Part 1. OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS SCORE = AROUSAL SCORE + [PLOT & CHARACTERS SCORE + EDITING SCORE]/2 AROUSAL SCORE 0 Not 1 Barely 2 A Little 3 Somewhat 4 Very 5 Extremely PLOT & CHARACTERS SCORE 0 Nonexistent 1 One but not the other is present, and what is there is defintely lacking 2 Has plot and characters, but either the plot is very poorly conceived or all the characters are types and don't seem realistic 3 The plot and characters have been crafted with some care, but either the plot doesn't flow very well or seem to follow a logical progression, or the some of the characters don't seem realistic 4 The plot and characters have been crafted with some care, but there is still a little something missing from the plot or in the characters 5 Beautifully crafted plot and characters; the plot flows smoothly and follows a logical progression, the characters seem realistic EDITING SCORE 0 If this story was edited then I'm the tooth fairy 1 This story may or may not have been edited, it is hard to tell considering all the spelling and grammtical errors I found 2 This story may have been edited, but obviously needs more editing 3 Several spelling or grammatical errors 4 A few spelling or grammatical errors 5 No spelling or grammatical errors Part 2. SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS Not Good = This was a waste of my time, don't bother reading it Good = This is a good attempt, but I don't recommend it Very Good = If you have the time or like this variety of story then I recommend this story, otherwise I would go with something that I rate as Excellent or Outstanding Excellent = I recommend that you read this story, and I really liked it, but it did not give me the same feeling that an outstanding story does. Outstanding = This story was not only enjoyable, but it also gave me a special feeling that I cannot describe