Rogue Review No. 280 - December 10, 1998

For the Love of My Brother by Crystal D.

F/M, Inc

Length: 5,400 words

Rating: Very Good

Arousal Factor: High
Story Factor: Average


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not 
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

A young woman, age 22, describes her seduction of her half-brother, 
age 38.


  COMMENTARY

This story is very arousing.  The author lets the tension build before 
her two characters jump in the sack.  I like that.

I prefer to see more dialogue than there is in this story.

There is more to this story than just descriptions of sex, but sex is 
definitely the focus of the story.


  LINK

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