Rogue Review  No. 141 - August 8, 1998

Dream Girl by Phillip Stevens

TG, Transform, Magic, F-solo, Attempted Rape

Length: 20,000 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Tina, who happens to be a witch, casts a spell on Michael, which
changes him into a woman.


  COMMENTARY

I think the author does a good job with the plot and with the pacing
of the story.  I like the way the author uses the element of magic,
for the most part.

The story reminds me of something Anne Rice might write.  There is a
group in it that resembles the Talamasca.

The manner in which most of this story is told seems cold and
detached.  There are many scenes that are reasonably well written,
but suffer because they lack life.

There are a few grammatical and spelling errors.  The author over
uses and misuses the word 'whilst'.

The story has a cliffhanger ending.  The author has promised to write
a sequel, but it will take him a few months.


  JUDGMENT

This is a good story, but there are many places within it where it
seems cold and lifeless, sterile.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13410.txt [1/5]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13412.txt [2/5]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13411.txt [3/5]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13414.txt [4/5]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13413.txt [5/5]