Date: Tue, 17 Oct 2006 22:39:42 -0700 (PDT) From: ask ask <aka_gege_1@yahoo.com> Subject: Damn Teens part 4 Hey this is fourth part of my very first erotic story, so if my story sucks I would like you to tell me. This story is not real(fiction) it doesn't have any events that happened in my life or anything it's only made up and if it has anything similar to anyone you cant sue me. This story is about love so if your only looking for sex stuff im sure you can find another one that does contain alot after all this is nifty.org. E-mail me if any comments good or bad any that you have for me. ###################################### Sorry guys i took so long i'm not getting lazy or anything like that, i had stuff to do turn in homework cause my teacher has been bothering to me about an essay so i couldn't write a new part of the story, i have been writting the essay and im now finally finished with it and e-mailed it to that bitch(i hate teachers they always pick on me for some reason) so now that i have time i have starting writing part four of "Damn Teens" ##################################### **WARNING** This story contains adult material and may be unsuitable for anyone under the age of 18. It involves sexual acts between females, if this offends you, then don't read it. Or if it's illegal in your state/country to read it please don't other wise read on ;) (FF,Teens,Drama, and all that stuff teens go through) ******************************************************** E-MAIL:aka_gege_1@yahoo.com NAME OF STORY: DAMN TEENS PART #3 (The Dream) / PART #4 (New Beginning's) "hurry up, i got stuff to do in school today."i told him *yeah i need to finish what i started with Bonnie*evil smile** "Oky...ok, .......lets.. go."John said with a mouth full of food *ewww*. "Can you please be an actual human, and chew before you talk, pig" I told him "can you be an actual human and stop being a smart ass?"John said in a girl voice *okay, man watch how you talk to me, or ill make you regret it* Part #4 (New Beginning's) *Bonnie, hi do u remember what we did in my room, yeah well this time i don't want it to be just a kiss I wanna get in your pants* Ashley your an idiot she's not just gonna say 'oh yeah me to when and where do you wanna meet up, so we could fuck!' *think-think how to talk to Bonnie, things are going really weird huh, before i just used to think of Bonnie as a friend and now i see her in a whole different light the light you see the love of your life in well thats the light i see my best friend and soon to become lover. "Ashley......ASHLEY!" John yelled at me. "What?" I told John "I'm not gonna pick you up today alright." "Oh.... yes you are mom said that you have to pick me up everyday after school, and yesterday I let it slipped but not today, i don't wanna walk." I told John "I'm gonna be at Kelly's house all day, OK" *one day it's gonna be me telling you, John dont pick me up from school today im gonna be fucking at Bonnies house all day* "Fine, but im gonna tell mom that you didn't wanna pick me up from school today so she takes your car away." "No your not, if you tell mom, then im gonna tell mom that you and Bonnie were fucking and that you scared the shit out of her and she took off running." *Why does this guy keep on blackmailing me with shit, and telling mom what I do*"Asshole, I didn't scare her, her mom called her on her cellphone and told her to get home right away." *like I said before i'm the worst lier in the world and i should just stop trying to get good at it* "yeah, whatever just get the fuck out before your late for school." even though John is an ass he worries about me and what i do in school and stuff. "bye." I yelled out to John as I closed the door.*what if Bonnie got really scared yesterday, and she doesn't even wanna talk to me anymore*i was thinking as i was on my way to class. As i was rounding the corner i felt someone grab my hand i turned to the right and saw, Bonnie the chick that I have lusted for since the kiss yesterday. "Hey there"Bonnie said really excited after I had enough time to take her beauty in. "so uhm.... how do you uhmmm...feel about what happened yesterday?" Bonnie said really nervous *Damn, Bonnie you are so cute when your nervous* "Bonnie I feel like yesterday was the start of a new beginning for you and me." I told Bonnie looking at her straight in the eyes. *The truth is sweet, it's the only thing i could say while keeping a straight face and i said it from the heart so i know those word came out right.* Bonnie was looking at me and with a warm smile said "I do to, I feel it's a new beginning for both of us." Then out of nowhere she kisses me on the cheek. Yeah it got odd stare's of some of the kids that were walking/kicking it around near us, but its totally worth the odd stares , plus i honestly don't care if the find out im a lesbian. As all good things come to ends I walked Bonnie to her class and, yeah we kissed square in the mouth in front of everyone i was marking my territory, wouldn't want some asshole of a guy to come and steal her from me. Me and Bonnie didn't see each other during the school day(we don't have the same classes nor do we have the same lunch period) We saw each other until the end of the day. I saw J.D he was telling me if i wanted to come to his house to watch some movie he just got(I forget names of thing when there's more important stuff in my mind *Bonnie*)I told him i couldn't he said alright and went different ways. After school: Bonnie's last period class is right next to my last period class so i decides to wait for her to come out of class(we had a sub teacher for 7th period and he let us out five minute early) "hey sweety!" Bonnie said as she came to me and i grab her for a hug "I fell so special right now."Bonnie said as I hugged her. "Well you are really special." I told Bonnie By this time we ended the hug, and Bonnie was blushing big time. "Really?" Bonnie is so cute she's like a little girl you have to say things twice before it gets in her head. "yes, Bonnie you are." I can see that Bonnie believed me on that well i wasn't lying or anything but it fells good that she took my comment to the heart. I think im really falling for her. "where do you wanna go to?" Bonnie asked as we walked hand in hand out of the school. *well I go to L.A, but we need a ride if we wanna go there so I guess well have to go to my house and "borrow" my mom's car for a little while, I know how to drive really well my dad has been teaching me how to drive since I was like 7 and shit.* "well uhmm........ lets go to my house first to pick up 'something'." "what are you gonna pick up?" "Just a little thing to help us get to our destination faster."*Bonnie, baby were gonna go to my house go get my moms car*smile* "Okay!" Bonnie said all happy and stuff and we just holded hands all the way to my house in silence, the good silence the one that you could only have with that special person with who you love and not feel awkward about it. *life is good, I know its weird for me to say that, the one person who hated everything about life and all, but at that moment I didn't think that, I just felt like I was complete, Bonnie is my better half, and she has been next to me for years but. I never really noticed her because i don't really think about becoming my best friend girlfriend/lover so I guess thats why I never really noticed her before.* "What are you thinking about, Honey?" Bonnie asked me by this time she wasn't just holding my hand she was holding my whole arm. Like if im gonna run away from her or something which im so not gonna do. "Nothing, Im just really happy about us right now." I told Bonnie by this time we were just a couple or yards from my house. I look to see if my brother John's car is on the drive way but then i remember that he's 'busy'. My mom's car is there *great* well i knew it was gonna be there she got a a ride to her job from my dad so her car was right there were i wanted it. "Is your mom home?" Bonnie asked nervous she say's that she's scared of my cause, once my mom got really mad at her, because she walked in my house with muddy shoes and my mom hates dirt in the house specially muddy shoe prints. "No she's not home she got a ride to work from my dad this morning." I told Bonnie to comfort her. "oh, okay." You can hear the relieve in her voice. "So what are we doing here anyways?" Bonnie asked as i got my house keys out of my pocket and was opening the door. "You'll see." I said to Bonnie *by this time we were both in the house and i was making my way to the kitchen cause thats were my mom keeps her car keys.*smile** to be continued...... ************************************************************************** I wanna thank the all the people that e-mailed me about part#1, part#2,part#3 and i hope i can get to hear about part #4 i got a person asking me what GEGE stands for well thats my nickname. And also asked why Ashley doesn't like Bonnie's house, i'll get to that really soon. I'm trying to become better in writting and im trying to learn from the mistakes i did in the previous parts of this story. I hope you guys e-mail me to tell me that you enjoyed reading this part of the story or any other parts of it good or bad comments i would want to hear my e-mail is aka_gege_1@yahoo.com well like i always say if i don't hear from you guys that means you have lost interest in this story and dont care to find out what happens next. P.S: e-mails are the fuel to keep me writting;) im really trying to improve on my writing skills, I hope i am getting a little better. ill keep writing more and ill try to make the parts longer but its hard cause i just write what i think and i barely think, lol.