Rogue Review No. 54 - June 13, 1998 Erotic Foolishness by Renae Nicks M/F Length: 5,700 words ========== DISCLAIMER: (1) IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!! (2) IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!! (3) IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP READING NOW!!!! ========== Summary Renae learns more about sex while spending time with another woman's man. Commentary I liked the way this story was split up. The four parts all worked very well. Both characters in this story felt very real. The sex was not over the top. They practiced safe sex. This is a simple story. There is not much to it, but I liked the author's touch. The characters were likable and the sex was arousing. Judgment This was is an excellent story. I would not change a thing. Link(s) http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/11718.txt [Parts 1 & 2] http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/11719.txt [Parts 3 & 4]