Date: Fri, 08 Sep 2006 03:46:18 -0500
From: Jennifer Elizabeth <yim4you@hotmail.com>
Subject: the devil's in the details  part 5    TG Science fiction and Magic

The following is not intended for anyone under the age of 18 and contains
explicit language dealing with sex and sex change. If you are not supposed
to be reading this or live in a community that prohibits this style of
content, then go away.  The following is a continuation of "The devil's in
the details parts 1-4" It is best to have read that before reading this,
otherwise it won't make much sense. This is entirely fictional and made up,
though as I said before, it would be neat if it wasn't.


			The Devil's in the Details


Part 5 of 5 Thursday Feb 13.

I was chatting with Mom over coffee. It was early afternoon. I had just
returned from my doctors appointment with a clean bill of health. I was
telling Mom that those weird dreams of once being a man were subsiding more
and more. Doc thought that I was probably a little stressed over my new job
and not to worry too much about it. He was right.  Even Mom had to make her
little jokes about it. She would say...."You know, honey, I was there when
you were born...you've always been a little girl." then she would laugh. I
loved talking to Mom. I could tell her anything. But she was interested in
something else today.

"So sweetie, do you and Mark have anything planned for Valentine's Day
tomorrow?" she asked.

I blushed openly. I had circled that day on my calender a month ago. I knew
full well what I was planning to do with Mark but telling my Mom wasn't
what I wanted to do, yet...

"Well Mom, Mark has to go out of town on business tomorrow night, so we
planned to get together tonight after midnight to...umm...exchange gifts."
I said, like Mom didn't know what that meant. "It's going to be the first
time we've...ummm....exchanged gifts like this"

Oh what a terrible anology I thought to myself, and half buried my face in
my hands. That must have sounded really cheesy. But like I said, I can tell
Mom anything.  Looking up, I saw she had a huge grin on her face and her
eyes were wide open.

"That's great Jenny...I mean...I just assumed that you'd already....well
you know what I mean honey. And on Valentine's Day....how sweet. Oh dear
you two will remember that for the rest of your lives." She continued, "
Now when you two get together, you take things slow at first. Sometimes the
first time with someone can be a little overwhelming and you don't want
things to come to an end too quickly, so you take charge and don't let him
get too hot too quick."

"MOM...!!!"I shrieked. Ewww, nobody wants sex advice from their Mom. And I
didn't know how to take charge. I had never been with a man before and I
was counting on Mark having a little experience. I wasn't the take charge
kind of person anyway. I knew I was submissive by nature. I was intending
on just letting go tonight and letting Mark take care of all my needs.  The
thought of getting together with him, even now, was getting me wet. Oh I
couldn't wait for tonight. Feeling myself blush even more, I decided I
needed to get home and rest. It was going to be a long night.

"I gotta go Mom." I said getting up from the table. I gave her a kiss.

"You kids have fun." She said as I was leaving. I swear I heard her laugh.

The rest of the day I spent preparing for our night together. A manicure
and pedicure, getting my hair done (Mark loved it curly), a stop at
Victoria's Secret for this really racy black lacy bra and panty that Mark
once pointed out, hoping to see me in it one day. I didn't want to
disappoint him. I was hoping he would remember it. He'd better! It was my
"gift" to him. I'm sure he knew what was happening tonight, but just in
case he needed a little help, I planned to wear them and let him "unwrap
me" to get to it.

Mark arrived at my place at 10:00 P.M. as planned.

"Hi Jen." he said leaning in to kiss me. We locked lips briefly...just a
little hello kiss.  "What smells so good?" he asked.

I was sure he was giving me a little crap because Mark knew I wasn't the
greatest cook. But I had managed to throw together a lasagna dish with a
few side items for our late dinner.

"Please Mark, you don't have to pretend...I know you better than that." I
said back to him.

"No...really sweetheart...it smells great...it's lasagna, right?" he said
again.

I loved this man. He could have been serious,or he could have been
joking....I didn't care.  Tonight wasn't about lasagna. It was about the
two of us finally coming together. I was so thankful for Mark. He was
instrumental in my new job, helping me to secure a loan to buy this little
nursury that a friend of my parents owned. I had been working for a lawn
care company, but this was more up my alley. At the nursury, I would be
able to help others design and build the lawns they wanted, rather than
just maintain them. I felt a better sense of creativity doing that. And
besides, I think Mom was looking forward to helping out, as she and I have
always had a knack for gardening. For his help, and for all his
understanding of my wanting to wait to have sex with him....well, let's
just say that I wanted to make this the night Mark would never forget.

The candlelit dinner went really well. We chatted and laughed, and time
seemed to stand still.  We were both done eating and were just enjoying
each other's company....looking deep into each other's eyes as we talked. I
could have lived in this moment forever, the candlelight, soft jazz music
in the background, gazing into the gorgeous blue eyes of the man I loved.

"I got something for you." he said

"Mark....ohhhh.....I told you you didn't have to get me anything." I said.
"You've done so much for me the last few weeks."

"Sweetie....it's our first Valentine's Day. I wasn't going to let it pass
without getting you something." he said as he presented a small box from
his pocket.

Accepting the box from his hand, I undid the wrapping to reveal a small
jewel box. Flipping up the top revealed a pair of diamond stud earrings.

"Are these REAL diamonds?" I asked, my eyes getting bigger. Suddenly, I
realized I had seen these before. "Oh my God....Jewels by Jessica...I
pointed these out to you.  I can't believe you remembered." I said as I
leaned over to hug him. Removing the earrings I was wearing, I placed my
new ones in their place. "How do they look?" I asked.

"You make those diamonds look great." he answered. " But in my opinion, you
could make a pair of steel washers look great."

His attempt at flattery, while a little odd, still made my heart melt.
Leaning back to him, I gave him a kiss. Pulling back, and smiling, I said
"I got you a little something too, let me just go get it for you."

This was it. Getting up, I made my way to my bedroom. "Just stay there
until I call you." I said as I disappeared around the corner. I had
prepared my room for the night. I quickly lit all the candles I had placed
in my room. Jazz already played from the stereo. The lacy black bra and
panty set I had bought earlier were already on, waiting to be discovered.
Taking one last deep breath, I knew that I was ready. Just as I was going
to call to him, I felt two hands from behind me being placed over my eyes.

"Oh Mark..." I said," not a game of 'Guess who'" I wheeled around expecting
to see my soon to be lover, but instead was confronted my an older man,
about 55-60, wearing a black tuxedo, bow tie and matching hat.

"Hello Jenny.....remember me?" the stranger said.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH........."I screamed jumping back to get away from the
intruder. "Mark...  Mark help me....somebody's
here. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH...."

"Now Jenny....there's no reason to be scared...I can't believe you don't
remember me. After all I have done for you." the stranger said in a slow
southern drawl.

"You stay away from me!!!!" I yelled..."Mark....Maaaaarrrrrrkkkk...get in
here....HELP!!!"

"Ohhhh, I'm afraid Mark can't hear you at the second, in fact, nobody can
hear you." he said.  "I really can't believe you don't remember me. Maybe
this will help." With that, the stranger snapped his gangly
finger. Suddenly, my head was spinning. Unable to stand, I collapsed onto
my bed, head in my hands. As the spinning subsided, I was suddenly aware of
both my present existence as Jenny, but also of a past life as a
man. Memories were now conflicting in my head, but it was all coming back
to me....I was Jenny now, but only 30 days ago I was somebody else, and
that somebody else was a man. It was all there now....the deer, the
accident, the deal with the stranger....

"YOU!!!" I said looking up now at the stranger I had first run into 30 days
earlier. Now remembering the details of our conversation and deal from 30
days ago, I began to panic.  Looking around frantically, I found my
clock. 12:22 it said. It was Friday now.

"Why are you here?" I said. " It's Friday now....I kept my side of the
deal....no man touched me...I didn't have sex with anyone.....that was our
deal, right?  Maaaaarrrrkkk????? where are you?" I yelled again. "What did
you do with Mark?" I asked of the stranger I now recognized.

"Oh, he's just fine there in the other room." he answered back. "I've just
frozen a minute of time for us to speak." I realized then that the music
had stopped. Candles I had lit just moments ago seemed to just be still,
not flickering at all. Getting up from the bed, I glanced into the dining
room where Mark was as still as a store manaquin. Time was, as he said,
frozen.

"What do you want...why are you here, don't tell me you are going to take
this all away from me. Didn't I do what you asked??? Please don't do this
to me...we were about to...."

"I know what you were about to do." he said. "I just came to congratulate
you. But it also occurred to me that there was something else that we spoke
of that you were going to do for me.  Problem is, I did too good a job
changing your life over to Jenny, that I think you forgot.  So I came here
tonight to make sure our little arrangement was still met.  You see, we
agreed that you would help spread the word about what happened out there on
the highway. But, because you have forgotten almost everything of what
happened, you have also forgotten to spread the word about me. So, as a
solution for you, I am giving you back your memories of your past life,
even if only for tonight, so that you can do something for me."

I sat there looking quizzically at him while he continued.

"Besides, you always wanted to know what sex was like for a woman, so I
figure I am doing you a favor by letting you experience it from both a male
and female perspective. By giving you your male mind back for the evening,
you'll get double the experience the way I see it. Isn't that what you
always wanted anyway?" he asked

"Sure." I said.

Sitting down on the bed next to me, the stranger said "Now this will only
be for tonight. By tomorrow morning at 8:00 A.M., all memories of your past
life as a man will be gone forever.  You and you boyfriend just continue on
with your evening. Have fun. There will be a time afterward that I want you
to do this......."

The stranger leaned in close to me and began whispering instructions into
my ear.

"O.K." I said, listening intently. "Sure, I think I can do that. But that's
it?...That's all you need me to do? And I have to do that all before 8:00
in the morning. But how will that help you?"

"Oh....trust me Jenny, it'll do plenty for me." the stranger said, smiling
that big toothy smile. Do that for me and after tonight, you'll never see
me again. Now, I think I have disrupted the festivities enough, so let's
get you back to real time."

Snapping his fingers one last time and 'poof', he was gone. Music played
again from the stereo.  The flickering of candlelight danced upon the
darkened room, and I was sitting on the bed, fully aware of both my former
male self, and current female body. I was going to make love to Mark, and
my former male self was more eager than ever to get things moving. I
couldn't wait to feel him in me for the first time. Wanting to make sure
there was no mistaking what I wanted, I decided to go ahead and strip down
to nothing but my bra and panty.

"Maaaarrrkkk......sweetie....come in here." I called out in a seductive
voice. "Come see what I got for you."

Hearing him rise from the table in the other room, I heard him making his
way towards my bedroom.

"Should I close my eyes?" he asked playfully. He rounded the corner with
arms outstretched, as if blind, feeling his way through the doorway.

"Open your eyes, I don't want you to miss anything." I said as he entered
the room. Opening one eye, then the other, Mark took in the sight that
awaited him. Seated on my bed, leaning back slightly with my legs crossed,
I was looking right into his eyes. "See anything you like, cowboy?" I said
with a slight smirk.

A big smile grew across his face.

"You're right," he said,"I don't want to miss any of this."

Almost instantly, Mark was in front of me kneeling down so that we were eye
to eye. Leaning towards me, I met him for a kiss. He pulled away quickly,
surprising me a bit. Opening my eyes, I looked at him.

Looking right at me, Mark said softly,"Are you sure?"

Funny, I thought to myself, a few moments ago before the stranger had come
in, I was actually thinking of not going through with it. But now, with my
former male self in charge, there was no way I was going to skip out on
this.

"Mark.....honey....."I said, running my hands along the outline of is face
and down to his shirt collar. Grabbing the top of each side of his collar,
I yanked as hard as I could, breaking off the top 4 butttons of his shirt,
and exposing his chest.

".....What do you think?" I said.

"DAMN Jen!!!" He exclaimed. "I didn't know you had that in you."

Grabbing his shirt, he yanked at the sides, finishing off the last 2
buttons and flung what was left of it to the ground at the base of my
bed. Almost instantly, he was on me and we fell back onto the bed. His
kissing was forceful and his hands were beginning to roam underneath my
bra. I was almost in sensory overload and decided I wanted to slow things a
bit. Mustering all the strength I had, I rolled out from underneath him and
quickly jumped up on top of him, straddeling his midsection. A bit wide
eyed, Mark didn't put up a fight.

"O.K.....you can be on top. I kinda like this view anyway." he said.

Sliding backwards on him, I was now closer to his knees. Reaching to his
belt buckle, I undid it and pulled the belt from the loops. I unbuttoned
his pants and pulled them away from his waist. I could see his now engorged
member all but protruding from the top of his boxers. Reaching to feel it,
I could feel the heat emanating from it.  Pulling his boxers clear of his
waist, gave me a clear picture of his manhood. Jenny may have been a
virgin, but my former male self knew exactly what we wanted to do. I'm sure
Mark was wondering a bit about this supposed inexperienced girl getting
right to work on him, but what did I care. Dinner was being served.

With both hands on his beautiful cock, I slowly started to rub up and down
on his shaft.  Taking turns with one hand to tickle the under side of his
balls. Getting close in to him, I licked up one side of his cock, circled
the head of his penis with my tongue, then licked down the other side of
him. Stopping to look at his reaction, our eyes met.  His look was telling
me he wanted more. Continuing to gaze in his eyes, I licked back up his
member, swirled to top and back down the other side. With that, Mark laid
back his head on the pillow. Licking back up to the head of his cock, I
slowly put my lips around him for the first time, taking the head of his
cock into my mouth.

I felt Mark's hand on the back of my head, pushing me onto him. I took more
of him into my waiting mouth, savoring his taste. Pulling back up, I let
him out of my mouth with a small popping sound. Just as quickly, I popped
him back in, and rode down his shaft as far as I could take him. Up and
down I went, continually using my tongue to tease him. I wanted to have him
cum in my mouth, but Mark had other ideas.

"Stop." he said..."I can't have you doing all the work."

I had become so caught up in trying to get a man off that way, I had almost
forgotten that I didn't have anything to hide now. I was a genetic woman
now, and letting someone explore my body was what I had been wanting for so
long. Mark sat up on the bed, as I raised myself up to my knees as
well. Moving across the bed to each other, Mark found the straps in the
front of my bra. Undoing them, my breasts fell free from their restraints,
the bra fell from my arms and onto the bed. Taking a moment to look at
them, Mark pulled me in close and began kissing me. Gently he made his way
down to the nape of my neck. How wonderful that felt. Reacting to that, my
head fell backwards and I closed my eyes. Not unlike a man I met in an
elevator a month earlier, I was now putty in Mark's hands. My body was his
for the taking.

Feeling myself becoming increasingly aroused, Mark made his way to my
exposed breasts. His hands and mouth reaching them at the same
time. Fondling and carressing with his hands, and licking with his
toungue. Gently, Mark would press down on my hardened nipples with his
lips, then pull back. Then he wold lick them and softly blow on them,
sending shivers through my body. Not being able to take much more, I needed
to lay down. Mark, feeling me start to move backwards to the bed, helped me
lay back. Pulling my feet from underneath me, I was now prone on the bed,
my legs on either side of Mark who was now intent on moving further south
in his exploration. Grasping the sides of my black panty, he pulled them
from my waist. As my panty reached my knees, I instinctively raised my
knees to my chest to help him remove them. Pulling them off past my ankles,
I was now completely naked. As I let my legs fall back to the bed, I left
them spread, knees to the side exposing all my womanhood for him to
see. Opening my eyes, Mark was looking at me and smiled.

"Brazillian.....nice." was all he said, noticing the bare skin around my
love mound. With hands ever so gentle, he began carressing my inner
thighs. Feeling his hands inch ever so close to paradise, his face was also
inching down past my belly button. The feeling was growing ever more
electric for me, and I knew I was getting wetter.  Suddenly, I felt his
hand brush across me. Almost immediately after that his tongue slid across
from the opposite direction. Now coming back with his fingers, Mark started
to pry apart the folds of skin around my now dripping pussy. Now focusing
his tongue around my clit, pressing against it, then flicking on it gently,
all while penetrating my pussy with his fingers.  Rythemically, he pushed
in and out with his finger. I can't even describe how I felt at that
moment. All I knew was that the feeling was more intense at that moment,
than any time I had experienced as a man. I knew right then that I had made
the right choice with the stranger.

I felt Mark pull away. He was ready and so was I. My hands reached to my
pussy and carressed it while Mark finished removing his pants. His cock was
fully erect, all 8 inches of it. I couldn't wait to have him in me. Back up
next to me, Mark straddled my midsection. Grabbing my legs near my knees,
he pulled me up to him. Leaning in, he rubbed the engorged head of his cock
against the opening of my love canal.I was so sensitive now it felt like
fire against me. The juices were flowing from us both as he rubbed back and
forth, teasing me.  Then it happened. I felt a rush of both pain and
ecstasy at the same time as his penis entered me. Gasping, I suddenly
couldn't breath, didn't want to breath.  Slowly he pushed in further,
waiting a second or two, then pushing in further. I felt my body tense,
then relax each time he pushed, wanting to get him in. Then he
stopped. Looking down, I saw that our bodies were now one, his entire cock
inside me. I finally took a breath.  Mark leaned in to me and kissed
me. Letting go of my legs, I wrapped them around his body.  My hands were
now wrapped around his back, pulling him closer to me. Never have I felt so
complete.

Now it began, as Mark pulled his waist away from me, then thrust back to
me.  Slowly at the beginning, but it wasn't long before before things were
heating up.  Instinctively, I began to buck my hips to meet his thrusts,
allowing him to get further inside me.  Grabbing his chest, then his arms,
I needed to grab any part of him and squeeze. I locked my ankles behind
him, not ever wanting to let him go. I was suddenly aware that I was
moaning outloud. Gasping with every thrust he made, I felt myself losing
control. It wouldn't be much longer. Looking at Mark's face, I could tell
he was close too. With my left hand, I started rubbing my clit furiously as
Mark continued pumping my pussy.

"Oh yes Mark.....cum in me....cum in me now....cum in my pussy for me..."

My words were all the invitation he needed. With a final thrust, he pushed
deep into my pussy and held it there.

"Ohhhhhhhhhhh..........yesssssssssss......" he moaned out as I felt the hot
spray of his cum pulse out again and again deep inside me. That feeling
brought me to the edge as well.  Pressing my eyes shut and biting my lip, I
clutched Mark with my arms and legs as my body exploded in orgasm. Wave
after wave shot through my body for what seemed like an eternity, until I
was left with a tingling feeling. Then a warmth came over me.  Unlocking my
death grip on Mark, I was finally able to open my eyes again. Mark slowly
pulled his softening member out of me and we both collapsed onto the bed,
side by side. As my breathing became a little more regular, I turned to
Mark. Pulling his face to mine, I kissed him.

"Just tell me one thing baby." I said. "Tell me you aren't some one shot
pony."

Eyeing me with a grin, he said "Oh don't worry sweetheart, this horse will
be ready to run again tonight."

And run it did. We made love twice more before finally collapsing for good
in each others arms. Drifting off to sleep, I was totally content with my
life as Jenny.

I awoke with a start around 3 A.M. Mark was sound asleep next to
me. Without waking him, I slid his arm from around me and made my way to my
study room. Turning on my computer, I had work to do that I needed to get
finished before 8 A.M.

It's now 6:30 A.M. and my work is done. In a mere hour and a half, all
memories of my past life as a man will be gone for good and
forgotten. That's why I had to write out the events of the past 30
days. The stranger wanted me to recount our first meeting 30 days ago, and
the events of last night as best I could, and then post them here on the
nifty erotic stories site. His purpose, of course, is to let others know
how my life turned out, and that their life could be similar. All you need
to do, he said, was dress en-femme as best you can. If you can get to
highway 100 outside St. Louis, great, but any lonely piece of highway will
do really. Just get out and drive. Believe that it will happen to you.  He
may come calling, he may not. All I will tell you is if he does, be sure
you know what you want, and what the consequences could be. I can't imagine
that your life will end up as good as mine did. But maybe it will. How ever
you feel about making a "deal", well, again, I struggle a little with the
morality of this, but this was my end of the bargain. I can no longer
imagine my life not being Jenny, so here I type. I wish you the best.