Rogue Review No. 285 - December 17, 1998

Milky Maria by Jackie

F/F

Length: 6,500 words

Rating: Good

Arousal Factor: Average
Story Factor: Average


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Jackie is two months pregnant and horny as hell.  Maria is having
trouble breastfeeding her newborn.


  COMMENTARY

The scope of this story is somewhat limited.  Most of the action
takes place inside the ladies room at the zoo.  Jackie narrates the
story.  She also does most of the talking.

The story is arousing, but I prefer to see more dialogue and a plot
that is a little more involved than this one is.


  LINKS

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/17054.txt

http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=409590641&fmt=raw