Rogue Review No. 27 - May 24, 1998 by Lee Vine Becky Cried by Poison Ivan M/F, Exhib Length: 5,000 words ========== NOTES: (1) IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!! (2) IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!! (3) IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP READING NOW!!!! ========== Summary Voyeurism and exhibitionism. Commentary This was an excellent story. Ivan did not tell us too much, or too little. The descriptions were marvelous. The tension was there. The story was very well written. The author did a great job of leaving details for the reader to fill in with his/her own imagination. It was arousing, but it also had a sensitive side to it. Rating I give this story a 10 on a scale of 10.