Rogue Review No. 319 - February 27, 1999

God's Great Plan by Al Steiner

m/F, Teen, Pedo

Length: 5,300 words

Objective Analysis: 8 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 4 (out of 5)
  Story: 4 (out of 5)

Subjective Analysis: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Jason spends some quality time with Sarah, his best friend's mother. 
She is breast feeding her newborn son and is feeling horny.


  COMMENTARY

I enjoyed this story.  It seems to have two things working for it, in
my book.  Number one is the fact that I found it arousing.  The idea 
of losing my virginity to my best friend's mother, at the age of 13 
sounds appealing.  That does not mean that it gives me warm fuzzies 
though, just that I find it sexually exciting.

The other thing that this story has working for it is humor.  Sarah 
justifies their relationship by saying that (a) she is teaching him 
about "God's Great Plan", and (b) she has needs that her husband will
not fulfill.  Some Christian fundamentalists might feel that their 
toes got stepped on in the process, but I don't think that this story
is too insensitive.  It does not suggest scrapping everything and 
starting over from scratch.  It does suggest that one should be more 
considerate of the needs of others as well as open to new ideas.

While I enjoyed this story and felt that it was both arousing and 
well written, I still can't help but feel that there was something 
missing.  Possibly it was some inconsistencies in Sarah's 
personality.  I'm not sure.  Anyhow, I gave this story a Very Good, 
which is the equivalent of putting it on my B list.  If the plot 
sounds like one that particularly interests you or you have a lot of 
time on your hands, then I recommend this story, otherwise I would 
read something that I gave an Excellent or an Outstanding.

I coded this story Pedo because Jason is only 13.

  LINKS

God's Great Plan

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/19839.txt

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=442739134&fmt=raw