Rogue Review No. 308 - February 10, 1999

Coaching the Coach by Losgud

F/M

Length: 7,200 words

Rating: Very Good

Arousal Factor: Average
Story Factor: High


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Linda's coach wants to fuck her.  She gives him what he wants, but 
things don't go exactly as he planned.


  COMMENTARY

I really liked the first half of this story.  I found it extremely 
arousing.  This was despite the fact that there isn't any sex in it.  
The second half was another story.

From the outset it was clear that Linda doesn't really like her 
coach.  It was not until she got him into her apartment that it 
became clear to me that she wasn't about to change her mind.  So 
basically I went through the first half of the story thinking that if
she is going to sleep with him, it must be because she wants to, and 
in a way I guess she did, but it wasn't for the sorts of reasons that
I would hope she would want to.  Put another way, her reasons for 
sleeping with him are anything but romantic.


  LINKS

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/18734.txt

http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=435485041&fmt=raw