Rogue Review  No. 114 - July 23, 1998

Amy Visits for the Summer (Complete) by Sundance 

M/F, M/F/F, F/F, F/F/M, Teen

Length: 30,000 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  NOTE

Earlier this month I reviewed the first three parts of "Amy Visits 
for the Summer".  This is a review of the whole story, not just the 
last five parts.


  SUMMARY

Beautiful-used-to-be-a-tomboy-Amy, the 17-year-old baby-sitter, 
resurrects Mike and Sarah's marriage by jumping into bed with them.


  COMMENTARY

This story is well paced.  I like the three main characters.  They 
all display a range of emotions.  They seem believable.

I like the way the author writes sex scenes.  He does not go 
overboard describing exactly how Mike's cock fits into Sarah's mouth,
but just says that it does and then gets on with the story.  He 
spends considerably more time building up to the sex, than he does 
actually describing it.

This story is very arousing.  It is a very well written and well 
edited story.


  JUDGMENT

This is an outstanding story.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13247.txt [1/8]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13252.txt [2/8]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13248.txt [3/8]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13250.txt [4/8]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13251.txt [5/8]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13254.txt [6/8]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13253.txt [7/8]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13249.txt [8/8]