Rogue Review  No. 66 - June 20, 1998

Laura's Dad by Mat Twassel

Exhib?

Length: 400 words

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DISCLAIMER:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

Mat allows his girlfriend to get him into a rather compromising 
position.


Commentary

There has to be more to this story.  This was not enough.  The 
cliffhanger ending begs for a sequel.

This is more of an episode, than a story.  It kept me wondering.  The
final line is priceless.


Judgment

This was a good story, but I wish there had been more to it.

Link(s)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12052.txt