounding scrunch of
meat on metal, his own knees on the wooden floor now. Sole gasped, his
tiredness of this violence, "Ohh, No, Phall! No!"

"You see, warrior," winced Phall, "I am not afraid."

"No, you are not," Sole swallowed, sickened of violence, "I do see that
now."  As sickened of it as he was, Sole found he could not help the thick
dick he found stretching in his own loin cloth. It was heavy with cum and
wanted it to burst.

Phall closed his eyes, "Enemy, show me...mercy. That you can..."

"No," Sole puffed, "You are not badly wounded. You will live."

Phall quickly reached up, grabbed the hilt of Sole's sword, and jerked it
down deeper into his belly. CRUNCH of meat sound. He laughed out a moan of
pain. "No, I will not," he gasped, feeling the blade slide past his
backbone and out his back, the point on a downward angular slide. "I am not
afraid to die. Was this with honor?"

Kelli turned Iokus away, both sick. Sole answered, looking at Phall
directly, "Yes, much honor."

"Do what you have to."

Sole did the Bakar, the alien's death of honor. It was a stab to the navel,
a zigzag down to above t he dick and then unplugging it and a final stab
back to the navel again. Phall remained alive a few seconds after Sole
unplugged the belly. He looked happily at Sole, then tried to hold his
belly together and live long enough to thank him but instead he gurgled and
fell to his side, then onto his stomach, his eyes closing slowly. Phall's
body was just stopping its quivering as Sole regained his mind and senses.

Kickai came in and grabbed him from behind, "You're mine!"  Sole could feel
the knife against his own arm, a knife in Kickai's hand. "You've killed
another of my crew! You will die slowly in pain!!!!"



Feeling Kickai's raving dick against his backside, Sole yelled, "Then just
do it, Kickai, just do it already!"

Kickai looked at the two boys, huddled on the bed. He turned Sole to the
door and flung him at it, "No, not here, not this way and not infront of
them..."

"Okay!"  Sole turned.

"UP!"

"Just you wait!"  Sole yelled, his finger up and pointing, "You promise me
that they will not be hurt! You promise me that and I'll give you a
fight...the fight of your life...go on your word, your oath as a pirate..."

Kickai looked at him and smiled, pushed his chest out and put his knife in
the air, "You have my oath. They will not be harmed. I will even put20them
into a village I know...and have not harmed. A village that once saved me
life."

"You won't raise them as pirate boys?"

"No," Kickai said, "I know that is your wishes."

"Yes, it is," Sole looked at them and smiled, "I believe him...you will
safe..."

The boys looked at Sole and had tears in their eyes. Sole smiled at
them. Kickai put his hand on their chins and nodded at them. Then he turned
to Sole, "Now go on up and meet your maker!"

Sole gulped and turned to go up the steps. Sem was there with a knife in
hand and a spear in the other, pointed right at Sole's navel. Sole stared
him down but Kickai yelled.

"Give him safe passage to the open area on deck!"

Sem nodded, "As you wish, Captain!"



 MORE NOTES: Instead of Justin getting away from Kickai, I made Sole turn
so demented from Justin's death, that he killed them all after wounding
Kickai.