Rogue Review  No. 124 - July 30, 1998

Coming In Last by Sven the Elder

M/F

Length: 1,500 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Sven and Kate have sex during a boat race.


  COMMENTARY

This story is short, but sweet.  It is well paced.  There is a little
bit of build up, before the sex.  

The character's are not very deep and there is not much to the plot, 
but I enjoyed this story thoroughly.


  JUDGMENT

This is an excellent story.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12849.txt