Rogue Review  No. 101 - July 13, 1998

A Brother's Love by Stephen Peters

F/M, Teen, Inc

Length: 6,400 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Jamie talks about her "special" relationship with her brother.


  COMMENTARY

There was not much restraint shown in this story.  From the beginning
it is clear that Jamie has an incestuous relationship with her 
brother, David.  The author seems to use it as a gimmick.  It does 
not work because incest seems rather commonplace in sex stories.  I 
wish this story had more of a plot.

Despite giving the ending away on page one, the author does take the 
time to go back and show what led Jamie and David to share a bed.  
He does not use the bulk of the story to show them attempting the 
traditional "sex story frolics".

If the author could have built up to the sex, or shown that either 
one of the characters had some real doubts about the relationship, 
then I might have liked it.

This story is not without merit, but the narrative lacked any build 
up or tension.


  JUDGMENT

This is not a good story, but the author does take the time to 
explain how the current relationship came to be.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12586.txt