Rogue Review  No. 116 - July 23, 1998

Lake Jeptha by Mat Twassel

M/F

Length: 1,500 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Mat and Laura enjoy a summer vacation and long to be alone together.


  COMMENTARY

This is a good story with a sad twist at the end.  I like the 
author's descriptions and the way he moves from one episode to 
another.  The story flows very nicely.


  JUDGMENT

This is a very good story.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12871.txt