Rogue Reviews No. 170 - August 29, 1998

Awakenings by Ann Douglas

F/M, F/F

Length: 14,700 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Kathryn re-examines her life after being informed that Yolanda, one 
of her friends, is a lesbian.


  COMMENTARY

This is a well written story.  The characters are believable.  The 
plot is well conceived and well executed.  The sex scenes were not 
too long, nor too detailed.

One thing that struck me about this story is how it seems to be 
focused on Kathryn.  What I mean to say is that if she is not 
thinking about something or someone, or interacting with them, they 
do not seem to exist.  It gives the story a surrealistic feel.  This 
is not a bad thing, but I would like to have seen a little more of 
the world, including things that Kathryn does not see.


  JUDGMENT

This is a very good story.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14453.txt [1/5]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14452.txt [2/5]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14451.txt [3/5]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14454.txt [4/5]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14455.txt [5/5]